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abecedarius, Acrostic, Alice Pleasance Liddell, alphabestiary, Lewis Carroll, Lewis Turco, Mercer Mayer, mesostich, Samuel Peralta, telestich
Hello. This is Frank Hubeny. The form for the next two days is the acrostic. We haven’t had this as a challenge before although Samuel Peralta provided an example a few years ago: https://dversepoets.com/2012/11/22/form-for-all-giving-thanks/
To write an acrostic poem, take a word or phrase and use each letter as the first letter of each line in the poem. One should be able to read that word or phrase vertically down the left side of the poem. There are no other constraints. Each line can be metrical or free verse or even a prose poem paragraph.
There are many variations to the acrostic form, all of which are acceptable for this challenge. Lewis Turco in his “The Book of Forms” even provided names for some of these variations.
Suppose instead of using the first letter in each line, one uses the last letter in each line. There is a name for that acrostic-type form. It is called a “telestich”.
But why limit oneself to the first or last letters of each line? Why not pick a letter in the middle of each line of the poem. That, believe it or not, also has a name according to Turco. It is called a “mesostich”.
From this point it just gets more complicated. Why limit oneself to only the first letter of each line or the last letter of each line or some middle letters? If one has a word on both the first and the last letters, that is called a “compound acrostic”. If the words are the same, it is called a “double acrostic”. I suppose one could have three or more words going down the lines of the poem, but I could not find a name for that in Turco’s work.
A special kind of acrostic uses each letter of the alphabet in a 26-line poem. That is called an “abecedarius”. There are many children’s books providing examples of that.
There is even something called an “alphabestiary”. For this, one goes through the alphabet, as for the abecedarius, but each letter begins the description of a fabulous beast. As an example of this, Lill Halberg recommended a children’s book by Mercer Mayer, Professor Wormbog in Search for the Zipperump-a-Zoo. Although mainly about the Zipperump-a-Zoo, it does list the rest of the beasts. If you know any others let me know in the comments section.
As an example here is Lewis Carroll’s “A Boat Beneath a Sunny Sky” read by Tom O’Bedlam. The initial letters of this poem give the name of the real Alice: ALICE PLEASANCE LIDDELL. (YouTube Channel Source: SpokenVerse)
The challenge is to write an acrostic poem (or telestich, mesostich, double acrostic, compound acrostic, abecedarius, alphabestiary or some other variation you might come up with where the letters of a word or phrase are somehow present vertically through the lines). It can be on any topic you want. Any other constraints, such using metrical or free verse, are up to you.
To participate, post your acrostic or acrostic-like poem on your blog. Copy the link to your post and paste it in the Mister Linky below. Leave a comment here if you like. Perhaps we can discuss acrostics in more detail? Visit the other people who have also linked their poems. That is how we get to know each other better.
Hello! The bar is open for those brave enough to write an acrostic poem–or something like it.
Hello Frank… acrostic is one form I never felt attracted to… but once I started to write (selecting the right word) — it wrote itself…
Happy Thursday to everyone.
The one I will be posting in a few minutes is only the third one I’ve ever written.
I think it’s about the same for me.
Hi Frank! I’ve worked with acrostics before, mainly when I was teaching. This is the first tiem I’ve really explored the form. It was tricky and I hope I’ve done your prompt justice. 🙂
I’m sure you’ve done it justice. It is a new form for me as well. I’ll be reading it shortly.
🙂
Very nice formatting to your acrostic. You used both the first letters and the last but not on the same lines. I like the approach!
Thanks Frank!
Thanks for hosting, Frank! I’m back, after a short hiatus with our grand kids staying with us — hence I just finished reading Monday’s Quads and never (sadly) got my shoes over to the Tuesday prompt.
Acrostics are fun to work with….great prompt!
Thanks, Lillian! This is a new form for me, but with some practice over the past week, I may do more of these in the future.
For the record, your poem illustrates the “palindrome acrostic”. A double acrostic with the word being a palindrome.
I found Mercer Mayer, or rather Professor Wormbog’s brother, reading the story of the Zipperump-a-Zoo on YouTube.
LOVE it! Will have to show my grandkids. Thanks for finding this, Frank!
I briefly looked around for other alphabestiaries, but this is the best one so far.
I searched tor words to use and stumbled on this….
https://www.buzzfeed.com/danieldalton/bob-ombinate?utm_term=.ay5Z0DKXK#.ht00Bl8d8
Some of those words I’ve never heard of before.
