Some of you may know d’Verse has made quite a few changes to better suit our goals for the community, as well as longevity and smoother productivity – I like to think of that as evolving.
So, I thought a great prompt for this week would be one that surrounds evolution.
Evolution is a gradual process of development and I wanna know how have you evolved as a poet.
Any defining moments or experiences that directly affected your writing?
If you’ve read my poetry, I’m sure you’ve noticed 99% of my work focuses on the darker side of life.
I, myself, am a pretty humorous and easy-going person in reality, but I developed a passion for finding the beauty in pain at an early stage of writing. Seeing my mother struggle with illness throughout her life gave me the gift of taking on the pain of others; not in a way that would make my own heart ache, but in way that let me turn it into a beautiful work of art. I’ve always believed everything happens for a reason, and I realize that some of those things, I cannot change. Writing dark poetry became my way of finding peace.
With that being said, for today’s prompt, I would like you to write a poem that is influenced by certain times in your life that made you the poet you are today. It might be a big, stand out moment and/or a small one that touched your heart…
Can’t wait to see what everyone comes up with… let’s have fun, poets.
Here’s how we get down:
- Write a poem that fits the prompt on your blog/webpage
- Click the Mr. Linky button below and enter your name & direct url to your poem
- There you will find other poets’ work for today’s prompt – engage with one another and have a good time learning from each other
- Feel free to share using the social media of your choice
good morning/afternoon/evening poets… WE’RE OPEN AND READY TO INSPIRE… Remember: this is NOT OLN. Keep with the topic…
woot anthony behind the bar!!!
cool topic to commemorate the moment of rebirth here…
i have made several evolutions in poetry…first in even writing it…i was a short story writer. the only reason i wrote that first poem was a commentor that challenged me to try writing a poem…
ok, i did…
and it got me…ha….the greatest change for me though was in beginning to hear the words…the sounds they made together….feeling the rhythm begin to come alive…not necessarily a meassured meter but a wild rhythm under the words…which led to spoken word…and performing…which further developed my ‘hearing’….
thanks to all that sent prayers, healing energy, thought and love to my dad…we seem to be moving in a good direction…
alright,
be out on the trail…
please make sure you are writing to topic…
this is not OLN any more…smiles.
Yo bri… I feel you on that… I used to write songs 1st… smiles.
yep…i wrote songs before….high school…garage band…looking back it was teen angst crap mostly…ha…and some social conscious stuff, but…oy…those were the days….
Welcome aboard, Anthony. Hope everything’s neat and ready for you. Glad you’re here, man. Enjoy the trip! 🙂
Thanks for joining Joe!
Ha.. very nice prompt… being so new to poetry,,, I went back way back to changes that even made me dare to write… but with about 3 years writing .. of which 1 was only on twitter… I cannot say I know the changes… though I do remember other changes without which I’d never dare to write poetry… Now I need to go out and check out what you have written… Tomorrow morning I have to go up at 4:30 so … early to bed it is…
ah, yes… some of my 1st poetry writings were on twitter; used to follow a tweet prompt page by the name of mywordwizard… seeya later Bjorn!
Welcome Anthony – so happy to have you here with us! Great article. I haven’t written anything yet, but hope to get something up soon. Thank you!
Thank you so much Gay! I’m glad to be here with you guys… smiles
I finally got it up. Didn’t write the way I imagined it would, but I think it will do. (smiling at you Anthony!!!)
smiles… when poetry found me it was… actually i think i cannot find the words to do this justice.. probably neruda in poesia stole some of my words…smiles… happy tuesday…. greetings from berlin and see you out on the trail in a bit..
hows your trip c?
Hi claudia… Berlin? wow that’s cool..
and coo to see you behind the bar anthony…smiles
Hi Anthony, glad to know more about you and your poetic journey. I came to know about the theme the moment Claudia’s post came to my inbox and I took the liberty to start early – there can be more than one ways to look at it for me and I have decided to talk about the best memory on writing. Smiles. Hope you like it.
yours was so cool man…what a great connection with your dad…
my father and i had different likes most of our lives and poetry is def not one of those things…though he reads me…and even got his boss reading me…ha….
heading over now! thank you so much for joining 🙂
Thanks and I am glad to see the new pattern actually – otherwise I was starting to stay low on OLN 🙂
Interesting topic Anthony ~ One defining moment for me was during the first months of Critique & Craft and we had Luke as our mentor. We only had like 4 or 5 sessions but it was life changing for me as I was terribly new & awkward. I still go back to his posts (2011) and remember them when I write.
