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Today we have a guest prompter for dVerse: Rajani (Thotpurge) who blogs from Bangalore, India at thotpurge.wordpress.com. If you want to learn a little bit more of her, she has been interviewed by Sherry at Poetry United.
Hello all you lovely poets! Hope you’re all having a marvelous day and are in the mood for some Haibun!
I love the challenge and unlimited creative potential of this form which allows richly woven prose to be amplified by simple yet profound haiku. Haibun, at least in its classical form, connects to nature and travel and in reading Basho’s work, his mastery becomes evident in the way he draws the reader in with his description of his journey and punctuates the narrative with a haiku that reflects a moment of understanding, a milestone in an inward journey or a quick intake of breath as something suddenly falls into place.
Today, I’d like to invite you to consider one of your own journeys, or even a travel experience you have read about, and use it to develop a new haibun. Maybe you would like to write about a trip that deeply affected you or from which you learnt something new, whether it was to the neighborhood park or to a far-off land. Here’s a link to one of Björn’s fabulous posts that could get you started.
As has been mentioned before in this series of prompts, the haiku is not expected to be a summary of the prose. I personally find it works well if it remains tethered to the key thought, yet rising and floating above it in some way.
Ideally, keep you prose crisp (a couple of paragraphs perhaps) and don’t worry too much about counting syllables in your haiku.
If you’ve never joined us at a Dverse prompt, here’s how it works:
– Post your work on your blog and link the URL to this prompt using Mr. Linky below.
– Read and comment on the work of other participants, in the spirit of the community.
– Share your work on social media if you wish, using the hashtag #dversepoets
– Have hordes of fun creating your haibun!
Good evening everyone… Rajani will come by a little later… Right now it’s too late in India, but here in Sweden it’s perfect timing… Hope you are ready to write about your travel… don’t we all love it? Happy Monday to you all.
Hello all. I posted this yesterday on another poetic community site but had crafted it for the prompt today. It is a companion piece to the last couple of posts I have done, although it does not seem to be connected, but it is. I hope you all are having a wonderful day. Here in the sweet sunny South – it is spring today. 70F, lots of sun, gentle breezes, robins running all over the yard pulling out worms…cloudless blue sky. I checked the buds on my flowering quince and Japanese plums…they look ready to burst. But today can be deceptive! I remember several years ago for an April Easter, there was snow!
Ah.. here we still have winter… but clear skies today, so nights are cold, but there is some warmth in the sun…
My neighbors are out doing yardwork – wearing shorts and tee shirts! My hearty Swedes feel this is almost summer compared to where they lived. She asked for rootings of my Japanese plum and confessed shyly these few years, she has been clipping branches on her side of the yard to take inside because she loves the scent. That made me smile and ensure her to please cut what she chose…I like that couple a lot.
Ah.. we always try to bring in some branches at this time of the year… Birch, forsythia or willow… great for lent…
Just posting this morning: it’s 9 AM Bermuda time. We just entered our second of two months here. Feel like we had an extra day — Leap Year! So we will be here until March 29, The sun is beautiful today on the water, and I shall go out on the deck to sip my morning coffee! My understanding is that Boston had a much “lighter” winter this year — thank goodness — last year it had 108 inches of snow! So we shall look forward to tulips and daffodils when we return.
Thanks for hosting Rajani ~ Bjorn, sadly we will have winter storm in a day or two ~ Looking forward to reading & visiting ~
Happy Haibun Monday ~
This is a time of year when weather can change at the flip of a coin.. I’m happy for the ice as it shortens my bicycle road to work from 11 km to 4…. I save an hour in commuting every day…. plus it’s wonderful to traverse the bay I normally go round.
Our weather is flipping today for sure. It was like Spring in the morning when I took my walk in a tee-shirt and hooded sweatshirt and tonight it will snow. It is already getting cold and blustery out there.
p.s. I love trains. There will probably be a train in my haibun
Ha.. I think there will be a lot of trains in the haibuns today
Yes I may have to go another way to be unique
We had a spring like Sunday, now we are back in chilly winter ~ Oh well, at least I can work from home if its that bad ~ For sure the weather is so unpredictable ~
Hope the storm is not too hard on your bit of the world, Grace. Stay safe (and armed with books).
I love that painting, though its subject has more problematic echoes in my mind. Yes, mine is a train haibun.
Thank you for hosting today, Rajani. I will be back in a while to read and comment.
Thanks Rajini, I have only written on haibun and that was YEARS ago. I’ve been working myself up for this since they started and I finally have the guts to try another. No trains here.
