Hi everyone! In my part of the world, it is autumn season and we are enjoying the harvest of apples and pumpkins. My son and I have just finished making apple pie and apple cake this Sunday morning.
Here is a poem by one of my favorite Canadian poet, P.K. Page, Autumn, using the glosa form.
Whoever has no house now will never have one.
Whoever is alone will stay alone
Will sit, read, write long letters through the evening
And wander on the boulevards, up and down…
Autumn Day Rainer Maria Rilke
Its stain is everywhere.
The sharpening air
of late afternoon
is now the colour of tea.
Once-glycerined green leaves
burned by a summer sun
are brittle and ochre.
Night enters day like a thief.
And children fear that the beautiful daylight has gone.
Whoever has no house now will never have one.
It is the best and the worst time.
Around a fire, everyone laughing,
brocaded curtains drawn,
nowhere-anywhere-is more safe than here.
The whole world is a cup
one could hold in one’s hand like a stone
warmed by that same summer sun.
But the dead or the near dead
are now all knucklebone.
Whoever is alone will stay alone.
Nothing to do. Nothing to really do.
Toast and tea are nothing.
Kettle boils dry.
Shut the night out or let it in,
it is a cat on the wrong side of the door
whichever side it is on. A black thing
with its implacable face.
To avoid it you
will tell yourself you are something,
will sit, read, write long letters through the evening.
Even though there is bounty, a full harvest
that sharp sweetness in the tea-stained air
is reserved for those who have made a straw
fine as a hair to suck it through-
fine as a golden hair.
Wearing a smile or a frown
God’s face is always there.
It is up to you
if you take your wintry restlessness into the town
and wander on the boulevards, up and down.
The glosa is a wonderful form, explained by Sam Peralta here if you want to explore and try it out. I find that my writings are oftentimes sparked or inspired by another poet’s lines.
So what is happening or going on in your part of the world? What are your plans for the coming Halloween or coming weeks? What books or poems have you been reading that has touched or inspired you?
Hope to see you tomorrow, Tuesday for Poetics and OpenLinkNight on Thursday.
Hello everyone ! Welcome to pub talk and help yourself to a slice of apple pie. Let me know your plans for the coming week or just drop by to say Hello!
I love apple-pie.. how wonderful to eat at harvest time…
Been eating them for the last 2 weeks ~ Hope all is well with you Bjorn, specially your writing projects ~
🙂 all writing done at the moment.. now just waiting for the weight of the book in my hands.
At the moment I’m reading one of Svetlana Alexievich books. Her technique of letting people talk at the same time (more or less) gives such an great layered effect. I know that most books are not translated to English yet… it inspires me to do research and investigate topics for my writing… then we are planning the release of our book (it should be on its way from the printer… and I need to write something for tomorrow… maybe a glosa 🙂
I really want to try another glosa but it takes so much time 🙂 Your glosa during OLN was wonderful Bjorn ~ Let us know about the release of your book ~
First of all it’s a collaboration between fifteen authors living here in Stockholm.. it’s called Keyhole Stories, and it’s a collection of short stories all taking place in the same apartment building in Stockholm.. my story is about 4000 words long… but I will not tell you yet what it’s all about.
How exciting Bjorn ~
Anxiously awaiting being able to read this. Or will it be in English?
Cool!
I’m very intrigued by your book collaboration, Bjorn. I wish you great success!
And we just left Daylight Savings time.. so it’s earlier than it used to be… and pitch dark when we come home from work…
Our Daylgiht Savings Time is ending this weekend (like the USA), so it will be easier to get up when its not so dark anymore ~
🙂
For Halloween, our office is planning a lunch pot luck this Friday ~ And we are supposed to bring creepy food stuff ~ My office mates and I are thinking of our native dishes, that looks unpalatable but really taste nice (or its an acquired taste) ~ So I am looking forward to this feast of “scary and creepy” food ~
I think here it’s more all saints day, and I think I might go with flowers to my father’s grave…
Thanks, Grace, for sharing that beautiful poem. I wasn’t familiar with P.K. Page’s work; loved this introduction to her. No Halloween plans here–I’ll be working. Sorry I haven’t been around much, lots of stuff going on and a recent unexpected family death…
But i’ve been “haunting” the pub off and on (how’s that for seasonal? ha.). Enjoy your pie and your holiday.
Hello.. so sorry for you loss.. the other week we had a discussion on how poetry can help through difficult times..
Sometimes when I am depressed or just feeling anxious, writing helps me by releasing the negative energy and welcoming the positive thoughts ~
Oh I agree. Thanks. Doing more reading than writing lately though. Congratulations on your book!
Hi d.s., I will be working too~ I am sorry to hear about your family’s loss ~ I hope things settle down with you soon ~ The pub’s doors are open so feel free to drop by now and then ~
Thanks Grace.