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Hi Frank! You are the KING of forms giving all this information I never knew about or to be honest, never cared about as acrostic poetry always seemed geared to children. Thank you for turning me on to the Adult side of Acrostic Poetry. Once I found the word, the poem wrote itself. I hope it does justice to you and to the form.
I also thought it was a form for children or a way to send secret messages.
Oh, fun, Frank! This has been on my mind since you posted one recently. I won’t have time today, but perhaps tomorrow. . . 🙂
I am glad you find the form interesting. Tomorrow is fine and there will be other prompts if it doesn’t happen. Thanks, Merril!
Ha, I grew up on acrostics. My Dad, who was a poet, created them for family members who were having a birthday, the letters being those of their name, given names and surnames getting a verse each. Nowadays I sometimes like to play with first word acrostics, a form I learned from Debi Swim, where you take a sentence (perhaps a quotation from someone else) and use each word as the first word of a line in your poem. I’ll see if I can come up with one of them later (busy day ahead).
That’s a great variation on the acrostic idea! I may try that myself in a future poem.
Your poem was a good example illustrating the “first word acrostic”, which is what I will call it going forward, using a quote rather than a word.
Thank you. This one proved really hard! (Perhaps because of the subject matter.)
You handled the content well by looking at both sides of a difficult problem in those two parts.
🙂
Hi, y’all! Just popping in for a moment. I’ll be back later to peruse. Frank, I’ll take an Old Fashioned, if you don’t mind. The world might be a better place with a few Old Fashions down the hatch.
Here’s a pitcher of Old Fashioned, Charley!
Thank you, sirrah!
I was going to post a abcedarius I wrote in 2010 but found I posted it again in 2014. Oh well. Let’s see if a can find time to write something. Life has been out of control this year…almost all year. I love this form. Thanks, Frank.
I think you could link the old one if you wanted to unless the poems are expected to be new poems here. Old or new is fine with me.
If I can’t come up with something by tomorrow morning I will do it. Lot’s of new folk.
I haven’t read it. A new one is good, too!
I love acrostics! I’ll be back with one before the Linky runs out!
Great! I think it should stay active until Saturday sometime for a total of about two days.
I made it I’m so happy!
I’m glad you did! Thanks for linking it, Bekkie!
It has been some time since I’ve written an acrostic. This was fun. Thanks, Frank!
That was a beautiful poem, Jennifer! Thank you for linking it!
I finished posting my acrostic and will be around to read in the next couple of days. So happy I made it this week I’ve been so busy! I do like writing with this form.
Have a nice end to your week everyone! Hugs!
You made it! Enough of an abecedarius to count as one. Thanks for linking it, Bekkie!
Thank you! Hugs!
I decided to come out and play as this looked fun, thanks for the prompt I’ll be around for a bit and tomorrow to read all the delightful poetry
Very nice poem! Thank you for linking it with us.
Hello everyone and thank you for hosting this lovely prompt Frank! I am a bit late to the bar and am linking my first ever compound acrostic poem here :o) Have to go and feed the whippets just now and will be back after lunch to read xxx
Very nice compound acrostic!
Thank you Frank ☺
It’s a challenge finding words that fit. 🙂
I find the form challenging. I usually think of a poem based on how it sounds. With this form I have to pay attention to how it looks like on the page.
Your poem about the hurricane met both of your criteria. That as when I realized acrostics can be fun and exciting. Before that, I had the impression that it was a kid poem considering that my school aged children often have that as part of their writing assignments.
It can be a good form for children especially those abecedarious or alphabestiary ones that go right through the alphabet. Based on what I’ve seen linked here they work for adults as well, as you mentioned. They do seem to add structure to the poem and additional information like a subtitle might provide. I think I will try these more often.
Hi Frank,
Haven’t ever tried it but after reading this post am going to give it a shot. Once done, will let you know how it turns out.
I love writing acrostics! I’ve written a couple lately but don’t yet have one that I’d like to post.
I am becoming more interested in acrostics after seeing what others have written. I’ve only written three so far, all this past week.
Nice one on libraries! Thanks for linking it!
I wrote a compound acrostic on drought. Seems wrong when Houston is underwater but the northwest is breaking records of no rain.
The rain doesn’t seem to be distributed where it is most needed.
I’m late. It may be my middle name. I will try to visit you all. If I like but don’t comment, please know that sometimes I just don’t know what to say–because I’m awed, because I’m unfamiliar, because…just because. 🙂
I have the same problem with comments. Sometimes I don’t know what to say in a comment even on a poem that I understand and I found enjoyable. Thank you for linking up your poem, Sascha!
Thanks, Frank. I have that issue with poetry, but not so fiction. I think it’s a comfort level thing.