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Samuel Peralta here…
Over 120 years ago, Harper’s New Monthly Magazine ran a serial originally called “The Simpletons”, and eventually re-named “Hearts Insurgent”.
A 55-word summary:
- Jude Fawley is a working-class man who aims to change his life by becoming a scholar. He falls for Sue Bridehead, a beautiful, free spirit – and his cousin. Though she marries someone else, Jude turns his back on his ambitions, and pursues a passionate, illicit relationship with Sue – one which can only end in tragedy.
The last of Thomas Hardy’s completed novels, “Jude the Obscure” – the collected serial took this as its final, and most memorable, title – was published when he was 55.
With its seeming attack on conventional mores, marriage, and its matter-of-fact treatment of sex, the novel was often called “Jude the Obscene”.
Hardy was no stranger to controversy in the Victorian age, and his works embodied characters struggling against social norms and their own passions.
Subtitled A Pure Woman: Faithfully Presented, “Tess of the d’Urbervilles” was initially refused publication – and when published, attracted similar controversy for its sympathetic portrayal of what the Victorians considered a fallen woman.
In 55 words:
- Tess Durbeyfield, daughter of peasants, is sent to the baronial d’Urberville family when her father is told of a family-name connection. In reality, there are no familial relations, and Alec d’Urberville takes advantage of Tess’ presence to obligate, and then seduce her. She flees and finds temporary solace, but cannot escape Alec, or her past.
A first edition of the 1891 volume in fair but slightly damaged condition, was recently priced at US $12,000.00.
A similar first edition of “Tess of the d’Urbervilles” – but in presumably better condition – was described as being gifted to Anastasia Steele by the enigmatic Christian Grey.
Ana and Christian, of course, are the protagonists of the book “Fifty Shades of Grey”.
The E.L. James trilogy, beginning with “Fifty Shades”, was originally titled “Master of the Universe”, and was written as fan fiction based on the “Twilight” vampire angst novels written by Stephenie Meyer.
Unfortunately, as I’ve not yet read the book, I’m not qualified to present a 55-word précis.
I was in a bookstore the other day, and the display tables were covered in pyramids of “Fifty Shades of Grey” and “Twilight”.
(Yes, I still go to bookstores, despite buying hundreds of Kindle ebooks and most of my own poetry books only being available in digital form.)
Going through the shelves, I stopped to admire the poetry of Margaret Atwood, of which, at this writing, she has twenty volumes.
I pulled out “The Journals of Susanna Moodie” and leafed through page after page of indescribable beauty, pain, insight.
Every poem was a poem I wish I’d written.
And yet, of Atwood’s array of volumes on the shelf, all iconic titles – “The Edible Woman”, “The Journals of Susanna Moodie”, “Surfacing”, “Life Before Man”, “The Handmaid’s Tale”, “Cat’s Eye”, “The Robber Bride”, “Alias Grace”, “The Blind Assassin”, “Oryx and Crake”, “The Year of the Flood”, “MaddAddam” – only one was poetry.
Twenty books of poems, and only one on the shelf.
Like Atwood, Hardy gained fame as a novelist with books that have become classics – “Far from the Madding Crowd”, “The Return of the Native”, “Tess of the d’Urbervilles”, “Jude the Obscure”.
Despite this, Hardy regarded himself primarily as a poet, and wrote poetry over his entire life.
He claimed poetry as his first love – but he also said “A lover without indiscretion is no lover at all.”
Yes, poetry is my first love…
But now – after poetry on Twitter, Blogspot, Tumblr, WordPress; articles for amazing poetry communities; publications in literary journals; an award-winning print chapbook; Kindle books I’m grateful that people deigned to buy; and one forlorn manuscript still sitting in the middle of a publishing house’s in-box –
I’m ready for an indiscretion.
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Tonight, I invite you to contribute your own 55-word poem.
Yes, that’s the only rule: The poem (not including the title) should have 55 words, no more, no less.
It’s not required, but if you wanted use a metrical or rhyming framework to the poem – to differentiate it from 55-word prose – it would be amazing.
And folks, let’s link to the G-man and other 55-word groups, and help bring together communities meant to encourage a love affair with writing.
I hope you’ll join me in tonight’s affair. Thank you.
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Samuel Peralta – on Twitter as @Semaphore – is the author of five titles in The Semaphore Collection, all Amazon Kindle #1 Hot New Releases, and best sellers, in poetry. As well as an award-winning poet, he is a physicist, technology business leader, mobile software developer, songwriter, and indie film producer.
