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Periodically we have puzzling days with no apparent trigger, usually started by my oldest son—he’ll strip the second shelf in his closet of various sized boxes and begin in the corner of the kitchen where the linoleum is cool and flat. He dumps and dumps, twenty-five piecers, fifty, a hundred—all different sizes & superheroes, elmo, horses—any we’ve collected in eleven years
& it goes on for hours, until we’re all on our knees, finding holes & missing pieces, half the kitchen covered in windows of color, characters that had no intention of ever playing together on the same stage, joining hands & when we’re done, there is still missing pieces—ones lost over the years and that is ok, our compulsion is worn out & we leave them for a bit because there is so many lessons to be had in them–
puzzles, test our brain, our ability to see patterns, feel the ridges and find where one joins another…there are times we don’t know we’ll every understand & then one piece changes everything, starts a cascade of clarity
they come in all shapes & sized, each with their own frustrations & keys to completion…puzzles are even used to represent some of my favorite kids to work with, the autistic—it can be puzzling to figure out how to work with them at times & understand—
maybe you are starting to get the picture of what we are writing about today—and its wide open, what puzzles you? what puzzles do you enjoy? what picture are you still looking to complete? take it where you will…
for me–it symbolizes the journey we have been on for 2 years, here in the pub—the faces change pretty regularly as to who shows up, and even in who is standing behind the bar—we have seen poets go on to publish books & others leave the poetry world all together—and some that have been around from the beginning—
here soon we will celebrate our 2 year anniversary, another milestone, we will pass as poetry marches on and we along with it…so go write some poetry—bring it back, link it in & visit a the others that are on this journey with us—together we make a picture that no one piece can on their own…
if you are new here, here is how it works:
- write a poem about the prompt, today it is puzzles
- post it on your web page
- click on the Linky below and enter the direct URL to your poem
- there, you will also find others that are playing, visit them, tell them what you liked, comment on how they used the prompt, pick a line that moved you—let them know they were heard
- check back periodically, as people are joining through out the next 33 hours
- have fun
Look forward to seeing what you bring, and seeing you out on the trail. ~Brian
happy saturday all…pub is open…dont mind the smell i have been out weeding and working in the yard…i’ll slip a shower in here in a few…smiles.
“together we are beautiful” ~ love your tags too ~
Read the clues of this puzzle earlier today Brian and got scribing! Should have been decorating – but what the hell – this is definitely more interesting!
Anna :o]
ha. what are you decorating?
Started as one room – and as it made the rest of the house look grimy – now the whole house!
Will start reading lovely poems now!
Anna :o]
ha. dont you love how it spreads like that…smiles…that is why i am fearful of starting that…
Hiya, Brian you forced my hand 🙂
Mine was so feeble that I wasn’t going to link. Had fun putting it together though.
smiles…i enjoyed the play with numbers..wrote them down this morning and puzzled them for a bit and though i had it but had used the 7 twice….
happy saturday everyone…just coming back from a long walk…it’s a beautiful summer eve over here… a cool prompt bri and cool on doing the puzzling on the kitchen floor… see you out on the trail…
it is a scorcher here…been working the yard a bit and i am soaked clean through…and bronzing a bit more…smiles.
oooh puzzles – love them! awesome prompt, Brian – love the puzzling on the kitche floor… so sweet.
happy saturday, everyone!
p.s.: mine looks like gibberish, but it’s not. – hopefully. heh.
ah you have me intrigued…off to check it out….
yeah we have a blast on the puzzle days….we just did one the other day…we dont quite have enough to cover the whole floor…yet….smiles.
when i was younger, i loved puzzles. my mom often got mad at me because i claimed the whole living room floor for my puzzling adventures. one day, she got me a huge piece of carpet and strong rubber bands – that solved our problem. heh
ha. i may need to steal that idea….hmmm….
nice… my best friend as a child loved puzzling as well… she had a huge puzzle in her room with i can’t remember how many thousand parts… when i visited, i joined her a bit in puzzling but somehow never had the patience to do it for more than 10 minutes or so… oy…
when we were young my parents got us into puzzles….had a card table set up with a puzzle you could work a few minutes and then walk away, let it take its time…and then somenights it was much longer…smiles.
maybe i should try this… probably there’s still hope… smiles
perhaps.
smiles.
think it has to do with the number 5.
