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I don’t know about you but I struggle with coming up with titles for my poems after seeing unique and interesting titles around the internet. You might ask, why should I care about titles? A title is the first exposure a reader has about you, and if you want to make a good impression, you start the introduction with a good title.
According to Alberto Rios: This process of titling serves as a description of what a good poem itself does–that it locates, that it fixes on a point, that it informs. In this sense, a title ought equally to be addressed as poetry, and not as something other, not something less and not something more than the poem, or the line of a poem.
Linda Nemec Foster, author of Talking Diamonds and first poet laureate of Grand Rapids, believes that a title serves the purpose of “setting the stage.” She states that “the title must reflect the poem’s heart or intent. It should be interesting and original so that the reader or audience will want to read it or pay attention to what comes next.”
The author of Uncoded Woman and an instructor at Interlochen Arts Academy, Anne Marie Oomen added the following: “I tend to like [titles] that work as a part of the poem. I don’t care for titles that just announce what the poem is about. I think a title should do more, should do some work for the poem. So I like titles that set a scene, or introduce a speaker, or give a hint but not the whole story of what the poem is going to be about.”
David Cope, author of Turn the Wheel, and manager of the Kent County Poetry Contest thinks a poem should, “in some way suggest the heart of the poem, somehow being ‘catchy’ without being trivial.”
The author of Mutual Shores, Philip Sterling, explained a great deal about a title’s importance: “For practical purposes, a title gives us a reference point, helps us find the poem in a book, helps distinguish today’s poem from yesterday’s poem. But there are impractical reasons, as well. I like titles that allow expansion. Yet, many titles are simply to distinguish. And there are a good number of poets who see the title as the first line (or editors who title the poems with the first lines, as in the case of Dickinson . . .). I’ve done all those things, including using an epigram as a title. I don’t think there’s one way; but my personal opinion is that a title should help the poem to ‘expand’.”
Sue Silverman, author of Hieroglyphics in Neon, contributed the following: “Even as titles, of course, are important for all genres of writing (fiction, nonfiction), I feel they’re especially important for poems. Since poems are short, the title needs to capture the underlying essence of the poem. Additionally, a title is important in that it must act as a portal that invites the reader into the poem. In that sense, then, it must convey a sense of mystery or intrigue, make the reader want to discover what the title (and, thus, the poem) means.”
Sue’s husband, Marc Sheehan, author of Gretest Hits, thought: “A successful title should do two things – provide a context for the poem, and make the reader want to read the poem.”
These professional poets all also offered up their best title writing advice to you. Linda Nemec Foster offered that, “Although, sometimes I’ve started with a title first and then written the poem, I usually change the title afterward. So, I would suggest that most poems (at least for me) are drafted and worked on before the title solidifies. In other words, let the poem take its own course and see what title it wants to give itself.”
Anne-Marie Oomen also told us her method: “To come up with a title, I try three things. Is there a small part of a line in the poem that would start to lead the reader into the poem? Is there a way the title can give important information not yet in the poem? Is there a way the title can name something happening in the poem that will enrich the poem once the reader is done reading?”
David Cope offered, “Sometimes the last few lines of the poem can suggest what the title should be. Sometimes I’ve used the first line of the poem as a title so that it serves two purposes (heart of the poem and beginning of the first sentence). Sometimes it’s a phrase from somewhere in the poem itself. It can be a first line identical to the last line in a poem that cycles through many ideas/scenarios only to return to its own beginning. It can be an ironic comment playing off the material of the poem. Or it can be an intense image which reflects the materials within.”
Philip Sterling’s advice: “Don’t worry at first. Write the poem. Then see if there’s any line in the poem that can be extracted as a title–and omitted from the poem. That is, let the poem decide what it wants to be called . . . but don’t be afraid to change it, if much later, you decide it should be something else. I’ve changed a number of titles when I’ve put together a book, because the titles sometimes show their connection, their interrelationship.”
“Sometimes, wrote Sue Silverman, “a phrase in the poem itself will lend itself to a title—which is always a relief. If that doesn’t happen, then you might try some free-writing, kind of doodling with words and phrases to see if you come up with an image that represents the poem.”