Its fun to try haibun specially the prose part ~ Thanks for being here Raivenne ~
Haibun is one of my favorite poetic forms (I love that I get to tell wee tale in a poem). And like Bjorn said, who doesn’t love a good trip. ♥
Hi Magaly ~ Great to see you here ~
Thank you, Grace! ♥
This is the first time I’ve entered on e of my poems. I wrote a Haibun today, “Wintering in Venice, Florida” but I’m not sure how to enter it. My URL is fusingphotosandwords.wordpress.com, is this what I enter in Mr. Linky, and where do I put the tilde of my Haibun in the URL ?
Welcome to D’verse ~ You click on your title post itself, and enter that in the URL, when you hit Mr Linky, Haibun Monday ~ I had edited your link so when I click on it, it brings me straight to your Haibun post ~
Thank you Grace.
Welcome to dVerse–hope to see you often. Lovely haibun.
Thank you.
We just returned to midwest U.S. winter from an extended trip to the southwestern states…it was great to get-away but always good to come home too…and back to d’Verse 🙂 Look forward to reading everyone’s haibuns later this evening.
Good to see you Lynn ~
Good Morning all… it’s still dark here, the day’s just begun…can’t think of a better way to start it..looking forward to reading all your posts!
Hello, Rajani, and thank you for being our guest host today. I’ll be linking up in a day or two…since we have a few days, but will visit and read some now.
The weather here was perfect today. Clear, blue skies and the high was around 75 degrees F. Today’s temperatures are why people move to Florida in the winters. 🙂
Gayle ~
Look forward to your haibun! We’re having hot 30 C days in the south of India now, but it’s pleasant now in the early morning, a good time to be reading poetry!
I don’t think I can stand 30 C nowadays as I think I will wilt ~ Good to see you Rajani ~
Good to see you too Grace… it’s just going to get warmer as we head into April and May!! We’re used to it, doesn’t stop us from grumbling about it though 🙂
That is warm, Rajani. I always feel as long as the mornings are nice the heat is more bearable.
You get used to it I guess. Coming from the tropics, I enjoyed the changing seasons when I lived in the US but winter always made me long for home 🙂
I want to retire in Florida ~ I am envious of that year round warm weather ~
We’ll be ready for you, Grace. 🙂
Thanks – the was new and fun for me (and hard!) I will be back tomorrow to finish visiting and commenting – I seemed to be unable to comment on Thogpurge – I always seem to have a problem with a few of the WordPress sites – I select my FB account instead of Blogger and FB sign in seems to get better results. I’m not skipping anyone – i just seem to have “technical” issues…. sigh.
Your comment did get posted. Thanks so much. Loved the gentle scene you have described in your haibun. 🙂
Good. Maybe the confusion is some don’t get posted right away … anyway, glad you got it. 🙂
I love the diversity of dVerse poets – everyone brings something so different to the pub – that I want to keep coming back. Thank you guys 🙂
Glad you do! Off to read your post right now!
Thank you Rajani, and hello everybody. It is starting to be lateish at night here on Tuesday, and it has been raining steadily all day, which is welcome after our long, hot summer.
I love haibun, and trains – and as I am working on memoir when I’m not making poems, this prompt brought back the memory of a train journey I took when I was 15.
PS I’m falling asleep. I’ll have to visit others tomorrow.
Looking forward to reading about your train journey!!
Thanks for this wonderful prompt. I had a hard time deciding which journey to use for my Haibun…and then remembered the magic of Bryce Canyon. Hiking there was mystical….and truly, from the very bottom of the slot canyon looking up from this very narrow place to see a sliver of blue — to walking with trepidation on the very narrow rims….quite an amazing place! So — thank you again for letting me go down memory lane 🙂
By the way, I’ve been to India three times and so love the country.
I’ve hiked a little bit through Bryce a long time ago…quite an amazing place. Glad you had good trips to India.. we’d love you to come back, anytime!
Caught by the accursed CAPS LOCK! Prompts continue to call me back, stirring memories. This lead me to the shore. And her. Thanks for this!
Your haibun sparkles with fond memories..thanks for linking to the prompt.
I’ve been riding my bike to get into shape and it takes a small chunk out of my writing time so I almost missed this. I love to write haibun! I will be around to visit everyone’s awesome work this week. Happy March 1st poets!
Monday prompt is open for a week so there is plenty of time… 🙂
I guess me feeling rushed has given me a feeling of not having enough time. I need to slow down, thanks for pointing that out Bjorn. Big hug!
Late to the party, due to a two day “sigh-graine” (sinus headache, plus migraine). Happy to be here, and pain free. Around soon to read all of your amazing work.
Ah.. this is the time for those terrible things… great to have you back without pain
Great haibun, thanks everyone ~ And thanks to Rajani for being our gracious host ~
Was much fun.. thanks so much for inviting me.