I would have to guess that most of us like to be in control, or at least, live under the illusion that we are in control. For some, this becomes the major sticking point in relationships, and it pours into our work environment, even into our writing—where we are in charge of those words until it’s time for critique. But there is one area in which we can’t even come close to domination, and that is the weather.
As I write this, (the end of October) I’m enjoying a few days in the California desert. The thermometer tells me it’s 92 degrees (F). Yesterday morning, my husband up in Northern Nevada told me it was 22 so he covered his droopy tomato plants in sheets and plastic. I saw on the news that Texas is flooding while friends who recently took a river cruise up the Danube had to be bused to their various destinations because the water in the river was so low.
Weather affects our emotions, activities, bottom lines, crops, recreation and so much more. Plans aren’t made without checking out weather reports and, even then, those meteorologists aren’t accurate much of the time and certainly aren’t in control of what comes blowing over those mountains to the West. They can only make calculated guesses.
In writing, we use weather to create mood. It is useful as a metaphor for human behavior and emotions, and works well to intersperse in blocks of dialogue to keep it from sounding too robotic or even boring.
Today, let’s take a look outside at the weather–wherever you happen to be. What’s it doing? How does it affect you or your activities? What kind of mood or metaphor does it suggest? Take that real and current information and write a poem so that, no matter where we happen to be, we will have updates from both hemispheres…a sort of global meteorological experience.
To join us:
- Write your poem and post it on your website;
- Copy and paste the URL of your poem in Mr. Linky at the bottom of this page;
- Come on into the pub—settle in with a hot or iced drink, as the weather dictates;
- Read your fellow poets and comment on their work;
- Have fun.
Please invite others to join in, using your social media sites and by including the link to dVerse in your post. Anyone who introduces someone new to the pub will get a drink on the house!
For dVerse, this is Victoria, brewing up whatever you may wish to quaff your thirst for all things poetic.
Updated weather report in Reno, NV–awakened to 6″ or so of snow and downed power lines…but power is back and snow is already melting.
Welcome everyone…time for some poetic meteorology. Here in Reno we had between 6-12″ of snow last night, lost power early but now the sun is out and everything is melting. I’m looking forward to dropping by and checking out the current conditions in your neighborhood.
BTW, for those of you who are interested–an early start to ski season in Tahoe and the surrounding peaks.
Hello from cool autumn Toronto City Victoria!!!!
Its about 9 C but for us this is nothing compared to the zero temp of winter ~ Still enjoying the warmth of sunny day but its getting shorter though ~
I am still in the office but will visit and make my rounds in a bit ~ Happy Tuesday ~
Welcome, Grace. What a wonderful poem you bring to us today. But I have to wonder, how is it that we have all this snow before you and Mary and others in the areas that we expect it?
This week we have only rain and the sun sets very early like 5 pm ~ But no snow yet, smiles ~
Wow, Victoria, that is early for snow…. I am glad it doesn’t look like snow is on our horizon just yet. Of course, we CAN have snow in November as well! Looking forward to reading about everyone’s weather!
I just commented to Grace–it seems like you and Canada should have it 1st. Ours came from the Northwest.
You know this is asking for trouble, don’t you, Victoria? As soon as you mention the weather, something untoward happens…
We’ve had a few lovely sunny days, getting quite warm in the afternoon, so I think we must be due a few cloudy, grim grey days any minute now. I will be doing the rounds, and I’ll try to join in tomorrow. Although it’s a holiday here in France (Armistice Day) so I have to entertain the children, after finally finishing a long bout of work.
I remember the most gorgeous ice storm when I lived in the Jura–though it paralyzed the city. Enjoy your holiday. Decoration day?
Grey and gloomy where I sit in Saskatoon, Saskatchewan, Canada…but as of yet, the ground has not yet been littered with the white dandruff of clouds…
Grey and gloomy can really get to you…that’s how it was last month when we visited family in Minot…drove right up to the border with Sask!
another 300 miles…give or take…and we could have had coffee!
Smiles.
I tackled climate change with my haibun; it has certainly been “breaking news” for all of 2015. In terms of Global Warming though, I feel like there is something we can still do about it, & should.
We can’t give up.
Have you ever seen the movie, The Day After Tomorrow? Overly dramatic and often schmaltizy, but one of the best parts of the movie was the last few seconds (spoiler alert if you haven’t seen) – two people who are on the US Sattelite overlooking the earth look down upon our planet with parts of the earth totally frozen and one says: Have you ever seen the sky so clear? Wonderful perfect ending. Good special effects as well.
