One thing people notice in my poems is the extensive use to rhyme and rhythm. It is something at which I work diligently. Is it necessary? No, but my “style” depends on it.
If you were to ask someone what a poem is, it would elicit a number of responses. As poets, we have learned that poetry can be found in pretty much any place we look. A laundry list could inspire a poem, as can ingredients of a cereal box, etc.
But to a general reader, they may say a poem is something that rhymes. We work with words, and sometimes despise the use of rhymes, yet surely they are not less important nor effective as any of the sound devices we use. Rhymes are certain sounds that help convey out thoughts. Today, we will delve into the use and reason for rhyme.
So to refresh, what are rhymes? Rhymes generally are words that differ only on their initial sounds. Sounds like true and blue, or leg and beg. Looking at that, we find that some words do not have an English word with which it rhymes: orange, month, circle, purple are some examples. Even a word that poets use a lot in our work, LOVE, has a limited number of rhyme words. There are subtleties to the rhyming process.
The first things we will incorporate in our works are the placements of rhyme. We are familiar with end rhymes. These words obviously come at the end of our lines.
Initial rhymes conversely come at the beginning of the lines.
(Free xxxx xxxx xxxx.
See xxxx xxxx xxxx)
Medial (middle) rhymes are a bit more complex. They can be “internal”, a rhyme between a medial word and the end rhyme.
(xxx thou xxx cow).
A “close” rhyme is an internal rhyme between words that are in close proximity to each other, neither at the end of a line.
(Smug xxx bug xxx).
“Interlaced” rhymes are words that appear internally in two consecutive lines.
(xxxxx door xxxx,
xxxx floor xxxx)
So as we see, the placement of rhyme can interject different moods and inflections into what it is we want to say. Some say it is as important as the rhyme itself. When I began writing poetic verse (back in the day) my impression of what constituted poetry was purely the sing-songy (moon, spoon, June) end rhyme. I learned quickly there was more to it than that. But still, I considered rhyme important!
Rhymes (sound pairs) fall into some specific categories, all of which can achieve varied effects no matter where they are placed. By definition:
Perfect rhyme. (Also true rhyme, full rhyme) The initial sound is different no matter how many syllables rhyme. Examples: true/blue, money/sunny, happily/snappily,…
Also considered Perfect rhyme:
- Strong or Hard (masculine) rhyme – Perfect rhymes occurring on a single, stressed syllable. Examples: prize/wise, prize/despise (this two syllable word is iambic)…
- Weak or Soft (feminine) rhyme – Perfect rhyme that begins on a stressed syllable, ending on the final unstressed syllable. When the word involves three syllables, it is called triple rhyme. Examples: darling/starling, reference/preference…
- Mosaic rhyme – A perfect rhyme formed by combining shorter words to rhyme with a multi-syllabic word. Examples: poet/know it, spirit/hear it, Longfellow/strong fellow…
- Broken rhyme – A perfect rhyme formed by hyphenating (or breaking) a word across the end of a line. Examples:
x x x x x x fate
x x x x x x x await-
ing x x x x x x x
Identical rhyme. (Also called autorhyme, null rhyme, self-rhyme) These rhyme words are identical. It is called rich rhyme if the words are homonyms. Examples: cheer/cheer, seat/seat, ideal/ideal,…
Near rhyme. (also called off rhyme, slant rhyme, half rhyme) These are approximate rhymes that are picked by the poet to convey a certain effect. They are deliberate rhymes and not failures to achieve perfect rhymes. Not to be confused with close rhyme which refers to location or placement of the rhyme. Examples: seal/seat, foot/fault, hearing/herring,…
Also considered Near Rhyme:
- Wrenched Rhyme – The pronunciation or spelling of one or more words is manipulated to force a rhyme. It can also be done by changing the sound or shifting the stress. Usually used to express surprise, cleverness or humor. Examples: element/elephant, defunct/elephunt, wench/mensch…
- Eye Rhyme (or printer’s rhyme) -Two words with homographic endings of different pronunciations. Examples: move/love/stove, good/food, bough/cough/through, pants/wants,…
- Assonance – Only the vowel sound is repeated. Examples: but/stud, sad/back, mold/soda,…
- Consonance – Only the final consonant sound is repeated. Examples: hat/shot, school,hall,…
- Pararhyme (frame rhyme) – The first and last consonant sounds are repeated, but the vowel sound between is different. Examples: soup/shop, bolt/best, meant/mint,…
The kinds of rhymes available to us are widely varied. They all serve a useful purpose in our daily expression and poemic endeavors. A suggestion: Continuing on the theme of the arrival of Autumn and my exploration of the senses (The Sound of Love), Use the idea of the scents or flavors of the Fall season, write your poems with an eye toward including some of these rhyming techniques. Of course, you can go off base and write any poem on any subject incorporating rhyme. Even if you are reticent to use rhyme, humor me and try it. And have a good time!
– write your poem on your blog and be sure to link it back here to dVerse.
– Use Mr. Linky below to link your poem for others to read.
– Visit the other links. Read and comment on other poets’ works. Make some friends! This is how we build our community here at dVerse.
– Have Fun!
Ouch! Another Autumn posts. Geez guys, we have almost a month of summer left, what the heck is the rush! As for me, I’m stickin’ in the here and now.
Ha, subject is free, but we have to rhyme today.. 🙂
We can use another theme or subject if you like. I went for the summer as its still summer here!
