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Hello poets, everywhere. I’m Tony Maude and it’s my pleasure to introduce Form for All again. Last time I brought Adelaide Crapsey’s (American) Cinquains to the bar; today I’d like to introduce something a little longer:
Terza Rima
Dante Alighieri
It is believed that Terza Rima – Italian for three rhyme – was invented by Dante Alighieri, who used this pattern of rhyme throughout his Divine Comedy (ca 1300) and, lacking any evidence to the contrary, I will not argue with this. It is commonly held that the form was brought into the English language by Geoffrey Chaucer. Since then, many poets have written English language Terza Rima, from Milton and Shelley to W.H. Auden and William Carlos Williams.
However, the rhyme scheme of Terza Rima has not been universally popular with English language poets. Consideration of Terza Rima’s requirements will give us some indication as to why this might be.
Terza Rima is rhyming poetry written in tercets – that is three-line stanzas. So far, so straightforward, except that in Terza Rima:
- The first and third lines of each tercet rhyme.
- It is usual to write English Terza Rima in iambic pentameter.
- The first and third lines of each subsequent stanza rhyme with the second line from the stanza before, so the rhyme scheme is aba bcb cdc and so on.
- You need at least three stanzas to produce the musical effect of the chain-rhyming.
Now, is that clear? No?? Perhaps an example will help. Here’s an excerpt from the beginning of Byron’s The Prophecy of Dante:
Canto I
Once more in man’s frail world! which I had left a
So long that ’twas forgotten; and I feel b
The weight of clay again,—too soon bereft a
Of the immortal vision which could heal b
My earthly sorrows, and to God’s own skies c
Lift me from that deep gulf without repeal, b
Where late my ears rung with the damned cries c
Of souls in hopeless bale; and from that place d
Of lesser torment, whence men may arise c
Pure from the fire to join the angelic race; d
etc, for about 32 pages in this digitized version. Now, at a rate of one page per hour, you should all be able to produce something similar before the Linky expires … smiles.
Seriously, if you are going to write an extended Terza Rima poem, then sooner or later you are going to run out of rhyming words. Modern poets have, and do, use slant- or near-rhymes to get around this issue, but even at that, there are still aren’t too many words which rhyme, even loosely, with purple!
If you do choose to try a Terza Rima epic poem – and don’t let me put you off – then, according to tradition, you need to end your poem with a single line that rhymes with the middle line of your final full tercet, giving you a closing rhyme scheme of yzy z, which is often closed up to form a quatrain.
For the rest of us, let me turn your attention to something just a little less ambitious. At the risk of trespassing on Sonnetmeister Samuel Peralta‘s turf … smiles … let me introduce the star of today’s article …
The Terza Rima Sonnet.
We all know what a sonnet is, don’t we; fourteen lines, normally of iambic pentameter, to one of several available rhyme schemes. Rather than waffle on endlessly about what a Terza Rima sonnet is, let me show you one instead. This one was written by Robert Frost and published in 1923:
Acquainted with the Night
I have been one acquainted with the night.
I have walked out in rain — and back in rain.
I have outwalked the furthest city light.
I have looked down the saddest city lane.
I have passed by the watchman on his beat
And dropped my eyes, unwilling to explain.
I have stood still and stopped the sound of feet
When far away an interrupted cry
Came over houses from another street,
But not to call me back or say good-bye;
And further still at an unearthly height,
One luminary clock against the sky
Proclaimed the time was neither wrong nor right.
I have been one acquainted with the night.
Robert Frost
You can see the rhyme scheme clearly: aba bcb cdc ded ee. Frost has been extra-clever in this poem. His e-rhyme is the same as his a-rhyme, thus allowing him to close his sonnet by repeating his first line – a neat, but not essential touch that completes the isolating circle of his poem, which is about solitude.
Other Terza Rima sonnets include the five which comprise Shelley’s Ode to the West Wind, and this one by UK Poet Laureate, Carol Anne Duffy, who is one of my favourite poets:
Carol Ann Duffy
(image from http://www.carolannduffy.co.uk/)
Terza Rima SW19
Over this Common a kestrel treads air
till the earth says mouse or vole. Far below
two lovers walking by the pond seem unaware.