Never saw it…
What an interesting prompt. I’m looking forward to coming back tonight to read some linked poetry and see how the weather is all around. I’m so happy because I finally figured out how I can keep up on dVerse in the evening with my husband’s tablet, which he never uses and works much better for blog reading and commenting than my phone. That way I can still have a cat on my lap. (I don’t know why I added that last part or why I even like the cat on my lap, but such is life.) Peace, Linda
I’ve always liked a cat on my lap, Linda, especially a sleeping one, until they wear out their welcome and never want to leave! :~)
I love having my dogs in my lap–or beside me. Comfort in unruly weather. Pets welcome here!
I wish I could get my dog instead of the cat to sit in my lap. He was a great lap dog when he was younger, but not so much these days.
Ha. I had a golden retriever who was a lap dog!
You both are so lucky. Wish I had my boy on my lap. Enjoy that cat on your laps. Accept love and comfort freely given. The absence of that warm presence on my lap has left a definite sad, cold place.
I do like Alucard on my lap. It just always seems a little odd to me as I’ve always been more of a dog person. The cat is actually my son’s, but when he’s away the cat takes a liking to me. I’m so sorry for you missing your sweet kitty. I pray there will be another warm bundle on your lap again someday.
Thank you. Cats love warmth. It senses you are not apathetic to animals and so when your son isn’t around, it gets on your lap for warmth and comfort. Cats do that. My husband dislikes cats but if I wasn’t around, SamCat would try to get as close to him as Brad would allow him to get.
Toni…I bet there are plenty of little kitties out there waiting for a loving lap. I know, it’s so hard after losing one to get another right away. When it’s time…
I am sitting in sunshine(for the first time in days) and fair weather here in Tennessee! We needed to see the sun as it has been overcast for days! I will contribute to this tomorrow, Victoria! Thank you for a great prompt!
Enjoy that sunshine while you have it!
I enjoyed writing to your prompt, Victoria, but sorry about the snow that got dumped on your part of the world and blew your power out. I have a friend who just returned from Truckee, CA where part of his family lives. They received their first snowfall the day he arrived. I think that’s near you isn’t it?
Anyway, I wrote about the dirty trick that the weather played on us here…that wasn’t very nice.
Yep–Truckee is about a 30 min. drive from us (if there’s no snow, that is)…halfway to Tahoe (if you take the right exit).
I am home sick today with a cold, but it was nice to be able to stop in at the pub. Hope someone has a hot toddy.
It is rainy, wet and gloomy here, (I’m not too far away from Grace in Toronto). We haven’t seen snow yet and I am not anxious or ready for that. I will try to write a little something between sniffles. 🙂
Sorry you’re “under the weather,” Mish. I am fixing a hot toddy with a double shot of Canadian Whiskey specially for you. That’s my role as bartender and nurse!! Feel better.
Now I know I am one of triplets!!!
You are so thoughtful, Victoria. Thank you. 🙂
Hey everyone,
Its the beginning of Winter here 🙂 sharing an echo verse in honor of this season. Hope you all like it!
Thank you Victoria for this lovely opportunity, this one’s for you 🙂
Lots of love,
Sanaa
Thanks for the lovely echo poem Sanaa 🙂
Glad you liked it Grace 🙂
Ah, thank you, Sanaa. I’ll be by as soon as I finish checking out comments.
Thank you Victoria for such a lovely comment on my poem 🙂
I’m just now getting up and about after having a weather induced migraine. It is cool, dark, rainy. I’ll be submitting something later If my head doesn’t explode. We are all so different but one thing we have in common – we all have weather!
Well, no toddy for you, Toni. You need some nice hot tea. Herbal. Feel better.
No, I need some herbal tea with a good splash of bourbon…smiles
Brittany –
sunshine blocked by blinds
business acumens
I’m on a business trip, so this is my only contribution.. Will try to get around and read some.
Love the haiku ~
Have a fruitful and safe business trip Bjorn ~
Sunshine in Brittany? Hmmm. Thanks for stopping by and travel safely.
Today it’s foggy again
😂
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Excellent prompt Victoria! Glad you are home safe. It is cold, rainy, drab….next week it will be sunny and 70F. Go figure but that is the end of autumn, beginning of winter here in the South.
Cold and rainy here too Toni ~
Snow’s melting quickly. I was hoping it would stay around for a while.
Don’t worry! There will be more on its way.
Supposed to be El Nino this year. We are a block from the river. Its flooded in 1997. But we need the water.
I know the feeling. I love snow!
Perfect prompt for today!
Glad you enjoyed it.
Looking out now a storm is brewing but have written a poem about an hour earlier with brilliant sunshine.mvery changeable but warm in London, UK.will try an post weather poem soon before any more changes!