Hi everyone ! Have you ever imagined receiving a letter or poem from your future self? What does the future look like 10 or 20 or even 50 years from now? How weird will the future be?
Consider this poem from TED Fellow Ben Burke, which appeared in TED.IDEAS.COM. This poem is long so if you prefer to hear his wonderful recording, please click on the original link.
THE TRANSHUMANIST’S LAMENT
or
TOO MANY RIVERS, NOT ENOUGH LAKES
or
OH, FUTURE — YOU SO CRAZY
I arrived in the basket that was weaved here before me
And I stayed in any place with a roof that would store me
I have lots of belongings
But didn’t pack for the trip
I got here, they put pants on me
And then the world gave me the slip
I’ve lived as slowly as I could
Because there was no time to waste
But then things just got so weird
That I just had to grab your ear
And give the tongue inside your mind a little taste:
For example:
The wallpaper can see that you’re stressed,
So it turns a lovely shade of blue
The thermostat has thought things over
And is ready to have a word with you
And your closet picked out your outfit
for the party Friday night
Whilst the blender and the toaster
made vindaloo by candlelight
And Doctor mailman robot
Printed your pills in quite a hurry
Your vitamins were running low
Now there’s B12 in your curry
But your personality algorithm
was accidentally miswritten
You forgot your fingernails were all encoded
and you bit them
Now the discs of your thumbnails
are gangrene, corrupted
The chip that was slipped
twixt each digit erupted
Your sensors and servos
Implants and additions
All bent towards a personal program of precision
Your body’s expanded
Your spirit is failing
The row boat got a motor but wants to be sailing
Yes every Thing now is thinking
We are each our own king
But there’s no kingdom here to speak of
It’s a pot luck, but we’ve nothing to bring
For the air now is as thick as the sea
With every thing we created, each idea we have dreamed
Yes we screamed and filled the skies with drones and clones of drones
Now they’re crashing on our couches as they move into our homes
And taking in some old stray nanobots
Now the drones have a family
Now the drones have a dog
There’s so many drones, we all miss having cops
Yes life never stops, there’s no room to start over
Though we have deftly fashioned countless walls
Every thing that you want or you need or just hoped for
Is always round the corner, and just down the hall
We are tubes inside of tubes inside of tubes inside of more
We are a sinking ship that’s filled with valves, and pouches, switches, doors
A whirling servo for your heart-
It no longer beats, it hums
Every poem will be disposed of that once compared our hearts to drums
We are a hurricane that just built a fountain
A pile of rocks with an eye for the mountain
But keep your ears to the ground for the counting
For the number of hooves that are rumbling round it
Numb to the sound of the sirens surrounding
For we will stretch ourselves further
Than we ever have before
And one day, there’s no doubt, we will snap
With our nose to the grindstone
of progress
We’ll all make our way
to the top, then collapse
For though we’ve imagined where it is we’re all headed-
We do not yet know where we stand
The future can’t hold for us a promise, my friend
It’s a ghost with a pair of clouds for hands
Yes the future isn’t waiting there for us-
It is quietly being pulled through us
It’s an illustration of our secret ways
and yet we cannot say who drew us
For as soon as the word is pronounced
There’s a parade!
The new product arrives!
In your ear
On your finger
Up your nose
And
In your eyes
Yes we’ve figured out a way to make you all feel MORE alive
(side effects may include
shortness of breath
thoughts of suicide or death
but most likely just
anxiety
and hives)
You’ll be a walking coral reef
You’ll be the tide pools filled with teeth
You’ll be a mouth that’s always chewing
You’ll be a tongue that’s underneath it all
You’ll be the roof, the ceiling, and all the papered walls
You’ll be prefixed
With endo
And intra
And supra
As they watch you
And poke you
And cut you
And shoot ya
Let us mend every seam with some sutures
Let them sew up the holes in your life with the future
But who are we inside of this thing that we’ve built?