Mark Sheehan gave simple advice, “Don’t be afraid of longer titles. Also, don’t be afraid of a title that might be ironic.”
Title writing can a challenge, but using this expert advice might make that difficult task easier. Sources here and here.
So tell me, poets how do you come up with titles for your poems? And can you share some of the most unique or memorable titles you have read?
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Hi everyone! Welcome to pubtalk and I will be around in a bit to respond to your comments.
Feel free to share your process of titling your poems or even the title of your published books, if any!
I always take the title last, unless it’s a haiku then I avoid titles to the poem itself. Often I try to find a line in the poem and do something around that. Sometimes I write the poem first, find an image second, and finally a title…
I think I do the same too ~ But how do you find your title?
I think it varies, often it’s just the only one that I can choose. I really do not know
I think it’s often the last line that I use in the title…
Interesting, Bjorn. I will have to keep an eye out for that in your poetry.
If my last line was my punch line, I wouldn’t give it away in a title though ~ But its interesting to know that and like Mary, I will watch out for it too ~
Sort of related, on a few occasions I’ve used the title as the first line of the poem.
I’ve done that too, Victoria!
I am with Bjorn; almost always, title last. First line usually remains, though. I love to have fun with titles, to draw folks in. Not often a fan of the “statement” as in a one-word title that feels like it has aspirations, like “Wanton” or that kind of thing. Amy
I sometimes use title as my “unofficial first line” of the poem ~ But I hear you about one word titles ~ Thanks Amy ~
Oh, I so agree about the “aspiration titles,” Amy. I have been guilty of those in the past, and tend to cringe now, and avoid them like the plague. 😉
Hi! Interesting topic. Title for me sometimes comes first, more often – last. I don’t search for clever titles. Haiku do not get titles so for the post, I’ll put something like Spring Haiku #300. I prefer simple and to the point but will sometimes go a little about what the poem is about “Music From a Passing Radio” for example or Winter Solstice and the time I wrote it – Winter Solstice 12;15 am. I often use Japanese words in the title because…..guess what? The poem is a Japanese poetic form or subject: 浮動葉 Fudō ha – Floating Leaves. This is what the poem is about, the Japanese title with English translation. Many of my poems are titled thusly. 金曜日 Gold Day – a recent haibun. A poem about driving at night during a full moon – Pewter Landscape. I don’t have a process. I just think about it and come up with it.
Like you, I think about it and come up with it. Definitely prefer simple titles too!
I have seen titles that are Untitled # ___ or generic haiku #____. I agree that titles should be related to your poems, and if you can title it in the Japanese characters, like in your case, it gives the reader an inkling of the form or scenery ~
One suggestion is to incorporate also the “place” in your title, if its applicable ~
Haiku are not given titles, properly. LOL, the “place” is usually my yard, or back steps, or the woods beside my house. I just posted a tanka with what the poem is about and the first line of the tanka – Autumn Robins. To me, it is enough. it isn’t clever or cute but in the Japanese tradition, it is enough. Often my titles, because they are Japanese poetic forms, are titled in a way to reflect the form. I never leave a poem untitled.
I think when it comes to haiku, i do not give them titles, but I still give the post a title, i usually use the given kigo, or a reference to where my inspiration come from in the title…
I know I could think of better titles for my poems, but usually am rushed to write to the prompt so don’t spend more time on it. I believe it is important to draw people in. Thanks, Grace
Hi Kathy,
I think I have written and used the same titles like the ones for the seasons several many times already ~ Coming up with unique titles is a challenge though ~
Quite often I change the title when I edit the poem. Like you, it gets down to being in hurry to post. Most of the time my poems are quite unedited. I write them in pencil than any edit happens when I put it on the computer. First edit, that is.
I have no particular way of coming up with a title. However, I agree with the others who said they write the title last. I am not one for choosing obscure titles. Most often my title will tell pretty clearly just what the poem is about. Often a title just comes to me, and I go with it.
That’s it. It comes to me and I go with it.
Title comes last.
I pick a word from the poem I’ve just written. Sometimes at random, sometimes considered. Depends on how I feel at the time.