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Eric said:
Nice to be able to cross-link my 55 between G-Man and dVerse.
Samuel Peralta / Semaphore said:
Glad that you were able to stop by, Eric
Björn Rudberg (brudberg) said:
Sam, I love to write poetry with word restrictions.. Sonnets can be done on exactly 100 words.. but for 55 words it had to be less.. so I settled for a ballad in 3 stanzas based on a tweet I did the other day (another restriction)… Loved this prompt.
Samuel Peralta / Semaphore said:
Your ballad was excellent, you shattered this 55 challenge!
Glenn Buttkus said:
Great idea, Sam; some of us followed Brian over to G-Man’s site years ago, and Brian did a dVerse prompt on 55’s some time ago; regardless, the 55 form is a valid challenge, & I always enjoy them; decided to make mine in a Neruda Sonnet form too.
Samuel Peralta / Semaphore said:
Thanks for stopping by Glenn, and for all the support on Twitter as well… I really appreciate it, every time you take the megaphone!
Susan L Daniels said:
Wow–talk about serendipity. I wrote a short poem this morning. Saw this prompt and said, wow.. I wonder if by just adding one word (or two) if what I wrote this morning would work for the prompt. Well, guess what? It was EXACTLY 55 words long…
Fun prompt and thank you!
Björn Rudberg (brudberg) said:
Ha.that was luck.. Liked your piece a lot…
Susan L Daniels said:
Thanks, Bjorn–just read yours. Beautiful. I want to hum it.
claudia said:
do it… i’ll play along with my guitar…smiles
brian miller said:
smiles…dont you like it when it all comes together like that…
Susan L Daniels said:
Oh! I like where this is going…
Samuel Peralta / Semaphore said:
Talk about serendipity!
K. A. Brace said:
Personally putting a word limit on a poem, unlike the higher form of haiku and others of the same ilk, such an indiscriminate choice of the number words seems ridiculous.
I understand the love affair with twitter and the like but what artistic merit is there in conducting such an exercise? Fatuous at best, demeaning at worst. Perhaps my words sound harsh but treating poetry as if it were a side-show routine seems to do nothing to promote it as the art form it is. Of course this is only my opinion and not meant to disuade other writers from participating–in fact I encourage anything that gets others interested enough to participate in writing. I felt so strongly about this ‘prompt’ that I had to voice my opinion as the other side of the argument to minimalists. Thank you. >KB
Susan L Daniels said:
KB, the really, really odd thing is I actually wrote a poem today that is exactly 55 words long this morning, unaware of the prompt. Then again, you know I am fond of shorter pieces. At 55 words, you’re just getting started.
claudia said:
i hear you kb….i tend to be rather wordy in my poems but i just love to do a 55 every once and a while cause it forces me to focus… and i’m always amazed at how much can be said in 55 words… it’s good to stretch our poetic muscles every once and a while and go a step or two beyond our comfort zone… can i talk you in to give it a try sir…? i would love if you would…
Samuel Peralta / Semaphore said:
Why are there 14 lines in a sonnet? Why pentameter and not hexameter? Why 17 syllables in a haiku? Why not count the number of words, like a lune?
55 word short stories began essentially as a short-form in magazines that became popular. This popularity engendered a tradition in flash fiction, so that there are now contests, anthologies and websites devoted to the 55-word format.
Arbitrary? Perhaps – but a good poet will be able to transcend any arbitrary list of requirements – and that would range from a 17-syllable haiku, a 14-line sonnet, or a 55-word poem.
margaret said:
Ha! I love how dVerse we all are. I find just the opposite to be true (referring to K.A. Brace’s comment. I’m not saying the above statement is false, just how we each embrace individual approaches. I find the hardest thing for a writer to do is to EDIT their own “brilliant” words – and though a strict “55” may hurt artistically when a poem might read better at say, 60 words – it is still the primary lesson I have learned to turn out better poetry. Or perhaps mine isn’t better or good at all, but then at least I’m shortening the anguish I’m putting my readers through 🙂 I adore used book stores, must have my “fix” at least once a month. I’ve purchased a few very old or out of print poetry books this way.
Samuel Peralta / Semaphore said:
Well said, thanks Margaret!