Here is one: being concise with language ~ https://dversepoets.com/2011/08/04/meeting-the-bar-critique-and-craft/
I don’t know if I will post later as I am rather busy at the moment ~ Just wanted to wish you all Happy Tuesday ~
Understandable! Your just coming and commenting is more than enough. thank you!
Great idea, Anthony! I find it interesting that you’re an upbeat person, but you write on the dark side. I think that describes me a bit, too. Or, vice versa…!
it’s all about finding a balance I guess… the darkness of my writing is just as much a part of me as my “wanna-be-comedian” side… smiles
Ah, the elusive balance…!
ha. true that. i can dance the dark at times…and i have develped a bit on the humor side at times…its all in finding yourself man…most of your pieces have a cool rather hip hop rhythm to me anthony…
Whoops…only noticed the new schedule after I posted…must say I’m a bit disappointed about the scaling back of Open Link Night, as I don’t normally do prompts (my prompts are inside my head) but I will give it a try sometimes.and see how it goes!
Ha.. I interpreted your poem as a prompt.. could be actually..
i actually thought you had written to it as well man…
we will still have OLN, but we are limiting it as we had well over half joining in and not visiting others and that is just not the community we want to create…
Hi Anthony-I loved hearing about your dark poetry and I am right there with you. My first poem was in 7th grade. Coming from a chaotic childhood, poetry found and saved me. It was my way to purge feelings about what was going on. Writing and poetry have since been long time friends. Thanks so much for hosting and I’ll be by a little later to drop a poem.
the first poem in 7th grade… how cool is that…i wish poetry had found me earlier cause i think esp. for a teen it is so precious to be able to channel the emotions with poetry… i tried with everything else…oy… but probably she found me just in time…smiles
Thank you… like I explained, my mother’s illness… that’s the one person you never wanna see in pain (for those with good moms.) And poetry saved me from actually having that dark persona in real life.
look forward to reading your poem linda….thnks for dropping in already….smiles…poetry has def allowed me to deal with or dissect some of the things in my life…
Thank you for this challenge of being introspective about our evolution.
and thank you for stopping by 🙂
just a short info… my internet connection in the hotel here is a bit crappy…so i need forever to get around…ha… or maybe i’m just tired…smiles
hahah since you must, take your time… or a nap? smiles
Hi! interesting prompt. the defining moment for me was when i was going through a separation and divorce and i began writing my first novel which featured poetry as well. twenty five years of more life experiences has seasoned my poetry just a little bit more. Looking forward to making a like minded connection with your participants! happy writing!
hope…it is so great to see you! smiles…feels like it has been a while…
it has been a while Brian! feels good to be back!
ah, tough times inspire great work… glad to see you’ve used your life experience as fuel for your poetry! Glad to see you here, thanks for joining!
thank you for the very warm welcome Anthony! looking forward to being a part of this inspiring community!
hey all…dad just came out to the waiting area and asked me to go for a walk…yay! good signs…i will be back in a bit after our walk and visiting….
That’s great man! thanks for all your help and seeya later
hey Brian! did not know your dad was ailing. happy to hear the good news! all the best to you and your family!
thanks hope….smiles.
what a creative prompt!
thank you!
Hi Anthony, and thank you for this wonderful prompt. I like what you wrote about where your poetry comes from. I can relate to that very much. I really enjoyed writing this poem, and your prompt made me reach back in my memory to find things that I had not put all together before, so thank you!
I used the Publicize feature on my Word Press blog to automatically tweet out a link to my poem on Twitter with the hashtag #dverse and #dversepoets. Not sure which is used more often, but that way we can keep track of each other’s poems on Twitter too.
if you use the full dversepoets, #dversepoets or @dversepoets it is easier to find you….i got you today…smiles #retweet
Thanks for the retweet Brian 🙂 Did you look into Flipboard, by chance … I know you’ve been busy …
i have not yet….but i have it on the list…smiles…
maybe by next week….
When and if you do, let me know, I can walk you through it. Makes reading Twitter a nice experience. Too overwhelming for me otherwise.
cool. i feel you there…
and def appreciate the assist. smiles.