We’re a bowl full of milk that’s about to be spilt
For there is always a storm that is coming
The word on the tip of all tongues now is fear
We’d all love to cry out, but we’re too filled with doubt
That’s no diamond, my friend, it’s a tear
That’s no animal, in fact-
No we’ve all just learned
each of them is a sentient being
Why there’s so many facts
That are all in the past
It’s unbelievable- the things that we weren’t seeing
It turns out that Reiki is real
And meditation’s no longer a joke
We’ve all been such fools, but now we teach it in the schools
And yes the hippies are all pretty stoked
And the universe, it just so happens,
Is just the way Tesla found it-
It’s all about frequencies… and vibrations….. and things
We just had to wrap our little heads around it
Yes, we still don’t like the unknown
We need to have things defined
We want our world to make sense
We like it when nature rhymes
Even if only slightly
Even if we must bend
What we see and we hear to fit the means to our end
We all just spend our lives
Trying to overcome our births
Trying to get along with Death
And then untie ourselves from Earth
Now we vacation on the moon
And yes, we’ve flown beyond the stars
And can you guess where I just sent this from?
I’ll give you a hint- It’s Mars
Now we can grow your bones for you
And buildings build themselves, for free
But there’s still work for you to do:
You must remember how to be-
Just like the ocean when it’s thinking
Just be that storm that’s always brewing
You’re an idea
Just one idea
Of what one person on earth could be doing
And what animal doesn’t love
Going out to chase wonder?
Only to learn of the lightning
just before there is thunder?
Look above you- it’s raining
Look around- there’s a flood
Who can say when it started,
but now the ghost is in our blood
We can only move forward
Only turn back for a time
Now the only sacred space left
In the world
Is our mind
And it’s running away with itself and the others
Like the wind through the trees-
Phantom sisters and brothers
Have gone the way of the bees
And the birds and the lovers
Yes they’ve all been drawn and quartered
A million horses left the track
The future will take your mind off of itself-
So I suggest you start stealing it back
For our time here, like the twilight
Is precious and fading
And while there’s certainly nothing new under the sun-
Under the moon, there is waiting
Signed-
Sincerely,
Future Self
Good day and good luck and good bye
P.S.
Oh that’s right,
I nearly forgot-
Everyone in the future says Hi.
Please note that I have received permission from Ben Burke to post his poem here. He was gracious enough to comment that he is looking forward to reading our responses.
Our challenge is to write about the future by answering the same question: How weird will the future be? Imagine yourself in the future and write to your self, here & now. You can also respond by taking a verse or lines from Ben Burke’s work and using this as a spring board for your writing. Please credit Ben’s work if you are quoting his lines.
Hi everyone ~ Hope you enjoy the prompt today ~ I am still in the office but will get back later to return your comments and visits ~ Happy Tuesday ~
that’s a cool prompt grace… it would be both i guess…. fascinating and frightening a bit if we received a letter from the future… fun to imagine how life may be in a few hundred years…
Thanks Claudia ~ And a special thanks to Ben for graciously sharing his poem ~ He said that he will read our poems & responses ~
that is quite cool of him….smiles
Hey Grace 🙂 you guys were very creative with your pieces… can’t wait to read everyone’s poems.
Thanks Anthony ~ We can do the reverse too sometime – write a letter to your past self, ha ~
Oh I loved this prompt.. really went a little scary sci-fi here… put in some fake physicist lingo.. I can imagine myself writing much more of this..
i liked the words that you used in your bjorn…it gave it all the more feel….
I can imagine this to be more of your stuff Bjorn ~ Science & poetry is a potent combination ~
its a cool prompt grace….the poem that you shared is cool…i enjoyed listening to it on TED as i was working on mine….i might have to revisit this one, as there are many possible futures…you know…smiles.
I think I need to write one a little less bleak.. I wonder why I linger on pessimism..
my first reaction to this was quite dystopian —
perhaps you are seeking balance bjorn…balancing a happy life with darker writing….smiles.