Heaven (@ScarletVerses) said:
I don’t mind writing in short verses or with a word limit ~ I think its a good exercise to choose your words carefully yet being mindful of the meaning ~
Sam, thanks for the post & information ~
Wishing you all Happy Thursday & Friday ~
Grace
Heaven (@ScarletVerses) said:
And this word counter is very useful : http://www.wordcounter.net/
Samuel Peralta / Semaphore said:
Thanks Grace, for the kind words, and for the word counter!
brian miller said:
very cool…i enjoy 55s and they help you condense thought and story down to just the essentials….
i will be around once the buses get out of here…
shanyns said:
Very cool prompt, nicely written Sam. I like going to bookstores too. I love my Kindle books but there is something about the feel of paper and the smell of ink – ooh bliss!
claudia said:
yes… i love bookstores as well… oh i can get lost in them… i was at a big one when i was in munich earlier this week and really thought about hiding so that they would lock me in overnite so that i had time to read and read and read…smiles
brian miller said:
i like the smell of books stores….they are like a home to me…smiles.
Samuel Peralta / Semaphore said:
We’re of the same feather! I love both paper and electrons, for different reasons 🙂
Madeleine Begun Kane said:
They’ve told us to compose some verse,
A certain length decreed.
It’s longer than I tend to scribe,
Except when writing screed.
It must be over fifty words–
By five to be precise.
I wonder if I’m finished yet.
A word count would be nice.
Do I have room for one more verse?
Alas, I…
Björn Rudberg (brudberg) said:
Ha.. that end was hilarious.. so very true…
claudia said:
haha…. so good madeleine… smiles
Madeleine Begun Kane said:
Thanks Bjorn and Claudia! 🙂
brian miller said:
ha. you ran out of words…
there is a word count tool online i use when i write mine…there are several actually….
grapeling said:
ha! fun one, Madeleine ~
Madeleine Begun Kane said:
Thanks, Grapeling and Brian. Brian, I knew without doubt that I’d run out of words. But I wanted to be surprised as to precisely when. 🙂
kkkkaty1 said:
Nice 😉
Samuel Peralta / Semaphore said:
Very clever, as always, Madeleine!
Linda Kruschke said:
I came over to see if you were offering prompt I could tackle during my lunch and found that you had. 🙂 There’s always time for 55. Peace, Linda
Björn Rudberg (brudberg) said:
Liked yours a lot… very nice.
claudia said:
smiles.. true that.. though i find that the shorter poems sometimes need more time than the long ones…
brian miller said:
i would agree…to condense it down is not an easy thing…it takes a skilled knife to go with the pen…smiles.
Samuel Peralta / Semaphore said:
55 over for lunch definitely sounds like a party!
claudia said:
good evening… just coming through the door and will be heading out on the trail once i catched my breath… smiles.. happy thursday and thanks for hosting sam
Samuel Peralta / Semaphore said:
Thanks Claudia, always a pleasure to write for dVerse, and to read the poems that ensue!
Gabriella said:
I have been writing a 55 for some weeks now so I am glad that I can participate both in dVerse and G-Man prompts tonight! Thanks Sam!
Samuel Peralta / Semaphore said:
Hurray Gabriella!
Martin Shone said:
55 words 🙂 ahem!
Samuel Peralta / Semaphore said:
Ahem! Thanks for stopping by, Martin!
aprille said:
Sam, your references to Hardy touched a nerve. I have not forgiven him the description in Jude the Obscure for the fields and the paths that are dear to me as if they were friends. Got carried away again, as usual. The power of the online communities never fails to amaze me.
Managed a 55 on a different topic, but may still try to divert my displeasure with the long gone author into a poem construct, tomorrow. Maybe the effort will mellow me a little.
Thank you for stirring me, [I think]
Samuel Peralta / Semaphore said:
Sorry (I think) for awakening such stirring emotions… but reading your page, I think I sympathize 🙂
freyathewriter said:
Great prompt! If I knew how/where to link up to G-man’s 55, I would…..
claudia said:
http://g-man-mrknowitall.blogspot.de/
that’s the link to his blog but the prompt is not yet up…
freyathewriter said:
Thank you, Claudia – I’ll check him out!
Samuel Peralta / Semaphore said:
Thanks for joining in, Freya!
Raivenne said:
Inspiration really can come from anywhere. Especially with a 55 word limit. Nice one Sam.
brian miller said:
yes it can…
Samuel Peralta / Semaphore said:
Glad to be of some inspiration, Raivenne!