She feeds the ducks. He wants her, tells her so
as she half-smiles and stands slightly apart.
He loves me, loves me not with each deft throw.
It could last a year, she thinks, possibly two
and then crumble like stale bread. The kestrel flies
across the sun as he swears his love is true
and, darling, forever. Suddenly the earth cries
Now and death drops from above like a stone.
A couple turn and see a strange bird rise.
Into the sky the kestrel climbs alone
and later she might write or he might phone.
© Carol Ann Duffy
As you were reading this, did you notice how Carol Ann Duffy has played with the Terza Rima scheme slightly to reinforce the point of her poem? There’s an end word that doesn’t rhyme with any of the others. Go on, read it again and you’ll see what I mean.
This week’s Form for All challenge
is to try your hand at Terza Rima. I don’t anticipate anyone will produce a Byronic epic, although I am prepared to be proved wrong, but perhaps you might write a Terza Rima sonnet. So what do you do now? Here’s
How It Works:
• Write your poem and post it to your blog
• Add a link to your poem via the ‘Mr Linky’ below.
• This opens a new screen where you’ll enter your information, and where you also choose links to read. Once you have pasted your poem’s blog URL and entered your name, click Submit. Don’t worry if you don’t see your name right away.
• Read and comment on other people’s work to let them know it’s being read. This is quite a tough challenge so it would be good if you could encourage everyone who rises to it.
• Share your work and that of your fellow poets via your favourite social media platforms.
• Above all – have fun!
Hi folks and welcome to another Form for All challenge. I’m really looking forward to seeing what you all come up with.
tony, great fun in this…really like the chained rhyme….was reading up on terza rima last night and really enjoyed sylvia plath’s ‘sow’ which can be found here:
http://poetry.about.com/gi/o.htm?zi=1/XJ&zTi=1&sdn=poetry&cdn=education&tm=10&f=10&tt=14&bt=8&bts=81&zu=http%3A//www.poetryfoundation.org/poetrymagazine/browse/90/4%2320586617
it let me see my way through the form a bit…smiles
The chained rhyme is fabulous, isn’t it? You get all the musicality of rhyme, without it becoming either obtrusive or simply too difficult to maintain.
Tony, this was fun. remembering your comment on my terza rima I did a few weeks ago.
“Terza Rima is not at all easy to write; it’s kind of like a lexicographical chess game where you have to be thinking ahead all the time.”
and indeed it’s like a puzzle. This time I tried to close it with a rhymes… and Frost’s Terza Rima is one of my favorite poems.
I remember making that comment – after I’d spent about 6 weeks trying to write a decent piece of terza rima. Once I had the right subject, it was quite a lot easier though.
Today I struggled a lot with the subject. I have found that I need to be serious rather than lyrical. If I’m “angry” enough I do better …. 🙂
ah tony…you challenged me with the form…always good to stretch our poetical muscles a bit though….it was fun… happy thursday everyone…
you rocked it surely c…
smiles.
happy thursday
Gotta keep exercising our poetical muscles, Claudia. I really enjoyed your piece; you are so adventurous in your use of form.
I have been struggling with this pattern and form, finally ~ I refer to a rhyming dictionary to help me with the ending words, ha ~
Thanks for the informative background as well ~
Happy day to everyone ~
Grace
At first glance this looks easy; then when you try it, it appears to be almost impossible, but when you finally succeed, terza rima can give some beautiful results.
nice…i have a hip hop rhyming dictionary of slant rhymes i like to play with and keep handy grace….
