Tags
Hello my fellow partners-in-crime-poets! Happy Haibun Monday. It is almost the first of September, a time to which many means that summer is dying. Well…not quite. It will not be officially autumn until September 22, the Autumnal Equinox. However, summer is winding down and soon fall will be gearing up with all of its blazing colors, fruits and veggies indicative of the season, cooler air and maybe the first frost. But summer is still swinging on the swingset, still swimming in the lake, still picnicking away. This is the season between seasons…the almost but not quite time of the year. It could be in between winter and spring, spring and summer, summer and fall and fall and winter.
I was thinking intensely of the Japanese word, komorebi (koe moe ray bee) which means specifically light that is filtered between leaves and usually occurring in spring and fall…but in that in-between-season. I would like you all to write a haibun about how you are affected by season changes, if you do any special activities, what you have done in the past or have planned for the future season between seasons: vacations, birthday celebrations, weddings, starting to school or the birth of a child or grandchild, staring anew job, or being fired, retiring or starting a new job, freezing or canning up the last of summer’s bounty, making food that is geared to cooler weather (chili, certain soups or stews, baked chicken, etc.) taking walks (how does this time of year smell to you, feel or look to you), putting out more wild bird feeders and suet cakes, anything that brings to mind, to smell, to taste, to feeling this in-between-season.

Komorebi – Copyright Kanzensakura
The directions are simple:
– One to three tight paragraphs
– Ending with a classic haiku. Please note: there must be a season word in the haiku that tells us the when of the poem. If there is no season word, you do not have a haiku. The syllable count is negligible but…the season word marks the difference between a haiku and a senryu or micropoem. Japanese haiku poets often use a saijiki or a season word almanac/directry. PLEASE write your haiku with that mind. Season words can include but are not limited to sleet, sunburn, beach, watermelon, cold air, warm air, autumn blue skies, etc. There are over 15,000 season words in the saijiki. You may also use something like a county fair, state fair (usually held in this odd time in the US) or snow or snow skiing, football (either or American or any other nationality football. also include a cutting word in the haiku. Haiku are writing without capitalization and punctuation – except for the short dash. Haiku are written to be read in one breath with the short dash indicating a brief aspiration.
– Put a link on your page to this post
– Link your haibun to Mr. Linky below.
Have fun. Enjoy yourselves. And please, share this with other poetic friends. Make the rounds. Comment on others’ haibun and yes, comment before they comment on your haibun. Get to know your fellow poets. Talk, engage, say…thank you in response to a comment.
Happy Monday…
Autumn came with full force today… wet with rain. It’s all over us now.
Hi folks. Sorry to be late. I am on serious pain meds for my back and I….went to sleep. But at any rate, I have the makings for a wonderful Brazilian drink for you all on hand…dark rum. cane sugar syrup, and limes. Belly up to the Bar!
Oh… you can make me a caperinha? On a Monday… 🙂
Hey, it is Labor Day in the US…almost everyone is having an extended weekend. Go for it. I’ll make you a nice big one.
Happy Monday folks ~ Sunny day today but cool afternoon ~ Still enjoying the summer warmth ~ Thanks Toni for hosting ~
Always happy to host haibun Monday!
Happy Monday everone and thank you for hosting tonight Toni! We notice the subtle changes as Summer transiitions into Autumn without changing our own behaviour very much, since the weather is still very sunny and mild. I have linked a haibun I posted earlier today and will swing by soon to read :o) xxx
What a wonderful challenge! I love, love, love haibun Mondays. Wish I could participate in some other forms, but we do what we can. By the end of the week, we are told that we will have October like weather. Yahoo! Today it’s 86, and hot…
Wow. It is 86 up here as well. I like the weather reports but have gotten so I don’t trust them.
I love the start of September. It’s the new year for me, really. Sharpened pencils, new stationery, a bit of zing and energy after the lazy days of summer.
Sounds wonderful. A bit of zing and energy after the lazy days of summer….I like that!
Evening all. It is quiet here. The rain has been falling heavy this last hour. The turn is upon us. Timely prompt. I have served up my offering. That rum sounds fine. I’ll take a glass.
It is a delish and potent drink! A Brazilian friend introduced me to it several years ago. It is a fine drink for changing seasons…summery enough to cool you off, potent enough to warm you up!
Hit me up again 😉 That one went down nice n smooth.
I’ll get you a bigger glass! 🙂
Just in case no one spots it…my poem is also an acrostic 😉
Paul, you are so good with your puzzles and riddles hidden in your poems
Sneaky is what I am 😉
Yppers. Are you sure they didn’t base the Riddler in Batman on you?
😉
Good evening everyone! Just back from choir. I’ll just make a warm drink and then I’ll post, read and comment.
How about some warm cider with an apple slice floating in it?
Now that’s a great idea for later on – I’ve only just got up and I’m waiting for the telephone man!
Okay, to spend some time here at the pub, here is you all’s first kanji lesson:
木 ko, tree 漏 mo or moreru – to leak, to come through 日 (hi, “sun; sunlight”).[1][2] The hi changes to bi as an instance of rendaku (連濁).
Wish I hadn’t drunk all that Rum now 😉
LOL, you ought to try to speak the language when ripped on sake….
I got very ripped on sake in Hiroshima. Walking was about as much as I could handle afterwards. Words. No chance.
HaHa and the chrysanthemum sake (a season word!) made only in the fall will literally bury you….
Oops – sorry! Just remembered I forgot to leave a comment!
Thanks for an inspiring prompt Toni.
Anna :o]
You don’t have to leave a comment but I am glad you did.
I am off for a bit to fix dinner – quiche. easy peasy. I will be back later to check on comments and other posted haibun. Y’all have fun!
I’m joining in, but you may be sorry I came to the party…this in-between season makes me irritable. So, perhaps I’m that party-pooper today. We’ve had an unseasonably HOT summer in central California, with no end in sight.
And wild fires. I say, when it comes to participating…everybody in the pool! You are always welcome. And sometimes, we need a good smile to make us smile!
Thanks for welcoming my smarty prose here. Everyone’s welcome to swim in my backyard pool…heated naturally of course by the CA ☀️. The wildfires came close to our backyard, but we brushed the ash off our shoulders. Whew. I’ll be glad when this summer’s over.
I am glad the wildfires missed you. It must have been frightening. You write smarty prose? I never would have guessed! huge grin
more like smart-alecky poems and prose:)
🙂
I finally have mine linked. Thanks for hosting, Toni!
You are most welcome. I love to post Haibun Monday. Good to see you.
Good evening , friends! I posted but the computer screen and my brain are giving me a migraine. I woll be back to read tomorrow morning. Have a great night!
I am sorry to read this. Take care of yourself and stop by for the next couple of days as you wish!
I so love haibuns and thank you so very much for hosting!
I finally got mine up. Thank you for hosting, Toni.
And now we have another prompt for Haibun Monday…Thank you for posting. I will read it later. I am looking forward to it.