Samuel Peralta / Semaphore said:
Whoa, twenty-six poems linked in already!
Good evening everyone… nice to see all of you here. I’m going to have to run out to a business dinner, but will be back later to raise the glass with with each of you.
Cheers!
brian miller said:
just getting home myself…and playing a bit of catch up…
out on the trail now….
Victoria C. Slotto said:
I’m having to lay off for a while…worst tendinitis yet but I can write by hand…so will work on it and keep it for when things ease up. Great intro, Sam.
brian miller said:
yikes…i hope that feels better soon for you v….
Victoria C. Slotto said:
Thanks, Bri
Samuel Peralta / Semaphore said:
Thanks Victoria, hope you feel better soon…
Abhra Pal said:
55 words has always been an area of interest for me – be it fiction or poetry. I didn’t write a 55 word poetry before today though. While reading your post, I really enjoyed the summaries in 55 words. Looking forward to read some fascinating poetry tonight.
brian miller said:
i find it a great exercise in being concise, esp if you are storytelling and it makes you choose just what details you want to accentuate…
Abhra Pal said:
Yes, have seen many using 55 words for flash fiction. What do you is the dynamics of 55 words – not 50 or 60? I ask this question to myself often.
brian miller said:
i dunno…i have played a couple…55 is just one that has been around a very long time….and i have even seen books full of these stories in 55 words…i used to do one that used 160 characters. much like the american sentences we did a month back…its all about condensing…
Abhra Pal said:
Yes, have seen many using 55 words for flash fiction. What do you is the dynamics of 55 words – not 50 or 60? I ask this question to myself often.
Samuel Peralta / Semaphore said:
I had fun writing these, too. Looking forward to seeing what you come up with!
Mary said:
I am always amazed at how many thoughts can be expressed in 55 words!! I love doing 55’s. Thanks for the prompt, Sam.
Samuel Peralta / Semaphore said:
Glad that you passed by, Mary!
rosross said:
An interesting challenge.
Samuel Peralta / Semaphore said:
Thanks for the kind word!
grapeling said:
Sam, quite the tour, from Gray 50 to Atwood’s missing 19, and beyond.
I understand KB’s strident point. However, I don’t necessarily count haiku as a ‘higher form’ – just another form. Yes, 55 is arbitrary, but IMO the strictures don’t harm the art of poetry. And while using sporting analogies is absurd, I might compare it to running a 100 meter sprint rather than running a mile or a marathon – some athletes are better at one discipline than another. As some poets are superior at free verse, or sonnets, or what-have-you, than at haiku. I suppose that makes me a 55 apologist. So it goes. ~
brian miller said:
i have often found too that while you may prefer and achieve more in one arena, trying others allows you the opportunity to appreciate the others….
Samuel Peralta / Semaphore said:
I’m a 55 apologist too, we have something in common!
brian miller said:
alright, be back in the AM, knocking off a little early to …enjoy the evening a bit…
thanks to those that are actively building community…
Susan said:
Wow! This essay delightful in its clever argument for the number 55. I never could have created such a chain of evidence. I determined to write something slightly sexy and indiscreet in the spirit of your essay, Sam.
Susan said:
It is too late to read tonight, but I’ll be back tomorrow. Funny how it seems more possible to read them all at 55 words each.
brian miller said:
nice. we will look forward to that susan…
ha and we def dont mind the heat.
Samuel Peralta / Semaphore said:
It’s not so much a chain of evidence as a set of dominoes falling in sequence towards a conclusion. But I did enjoy writing this very much. 🙂
fighting100spirit said:
It is a valuable resource here for all, not just poets (and aspiring poets). Thankyou! Now I am here I remember my blog’s changed its name. Previously clementsgeoff I tried to use this as an opportunity to honour the memory of a great man.
Samuel Peralta / Semaphore said:
The honour was mine, for you to use this article as a springboard for a tribute to someone who truly had such lasting influence.
fighting100spirit said:
Yes Samuel, a good collaboration between us!
MarinaSofia said:
WordPress seems to be having a hissy fit and making it impossible for me to comment. And since I hate to just visit your poems empty-handed, I will have to wait for the return of normal service, so I can appreciate you as you should be appreciated.