Do you have the link? 🙂 Thanks ~
yep, the dictionary is here…
http://www.amazon.com/Hip-Hop-Rhyming-Dictionary-Kevin-Mitchell/dp/0739033336/ref=sr_1_2?s=books&ie=UTF8&qid=1368135499&sr=1-2&keywords=hip+hop+dictionary
but the best book i have read on writing poetry…is actually about writing rap…and i think i have posted before on it…but…
http://www.amazon.com/Book-Rhymes-Poetics-Hip-Hop/dp/0465003478/ref=sr_1_3?s=books&ie=UTF8&qid=1368135499&sr=1-3&keywords=hip+hop+dictionary
whoa…how did those pictures show up? ha
These look fun. I use mostly http://www.b-rhymes.com/ and keep it open while I’m writing. Or when I want syllabic rhymes, I go for http://www.b-rhymes.com/ which gives direct rhymes by number of syllables, near rhymes, synonyms and antonyms at the click of a mouse.
Hiya,
Got stuck with the last two lines .
Knuckles rapped: I went tetrameter. So fed up with the penta after last month.
Beautiful post Tony, with a nice picture of Byron into the bargain.
The tetrameter in your poem really made it sing, Aprille. I think the ‘rule’ is about being consistent with the meter, more than about pentameter per se. Anyway, rules are made to be broken.
Nice article, Tony. I had first written mine in 4 three-line stanzas and a couplet at the end. Then for some reason I decided that sonnets should have 2 6-line stanzas followed by the couplet. So I changed mine. Does it matter? I am a bit confused about that.
Some people lay the sonnets out as four three-line stanzas and a couplet ala Robert Frost and Carol Ann Duffy above; others say that while that layout may be terza rima, it isn’t a sonnet. For me, you pays your money and you takes your choice.
I think how we lay our poems out is part of the process of writing them. Line endings and stanza breaks are like extra punctuation marks just for poets and they can be used to great effect.
I think your poem works really well the way you have laid it out, and I wouldn’t change it if I were you.
Thanks, Tony, for the explanation. OK, I will leave it as it is
yes – i also think your stanza breaks work well mary…
To Takooba – I don’t have a tumblr account, but I wanted to say how much I enjoyed your breathtaking contribution to this challenge.
it was very good…
My sentiment also… I have no idea on how to comment on tumblr,
yes i agree… i enjoyed it as well Takooba
Takooba, marvellous work! i am also not on tumblr, but had to say how much i enjoyed your piece…
ok…read the first 11 entries and going offline for tonight…need to pack my bags as i’m heading to munich tomorrow morning to meet up with a good friend… excited…smiles… will try to catch the overnites before my train goes….
Have fun, Claudia.
travel light c…
It all seems very quiet here, and I have a writers’ group to host in the morning, so I’m going to call it quits for now. I will be back to read every new entry on the Linky.
I love that Duffy Sonnet. A Terza Rima Sonnett I wrote 3 years ago is still my favourite of every poem I have written http://vivinfrance.wordpress.com/2010/12/08/august-terza-rima/
Now I’ll have to try and write another. I doubt I’ll make the Linky limit!
Back home from the Grassmarket Project now; I’ll be round to read soon. If you don’t amke the linky today, there’s always Open Link on Tuesday … smiles
beautiful form, thank you for introducing it to us!
it took me a while to ‘make it fit’, but i hope it works now…
have a great day, wherever you are…
wonderful verse miriam…and great to see you…smiles.
thank you – very happy to be able to be here… i am about ready to ask for a couple extra hours to be added to every single day 😉 miss the pub and the wonderful people…
It is a lovely form – the chain-rhyme gives musicality; the different end rhymes allow for some surprising twists and turns.
I know I’ve written in this pattern before, completely by accident, just not in sonnet form. I seems so familiar to me. Annnnyhoo, that was fun. Love all the background info on it as well.
Glad you enjoyed both the article and the challenge, Raivenne
Thanks for this challenge Tony and the excellent accompanying article. Not quite sure mine fits the bill, iambic pentameter wise – hope it’s okay.
Anna :o]
Pentameter schmameter – rules are only there to be broken.
Tony, great introduction to terza rima, and thanks for the sonnet shout-out 🙂 The poem I’m sharing stopped short of being a sonnet, although it’s as close to a classic terza rima as the poem would let me go.
I’m also so happy to see that Bjorn referenced “Stopping by Woods on a Snowy Evening” by Robert Frost when he read my poem. When I wrote “Almost There”, I actually challenged myself to write something with the same atmosphere as that classic Frost poem… the fact that someone picked up on the atmosphere without any hints is great!