I think in general I have a happy life.. so you might be right…
Thanks Brian ~ There are certainly many more possibilities ~
A very interesting prompt – although my take on it was rather too personal and minuscule…
can poetry ever be too personal…?
smiles
I don’t think so 🙂
what? i look forward to seeing it marina…
Personal.. that sounds wonderful… I will soon head out reading.
I will check yours in a bit Marina ~ Good to see you 🙂
Hi everyone….well that is what I would call a challenging prompt, Grace! Ha, what I have read so far in many poems of the future, I would say it is good to live in the present. Smiles. I did enjoy the reading of the poem you shared, Grace. Thank you.
I love where this poetry takes us.. 🙂
Thank you Mary ~ A challenge stretches us in ways we never thought we can ~ The present is precious & I wouldn’t trade it for the future, smiles
This was a fun prompt.. Somehow I loved to invent some fake mechanism to make it possible to even send the message…
How intriguing if that mechanism becomes a reality, ha ~ What I know is that you can send email messages scheduled for the future ~ So imagine an inbox message from yourself 5 or 10 years from now 🙂
I love this poem and the vision it provides of things intangible that appear at a thought, at a mood change–o dear! I fear he may have it right that the only sacred space eft is each mind, exactly when we are out of our minds! Imaginative crowding. Wow. I’ve got to think on this one.
intrigued at what your future might bring susan…smiles.
I found it hard to write mine but am enjoying what I have read so far. Thank you, Grace, for the challenge.
I had a challenging time too as it can either go – positive or negative. I too am enjoying the different responses 🙂
Grace, I love this prompt. I was writing to you to let you know I couldn’t come up with any ideas, when I got one. So, I entered a little poem. Thanks for hosting and I look forward to reading everyone’s entry soon.
nice…glad you found one….smiles.
I just read it & its a lovely response Myrna ~ Good to see you 🙂
Thank you, Grace, for the great prompt…this came easily to me today..will be on the reading trail this evening.
Good to see you Kathy 🙂
I am reading the last entry, Lisa’s poem & then heading to dreamland ~ Will check back tomorrow for the overnights ~ Thanks to all ~
i am working on a sonnet so i will be around just a bit longer…
sleep well grace….
catch up with you tomorrow….
curse you bjorn…ha…but i think i created a new sonnet form…smiles.
Brilliant prompt and I am pondering so I can join in…
nice…
just read through the entries and heading to work now… have a wonderful day everyone
great prompt Grace…posted mine here after a long time…
Great to have you back Sumana 🙂
A little late to the party.. but rarely easy to do Time Travel.. getting back was a little hard..;)
And a very interesting prompt i might say..
as well..:)
Yup.. the hardest is not to travel forward in time, but backwards.
i don’t think i like the future tonight
Indeed.. one has to go out in the woods and breath the smell of trees to feel positive.
i dunno…i think you might actually like it if you ever took the time to return comments or read others…
Oh I’m sorry. I’m really more a “drop in for a pint, say Hi if I’ve time” type at this point in my life, than a “stop by at every table, stay a while and chat” type. So sorry if I’ve misjudged the house.
nope, just courtesy — when people say hi…staring back at them mutely or turning your back is …well, rather rude.
Oh. Then I’m not sure I take your point.
its really rather simple…
if someone is going to take the time to read you
let you know what they think…its rather courtesy
to do the same…
if you are more a stop in and say hi “if you have time” writer
then why link in…why not just write and keep it
to yourself?
there are plenty of writers out there
(and in here) that do the same…link in to be read
but really could care less about reading
anyone else…
personally i would rather you not be
but it is a choice we each have to make ourselves
knowing where you stand though,
allows the rest to make informed decisions
on skipping over spending time reading you…
its the difference between being a community,
and not just a street corner where you pimp your poetry,
between caring for others…and being a consumer,
living off the good will of others…
let em know what we about *pumps fist*
hey man…i dropped a detroit reference in my sonnet for tomorrow…apologies in advance…ha.