just saying
hahah…smiles
…oh, that feeling when you planned to wake up. early, set your alarm at 3am & then when it alarmed you were like some crazy cat with a red, sleep eyes stretching your bones, rushing to bathroom for the morning rituals then head over to turn your pc on, logging in to dverse’s mr linky to link your entry only to figure out you have been linked already at quite a safe spot… aww, i hate to be tolerated but huge thanks to you angel for securing a spot for this poor, old turtle… smiles…
…sometimes, days are like this when i get excited a lot… sometimes, i get tired & wondered why i do this… sometimes, i wish i have this brian’s or claudia’s or mary’s or grace’s power to make everything work consistently for me in this pub… i am only 22 but you guys seemed to be way energetic than me… smiles…
…2 years isn’t quite yet the defining moment for this pub but what is especial here is the fact how everyone gets the opportunity to witness the sowing of something big… something even larger than life… ye know it’s the friendship we build here… the best kind of all that doesn’t define any culture, religion, age, gender, country, etc…. a gem for me i’ll treasure beyond time… thank you… just thank you ok… smiles…
..what a challenging prompt Brian (sorry for the drama.. lol…) this puzzle notion got me thinking real hard that it took me quite a long time to figure out what to write for this… and went on for a shorty today… hehe…had fun with it… thanks…
..good morning everyone…
..smiles…
haha….just can’t believe that you’re just awake and already talking so much….smiles….get a coffee first you poor, old turtle….haha….smiles
still waiting to see the answer to your riddle…
and i took care of the turtle…smiles…figured that way you could enjoy the sleep a bit and wake up surprised….tolerated? never. appreciated, for sure….
2 years is only a blip…it is about the endearing or enduring friendships that last for me…i like my old familiars…ones i know a bit about because we have shared life if in nothing else a bit of weekly verse….
not grab another cuppa coffee…smiles.
..you know it very well Brian… i don’t have to reveal the answer anymore… hihi… B-)
Good morning to you, Kelvin. You are so right about….it’s the friendship in the pub. And, hey, if the pub opened at 3 a.m. where I lived I wouldn’t be easily wakened either; so go easy on yourself. Happy Sunday to you!
I am here finally after our trip to the bookstore ~ Your post is as just as poetic Brian ~ What puzzles me is the way words are wormed out, each differently from everyone ~ and Kelvin, its not easy for me to write the way I do ~
Wishing you Happy Saturday ~
Grace
nice…a trip to the bookstore sounds great…so did you find a good book?
ah so this was going out with hubs? love me some bookstore dates…smiles…i could live there honestly….
bookstores are dangerous places…my husband never takes me to one…he knows i could get lost for hours… smiles
Yes, bought 2 poetry books, second-hand in downtown Toronto. Hubby and I can get lost amongst the shelves so its fine, smiles ~
very cool….when i met adan and his wife in paris, we went to shakespeare & company, that old, well-known bookstore – you can even sleep there, they have a bed in the middle of the store – the only thing you have to do is write something and leave it there for them… i would’ve loved to do this…oh – and they have a piano in the bookstore as well.. what a fun night that would’ve been…
Bed & piano in the bookstore, I bet people won’t leave the place so soon ~
that would be a blast to sleep in the bookstore…i want to own one when i grow up….smiles.
What a fun prompt, and I am torn with digging up one that I write 20 years ago, or writing something new. I want something new, but I’m feeling a bit blocked. I’ll keep reading in the meantime, and can I say, yay! Anna’s here!
smiles…both works…just throw a coin….number…reviving the old one… head…write a new one…smiles
smiles….look forward to which ever you choose…
20 years ago…i was not thinking poetry…ha.
Calling it a poem may be generous.
we can be generous…smiles.
I am really enjoying the poems so far, Brian. What a wonderful prompt. And wow, two years of the Pub already. I remember the special happening last year, and THAT seems like only yesterday. Hope everyone is having a good weekend. I will continue to check back in the pub.
yep we got some special happenings line up for this one as well…smiles…
yes – time runs… it’s been two wonderful years so far… way to go… and we have some special treats up our sleeves for the 2 year celebration week….excited….smiles
Excited too ~ Smiles ~
Interesting prompt Brian. I gave it a try.
woot. always good to see you myrna…smiles.
happy saturday
very cool myrna…just coming from your place.. yours was the last i read before puzzling myself to bed… see you tomorrow..
sleep well claudia…
about to take dinner break myself here in a few
cooking now…
To late to read all the wonderful poetry … I come to the conclusion that I write poetry a little bit like solving puzzles. I throw out a lot of ideas in my head (usually when bycycling to work) and then i massage them together on a form of some kind. I wonder if anyone else find poetry a little bit like puzzles?
Now it’s time for bed… I have not read anything, but it will come tomorrow.
When writing to a poetry form, its a puzzle to me as I have to figure out the rhyming words at the end & work backwards ~ In other days, words come like a train, bits and pieces arriving, until I get the whole message ~
See you tomorrow Bjorn ~
Grace
form poetry does the same to me grace…they are def a puzzle…bjorn is like my opposite…he can break of a sonnet like no ones business…ha.
I went an odd direction with the puZZled thought and ended up with jigsaw and misshapen pieces. I look forward to seeing where it led others.
Great prompt.
odd…direction….nice…cant wait…be over in a minute…getting boys to bed….
