Hello all of you fine, intrepid poets. Happy Labor (US) Labour (Canada) Day! I’m sure you all are having a good end to summer although to be honest, Summer will hang around these parts until mid-October. Those of you farther north are experiencing onset of cooler temperatures and those of you in the Southern Hemisphere are starting to experience early Spring.
But what we all have in common is…The Night Sky! How many times have we wished upon a falling star, sat out in the warm summer night and gazed at the night sky watching the moon rise or set, dreamed of being on the moon or flying through space, stared at the Milky Way (Amanogawa, River of Heaven – Japanese), made love under the stars, wept in grief at the ending of an era or a life, sat out alone watching meteor showers or together with friends- we have all experienced the night sky.
We have all kinds of constellations out in the night sky now: Cygnus (the Swan), Draco, Ursa Major and Minor, Orion, Canis Major and Minor. We have had various meteor showers over the summer: Delta Aquarids, Perseids, Orionids.
Whether it is a childhood memory or a recent event, I would like for you all to write a one paragraph haibun ending it with a nature based haiku (remember, haiku are always about nature and haibun are always non-fiction). Give us your heart, your humor, your expertise about the night sky….Whatever happened to you under a night sky from sunset to sunrise.
Here are a few quotes to inspire you as well:
“Be humble for you are made of earth, be noble for you are made from the stars”
Serbian Proverb
“Was this the vast brightness the poet Basho wrote when he wrote of the Milky Way arched over a stormy sea?” Yasunari Kawabata, The Snow Country
“Without the night, we’d never see the stars.” Tessa Emily Hall, Purple Moon.
So if you haven’t or, if you have linked with us before then:
– On your blog, write your haibun and link it to the dVerse page so that all who read it will come to the dVerse page.
– Post your direct link to your poem under Mr. Linky, read and comment on the links of other poets. This is how we grow our community!
– Enjoy and have fun!
Toni Spencer (kanzensakura, hayesspencer) has been studying, writing, and reading Japanese poetic forms for 40 years. She is still learning!
Björn Rudberg (brudberg) said:
Happy Monday and happy Labor day for those of you who celebrate. Here’s just Monday and the evening has been noisy… as we are drilling for warmth.
kanzensakura said:
Hello everyone! Sorry for the delay in my being here – connectivity issues. Thank you Bjorn for being on hand. Whew!
Björn Rudberg (brudberg) said:
Ha.. it’s all OK … just hand me some moonshine and I’ll be OK.
kanzensakura said:
Plenty of moonshine, starshine, and meteor shine for everyone!
kanzensakura said:
Here down South, with the advent of hurricane Hermine blowing through, it is a cool lovely Monday after a vicious weekend.
Björn Rudberg (brudberg) said:
Great to be in the aftermath… sounds great to have cool, best way for a labor day.
hayesspencer said:
It is lovely to have temps in the low 80’s. But it will get hotter again later in the week! Back up to high 90’s. The storm blowing up the coast mos def brought cooler temps.
Björn Rudberg (brudberg) said:
Low 80s.. that sounds very very warm for me… 🙂
hayesspencer said:
LOL, after temps in the low 100’s, it is cool for us. But then you are much farther north than we.
kanzensakura said:
I am now logged in under my other WordPress account. I imagine it will make things go faster for me!
kanzensakura said:
The night sky was clouded by rain clouds the past couple of nights but last night, the sky was spectacular!
ladynyo said:
I haven’t written a haibun, this is the first, and I think I really missed the prompt. Be gentle….my bones are creaky today. But I will learn from those who post here. D’verse is a great classroom.
hayesspencer said:
LOL, we shall be gentle on your creaky bones! dVerse is an excellent classroom. I have learned more from these good people about poetry than I ever learned in university!
kanzensakura said:
And don’t forget, today is Haibun Monday which means we write Haibun and link to dVerse.
hayesspencer said:
I have certainly enjoyed reading the links so far submitted.
sarahsouthwest said:
Over here it’s the first day back at school, so Facebook is full of pictures of little stars!!! What a delicious prompt – I love a starry night!
hayesspencer said:
I am so glad. The little ones and the older ones are cute. School started here last week so FB was filled with first day of school pics. I am so glad you enjoy this prompt. 🙂
Victoria C. Slotto said:
Wonderful prompt, Toni. I was lucky to grow up long enough ago that you didn’t have to flee the city to see the stars, but even so, they were all the more bright in the desert and at the beach. My poem goes back to 1961.
