Welcome to the dVerse Poets bar from your host for today, Kim of Writing in North Norfolk.
It’s the end of August and next week children across the British Isles will be returning to school, spruced up in pristine uniforms and shiny new shoes, which prompted me to search for poetry about footwear by well-known poets. I could only find a few, including this wonderful shape poem by Shel Silverstein:
The poems I have found take shoes and transform them into something else, exploring a variety of fotwear in different ways.
‘Red Slippers’ by Amy Lowell is a wonderful example of imagist poetry that focuses on the shoe as an object of desire, making the red slippers other-worldly: https://www.poets.org/poetsorg/poem/red-slippers
In ‘My Shoes’ by Charles Simic, the shoe is secret face of your inner life. Worn everyday, shoes become part of you; they go with you, take you places, know your every move, where you’re going and where you’ve been: https://www.poetryfoundation.org/poems/42948/my-shoes
‘The Broken Sandal’ by Denise Levertov is a meditation on life: https://www.poets.org/poetsorg/poem/broken-sandal
A particular favourite of mine is ‘New Shoes’ by Honor Moore, a sensual poem: https://www.poets.org/poetsorg/poem/new-shoes
What I would like you to do is focus on shoes: they may be in a shop window or on feet, your own or somebody else’s. If they are in a shop window, think about who might buy them. If they are on somebody’s feet, look at how well they fit. Are they clean or muddy? Look at the colour and texture. What are they made of?
Allow your imagination to take flight; for example, do the shoes have magical properties or are they able to loosen their tongues and talk? What would they say?
Think about the person wearing the shoes. How do they walk? Where are they going? What do they want and what’s stopping them from getting it?
The challenge is to write a poem, of any length or form, about footwear: stilettos, Wellington boots, hobnail boots, sandals, slippers, ballet shoes – it’s up to you, just as long as the poem is new.
If you are new to dVerse, here’s how to join in:
- Write a poem in response to the challenge;
- Enter a link directly to your poem and your name by clicking Mr Linky below;
- There you will find links to other poets, and more will join so check back to see more poems;
- Read and comment on other poet’s work, we all come here to have our poems read;
- Please link back to dVerse from your site/blog;
- Comment and participate in our discussion below, if you like. We are a friendly bunch of poets.
- Have fun.
I look forward to stepping into your shoes.
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Good evening, happy Tuesday, and welcome to Poetics! Bjorn just beat me to it and posted the first poem, which I am looking forward to reading. I can’t wait to start walking in all your different shoes!
I wrote mine and posted quickly… 🙂 A great prompt with so many aspects.
Thanks, Bjorn, I’ve noticed that! You and Toni have produced such stunners.
we must have thought in the same way… must be the news that influence us.
Hi Kim! Hi everybody! Happy Tuesday. It is cool and rainy here (side effects from Harvey). Pray for those who are living this trauma.
So much to worry for with all that rain.
And the storm surge from the ocean – up to 12 feet is that surge. The drains were not designed to deal with that much rain so quickly. I can’t watch the news anymore. It is so sad – heartbreaking. People losing their homes, their possessions, their pets….seeing a picture of a woman with her newborn in her arms being carried to a boat by a big male rescuer…the baby wrapped in a pink blanket….heart rending.
That is so heartbreaking. I see the news but for you all it is no close to home and most poets stateside probably know or know of people caught up in it. I have a friend who lived in Austin but I think he moved. I haven’t seen anything from him on Facebook.
Austin is far from Houston but they still got the murderous rain. It just goes on and on – the heartbreak.
I’m learning so much more about the USA since I joined dVerse!
Hey! We’re fun to learn about – hot dogs, bottle trees, like totally bitchin’ dude, and all that stuff.
“murderous rain” — such a brilliant phrase. Praying for ALL affected.
They will all need our help in the days to come. Already the Red Cross and Salvation Army are posting ways to help.
I saw a while ago that a police officer was drowned trying to effect a rescue. Heartbreaking all the way around. I wish I could go, but my immune system won’t let me. I can’t help but think of “Greater love than this…”
I know. I heard that on the news as well. His commander kept breaking down. It is so sad when someone loses their life in order to go about saving many.
Hello all. This prompt took me to some of the darkest moments of history…
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Love this. Thanks so much for the inspiration, Kim. Back soon to read.
🙂
Just in case anyone wonders why I haven’t commented on their poem, I’m having intermittent connection problems. So far, I have been able to continue after a while. If I’m disconnected for longer, I promise I will be back!
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Shoes! Do I need to say more? From dversepoets.com
Thank you so much for the reblog!
🙂
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Thanks for hosting, Kim. I’ve added one about shoes and because you mentioned magic above I included fairy tales. Hopefully it makes some sense.
It certainly does, Frank!
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A short little poem for me! Great prompt, thanks! 😊
Thank you! I’ll be over to read in a bit.
Thanks! 😊
I’ve been out the better part of two days, I have a few older shoe poems. If I can maybe I can change them up a bit and hop in.
I look forward to reading them Victoria. Since you wrote this, I’ve been to bed and now I’m up again! I’ll be reading and commenting shortly.
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I will be back tomorrow to finish visiting and commenting. Thanks for this jog to my memory… another Grandmother attic story… I loved her attic.
I’ll keep my eyes peeled, Margaret and look forward to reading it!
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your shoe prompt took me off in a slightly tangential direction – a bit like the ‘broken sandal’ – very interesting collection of shoe poems in this closet
That’s what I love about dVerse – it’s so diverse!
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Sneaking in at the last minute with a new one.
I’ll be over to read shortly!
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Writing first time for dVersePoets, enjoyed a lot. Now I will be regular contributor :))
Thanks for joining us and I look forward to reading more of your work. 😊
Oh Kim….so sorry I did not get to this one. The prompt is a wonderful one but we had our grandkids from Sunday till Wednesday evening…so I missed this. Perhaps shall apply to an OLN or maybe I can still get to it before Mr Linky closes….Looks like great participation!
I think Mr Linky is still open but it would be a nice one to do for next week’s OLN. I followed your photos on Facebook and it looked like you were having a great time.
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