I’m very sad to see that you had a death in your family. I’m sure you’re all holding tight to one another, and as someone said, writing does seem to really help to get thoughts and feelings ( and memories) down on paper. Take care
I’m sorry to hear of your loss, d.s., my condolences to you. However, I’m happy to hear that you’ve been checking in with dVerse now and then and hope you know that you are always welcome. And writing through hardships can often help us process them. I wish you and your family well during this challenging time.
Gayle ~
Thanks so much Gayle. Trying to get back to writing
You’re welcome, and I know you can’t rush writing. It comes when it’s ready.
Pie! I love pie! Apple pie has always been my favourite. Autumn has me all twitterpated and writing like mad. I’m not sure how good it is. I don’t think I am in the frame of mind to know for sure. But I am happy about writing such volume. I’ll have a lot to choose from for my collection.
The last time I looked up the glosa I was very confused about what made it different than other poems. But I’ll try again.
My reading pile is very high. For myself I am reading through Emily Dickinson’s collection again and finishing up a couple of biographies. I’m also reading a book someone online write and asked me to be a reader for.
I love how many good writers there are online… and how you actually know the writer.. I read the book by Victoria earlier this year.. fabulous work
Is that the one by Victoria Olsen? I’ll look for it. As for Ms. Dickinson, oh she’s been part of my reading since I was a kid. Lately I’ve been thinking about going up to the East Coast to her museum.
Ah, thanks Bjorn. And I’m looking forward to your collaboration. The premise is so good.
I love Emily’s collection and her cadence is unmistakable ~ I have tried writing poems following her beat so my verses can be lyrical ~
Good for you to be writing like mad, I am envious if you are writing for a book collection ~ I have started checking out local poetry contests around my area just to motivated me to write ~ So far, I am plodding along and checking the deadlines ~
Thanks for dropping by ~
It’s a collection I wanted to have done a year ago but a year ago I wasn’t writing enough to accomplish it, so I’m glad for that. But I feel guilty sometimes. The poetry is my first love and I am very lazy about my novel. If I can write a poem instead I go write it haha
I was supposed to get my book done a second goal- for a contest early December. But I think the thought of it being for a contest makes me not want to? I don’t know. But the words seem to flow better when it’s not for anyone else.
I use contest deadlines to spur me to writing and recently I have submitted to our local poetry chapter ~ They have one every quarter so we will see ~ I get you about writing for oneself as sometimes the themes they are asking for are not really my interest ~
The one I have joined is a local society (there is small fee to join) and after they have selected, there will be an anthology of about 50 winning poems ~ I am looking forward to it, and from here on, I plan to join bigger and national contest for next year ~
Allbest to you with that. Wow that sounds like a great group to get hooked up with. That was kind of my thought when I looked into the book collection contest- as a means of getting published for the first book.
I’ve never gotten into entering contests…I think for that very reason that I focus too much on an outcome outside of my poetry–but I agree that could be a good deadline incentive. I just put together a little volume for my Mom’s 95th birthday. That kind of thing works better for me. And I can begin to imagine all the poetry I would not have written if not for the prompts here at dVerse.
I’ve never gotten into contests either but it would be a good tool for getting some writing done by a particular time. And I agree with you too, Victoria, I’ve written so much because of the prompts here that have spurred me on.
p.s. Is your apple cake recipe one that you don’t mind sharing? Or is it a secret? I’ve been looking for a good apple cake recipe for awhile now.
I’ll trade you my pumpkin muffin recipe ^_^
I have to check with my son as it is his apple cake recipe ~ He uses mayonnaise and milk to make it light and fluffy ~ I will share it with you once he gives it to me 🙂
Interesting. I have heard of an old trick to put mayo in chocolate cake. But I’ll respect it if he doesn’t want to share his secrets 🙂 thanks
He doesn’t mind, not to worry ~ I think the difficulty is trying to write it down as sometimes he improvises along the way ~
Have you tried baking brownies using Nutella, instead of mixing butter and cocoa powder? Really taste good and much quicker too ~
No I haven’t -yum 🙂
If you do a search on Nutella Brownies, you find that it takes only 3 ingredients: 1 cup Nutella, 2 eggs and flour ~ Quick and easy too ~ 🙂
That’s got to be some kind of miracle of that really works 🙂 thanks for the tip
Hi Grace, what a nice way to spend time with your son–making pie and cake. My state doesn’t grow apples but we have them year round in the stores and we buy them often. I don’t do as much baking as I did when my girls were growing up but I would love to try an apple pie again.
I’ll be attending a Halloween get together with Mira and the family this coming Friday and will be stocking up with candy for trick-or-treaters on Saturday. I hear it’s going to be a full moon on that day too…so maybe a little extra spooky out!