We are having guests for a Labor Day BBQ in a few minutes, so I won’t be able to read and comment until tomorrow. That will be a nice way to recover.
hayesspencer said:
Enjoy your bbq! The haibun will certainly wait. I’ve been a city dweller as well as s country dweller. Eithet way I have enjoyed looking. Up. At. The. Stars. Damb tiny phone. Keyboard. Lol
Victoria C. Slotto said:
I have that problem too…no patience with it!
sarahsouthwest said:
Earlier tonight my son informed me that the only star you can see from New York is the sun. Does anybody know if that is really true? If it is, it’s very sad for New Yorkers.
hayesspencer said:
Sometimes you can get up high enough in one of the buildings to see stars. I lived in Manhattan and on Long Island for several years. Any light pollution from cities of any size will dim the stars. I know many of big city dwellers don’t seem to miss the night skies. They are too concerned with living among the bright lights. But every once in awhile, you do get to see a few of the stars from the larger cities. NYC actually has a yearly phenomenon called City Henge or something like that where certain streets align with the sun and you can see it clear and close. Lovely!
sarahsouthwest said:
Wow, that must be amazing!
sarahsouthwest said:
By the way, anybody who writes on Blogspot – I’m not being rude, I do try to comment, but Blogspot doesn’t seem to believe I exist…
hayesspencer said:
I’m not sure about blog spot. I know I used to have trouble with Blogger until I learned how to sign in to comment. Don’t know about Blog Spot or any writers on it.
Victoria C. Slotto said:
I have the same problem. Google hates me because I first blogged there and jumped ship. Arrrgh.
sarahsouthwest said:
I’m glad it’s not just me being overwhelmed by tech!
hayesspencer said:
I am leaving a bit to take care of hubby and do the evening meal routine. I shall be back later to continue to read and comment on your delightful haibun.
kim881 said:
Happy Monday to everyone. I’m not sure what Labour Day is, but I wish you a happy one too!
I’ve just got back from choir, where we’ve started ‘Mr Blue Sky’ by ELO, which seems vaguely appropriate, since Toni has given us a night sky prompt. We also sang the Adele songs ‘Rolling in the Deep’ and ‘Set Fire to the Rain’ and, guess what – when I got into the car to drive home, it started raining! I’m not an Adele fan.
One good thing, Luna returned (one of our cats) and I was able to get her to the vet for a check-up , her annual vaccination and to have her paw examined; it was cut but seems to be healing. I just wish she’d be nice to Mojo (the kitten), who is very sweet and only wants to be friends with Luna
I will try to write a haibun this evening, if not it will be in the morning and I ‘ll save reading until then, otherwise I’ll be influenced by what I’ve read. Thank you for such an exciting prompt, Toni.
kim881 said:
It’s nearly bedtime but I’m determined to get this haibun posted!
kim881 said:
I’ll be back in the morning to read – It’s time for bed!
kanzensakura said:
I am not an Adele fan either. I’m glad Luna is home safe and sound but sorry she doesn’t care for Mojo. I’ve found many older cats do not care for kittens not their own as they truly find them bothersome and annoying. Hopefully as Mojo gets older, she and Luna will grow closer. I had a cat that I TRIED to introduce a kitten to. They never did care for each other and competed with each other until the elder one died. After 14 years, the younger one ended up moping himself to death. Go figure! Cats. But I love them dearly.
kim881 said:
The funniest (but most revolting) thing Luna has done to show she is superior to the kitten is catch four mice and bring them to show me, one after the other! The kitten just sits on my shoulder or my lap and purrs. I think she’s a reincarnation of Tosca – she was born around the same time as Tosca was killed and has all of her personality and quirks. She already comes when I call her name!
