Samuel Peralta here…
There was a time – when I was looking for myself – when I called myself “Sam Parr”.
It was a singer-songwriter persona, and I used it when writing songs both for my own and for other bands.
That experiment was fairly fruitful. One of the bands I wrote for played to audiences of up to 20,000 people, so I was lucky to have my songs out there.
All in all, I put together nearly 200 songs – many I still love – and over years, drew around 5,000 followers on MySpace.
Once, I was in an art gallery, and an intern there recognized me from my page, calling out as I walked through the door “Oh! You’re Sam Parr!” I had the swagger that MySpace had at the time.
It was a heady experience – but it never seemed, for some reason, completely fulfilling.
It was during that time that I stumbled upon Twitter.
At the time, I was doing work with the IEEE Short Message Service (SMS) InterNetworking Advisory Group, and various other industry working groups looking at the interoperability of communications protocols.
A variant of text messaging, Twitter used a portion of texting’s SMS protocol to send messages not just between one person and another, but from one person to the world.
More exactly, it sent messages of up to 140 characters to as many people as cared to subscribe to that person’s broadcasts, their so-called tweets.
At first, these tweets were exclusively miniature status reports, micro-blogs that reported where someone was, what they were doing, what the weather was.
“Working late tonight.”
“Meeting my friend later at Pizza Hut.”
“More rain tonight.”
Later on, as people realized the potential for instant worldwide communication of breaking news, Twitter would become an instrument of social revolution.
I’m sure I wasn’t the first, but even back then, I saw the potential of this new social media service as a conduit for more than just status updates or news.
The beauty of Twitter – classic Twitter, without Vine or the other multimedia add-ons that are beginning to embroider its edges – is that it is all about words.
And words, the nuance of language, is what poetry is all about.
I’d already been writing poetry as text messages, using the 160-character SMS limit as a way to discipline my writing, making it more focussed and compact.
Twitter’s 140-character limit – it used the other 20 characters as overhead for its Web-oriented service – could only serve to strengthen that discipline.
I thought of Twitter as a semaphore, a shorthand service that could crystallize thought.
I also saw poetry as a semaphore, wielding words like semaphore flags as a code to signal messages, emotions.
Luckily, it was early in Twitter’s history, that the username I wanted wasn’t already taken.
I decided to call myself @Semaphore.
Instead of status messages, I would broadcast poetry.
Many years earlier, I had been the youngest writer to ever win a Palanca Award in the Philippines, where I grew up, for a manuscript of poems called “Pacific”.
But when I finished my graduate studies, and joined the work force, that promise sputtered.
I barely wrote poetry, perhaps one poem a year.
And in the corporate world of spreadsheets and valuations, engineering prototypes and PowerPoint presentations, I lost myself.
That soul was what I was looking for – and not finding – when I created Sam Parr. But Twitter was a revelation – and for @Semaphore, a breakthrough.
Shadowed in a facet of the rainforest’s emerald face,
the anaconda uncoils an ancient geometry.
Finally we are, facing infinity, breathless.
With the simple 140-character structure focussing my efforts, I began to write poetry again.
A Saint-Saëns concerto, La Muse et le Poète.
Over the mother-of-pearl inlay on the cello,
your fingers decipher the sphinx’ second riddle.
And it was all the poetry that had been locked up inside of me, flowing like an undammed river.
You unearth love with a geological intuition,
cleaving this igneous heart to reveal a hidden feldspar,
shining, a labradorite iridescence.
I found myself again, I found Samuel Peralta…
For you I wish that these poems were rubies,
borne by my own caravan from Xi’an out of Shaanxi,
through Persia, along the northern Silk Road
…And I have never looked back.
Tonight, I am inviting you to write your own Twitter poems.
Your poem can be made up of any number of stanzas, with each stanza made up of a single 140-character tweet.
Strictly speaking, a tweet includes 140 characters or less, including spaces and punctuation – that’s what we’ll define as a single stanza, defining one complete thought or image.
However, if you’d like a bit of a challenge, try making your stanzas exactly 140 characters, no more and no less. My own poems that I’ve presented above do just that.
Post the whole poem on your blog and and link to it here, so that others can come and visit your poetry journal. If you’ve got a Twitter account, post your Twitter name here or on your blog, as well.
