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“The only way to make sense of change is to plunge into it, move with it, and join in the dance.” Alan Watts
Hi! This Team member Toni, better known as Kanzen Sakura. I am your Pub Tender today and I am happy to bring today’s Poetics to you today. How many of you out in the Blogosphere have ever experienced any changes in your lives? WHAT?!?! ALL of you? This means this is something we can all relate to and write about.
One of the major Japanese aesthetics is mujo,impermanence. Mountains, rivers, seasons, life situations, health – all things change. It is part of existence, life. In mujo, there is the embracing of it, of accepting it. Some of us deal with change well, some deal badly, some deal with other types of change better than other.
Our poetics today deal with writing poems about Change: seasonal change, life change, heath changes, career and/or geographic changes, our aging selves or others, marriage, divorce, bereavement, birth of a child – even hair style change and how it affected us.
In the US, most of us experienced a profound change September 2001. In March 2011, Japan experienced changes with the tsunami and nuclear reactor devastation. Today in parts of Europe, the influx of refugees creates varios changes and challenges. Some of us have had our lives changed to the extent of almost total devastation of self and heart.
Instead of a poetic example, I am offering a performance example video. A music group from Japan combines unique music, dance, Zen performance. They often perform on the streets. It is interesting to see reactions of people around them.
For those of you who do not wish to view: the video opens during morning business rush. A shoja, temple bell , begins the beat. World Order is on the sidewalk among the commuters, busy and fast are a contrast to the slow motion of the group. The scene moves to the beautiful avenue lined with golden leaved gingkos, the to the countryside with a moody Fuji in the background, autumn brown susuki grass waving in the breeze. In the scenes are also an anti-nuclear Occupy tent and, on the beach with the Fukushima reactor in the background, in early morning, the group moves from there to the tank farms and wind farms. At the end, a fast montage of photos flash by, one showing the reactor when it exploded. The video ends in the late afternoon, World Order looking up to a blue sky.
Changes in this video: morning, sunset, city to country to beach, alternatives to nuclear power shown, sadness to smiles, sadness to hope. Even the leader of World Order made changes to his life and philosophy; from world class Mixed Martial Artist to activist for peace and unity. I hope you will choose to watch the video and be inspired by it.
This is not an open link prompt. If you wish to post a poem to this prompt please:
– Make the poem relevant to Change and new for this prompt
– Please use 24 lines or fewer (or 200 words or fewer)
– link your poem back to d’Verse
– If you write a haibun, please use the compact form with one or two tight prose
paragraphs and one haiku
– Click on Mr. Linky to enter your name and direct URL of your post.
– invite your friends to join us!
BIO Kanzen is an East Meets South mashup and has a deep love and respect for Japan and its culture. She has been writing for longer than she wants to say. Her favorite poetic forms are traditional haiku and tanka.
Hello everyone! Welcome to today’s Poetics. I am happy to be your pub tender today. Order something good to drink, kick back, talk, link your poems. Since the subject is about change, I am sure someone out there has had a change or two in their lives.
Could I have a cold IPA please.. it just feels like beer tonight.
Excellent night for beer or a hard cider. IPA for you! 🙂
Changes can be so much.. seems that change is constant.. and we are always striving for change.. There is so much to write so it would be easy to write many poems.
So true…in the poems I have read already, many different kinds of changes were addressed. I am looking forward to seeing what other poets come up with!
Yes, so many poems can be written about so many types of change. I ended up writing three tanka instead of just the one. It could have easily been 20 but, there is a line/word limit! So those future tanka will wait for another time.
I might post a second just for the fun of it.. 🙂
Great!!! the more the merrier.
Great..! Prompt! Kanzensakura.. Change.. is always Now my most favorite topic of ALL to flow with IT IS Life for me.. NoW.. thanks.. and off to take my wife to a Doctor’s appointment ..will be back to read and comment on all.. as usual.. sMiLEs..:)
That was a great video, Toni. I didn’t watch all of it, but had a nice ‘taste’ of it. Very unique group. As for change, this definitely is the season when we are noticing lots of changes in nature….so it seems like a very appropriate prompt for this time of year.
