But for many the volta is so essential that it is the essence of all poetry, and I can see examples of it in all your writing. But I think many times we do it without clear awareness of how to do it to create maximum effect.
The volta can be of many different types, it can shift a serious view into something amusing or ironical, it can turn the scene from serene to sinister, It can move the poem from scenery to an extended metaphor, or it can move from general to personal or the opposite, or it can present a resolution to a problem stated in the beginning of the poem. It can be a sharp juxtaposition that create a poetic effect or the twist can be more subtle.
Look for instance at William Wordsworth, were the first part states the problem of London 1802, and the last part a resolution on why Milton would be a savior.
London, 1802
BY WILLIAM WORDSWORTH
Milton! thou shouldst be living at this hour:
England hath need of thee: she is a fen
Of stagnant waters: altar, sword, and pen,
Fireside, the heroic wealth of hall and bower,
Have forfeited their ancient English dower
Of inward happiness. We are selfish men;
Oh! raise us up, return to us again;
And give us manners, virtue, freedom, power.
Thy soul was like a Star, and dwelt apart:
Thou hadst a voice whose sound was like the sea:
Pure as the naked heavens, majestic, free,
So didst thou travel on life’s common way,
In cheerful godliness; and yet thy heart
The lowliest duties on herself did lay.
Try to make it as sharp as you can today. Though there might be strict rules on where it should be on some forms – for today it is enough that you have it. You do not have to write a sonnet with meter and rhyme, but try to make it 14 lines.
When I read a well-made Volta in any poem it almost always makes me gasp, and read it once again. Make me do that.
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very cool prompt bjorn…and you challenged me quite a bit…sonnets (form poetry) are not usually my thing….but i took a sonnet and put it in the blender and came up with my own sonnet form….really, i need to email gay…though i fear she may pass out in shock…haha
i like a good twist…it can be hard to pull it off, because if it is too obvious it becomes almost cliche as it is often over used in story telling….i like mine subtle….look forward to seeing what everyone does…
When done well it becomes the heart of the poem or story. So I hope we can see good example here.. and I did like your new sonnet a lot Brian-
Hi y’all. Was able to stop in to the pub today. I combined the prompt with a poem for my granddaughter Valerie’s 17th birthday. My grandchildren are all growing up. There are 3 older and 1 younger granddaughter – of course, there’s still the six boys. I don’t write poems for them very often, but I have been awarding sonnets to the girls in recent years as some of you may remember. Anyway hope the volta works for the prompt! Thanks Bjorn!
it is beautiful…and i hope that maybe you put it on a bookmark, or something that she can tuck away and find years later and think of you….
I have to read it.. But I’m sure you pulled it through so well… and what a great birthday present.. I haven’t dared to give anyone a poem for their birthday yet.. 🙂
I gave my grandson one for his birthday last week – 13 seemed such an important age to be, on the cusp.
i think it’s wonderful to write poems to the grandkids… i will one day as well… smiles
i have written with Cole…
wonder if they are old enough to appreciate me writing one for them yet…hmm….
my kids do appreciate when i write for them or about them… i know that both my girls read my blog when they were abroad when they got homesick…smiles
I love that.. there are very few close friends here who read my poetry… 🙂
that is cool…def a way they can look in on you…and feel that connection…
Hey all.. the bartender is a little late today.. I think this is quite a challenge (I actually struggled quite a bit with it myself. Still I admire all who can pull a great volta into their poem.
And hey .. today Google had Allesandro Volta in their image.. what a coincidence.
now how did you work that out…ha…another of your new surprises…you have connections at Google…ha.
Ha.. just a coincidence that it was his birthday… and of course he is one of my hero physicists.
I saw that, thought of you and smiled. I thought it was very prescient of you!
what up peeps? ghost is here… hahah
Ha we are here and humming along 🙂
hey… just having problems to get to the dVerse main site… will head out on the trail and try again later…
BOO! —
fist bump.
ghost in the machine
bumpin ya back dude… and I see that is an old book. Only ghost I know is ghost in a shell – anime.
hey i know ghost in the shell as well…
i am somewhere in between….
Hey Anthony 🙂
Hi Grace 🙂 loved that you used Dustin Yellin’s art… he is so cool
Yes his work is so creative & boggles me ~ 🙂
Bjorn, a very interesting lesson in writing ~ I will make sure I will remember to write one with a volta ~
I will be around to return visits and comments ~ Happy Thursday ~
Your had a great volta.. there are so many ways to do it.. and the good thing is that it works in so many kinds of poetry..
still might have to try one in free verse…smiles.
hey grace!