There’s more of Frost structurally in this one as well. My rhyme scheme actually came out of trying to emulate – without coming too close – Frost’s famous linked quatrains in “Stopping by Woods”. The interlocking rhymes fell naturally into terza rima, and in my last tercet, I linked the rhyme back to the previous verse, as Frost did in his final quatrain.
Thanks Sam. I enjoyed your work, as always.
Evening, Tony. Not the quality of my previous post, but perhaps someone will enjoy it. Cheers to all.
smiles…fairy tale sonnets are right up my alley you know…
Will be round to read it soon …
Thank you for the terza rima challenge Tony. Rhyming in iambic pentameter,never easy ….bit of a brain teaser.
ha..i agree…it IS a bit of a brain teaser…smiles
As I said to Bjorn a few weeks ago, it can be like lexicographical chess; you need to be thinking ahead when you choose your end-rhymes.
back and catching up….good morning….
Ah! managed one hope it fits in the form. Will come back to read others. Right now got to run behind my three year old and my constant companion – deadlines!!
Three-year olds and deadlines don’t make comfortable bedfellows … smiles. You’ve managed the form’s rhyme scheme really well, Akila. Thanks for playing.
Hi, thankyou for your comments on my post. So, taking all the suggestions from those wonderful people, this is my attempt at the Terza rima. My earlier post quiet didnot fit in it. So, tried this one. Hope it is a terza rima only. Further, encouragement is always welcome. Thanks….
You’ve nailed it this time – and the short lines in your poem give it a very different feel to more traditional sonnets.
I like the revised work and you followed the pattern correctly ~ Don’t worry about not getting it right the first time, because some of us still struggle with form poetry until now ~ Good to see you at D’verse~
Grace
I love this form, Tony, but have never tried it…and actually recently listened to a lecture that discussed it and put it on my “to-do” list. I’ve been absent from the pub this week because of migrating North to Reno and finding so much needing to be cared for in the garden and home. I will hope to write one soon to link, perhaps to OLN next week. Thank you so much for the great article.
It is a beautiful form, although, as many people have discovered and commented, it is harder than it looks. there are times when your rhyming dictionary really is a poets best friend … smiles.
Hope all is well in Reno.
I enjoyed this challenge. Thanks Tony….I thought it would be easier as all are saying; please feel free to critique…I have a
little headache so will take a break before reading tonight 😉
Terza rima is deceptive; it looks easier than it is. Can you imagine writing the whole Paradisio in it, which is what Dante did. Of course, Italian is more conducive to rhymed poetry than English, but still … smiles. Byron’s 32 pages are impressive too.
I enjoyed your poem – and you’ll find some fine terza rima out on the trail.
ha. it is deceptive…and was def a fun jaunt tony…writing it out long form would be intense for sure…32 pages makes me shiver a bit…smiles…
hmmm, this is like Sudoku, Hard level.
haha i like sudoku….
It’s fun… though the medium and hard levels are beyond my capabilities. 🙂
I think you need to find the right subject for the form; it took me a while until I came up with the right combination, then it flowed fairly freely. But, like completing a hard Sudoku, there is a great sense of achievement when it all comes together.
ah, i tried several, but can’t get past the 3 lines. I will keep on trying though – maybe, one day, I can link a sonnet. 🙂
Well, it’s time for me to close the bar and tidy up, sweep the floor and wash the tables down. Our next host is Mary, who wants us to write …. No. I’ll let her tell us herself 🙂
Thanks to everyone who took part. This was a difficult challenge, especially given the time constraints. I hope that some of you might want to try these forms again; I know I will.
Hello,
I found this challenge a bit hard to do but, I still had fun and came up with a nice poem in the end. It didn’t quite fit the form but, that is fine as it is always good to try to expand one’s mind. I did read some very nice ones though and learn a thing or two along the way. Thank you!
Would like to try this; just haven’t had time. Maybe for Open Link Night. Many thanks for the instruction and examples.