Season change is so evident right now.. 🙂
Change is such an important part of life–hopefully an indicator of growth, of movement. I’ve been through many major changes. Some I’ve resisted (that doesn’t work) and some I’ve welcomed, even embraced. Others I haven’t even noticed until I looked back. Consider technology: for the first 5 or 6 years years of my life there was no TV. My schedule won’t allow me to post today, however I have been nursing a poem on this theme that I hope to bring to OLN. When and if I get a chance, I’ll stop by to read. Thanks for the meaningful prompt, Toni.
Yes, change is something we cannot avoid…time marches on. I am so aware of this. And you don’t necessarily notice changes one day after another, but it all adds up. When you look back, you see what has changed! Sigh.
I’m glad you liked the video. they are truly my favorite group because of their uniqueness and the messages they get across. And always a good beat! Changes can be sneaky. they can also just seem to whop one up against the face as well. I’ve had a lot of changes. some I welcomed, some I balked against, some of them I implemented myself. A good friend of mine who used to do the 12 step thing used to say, nothing changes if nothing changes….
Thank you Fred. I also thought you would like the theme of life being a dance through changes and the actual video itself.
Since today seems to be a beer kind of day, I have baskets of all kinds of salty snacks on the bar, a tray of flatbreads with different toppings so you can fix your own: veggie cream cheese, some herring bits, cucumbers, dill sprigs, sour cream, pepperoni, sliced hard cheeses, sliced cherry tomatoes….if it isn’t here for what you need, let me know!
Wonderful treats at the bar!! You’ve got my mouth watering!
A mini smorgasbord! Help yourself.
Now I am hungry & I just had my afternoon snacks ~
I believe I see some haibuns and more waiting for me to read this evening..enormous subject!
Indeed we all love haibun…
I almost want to make some kind of pun here: we all love high buns, low buns, hot cross buns, cinnamon buns….sorry. I couldn’t resist.
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I need to go to bead now, but could not stop myself from writing another entry
See you tomorrow Bjorn ~
Night night, sleep tight! I got crazy myself and did another tanka….
I m so sorry Bjorn I just realized that our titles are the same!! It was coincidental.. take care goodnight..
How serendipitous…same title, different poems. With all the postings, it had to happen sometime! 🙂
And mine is stolen from that Scorpion song
Had to come in a bit late (for me); had computer keyboard problems. was surprised & pleased that we both picked the Watts quote about change (great minds all that); write the classic haibun, & stayed under 200 words. Wow, a lot of stress & hustle for this old man.
I think the old man can handle it just fine! Excellent entry, I think.
My computer has been a hateful monster as well. I had to write this post on my tablet!!! Major Pain….glad to see you.
Cool, Glenn. I definitely could identify with your poem…I remember 10 cent comic books too. Smiles.
I love that dance video, very cool to share it with us Kanzen ~ Change is all around us, but this week, for some days, we are having some summer weather ~ Autumn will have to wait a bit longer ~
Thanks for hosting and Happy Tuesday to all ~
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I have to head off for a couple of hours but will be back! Drinks on the house!
See you later ~ I will be checking in and reading for entries written for your prompt ~
Wow, that is an offer I cannot refuse. Smiles.
Hope you enjoyed yourself in my absence. 🙂
Hey everyone,
Hope you’re having a wonderful week so far, sharing my poem “Winds of change” hope you guys like it 🙂
Thank you Toni for this lovely prompt…… this one’s for you 😀
Lots of love,
Sanaa
Thank you! that smile was much needed and appreciated. I am back now and ready to read.
You’re most welcome Toni 🙂
There have been some wonderful poems for this prompt, Toni! Thank you.
We really have been getting some excellent poems from some excellent writers. It is such a pleasure to go through and read them all. I feel like I am getting a free course on contemporary poetry and poetic styles.
In an effort for personal change (and to stop ‘ghosting’ as I’m wont to do), I decided to take Toni’s advice and submit a little diddy for this prompt. Fall is my favorite season and the changes I see in my little corner of earth are always new and inspiring.
Today, I’ve written 3 little haiku, only one of which I linked, that are related to the changing seasons here in Fukushima. Part of what keeps me writing is the desire to show that this area, Aizu, is still beautiful and full of life despite that horrific disaster. Outside of the exclusion zone, life is returning, slowly but surely, to normal, which is a change in itself.
Thank you folks for your time. Hopefully, I will not take too much of it (yay for haiku being short!)
AB
I enjoyed your poem very much, and I also appreciate your commenting! Hope we see you again!