I think you should.. we can do more than one.. (and 14 lines free-verse with a volta is a sonnet in my book)
Hey Brian ~ I think your free verse or even short stories have a volta Brian ~ You know how to give a twist in the ending ~
i would agree…i think in many cases i do it without thinking about it…as with most things it seems when you set out to do it intentionally it does not come as easy…ha
alright, will swing through in a bit…heading home from the (indoor) skate park….through the bitter cold….
Love this prompt. I used it to finish out a poem I started early this morning that was barely more than a kernel — only 4 lines. I can’t wait to come back a little later to read what others come up with. But for now lunch is over and it’s back to work. Peace, Linda
nice… have a good afternoon…
for me it’s bedtime already – will be back tomorrow morning to catch up…
Now it’s bedtime here.. Hope to catch up in the morning,
Thanks you two! For all you are and all you do! See you manana.
See you tomorrow ~
sleep well all of you…
I think I have a volta. I am grateful for the lesson in making the transition sharper. Hope to learn more about it from your poems over the next few days.
i think you do susan…both in voice and in the response….
Thanks, Brian!
Again, what a challenge. I wrote poems before, but this is something else. I can’t describe how it feels to write something so complicated (to me at least) and to enjoy it so much. My view on poetry changes every day.
ha. if you are like me it means a lot of ibuprofin afterwards…lol…
No, I am quite lightheaded. 🙂
lol. you did well…though a sorrowful journey in the beginning of yours…here is to freedom…smiles
Thank you, I raise my glass to that.
clink
just got done reading yours – blown away ~~~
Oh, thank you. 🙂
okay… going for now; will check to see who’s joined after midnight. Peace.
I am a bit late to the game tonight. I wrote a 14 line poem, although not a sonnet.
I struggled with this prompt a bit, Bjorn. Didn’t write a sonnet….but did place a volta (or two) in mine! Had a bit of fun with it as well.
nice…was wondering if we would see you mary…smiles.
good morning… back and catching up.. and my computer seems to work again as well… it just needed a rest probably…smiles
good morning…good night…smiles…
glad the puter is working again…
Good morning.. What great set of turns you have here, love the variation you can do with 14 lines and a Volta.
First attempt at Volta- new poem form 🙂 Thanks to you!
Sorry, forgot about the 14 lines! But I like the way my poem turned out.
heh, think we can forgive the 14 lines….be over in a min…
a very emotional piece rosemary…
Really a lot of great poetry you have shared today..:-) I was afraid it was going to be a little bit difficult but you are all winners 🙂
Yikes! Slipping in under the wire yet again. This was quite a challenge (for me); I hope it turned out okay. Thank you. Will be back later to read, as it’s dinner hour…
yay! ds!
just got home from the movies with my little ones before the next wave of snow gets here…catching up…
Mr. Linky won’t work for me but perhaps I’ve missed the cut-off? I’ll try leaving it here and see what happens…
https://seingrahamsays.wordpress.com/2015/02/20/the-main-difficulty-with-that-is/
cool…its still open…and i imagine if you visit some of the others
they will visit you as well…
Oops – I was so intent on getting this in under the wire, I totally forgot it was supposed to be a sonnet/volta…sorry.
doesnt have to be a sonnet, as long as it has a volta/turn/twist in it…
most of those linked in left a comment as well, so you cant get to link
you can still read by checking out those in the comment thread
I missed Mr Linky, so posting here.
http://roslynrosssmallstones.blogspot.com/2015/02/where-love-lets-go.html
There is an opportunity next week also with Open Link on Saturday.
Thanks. I am behind having been stung by an insect on my right hand little finger, sigh, so still catching up. I am seeing what you are doing and will get back.
Hope it gets better soon.. not a lot of insects here.. 🙂 not a lot of snow but yet no insects.
Ah, one of those weird things. It is much better now but it was just one of those things, closing a window, pushing out bougainvillea leaves and saw a tiny puncture in the finger, thought nothing of it and within twenty four hours it was blue/red, swollen. No idea what it was but took my homeopathics and nature took care of the rest. Weird bugs in Africa.:)
or you could just visit others…
Hi Brian, not sure what that comment was about. I always visit others. I know it is expected. Let’s just say I visit more people than respond to visits. For what it is worth, the reason I did not visit on this one occasion is because I was stung by an insect, on my finger, on my right hand, which put paid to writing for a few days, at which point, I then had to catch up.