And I went for the moon again… 🙂
I’m with you. Let’s enjoy summer until it’s actually gone.
Hello, we had some problems with the scheduling today… first it went up on Tuesday… and then we where too late today… now we are ready… I have some nice Prosecco … very cool, and some wonderful cheese to nibble on…
Gimme that cheese, brother; sweated dorking with Mr. Linky for 18 minutes. I always think it’s my own computer glitch. Oh well, alls fine in Copenhagen now.
Wow, Walter, that is some comprehensive explanation of rhyme! I too like to incorporate rhyme in my poetry and enjoy experimenting with different types of rhyme. I think I might try combining the sound of love with autumn – I’ll play around with the idea and see you later, alligator!
Over two hours later and I’ve just managed to write a poem. I got sidetracked by several telephone calls!
Hey gang! Welcome ( a little late – work related) but glad to pour today at the pub. We are doing the rhyme today. And it’s all over the board. End, internal beginning… you know where to stick it. Many would rather Sestina than rhyme, but it is still an essential tool in our poetic bag of tricks. I’ll be around when I can sneak away from the time clock and then later in the process. Thanks for stopping in!
I love to do rhyme… actually I’m often lead along in my thinking by looking for rhymes… to me rhymes are almost like doing found poetry…
Of course, this a Northern Hemisphere prompt about Fall. In the Southern climes it would be longing for Spring. This isn’t my poetry contribution, I tend to leave poems as comments. Hope that’s okay.
deep forests we probe
seek trees wearing colored robe
green if invert globe
I like the poem Brian!
Thank you Grace, I will post my prompt link in the morning.
I read one of my non-rhyming poems to my son once. He said, “It doesn’t rhyme.”
I replied, “Not all poems have to rhyme.”
His comeback, “Yeah, but all the good ones do.”
He’s since learned to appreciate non-rhyming poetry, and even wrote a non-rhyming poem that’s posted on my blog, but I may just have to write a rhyming one for him in response to this prompt. But it’s going to have to be later.
Thanks for all the definitions of the different forms of rhyme. The one I’ve always had a hard time with is the eye rhyme. They always sound strange to my ear.
For my rhyming words, I have to consult the rhyming dictionary online.
Looking forward to your share Linda.
I use the online rhyming dictionary, too. Love that tool! Although sometimes verses just come to me in rhyme.
Hey everyone,
Hope you are having an amazing day so far 😀 sharing my poem ‘signe de l’amour’ thank you Walter for the wonderful opportunity 🙂 hope you like it!
Lots of love,
Sanaa
Hi Sanaa ! Thanks for joining in. ~
Got my ‘puter, got my coffee.
Penned my poem, rather softly.
Let the words fall as they may,
corralled a few that went astray.
I like to rhyme in measured doses,
put my words through all the poses.
If, for you, this seems a fight,
for rhyming help, I love this site:
http://rhymebrain.com/en/What_rhymes_with_rhymes.html
I am bookmarking this site. Thanks De!
I like b-rhymes.com
Who knew there were so many different ways to rhyme. Great post Walt. Its always good to learn new things in writing. 🙂
Walt, this is a wonderful lesson. Thank you.
I think its good to experiment and play with words.
Walt, this is the best review of rhyme I’ve ever seen, period. I discovered rhyming strategies I didn’t know existed. Need to print it out for myself and look forward to playing with it for a long time. Thank you. I hope to come up with something for this prompt by tomorrow.
I am bookmarking this one too. Nice to refer back to it and experiment.
I’m in.
I wrote it a few hours ago, but I’ve been trying to figure out how to do the audio. Finally got it.
It works 🙂
Good prompt! I do rhyme, from time to time! (Yes, that was on purpose; sorry, couldn’t resist.) This time I thought I’d try something a bit different, with the same rhyme all the way through each verse (oh OK, the same half-rhyme). Just for the heck of it. But it’s interesting to see how it does seem to underline the meaning / message.
Lesson for today! thanks Walt for this comprehensive dissection. From this list I can see that I favour close rhymes and feminine ones of course
I don’t decline to rhyme per se
but the rhyme word may not quite convey
exactly what I mean to say
Will certainly try your prompt – a little later 😉
Thank you Walter
such a fiendish prompt
did not falter
though foot did stomp.
I posted to Mr. Linky, my concoction is called ‘A harvest wedding’.
Is this a one-poem-per-person prompt, Walt?
Nope… its only OLN that is one-poem-per person…
Okay, then. I’ll link another rhyme-a-rific one for you. 🙂
I’ll never place limitations on your creativity. Write the poems, post the link and it will get read, elsa!
This is going into my file of ‘how to poetry’ for sure. Very comprehensive and informative. Thanks. I may not make it for this prompt (have a job these days), but it will be used soon.
Sounds wonderful and I’m looking forward to reading the entries of all the amazingly talented dVersians. 😊 Even when I don’t participate, it’s my pleasure to support the uniquely gifted array of participating poets. ❤️
In late–will visit in the morning. Family time!
I tried…. And yes, please, Prosecco…
Wanted to add my poem. Alas! Linky has expired a few minutes ago…
I love rhymes!
I have added your poem Anita. Thanks for joining us!
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I’m late, Walt! Mine is up at: https://purplepeninportland.wordpress.com/2016/09/06/cinnamon-calls/