Yes, your Aizu is still beautiful and full of life. Wish I could be there for autumn. My favorite season of the year as well. I am so glad you linked Aaron. I know you get busy but please, don’t be a stranger. You do such a variety of poetic styles. Gosh, one couldn’t tell that you are a good friend of mine, could one? 🙂
Love this prompt but no time to participate earlier today. I finally got something written and linked tonight, but now it’s bedtime. I’ll be back during my lunch tomorrow to do some reading. 🙂 Peace, Linda
Your submission was just wonderful.
Crops are changing fast…harvest is upon us here so think i’ll be changing hats, changing menus, even changing grand-daughter’s diapers today! Have fun at the pub..I’ll watch the song, then move along. Thanks, Toni, for the yummy breads 🙂
Lots of excellent changes for you – even the busy ones are happy ones. Although having never changed a diaper, I wouldn’t know about that one 🙂 Glad you visited us, even as busy as I know you are at this time. Take care.
Thank you, Toni, for an inspiring video to set the tone for the prompt. I loved it! I wrote on one of my favorite topics…my granddaughter, Mira. These past three years spending time with her has been one of the most delightful of my life and brought about many changes.
Gayle ~
A granddaughter certainly is all about changes! I am so glad you joined in with us. 🙂
Yes, the best kind…at least for me. I’m glad I joined in too…thanks. :~)
Just wanted to say that I wasn’t able to leave comments on a couple of people’s sites…frustrating when that happens and I don’t understand why…
Some ov the ones like blogger are not wp friendly. I ended up having to get a google id so i could log in and use that. Basically it is just a gmail address – user name and password. If you try to use what will be one of the choices, open id, the comment will take. I got a gmail account just so i could comment. A very few of them may use twitter, in which case, forget it, weirdness. Many of us have had to use the gmail/google id route. Seems we’re split between blogger and wp. Bjorn (brudberg) is dverse’s administrator/fearless leader. He is always helpful. Today, since it is Open Link – can submit any poem/poetic style you choose, on the discussion pub page, just note you want to comment but on some of them you can’t. You may get other suggestions from other folk. Bjorn is out of the country but may get back to pretty sokn depending on internet connection. Also, let folks now you are a newbie so you can get a proper welcome from folks. We are not a poetic group that rips piems apart but are supportive. If you ask for suggestions though to improve a poem, you’ll get that.
Hi Gayle,
I know its frustrating and can lead some folks to feel that their poems are not being read. For me, I allow open ID so anyone can comment. I suggest you get a gmail account or open a temporary blogger just to let people know you are reading them.
So happy to see you back on the poetry trail.
And Toni,
Gayle has been with D’verse before, so she is a familiar face 🙂
I tried the open id, wouldn’t work so Bjorn suggested the google id. I changed who I allowed to comment so that helped other folks. But some of the formats people use…they don’t allow any comments unless you fo i through twitter or FB…and you know how I am about that.
Thank you Toni and Grace, you both have been helpful. I have a Google ID account already but I guess I was trying to comment using WordPress. I will have to make a concerted effort to use Open ID on some sites so my comment will “stick.” And, I’ll make sure my own site will accept comments from everyone too.
Yes, Toni, Grace is right, I’m an “oldie” not a newbie. I’ve mostly been gone for an extended length of time now but hope to rekindle my writing passion and connect back with my supportive writing friends. I appreciate your warm welcome for me; it means a lot. 🙂
Gayle ~
I too left writing for awhile,but it was good to rekindle that flame. I am a relative newbie and never cease to be amazed that I am a member of the team. That is a major wow. The folks at d’verse truly are supportive.
It feels good for me too. And that is a major wow…and for sure, the dVerse group is so supportive and helpful. So happy to have another encouraging team member to help us along.
I made a new google address in order to be able to comment on blogger, etc. I didn’t find any other solution. So that works.
I liked this prompt and wrote for it before I realized that I was late. If you’d like to read it, it is at
http://geletilari.wordpress.com/2015/09/17/my-eyes-say/
I hope that is not inappropriate but I did want to share it. I’ll take better care to look at the expiration next time.
OpenLinkNight is opening up in an hour. You can link in any poem, like the one above ~ Hope to see you then ~
Thanks for the reminder!
Good. I am glad that helped!