When you’re done, post the whole poem on Twitter, one tweet, one stanza at a time! And then if you can, visit everyone’s poem and re-tweet them on your timeline.
It will be a wonderful celebration of poetry – 140 characters at a time.
Samuel Peralta – on Twitter as @Semaphore – is the award-winning author of five titles in The Semaphore Collection – Sonata Vampirica, Sonnets from the Labrador, How More Beautiful You Are, Tango Desolado and War and Ablution – all Amazon Kindle top five best sellers in poetry.
Copyright (c) Samuel Peralta. All rights reserved.
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wow sam – very cool on the song writing – would love to hear some of the songs today – and even better on re-finding that creative spark again through twitter – it’s amazing what can be said in 140 characters – and i’m again & again surprised what wonderful poetry floats through the twitter stream… happy thursday everyone..
my applogies to you and Mary for the disturbance. S. Matthews
It was a great experience, but as a singer-songwriter, it turns out I was better as just a songwriter.
Flash! One of the ladies who sang duet with Sam Parr on one of his songs is up for a Canadian Country Music Award this year! 🙂
Sam that’s a great story how Twitter opened the poetry door for you! It’s certainly a great discipline you bring to the table. I raise my glass 🙂
cheers paul..
Thanks Paul… and let me re-fill that glass for you!
Sam, what a many-faceted person you are. It is a pleasure to learn more about you.
Sadly I am tweetless, as I haven’t found out yet how it works, so it will just be a progression of tweetbites on my site.
twitter is a bit tricky first – but once you found out how it works, it’s a stream of wonder – ha.. smiles
the way you showed how you pared it down is really cool aprille
I think of Twitter as texting a group, that helps.
Texting? Oh dear: can’t do that either. I’m still strictly a land-line girl 😦
No worries, Aprille, it’s the discipline of the 140 characters that counts, in this exercise. 🙂
I love your word “tweetbites”
Sam, thanks for the grand challenge, and the beauteous data about your own inspirations and progress; really cool. I came to Twitter as a retiree, and had the leisure 2 rack up thousands of tweets in a short time. At first 140 characters seemed straightjacket absurd, but soon, the brevity, the parameters became second nature. Never thought of that as a poetry form, so thanks for putting together modern media, technology, gossip, voyeurism, & poetry.
ha true – this is where it all comes together
Glenn, looking forward to your take on this – you always have a way of turning the challenge on its head and adding something new to the mix!
oh – my twitter name is @cmschoenfeld
bmiller007 … 007…yep
Do you introduce yourself as Miller, Brian Miller ? 😉
ha. no but you have seen my email which comes through with multiple names…someone did that to it as a joke and i left it…ha
Sam, I’ve never been a fan of Twitter because mostly what I saw was people spewing minutia like they’re leaving the coffee shop or announcing they had to pee. You on the other hand have shared a history and discipline and art I never thought could be shared this way. Tthank you for giving me another pespective and a newfound appreciation for the medium.
Question, when I copy your poems to see how a 140 characters work, I get a higher count. How do we stick to 140 characters by your rules?
happened to me as well….the problem if you copy it into a tweet, the spacing is messed up – if you format it like the original, it will be exactly 140
the best thing is to directly write the parts in the twitter box, then the counting works best
took your advice, Claudia. Thank you.
Twitter treats a linebreak as if it were an extra space; this is because the original framework didn’t include a provision for actual linebreaks. I find that this is the main thing that throws off the character count.
I put slashes between lines and double slashes for verse breaks (if any). That works. But doesn’t one need to include the hashtag in the 140 characters?
Strictly, you don’t need to use any hashtags, it’s optional 🙂
LaTonya, I agree with you – it’s difficult for me to take seriously 90% of the tweets I see on my timeline – as you say, the minutiae of people’s lives. That’s why I swore I wouldn’t do that, that everything I tweeted would be relevant to poetry and the arts. Enough people agreed with me, so I kept it going.
This is great, Sam. I posted last night…took an old poem and tweaked it a bit to get exactly 140 characters, but this makes me want to write a fresh one. I really enjoyed getting a peek at your background. And, the images of the birds. Just beautiful.
the choices and how we have to overcome our fear to discover new paths… i liked yours victoria
I did that as well, sometime during the early Twitter days. I took a few old poems that I didn’t like anymore, and re-worked them into the 140-character format. Compressing it that way made me focus the ideas more sharply, and I ended up with better poems!