Your argument in favour of the magic number of 55 reminds me of that lovely riff on the power of 4 a.m. by performance artist Rives.
fighting100spirit said:
Thanks, hopefully the blog is working OK now so do try and add your comments!
fighting100spirit said:
Don’t know if the problem is fixed, perhaps not as no additional comments. I will repost the poem. I will have to leave it to the organizers to edit as necessary thanks
Samuel Peralta / Semaphore said:
Ditto
Lydia said:
Sam, your prompts are always so rich. I found this 55-community-building exercise especially heartwarming on the day of the death of Nelson Mandela. Thank you.
Samuel Peralta / Semaphore said:
Lydia, I truly enjoyed your offering, and thank you so much for the kind words
kkkkaty1 said:
This day is so meaningful world wide with Mandela’s passing
My poem was written in 100 words for something else ..so I condensed it and really didn’t lose much in the process…I tend to ramble i guess. Thanks for this prompt.
brian miller said:
it is cool when you can pair away and still retain the meaning…and eye opening in that maybe at times we are long winded…it can be harder to achieve as i think at times we love our words a bit much…ha
Björn Rudberg (brudberg) said:
Condensation of poems is actually quite interesting… to really condensing a sonnet down to a haiku for instance..
Samuel Peralta / Semaphore said:
Happy to see you here, thank you
ramblingsfromamum said:
Thanks Sam, I think if we can babble on for 200 words about nothing at times, we can certainly do it in 55. I’ll give it a try 🙂
Samuel Peralta / Semaphore said:
Thanks for giving it a try!
ramblingsfromamum said:
Thank you for the Prompt Sam 🙂
Madhura said:
Nice prompt. My 55 word poem on my current mood.. not very happy, I’m afraid!
Samuel Peralta / Semaphore said:
However you participated, I’m very glad you did, thanks
clawfish said:
Missed the deadline daft computer failed ughhh if you could have a look i will be around http://velvetmedia.wordpress.com/2013/12/07/off-the-perfumed-saddle/
Samuel Peralta / Semaphore said:
Thanks for linking in, I’ll have a look!
Gerry@ Strummed Words said:
You have made me want to read Jude the Obscure and Tess of the D’Urbervilles with a new and more critical eye, and, yes, with more appreciation.
Samuel Peralta / Semaphore said:
Thanks Gerry, what a great thing to say!
Gerry @ Strummed Words said:
I have to read Hardy again…
Samuel Peralta / Semaphore said:
And Margaret Atwood too! 😉
ManicDdaily said:
hey all, was late to this party, but here is my link. I like the 55s, though they can be surprisingly hard!
http://manicddaily.wordpress.com/2013/12/07/blue-in-55/
Samuel Peralta / Semaphore said:
Thanks Karin, for linking in, I’ll have a look shortly!
Samuel Peralta / Semaphore said:
WordPress commenting seems to still be a bit funny, here’s what I said:
“Ah, this is wonderful! It reminds me of Pablo Neruda’s “Verde you te quiero verde” – “Color of green I love you green”… with its shifting hues, its subtle peacefulness and cobalt emotions. A poem I wish I’d written!”
ManicDdaily said:
Ha. Well, thanks, Sam. I love that Neruda for sure. I am so glad that you mentioned it as I’m going to look it up now and try to think about it. Take care–good luck with film! k.
ManicDdaily said:
Sam, it is Lorca! I was wondering about that!!! Ha. Love the poem though! k.
Samuel Peralta / Semaphore said:
Oh Lorca! My mistake! Pablo Neruda isn’t the only lyrical poet I read 🙂
Thanks for catching that.
http://vivinfrance.wordpress.com said:
I wrote my 55 word poem for this prompt, and didn’t have time to post it. Coincidentally, it has the title Advent which is the subject of Claudia’s prompt tonight, so I will link it there.
Samuel Peralta / Semaphore said:
You linked it with Claudia? I will have to go see… thanks Viv!
Samuel Peralta / Semaphore said:
Thanks everyone for passing by! It took me a while, but I did get to everyone’s blog.
There were a few glitches with WordPress along the way, so if you don’t see anything obvious from me, have a look in your “comment to be approved” file, or elsewhere. I did visit everyone.
As you may have discerned from the article, I will be a little quieter with poetry, and will be following Hardy and Atwood’s example, and see where the path into prose leads.
Despite this meandering, despite this indiscretion, poetry will always be my first love, and I will cherish it for life… Thank you for spending time with me, and for letting me be a part of this wonderful community of poets. It’s been an amazing time.
This isn’t good-bye – just ‘until we meet again’
Au revoir.