I have a stack of books to get to but somehow my reading has slowed down of late. I’ve been occupied elsewhere I guess.
I’m very curious about that glosa form and will have to look into it and maybe give it a go. I keep hearing how much time it takes though…
Gayle ~
I bicycled home under the moon.. it’s indeed very close to being full…
The glosa takes time mainly because it’s a long poem… 44 lines (though only 36 by yourself)
Maybe we should do the glosa for a challenge, but issue the challenge a week in advance so we could really work on it.
I like the idea 🙂
I like the idea of giving the glosa a try too. But, yes, let’s give ourselves plenty of time to do the work that it entails. Or so I’ve heard… 🙂
Hey there’s an OLN on Thursday.. 🙂 all opportunity in the world to make a glosa.
Hmm…do I have time? :~)
I have been checking the moon at night and it looks glorious ~ I am excited if its going to be full moon this weekend ~ I have already stocked up the treats for the little children coming around the neighborhood ~ I hope the nice weather holds through ~
My son is a chef so we bond over cooking and baking ~ Enjoy your time with the family ~
I think the full moon is Tuesday…possible in the morning hours. It’s totally full here now. Better check the facial hair!
I haven’t had apple pie in a while, but your discussion, Grace, makes me want some! I was at an apple orchard though, with my grandson’s class, and they made everyone a FRESH caramel apple. It was absolutely delicious!
Where I live there are only a few homes so we don’t get trick or treaters…as it is too long a walk for them. That’s okay. I don’t need extra candies around.
I wish I could find a book that grabbed my attention. I had read some over the summer, but lately I haven’t read one for a while. I have requested ‘Skyscraping” from the library though, on the recommendation of a friend. It is an adolescent novel that is totally written in poetry form. Sounds interesting. I want to see how that works out!
I don’t know about anyone else, but I think that autumn is the most reflective season of the year!
Hi Mary ! I haven’t tried fresh caramel apple so I must try this one ~ We still have freshly picked apples in the basket ~
I agree with you on autumn being the most reflective season ~ It was during this time 5 years ago that I started writing poems during the season ~ Let us know how that Skyscraping novel is, though its form intrigues me if its written in poetry form ~
Oh, if you enjoy apple pie, you would enjoy caramel apples for sure. How interesting that it was five years ago that you started writing poetry. How quickly time passes. And yes, I will keep you posted o Skyscraping.
Since I’m alone in the desert, hubby is left on his own to handle Halloween. Most of the folks in our community down here are grandparents and they don’t do too much Trick or Treating. I think because I have no children, Halloween has never been that big a thing for me.
I’m working on a new volume of poetry to include some new poems as well as some previously posted. I figure since most folks who buy my poetry books don’t blog it’s okay to include some of the old ones because otherwise it is only bloggers who will read them. The community here in the desert is older and many still have a great appreciation for poetry. Would that we could foster that among younger people.
Thanks for the beautiful poems you shared, Grace. I am using Mary Oliver’s Collected Poems Vol 1 and 2 for inspiration, or jumping off places for my new poems. I listened to some of “All the Light We Cannot See” on my 10 hour drive down here (still more to go) and I recently read “The Nightingale,” another WWII novel. Both authors have delicious writing styles. I’d already read the former.
That’s wonderful to hear that you are working on a new volume of poetry Victoria ~ And I really enjoy reading Mary Oliver’s Collected poems too, over and over again ~ She has a way of writing that connects with the reader, yet her endings can be very surprising ~ I see that some “younger” poets are into FB and Tumbler, where commenting is relatively easier, starting with just a Like or Reblogging it ~ I am happy to read that some folks still appreciate reading poetry books ~
Enjoy your time in the desert Victoria and see you soon ~
I must be the only person who could not get into “All the Light We Cannot See.” Sigh. I tried so hard, but failed. I did love “The Nightingale” though. Plus I share your appreciation for Mary Oliver.
It’s (the novel) a little tricky because of the back and forth between characters–for the most part, every other chapter. I especially enjoyed it because I lived one of my years in France in Brittany and have visited St. Malo, which is at the center of the story. Wish I had had a better knowledge of the history at the time. The Mother House of the religious order I was in was in Brittany and had been occupied during WWII. Because it was built like a chateau and had tall turrets, the occupation force used it for look out. There was a huge military cemetery nearby. So much history, much of it that I’m only now coming to know and appreciate.
The nights are drawing in, we haven’t quite lit the fire yet, but it’s dull and cloudy and just about ready for November. A friend just mentioned today that she was putting winter tires on and getting the skis for her children… I seem to have missed a season, what with all my travels, and am sorry about that, as autumn is so beautiful – and very colourful this year.
Roasted chestnuts and pumpkin pie are two of my favourite things this time of year (apple pie always!), but those are not so popular with the rest of the household…