The bird images came out as a happy accident! I tried illustrating the article with images of Twitter software programming and such, but it didn’t work. Then I used the picture of a bird for one illustration. It worked so well, I figured, why not a flock!
i said it already on your blog sam, but i just love the one with the cello – the
fingers deciphering the sphinx’ second riddle… think i will remember this when i listen to a cello player next time
Thanks, Claudia!
I love that one, too. People tell me all the time that they’d heard of the Sphinx’ first riddle (“What creature walks with four legs at sunrise, two legs at noon, and three legs at sunset?”) …but they’d never heard of the second riddle. 😉
What a fun prompt! I decided to torture myself by attempting to write a limerick that’s exactly 140 characters. And I did it … sort of.
The results are here on my blog and here on my @Madkane Twitter account.
Thanks!
ha – you did well – smiles
Madeleine, I loved what you did with this, making it your own! You are such a homerun-hitter! 😉
Thanks so much Sam and Claudia!
Sam, I myself recently opened the poetry faucet I’d closed down to less than a trickle twenty years ago. Reading your experience really touched me. Thanks for sharing it.
oh wow…wondering what happened that made you close that poetry faucet… and cool on opening it again
The shutting down and the opening up again of the poetic tap – those were life-changing parts of my life. I’m glad that something of the story touched you…
Reblogged this on jessicaslavin and commented:
I can relate, not so much to the use of Twitter, which I have never really gotten, but to Samuel Peralta’s experience of finding his way back to himself through poetry. I am in the midst of such experience.
You’ll break through, Jessica. You will.
Thank you.
So glad to know more about you Sam.
You are certainly a multi-talented man and the world
would have been the poorer if twitter hadn’t help you find your poetic
voice. Sometime after your entry into twitter I read a news account
that twitter was a gold mine for poets and the richness of haiku
or more accurately 5/7/5 poetry was being shared on twitter. I have
written a lot about haiku. Truly, I believe it the most demanding
form of poetry. The kiru always difficult for me.
I think my 5/7/5 is
still mostly a free verse version but it was and is still ideally suited
to twitter. It opened up another window into poetry for me as Leslie and Pete
saw my tweets and asked me to join One Stop Poetry and here we are today.
I am still composing a personal 5/7/5 set about
July which is the pivotal month of the year for me.
I hope to be posting it in a few minutes.
Thanks for sharing and for the challenge, and thank you
too for being my comrade and brother in poetry here on dVerse!
It’s good to be back. Next week I think we should review Prosody?!
woohooo!!!! so good to having you back Gay
Thanks Claudia. Good to be back at the pub with my friends.
So glad to see you here, Gay, and thanks for the kind words!
I agree with you that haiku is a very demanding form of poetry, though suited to the confines of the Twitter 140-character framework.
That being said, there are many, many good haiku poets on Twitter, and for that reason I tried consciously -not- to do haiku on Twitter (although I did do some, for other people’s prompts).
Instead – and you will see it in my examples above – I went the other way, packing complexity rather than simplicity into the 140-character verse.
Indeed, that number of characters enables you to double the syllabic count of a haiku for a Twitter verse, to roughly 10/14/10. Despite what people say about the constraints of a tweet, that number of syllables – more than tanka! – allows much more depth of treatment.
I know, I know – I think too much 😉
hey all
on the road still
vacationing
will catch up here in a bit
thanks to those that stopped by already
cool article sam
some interesting bits of your history
be safe on the road bri…
was good…we took our time…visiting some places we used to hang out back when we lived up here….caught up and about to go walking through old town…excited…smiles. oh and the harbor and fresh seafood…mmm….
Well, it sounds like you’re having an amazing time! Enjoy!
I love knowing how you came to be Semaphore… & thanks so much for this challenge. Mine was originally 140, until I learned I needed to include #dVerse. My twitter address is https://twitter.com/KolpLaurie.
P.S. I’ll get around to everyone… just having a few distractions right now.
smiles…my distraction right now is indiana jones on tv…
ladies….ladies….
ha
Laurie, nice to see you here! You don’t actually have to use a #dverse hashtag, that was just a tongue-in-cheek comment for those who didn’t want to do precisely 140 characters. Yours is perfect!
ok poets… close to midnight & bedtime for me.. will be back in the AM to catch up with the overnites…
‘Night, Claudia!