No, thank you! I’ll be getting to yours in a bit
Good prompt, Anthony. Took me a while to figure what to write to it, but finally got a workable idea. Am enjoying making my rounds right now!
cool… will make it to yours soon; going down the lines now
Hey Anthony– a very cool prompt–I’ve not been writing according to a prompt schedule of late, but appreciate seeing you behind the bar! k.
I appreciate you coming by. Thank you!
Glenn Butkuss you ‘ ROCKED IT !
Yeah… I absolutely loved his take on the prompt
Time for me to go to bed… It will be a short night’s sleep… I will come back tomorrow evening and read more…
Great prompt, Anthony! I like the glimpse it allows us into each other’s creative process.
oy… that internet is so slow… and almost midnight… time to get some rest… will catch up tomorrow morning…. see you then…smiles
sleep well c…smiles.
I hope I did your prompt justice Anthony.
you did very nicely…love the texture of the recipe…ha…
will be there soon… yo bri, why you gotta beat me to everybody? haha. ya speed reader
Brian is always there, or thereabouts! He is a dedicated, kind and funny commenter.
ViV
yep, I 2nd that.
funny….hmmm…i need to embellish that a bit….
hey anthony i even took about 90 minutes to drive home…smiles….
just caught up…gotta go pack a bag
be around again shortly…
Anthony, great prompt – needs some cogitation. If I had been writing poetry at 22, it would probably have been on the dark side. Now, approaching the big 8, I seem to be unable to dig deep emotionally, and flippancy often invades my work. I started as part of an Open University Creative Writing course about 5 years ago, and the poetry section was a real Epiphany for me. I’ve written very little prose since then and an awful (!) lot of poetry since. Memories, specially childhood memories, play a large part, and also wildlife and nature. As a musician, I like poetry to have rhythm and dynamics.
Evolution? I’ve learned to shrink my poetry, to lose superfluous words. When I’ve said what I have to say, I stop.
totally… I’m a very brief writer, myself… all that needs to be said, is all that needs to be said, period. smiles. thanks coming by 🙂
concisiveness is def a skill…and one i am sure many wish i would learn…smiles…hey but i follow the stop once you say it model…it just takes me that long to say it…smiles….i could probably work harder at that one….smiles.
It is somewhat disturbing one at dVerse today will not accept a link to a Christian poem. My link has been deleted twice.
thats ok…i think i might have done it once…and anthony the other…
it has nothing to do with religeon…we did not ask for a christian poem….we asked for one that addresses your evolution as a writer…write a poem that addresses the prompt and we will leave it…
So it is up to you to decide what has changed me as a writer? Come on, Brian.
I guess you might say I’ve gone from worse to bad–an improvement, I think–but I love to write, and as long as I can talk someone into reading it, I’ll continue to evolve.
Love the prompt, Anthony! Write on!
Y’all please check out the message at the bottom of my post. My new book, “JULI”, came out yesterday!
thanks and congrats on the new book!
congrats on the new book man….
Bravo, Charles. I hope it does well.
Thanks for the great, thought-provoking prompt, Tony. Happy to be here!
Thank you Victoria! and just so you know, I don’t care much for being called Tony… smiles.
i’m back to commenting now, poets… EVERYONE will a get a visit from me, as I am honored to have inspired so many of these writes… smiles.
Sorry Anthony didn’t realize it was OpenLinkNight … been habituated with submitting every wednesday. Please remove the my blog link.
it’s gone. thank you for being understanding.
No probs 🙂 my fault.
smiles. i still enjoyed your poem friend…and the prompt will be up all day tomorrow too, so you have time to write….smiles.
Thank you so much Brian… And yes my new entry is up 🙂
alright – logging off for the night… I’ve visited everyone so far and looking forward to what the others will bring tomorrow.
sleep well man…you done well tonight…
Thank you Anthony for hosting. You chose a great prompt.
Thank you, Anthony…enjoyed this introspective prompt. I’ve come a long way! See you tomorrow…
Excellent prompt Anthony, brought back some memories. I already had something I think is fitting and decided not to reinvent the wheel with mine. I you don’t mind.
cool structure in yours with the parallel pathes..
all the more time to pop in on others…
evocative! Anthony…hope you have a good season tending the bar! and i also hope the prompt is open for the day today (IST here) so need a bit of time to get done with work and then perhaps, open up here! smiles….
it is..it will be open for another 25 hours…so you have plenty of time…
Made a few rounds though I don’t have anything to post on this one…. a great transitional space for all Anthony. You tend the bar well. Thanks to all for continuing to keep the doors open.
