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We will now continue with my little series on movements in art and how to express similar ideas in art, and today we will move back in time to the early seventeenth century and one of the most influential artists ever: Caravaggio.
His paintings made him an instant celebrity, and introduced a movement across Europe called carrovagionism. He died young, and lived hard. The last part he was trying to escape from justice from a killing. He was almost instantly forgotten, and it took many years to rediscover his artistry.
His paintings are highly dramatic in content and far from soothing. Almost all of his paintings tell a story and connect forward to other movement such as expressionism and symbolism. His paintings are raw and shocking even today.
There is a technique called chiaroscuro (light-dark) that is very much connected with Caravaggio. The technique grew during the renaissance and was mastered by Caravaggio, where by working with the shadows, and the contrast between light and dark. If you compare his paintings to others there is a sense of being three dimensional that apart from the drama in his paintings fascinate the most.
Today I want you to write poetry that creates drama by focusing on the contrast between opposites, between light and dark, between good and evil. There is some connections to the technique of antithesis I have written about before, but here you have to think a bit like Caravaggio. You have to make the light shine and lift from the shadows. Create drama and volume of the light you want to lift from the dark backdrop, and don’t forget the drama.
For Tuesday’s poetics I wrote the following sonnet trying to use his bold techniques in writing.
Safer in the Dark
There is a certain coldness with the comfort
of divisions; in the border of a window,
I stay detached; I’m safe and covered
cloaked by this, my darkest night. The rainbow
is a kitchen light of houses darkly bent,
an echo dreaming past the river’s edge;
Between, I’m stranded, standing still and sent
as outcast, waiting, clinging to this ledge.
I’m saved from burning kilns of martial rows,
I’m shaded by my cross to bear alone,
regretting that I couldn’t stand your glow
of future hopes that turned my heart to stone.
Before I drowned I thrived behind your walls
Before I died I ceased to listen to your calls.
So now write your best poem being as bold with your words as Caravaggio was with his brush.
When you have written your poem, put it on your blog and link up below. Remember to pass through the bar and read the linkups. I hope for excellent poems tonight and the following days.
And for those who celebrate: I happy Thanksgiving.
Björn Rudberg (brudberg) said:
Hello all.. I guess it will be rather quiet here tonight.. but the bar is stocked with Wild Turkey. So sit down and enjoy.
kim881 said:
Good evening, Björn! It’s been a mild day over here and I think a cold drink might be in order. I enjoyed your sonnet very much and hope there is sufficient darkness and light, good and evil in my poem for you.
Björn Rudberg (brudberg) said:
I look forward to it.. I just came from a concert.. so I’m metro-blogging at the moment
kim881 said:
Whose concert was this one? Do you go to many concerts?
Grace said:
A challenge and something new for me Bjorn ~ Thanks for hosting ~
and Happy Thanksgiving to all our friends in the USA~
Björn Rudberg (brudberg) said:
It should be challenging… and writing with art is interesting.
ladynyo said:
Yes, quite a challenge for me….Bjorn, really loved your sonnet. You nailed this issue of such opposites. Happy Thanksgiving to all who celebrate this wonderful holiday.
Björn Rudberg (brudberg) said:
Darkness is one of the features of November… I just have to look out of my window
Janice said:
Quite a compelling image. ‘The rainbow is a kitchen light of houses darkly bent’ : amazing .
Björn Rudberg (brudberg) said:
Just think contrasts and shadows… build it layers. I look forward to your offering.
paulscribbles said:
Evening all. I land late and tired and for a while unable to write. Uninspired, not by Bjorn’s imaginative prompt, but by my own weariness. Times like these I say to myself are ripe for writing. So write I did. I’ll comment after I’ve had a wee dram.
Grace said:
Hi Paul ~ Yes, ripe for writing ~
Thanks for joining us ~
erbiage said:
Wow what a fascinating concept! Brilliant artist, I cannot hold a candle to such brilliance. But I cannot resist at least an attempt. Thank you Bjorn. Single malt please, Islay if ye have it
erbiage said:
Maybe my second ofering is more chiaroscuro? What do you think? I invite a thoughtful critique…
erbiage said:
So flush with ideas tonight! Of course, I should be sleeping…
Björn Rudberg (brudberg) said:
Why sleep when there are poems to be written?
Sanaa Rizvi said:
Hello everyone,
This was really challenging! Hope I got it right, Bjorn.. sharing my poem “Death and Lilies” thank you for the wonderful opportunity; happy thanksgiving 🙂
Lots of love,
Sanaa
Björn Rudberg (brudberg) said:
Ha, yes MTB should be challenging… Raising the Bar, so we all can be better poets.
Sanaa Rizvi said:
Definitely ❤️
alisonhankinson said:
The poem was inspiring, but not easy to try to match. The artwork fascinating. I hadn’t seen it before, and now need to find the story behind it. many thanks. Cheers. Mine would be a whisky for courage. Love to all. Now where’s the button to find the other poems…off in search.
Björn Rudberg (brudberg) said:
If you press Mr. Linky square it will take you to the linkup.
alisonhankinson said:
Aha I shall try again. I failed last night. Thanks.
Brian said:
Still haven’t figured this one out.
Brian said:
Figured out a poem, but the link has expired. Oh well, hope everyone had a good weekend.
Björn Rudberg (brudberg) said:
I will get over and read Brian…
Sabio Lantz said:
I have just written a post concerning the Judith’s beheading story — it is not a poem, of course, and besides, the link is closed. But here it is.
Sabio Lantz said:
BTW, I have an idea for a challenge. My partner and I took it on ourselves today. Yesterday, we went to a local graveyard and took some gravestone pictures and today, we wrote very short (<300 words) story about those people. Oh, but this is a poetry blog — I guess you could do poems. 😉
Uttley said:
Oops missed the deadline. Oh, well, my write is about C. instead of being in the spirit of his painting, very much.
purplepeninportland said:
I’m late again! Look for mine at: https://purplepeninportland.wordpress.com/2016/11/28/black-stars/