Hit and run, apropos perhaps, of having little to add, as much as the format. Nonetheless, Sam, thanks for the insight and well-crafted verses. ~ M
whassup mike….good to see you man…
Thanks Mike, glad you could make it out tonight!
Dear Sam, how this makes me smile with pleasure and reminiscence! I didn’t first encounter you on twitter, but in the anthology initiated by Collin Kelley, of poets he knew of who were on twitter. Then I started following you, or you me, I don’t remember which – and I fell in love with your poems. I too had seen the potential of twitter, and loved writing micropoems which wee not haiku or any other already existing form. It was still a fairly unusual exercise back then. Later I did post haiku etc there (like many others) and nowadays I post links to my longer poems too. I never really ‘got’ twitter; I use it only for poetry and online political activism, and everything is linked to go straight on to facebook, where I am very active. You know, it’s already a long time since I wrote what I first called #tweetpoems, and later learned to call #poetweets so as to align with the many other poets who started using twitter that way. I used to love your one-verse-at-a-time posts, but never tried that. Time I did! Hellishly busy day today, but will try to get back later, before you close the bar and kick the stragglers out. If I don’t make it, look for me in the next OLN. Meanwhile, thanks for reminding me of those earlier times, when twitter was relatively new and sweet.
Rosemary – I agree! Those were the days!
Collin Kelley’s list was an amazing one, and I discovered many good writers on it that I started following as well.
You see so many articles these days about the “new” Twitter poetry… in reality, we were pioneering that ages ago. I started with Twitter-sized poems, and then started posting longer poems from my blog in sections, treating the stream as if it were a spoken word event.
Looking forward to seeing what you might come up with!
Ha! Quick after all. I looked through old drafts that weren’t working, to see if I could find one that could benefit from this treatment, and sure enough…. Might be a while before I get back to read others’, but it will happen. 🙂
Hurray! I’ll be there!
A place for non-tweeters to count your letters and spaces for you can be found HERE
Cool, thanks for the link, Aprille!
anyone having trouble with links? I keep getting message page not available.
It seems to be working fine for me. Maybe you need to refresh your browser and/or empty your cache files.
hmm…all of them loaded fine for me today…..
Looks OK from here…?
hiya everyone…
in Baltimore now and swinging in…
about to play a little catch up…
LaTonya was having that problem elsewhere yesterday and i refreshed and it worked…
Cool, thanks Brian.
I love this story of yours – from Samuel to Sam to Semaphore here told so poignantly.
My favorite @Semaphore :
For you I wish that these poems were rubies,
borne by my own caravan from Xi’an out of Shaanxi,
through Persia, along the northern Silk Road
There was a time I did not write poetry for a decade and when I did again, it was like coming out from the desert.
By the way Sam, I am really trying to write some ghazal and gloss, just to let you know. My two favorite forms for this year surely.
*glosa
Thanks, that verse has become a trademark, I use it as an epigraph to my Twitter, Facebook, Tumblr and Pinterest accounts.
So glad you’re going after the ghazal and glosa, they are tremendous forms to write to. Looking forward to seeing them!
I stopped writing poetry in the last two months of my PhD studies –when I wrote my dissertation. I used to write poetry everyday and I haven’t been able to do it at the same rhythm again but dVerse is helping. Thank you for sharing your story, Sam. It is inspiring.
glad you are getting back in the swing…wow…so you are done now? PhD? congrats!
Yes, I finished in it in 2007. My creative writing suffer at the mercy of my creative science… smiles …
Typo: I meant to write ‘suffered’.
Adriana, I feel exactly what you’re going through… and I’m glad DVerse is helping you get back the rhythm. You will hit your stride again, definitely, and when you do – it will be amazing.
Those are encouraging and thoughtful words, Sam. I appreciate them.
alright…caught up…and off to hit the town…be back late after the boys are wore out and asleep….peace, poets….
Off for dinner… but will be back later on the poetry trail!
Hey Samuel! Good to see you. I enjoyed your story about finding twitter and finding self. Please forgive me for the planet I invent on which you twitter or else … in 140 characters. The medium is much less important than the message, though it may shape and code perception (and may the ghost of MM forgive me).