Man, I (gladly) moved outta Detroit when I was 4, so trust I won’t take it personal.. hahahahah… imagine moving out on your own at 4; I grew up too fast… lol. bad joke bad joke
dang dude.
4 is young.
Goodness. I never thought of myself as a streetcorner girl, but thanks for the image.
it is one of the oldest professions, so…
Good morning everyone ~ I will be around to visit you 🙂
afternoon all… catching up now 🙂
dVerse poets:
It was more difficult than I expected it to be, as I wanted my poem to have certain degree of trueness –given causality rules. Anyway, I just managed to finish writing it, after almost 2 hours of work. It is now 1:06 am in Oslo, I have to sleep and go to work. I will make the rounds tomorrow. Sleep well! I will read you in the near future.
Grace: thanks for a great idea!
I am off to read your poem now ~ Good to see you Adriana 🙂
More than happy to participate!
you pulled it off amazingly adriana….well worth the two hours….
Bri: Thank you! After your and Grace’s great, motivating feedback, I can sleep and dream nice dreams…
Good night, or morning, or afternoon!
smiles…i hope they are good ones…
evening here so i wont be too far behind you…
Ha., yes breaking rules of causality is a real struggle.. Liked your poem a lot addressing that.
Thanks for saving me a seat. It’s been a long day…
This was such a thought provoking prompt, Grace. 🙂
Thank you for the challenge.
Need some rest from the time travel home, but can’t wait to visit everyone tomorrow.
Ha.. I liked what you came up with 🙂
Ben Burke has officially blown my mind. And that’s saying something, as my cranium has survived SoCal in the 70s, the est training, marriage to a macropsychotic, and enough psych meds to make George W. Bush appear normal.
Truly, this is his Howl, his masterwork. Went to the site, saw the credentials, but you know what? The poem stands on its own. The P.S. was only a bit of extra icing. Everything and more, it’s all true, we hippies feel just a bit vindicated by the turn toward meditation these days, even when it’s in a church or temple. Ben is a miracle of a writer, and I can only look forward to dystopian (or faux utopian) dreams to inspire me upon awakening in the future… on Thursday morning.
Thanks for this. The post and Ben have lit a fire under my weary ass, and I can only hope we both (my ass and I, that is) “rise” to the occasion. Peace, Amy
I really look forward what you might come up with Amy.. 🙂
Hi Amy, there is OpenLinkNight next week Saturday, if you want to link up your poem ~ Thanks for dropping by 🙂
Thanks, Grace, as I totally missed the linky expiration! Yikes. Also, thanks for offering us this intro to Ben Burke. I am so inspired, and I hope my poem shows it. I will use the link on Saturday, but if you want a peek, it’s here: http://sharplittlepencil.com/2015/02/19/tomorrow-and-tomorrow-dverse/
Bless you all!
Grace, the ROBOT box is not coming up. A problem with blogger just today, and I am on WordPress, so here is my comment on your poem. Hope you post it, as your poem was wonderful:
Grace, first, thanks for the prompt and the intro to Ben Burke. Your poem has all the qualities I wanted – the “what the hell happened” disjointed reality of Meat Pudding (!) along with other inventions that will no doubt come about if we are not vigilant.
There is also the warning, the “just in case you didn’t notice, this could damned well happen if you are not careful” note in it. Your final stanza, using Ben;s lines, worked so well. I wish I had not missed the Linky, but I will take your advice and post on Saturday.
Many thanks. Well done, you! Amy
February 19, 2015 at 12:19 PM
Bjorn, thanks so much. I always love hearing from you. I did post a poem and will link it to Open Mic on Saturday, as… oops! I missed Mr. Linky by a mile, as usual. Stayed up late… mind was whirling with inspiration from Ben Burke!! Love you.
We have been a wee bit busy the past couple of days, but rest assured poetic friends I will be visiting you all before the weekend is through…love!
see you then shanyn