Take your time. They are only little for a short time. 🙂
true that…we went out for hot wings tonight…my youngest loves them…he usually gets MILD…tonight after he finished his he hit my WILD a bit…if it doesnt kill him in the ‘after’ i imagine he might move up the heat index a bit…another sign of growing up…at least i took it that way…smiles….
Brian ~ just wanted to say thank you for a fun and wonderfully interactive prompt !!
no sweat, thanks randy….
by the way I’m all for these highly interactive types of prompts !! I think you have touched upon something special here !!! I felt exceptionally drawn to interact with other poets tonight !!
ok so tell me, what makes this more interactive? cause i am all about figuring that out…ha…
I think it’s clearly that poetic x factor that links our uniquely poet minds in solving word associations ????
maybe ??? we are united daily in puzzlement, puzzles, being puzzled, puzzle-ization of our very existence, puzzles demand problem-solving skills ~ just like poetic forms, just saying ………confronting our skills puts us to the test, the rest is to be or not to be !!
As a boy I was almost addicted to larger and larger picture puzzles, I could barely walk by an unfinished puzzle without stopping to linger and attempt to put a few pieces home where they belonged. I felt this prompt drew us in in the same desire to fulfill our curiosity as other poets were exploring this same realm of riddles and puzzles poetically ! I felt a strong magnetic pull to the possibility that important answers were lurking, like gold at the end of the poetic rainbow, in the offerings of other poets! and I was not disappointed !!
I struggled with this one, Brian. Many false starts…
eh those false starts may add up to a poem later you know…smiles…
i always keep my cast offs…you never know when they will fit…
oh, I am sure at least some will 🙂
I wound up under the dang bed! 🙂
ha. now i totally need to figure that one out…
Gotcha! 🙂
ha. and grape jelly all over you too…
smiles.
..couldn’t resist this prompt, Brian, and I’m sure I’ll find time tonight to read what everyone came up with!…Monday my house goes on sale…finally done with getting it ready…now to keep it that way for awhile by staying on top of it ;_)
woot….good to see you….and yay on the house! i remember selling ours it was so hard to feel like you could still live there and try to keep it ready…
this was a great prompt, Brian – some truly engaging writes. you struck a nerve, evidently. i suspect all the patrons have multiple boxes of pieces in our heads waiting to tumble out.
it has been fun…about to sign off for the eve…i have a few left read…have a good night poets…i will catch up in the morning…
Fun prompt Brian! Looking forward to reading the offerings…I’ll be around later tonight and tomorrow!
You guys are awesome. I love dverse and what it brings to my day when I just need to zone out on some poetry and share the love for it with all of you.
Thanks so much for keeping it up Brian, and congrats for these two years.. smiles.. I’m glad I can connect with more wonderful poets..
Cheers!
and i am glad you are here to connect…smiles…thanks for sharing in the love and zoning out with us a bit…
My first Entry is a mistake “Sonnet 1 is for the Toads. Sorry and thanks.
ok – removed it… i liked it though…smiles
ok, shaking off the sleep…and out on the trail to catch up with the overnights…smiles…
in case the person who put in the ‘at the farm’ link reads this – the link leads back to this page… would love to read, so fingers crossed for another link-up…
thanks for fixing 🙂
Hey Brian – first congrats on reaching the terrible twos! Not so terrible at all in this case! And made possible by the wonderful two of you and Claudia.
My poem rather silly. I seem to veer between extremes. I love the idea of all the pieces all over – unfortunately, it would be hard to see these on my floor for the crumbs. (This is not really true, my poor old blind dog gets those up pretty much.)
Take care, hope not too hot. K.
ha. your dog the vaccum…i might need a dog now…smiles…..
HeY Bri, Claudia – thanks for your encouragement. I added a soundcloud reading as I think it is a poem that is probably easier heard than read. I will sometimes have to listen to some recordings of yours, Brian, as I don’t really have performing down, but it’s all fun. k.
smiles…performing is fun…for me its all about fun…pacing, cadence and breathing…will check out your recording now…
very cool…on my way over….
Spent the holiday relaxing and reading and I actually did get a draft up, too. Great weekend. Thanks for being here.
hi Brian and everyone…i’m not very good with prompts, but i wrote something last week that seemed to fit. hope that’s ok with everyone, and thank you for hosting this forum.
i am sure it is fine…i will be over in a minute to check you out….
hehe….made it there before bri….smiles
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Hello everyone!!! 🙂 … I hope my piece doesn’t end up being a puzzle on its own! 😀
Cheers and hugs all the way from Nigeria!!!!!
FK 😉
smiles…cheers & hugs back…we wont let your puzzle piece get lost…
My entry, tangentially related to the prompt and a day late, as usual, features a quote from one Anna Montgomery… 🙂 http://poetrytech.com/2013/07/07/conductors-and-composers/