Thanks for sharing this skyraftwanderer ~
Oh, lordy me, I do have such problems finding the perfect title! I do usually leave it last – but sometimes it comes to me in a flash of inspiration, at other times not at all. So I go for something lame.
I do agree about using it at times as a sneaky first line…
I have done it too 🙂
The attached article talks about being creative with titles like: Bestiary for the fingers of My Right Hand by Charles Simic. I struggle with coming up with unique titles like this one and I envy poets like Claudia or X, who comes up with really poetic titles ~
She comes up with great titles, almost as if it is the title for one of her paintings. Very unique titles. Perhaps that is another way of looking at a title – like your poem is a piece of art like a painting or photograph and titling it as such. I’ll try that sometime.
Great topic, grace. Lots of ideas to explore. My approach to titles changes off and on. I used to like one word titles. Lately, they have become more complex, possibly because I’ve turned from titling after I’ve written the poem to using lines from another poet as inspiration for the poem itself. I find a line I really like and let it take me where it will. I found it interesting to learn that haikus generally are entitled. I’ve written some for which the title is longer than the poem, almost. Perhaps that’s cheating.
That should read not titled.
I like that another poet’s line is an inspiration for your title, Victoria ~
I also like to scan other titles of books, specially the published ones to give me ideas ~ Thanks for dropping by ~
Oh, the titles are the hardest part for me. It’s like when you cook something, no matter how tasty it will be, no one will touch a thing if it Looks bad. So if the poem’s title is not attractive no one will read it. After writing my poem I try to find a word or phrase that could relate to what I wanna convey to my readers.
Having a good and catchy title is the trick ~ Thanks for dropping by ~
Interesting, I have never put much thought on the title, come to think of it my titles are rather boring. You are right, it’s usually the unusual title or name of the book that has drawn me to the actual content. Well, I have already changed one of my title to a haiga. Kanzensakura’s view is interesting..will try.
I don’t seem to have very much “angst” around giving my works titles. Usually I use a line out of the poem or something that relates to the subject matter. I’m not much for using obscure references as titles. I’m pretty upfront with how I write and that falls into titling as well I suppose. I have seen some very long titles from other writers and they can be interesting and grab my attention but I haven’t used them myself.
Interesting topic, Grace!
Interesting discussion, helpful – as I’m very bad at titles.
How about following Shakespeare’s example: “Sonnet I” through “Sonnet CLIV”. (Just joking!)
I sometimes have angst because I give titles to my sonnets, somehow Shakespeare seems such a rolemodel to poetry…
I keep it simple. I prefer one word and it is either the key word in the poem or that which represents the theme of the poem.
Err on the side of simplicity if in doubt. I think titles draw people to books but no so much to poems. I suspect most people read the first line of a poem before they read the title and if that draws them in they read the rest.
It’s been ages I last passed by. Glad to link up and read from my comrades here again. Titles! @ Grace, we both have the same sydrome I guess. I do struggle with it too but when I get hold of one, it does what the maggic and worth the effort. Of all my write-ups, the Leaking Umbrella was the toughest. At a point, I wasn’t sure if I did choose the right title or not but lo and behold, it striked the maggic, hence, making it my favorite poem ever. You can check it out via the below link;
https://rythaephua25.wordpress.com/2015/07/22/the-leaking-umbrella/
Thanks for sharing this and thanks to my fellow Poets for sharing their experiences too. I have picked a handful.
While at times I start with a title (not often) and the poem seems to flow from that. Usually, the title comes during the writing or after that first reading.
One of my favorite titles ever is “Aubade with a Broken Neck,” by Traci Brimhall.
http://www.versedaily.org/2010/brokenneck.shtml
Since my background is in advertising, where the headline is king, I fall easily in love with a great title. I also judge books by their covers, and wines by their label. Sometimes it works out beautifully, other times, notsomuch. 😉 But a great title lingers, always.
I’m a big fan of long titles for short poems (and vice-versa), and poems where the title flows right into the first line, or gently rhymes with it.
A great title catches attention, like a headline ~ Thanks for the lovely inputs De ~