And I have submitted my entry for the prompt. It inspired me to try a new poetry form 🙂
I enjoyed it very much!
I used to write things on a blog to illustrate images and people would say thank you for the poem. I’d scratch my head thinking:” Poem? What poem?”
It was merely my feelings or passion or thoughts or annoyance blobbing onto the page. I never thought of it as poetry, nor do I these days. Most of the time. Unless I have an age to work on something in ‘proper’ form. And by that time the immediacy has passed and it becomes an object no longer attached or belonging to me.
So I don’t think I have evolved in that way nor can I tie it to a particular occasion.
This was difficult and I needed hours to work out what my relationship with my own poetry amounts to. Not much it seems but I am glad that I was forced to face it.
Thank you for this enterprising prompt, which must have created lot of soul-searching 🙂
Thank you Anthony – look forward to reading and enjoying the artists at work.
Hello! I may have left two links on Linky. Sorry! Anyway, thank you for this prompt. 🙂
I really resonated with your words and too find myself writing from a dark place. I guess grief and pain will do that to you. People often find pain or darkness hard to read and I often wonder how people perceive me.
smiles…some might…i am usually pretty honest with my feelings whether they are light or dark…and i know some point out how sad certain aspects are…i used to write only light…but began to understand it was not a true picture of the world around me or even my life…
that’s never been an issue for me; I was writing dark stuff for years and didn’t bother to explain myself or let anyone know I’m not suicidal until this prompt. Ha! just write what you want… wondering how people perceive you is a waste, in my opinion. 🙂
Nice to meet you, Anthony. This great prompt gave me pause. I’ve written now and then, but didn’t try to BE a poet until 2012. After thinking this through, I am very curious to read everyone else’s story. I’ll be back to do that.
Nice to meet you too, Susan!
hello all… I’ve been creepin for a while… making my rounds again… didn’t have too much fun without me aye?
None at all!
none?!? awe that’s a bummer… a little fun would’ve been okay. hahaha
Anthony, Great prompt! I just wrote a poem of less than 100 words that summed up a 1,500 word essay I submitted for a writing contest a few weeks ago. When you see the poem you’ll understand the significance. 🙂 Well, it’s back to work now, but I’ll be back to read about the evolution of some of my favorite poets. Peace, Linda
I have 20 more to get to, so I’ll be there later! thanks for joining 🙂
Anthony, my post (unknown to me when I decided to write about it) dovetails very well with yours. It, too, is about your individual poetry. I’m asking everyone to write their manifesto, or talk about their personal poetry and which poets they identify with, what philosophy regarding poetry they adhere to, or if they have created their own manifesto to share that with us. It does not have to be a poem. It can be in prose. However, many of the poems linked here, might work for that prompt too. I invite those who think so to link with that post as well.
That’s very cool… I have read quite a few whose poem would fit well with yours
it does…i wrote mine today…and it is oddly similar…but different….
This was so interesting, thank you Anthony for the prompt. I enjoyed writing for this.
Just posted my “poem” link.
Thanks for joining us! your poem rocked.
hiya lila…be over in a few….
been visiting with dad…had a few rough spots today so they will be monitoring him the next couple days…
Glad to see you over, Brian, as always.. Sending prayers and love over to your family.
Thanks Anthony that’s kind of you, really appreciate your feedback. : )
Hello everyone…joining a little late here, but I really loved the prompt and couldn’t resist. Like Anthony, I can relate to writing from a darker place. It is amazing how beautiful words can evolve from sadness.
So…hey….cheers to that!!
Brian…sending you prayers and good thoughts.
thank you…smiles…
be over in a few minutes…
Love u all for your lovely comments Dverse is the best place in the blog world for a poet like me and it has made me write and think a lot and become a better person on each visit………. Love the pub and will always be a part of it…….. Thank u all for taking time and commenting …………..
I think evolving is a continuous process and there are points on the way but not one point except perhaps childhood.
I have been travelling so too late for Mr Linky,
http://roslynrosssmallstones.blogspot.com/2014/03/childhood.html