Susan! What a great teaser you’ve made for your piece, now I can’t wait to see what you’ve got for me! 🙂
aaron?
apologies for posting the wrong poems
on the wrong day.
bad tech combined with a bad head.
I think I may have exceeded 140 characters (surprisingly – lol).
great prompt though guys.
all the best – see you nxt week 🙂
smiles…hiya aaron…no sweat, happens ot the best of us
heading to bed myself…cant hardly see straight
No apologies necessary, have a drink on the house!
good morning… will check in later as i’m about to meet with a friend for breakfast… happy friday…
Good morning, Claudia!
good morning!
What a nice prompt, and impressive poetry Sam.. and now when twitter allows one can make nice poetry. Just back from the mountains and had some fresh poetry itching my brain. Will soon head out for a second week of adventures…. 🙂
hey you…what a pleasant surprise to wake up to…ha…didnt think we would see you on your break…but thought it the perfect topic or you
Indeed– could not miss it… 🙂
woot…
Looking forward to it, Bjorn!
I should have said that as well as your poems, the bird pictures are gorgeous.
Thanks! Did you notive, if you scroll quickly down, the pictures seem almost like they’re in 3D!
‘TO WAIT’
…that’s the sound of a bird…. ‘to wait… to wait… to wait…!’
…ok…now stub me with some butter knives for such a corny joke… aww… hihi… i tried my hardest to fit a thousand tale inside the twitter box… real hard but a most wonderful experience… thank you Sam… smiles…
…love…love…love the bird pictures… i think i saw a maya there… smiles…
smiles….i will hold off the butter knives kelvin…ha.
happy friday
That Twitter box can be pretty unforgiving when you want to fit a novella inside it, eh? And yes, you did see a maya!
One of the prompts I truly enjoyed. Reminded me of one of my poetry class sessions. Thank you, Sam, for this.
You’re welcome, glad you enjoyed the challenge!
Wonderful post here, Sam. I’ve been looking for ways to tighten up my work, and I could certainly use this concept in my writings. Thanks so much for the inspiration. ~peace, Jason
Jason, thanks for the kind words! Having to edit your work so it fits into a a40-character format does help to tighten up a work, in terms of economy of language. Glad that worked for you!
This was certainly a lot of fun writing out. Thanks for this interesting prompt, Sam!
Thanks for stopping by to try it out!
I’m always inspired reading your poetry, Sam, but to read you in this form – I’d join Twitter if I thought it would help me learn to tweet half as sweetly…
Such a wonderful compliment, I’m blushing now…. thanks so much!
popping in midday as lunch settles….spent the morning in the fields picking nectarines & peaches…(ate a few too, right off the tree…mmm) then walking old town…about to jump on the subway to b’more proper…caught up…
see you all this evening….
Okay, I’m in…:) 140 characters, no more, no less. Jason
smiles…keep building on hilltops…
Hurray, great to see you here!
Your story is very encouraging and I am learning a lot from your prompts. For the simple poem I submitted, I labored longer than expected to get it down to 140 characters. 🙂
Thanks so much, Imelda, for your kind words… And yes, sometimes it does take longer to edit things down than to write. 🙂
Fifty-two poets! (Well, fifty-three, including myself) This is amazing!
I am a slow and deliberate reader – if I haven’t visited your site yet, that’s the reason why. I’m about 2/3 of the way through, but I’ll get to everyone in time.
In the meantime, thank you for joining me and sharing your poetry – always a pleasure to meet people with a similar love for the craft.
All done – and I even found a couple of poems that I wish I’d written. Bravo!
See you again next time, and until then… keep writing!
As a “twitter poet” I find there are many avenues of poetic exploration within the 140 characters. So much so that I will often use the format, to warm up or channel-commune with the muse, so to speak … I’ll give little rapid fire top of the head responses to a conversation in my head or topical or personal subject that begs expression with no filter … and sometimes when looking back upon them I see bones of a poem inside … this is such a great prompt … and it has been awhile since I have really visited and shared with dVerse … I love it when the Universe speaks with subtle moxie … off to read some poems now …
Good for you to be inspired by this short form. Feel free to share with us 🙂