Brian said:
Been cloudy all day here. I posted my haibun about a long ago play I enjoyed in the outdoors at night. This is only my second try at writing a haibun. I’m very happy to have found the pub and all the wonderful denizens who hang out here.
kanzensakura said:
Welcome to dVerse! Hope you enjoy the various prompts and enjoy reading the various linked poets and commenting. We are a friendly crew.
Grace said:
Sorry for being late but just got back from family outing. Thanks for the gorgeous prompt Toni! Will be hitting the poetry trail now.
rosemawrites said:
Thank you for the lovely prompt, Toni! Just posted mine, will read everyone’s haibun soon! ❤
karfunkelfee said:
The Karfunkelfee from West of Germany is sending you many star-sparkling greetings.
I am looking for Arrival of Orion, the Hunter. A shimmering Haibun , fullfilled with the magic mood of summer nights . Such a bright idea…
I can try, but I am still a beginner. Thank you also for the inspiring quotations.✨
The Karfunkelfee
Björn Rudberg (brudberg) said:
Hello, great to see a new visitor at dVerse… just had to approve all new visitors to our little community..
Victoria C. Slotto said:
Nice to have you here…love your blog name!
karfunkelfee said:
I am glad and pleased, thank you!
I like your blog and Haibun very much. Great to be with you! Thank you very much and many greetings from Bielefeld, Teutoburger Forrest from Stefanie alias Karfunkelfee ✨
Victoria C. Slotto said:
Greetings back from Northern Nevada (home of Lake Tahoe). :0)
karfunkelfee said:
Northern Nevada, Lake Tahoe…wow! such an impressive great landscape- I could imagine that this place is an enchanting and poetic one…✨
Victoria C. Slotto said:
Actually, it is. Come see for yourself, Stefanie.
karfunkelfee said:
I wish I could…one time in my life visit and see your great wide land, dear Victoria! Meanwhile I dream of it in long journeys, look and learn as well as I can in documentations about it. This morning in the little mountains of Teuto, misty ghosts are dancing their autumn play. It’s awesome…I ❤️ Teutoburger Forrest. But I am a fairy, I guess, this is normal. I love to ride in the forrest with my Mountain Bike, but slowly and quiet, as I don’t wanna disturb this Green Peace in it…
sommer-late-lovely greetings from Stefanie, Karfunkelfee✨
lillian said:
Hello Toni and all dVerse folks! Late to the bar — and have been away from the web for a few days. Always good to be unplugged to rejuvenate! I am now back. Will get to some writing for haibun monday — even though it’s Tuesday. And then to some reading again….Missed you folks — but time with grandson takes precedent — especially when celebrating the double digits. Had him stay with us for a few days and had many 10th birthday surprised for him….including – for you baseball fans – a behind the scenes tour of Fenway Park. So — on to haibun writing and reading! 🙂
Dr. Crystal Howe said:
Mine is called Starspun. I enjoy others’ Haibun Monday poems, but still can’t write them fluidly, or so it seems. I’ll be back around to read after making some tea. Looking forward to it!
whimsygizmo said:
Late to the party, but can never resist a night sky. Thanks, Toni. ❤
karfunkelfee said:
Dear friends, I did it!
Haibun in English language…😳
What an adventure!
Thank you all, now I am reading your poems. It won’t be possible to me to write every day in the week but I try to post as frequently as possible.
Many greetings from beautiful Teutoburger Wood, yours Karfunkelfee (from Germany)✨
https://karfunkelfee.wordpress.com/2016/09/08/haibun-starlight/
hayesspencer said:
Hello. Welcome to dVerse and to Haibun Monday. It is great to have you!
TechBook said:
. Thank you very much and many greetings from Bielefeld, Teutoburger Forrest from Stefanie alias Karfunkelfee ✨