Welcome to Scribbling for Poetics. This evening I want us to take a look at Grammar, THE RULES, and how to break them. ( I have thought long and hard this evening about the prompt and if to change but I considered so many different directions to reflect what is happening in the world that I just went round in circles!) If the current state of things needs to find its way into your work, I trust that it will, Grammar or no.
Let me begin by offering a couple of fine examples.
anyone lived in a pretty how town
By ee cummingsanyone lived in a pretty how town
(with up so floating many bells down)
spring summer autumn winter
he sang his didn’t he danced his did.Women and men (both little and small)
cared for anyone not at all
they sowed their isn’t they reaped their same
sun moon stars rainchildren guessed (but only a few
and down they forgot as up they grew
autumn winter spring summer)
that noone loved him more by morewhen by now and tree by leaf
she laughed his joy she cried his grief
bird by snow and stir by still
anyone’s any was all to hersomeones married their everyones
laughed their cryings and did their dance
(sleep wake hope and then)they
said their nevers they slept their dreamstars rain sun moon
(and only the snow can begin to explain
how children are apt to forget to remember
with up so floating many bells down)one day anyone died i guess
(and noone stooped to kiss his face)
busy folk buried them side by side
little by little and was by wasall by all and deep by deep
and more by more they dream their sleep
noone and anyone earth by april
with by spirit and if by yes.Women and men (both dong and ding)
summer autumn winter spring
reaped their sowing and went their came
sun moon stars rainA Carafe, that is a Blind Glass
by Gertrude SteinA kind in glass and a cousin a spectacle and nothing strange a single hurt color and an arrangement in a system to pointing. All this and not ordinary, not unordered in not resembling. The difference is spreading
So hopefully the challenge is quite clear.
Pen please a word of poetical prose.
Rhyme it may do so or not so maybe.
At all attention to grammar pay no.
You luck good I wish
set your on
marks get
go!
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- Enter a link directly to your one poem and your name by clicking Mr Linky below. There you will find links to other poets and more will join during the next day or so.
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- Enjoy!
Good evening everyone. I look forward to reading your poems over the course of the next few hours. Getting chilly here so I’ve loaded the bar with Hot Toddy’s and Hot Spiced Rum Punch. See you on the trail.
Sounds absolutely divine…. a bit chilly here as well
I’m all over this, baby.
Surprised not!
😛
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This was a fun prompt but it was a bit hard to make sense of my result… probably more Gertrude Stein than ee
On my way over now Bjorn. Sense or not I’m sure it’s of your usual high standard.
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Scribbling Paul, but a tractor not–good it be hosting done by expertise in libation, iconoclast, never the king, quill or lens dangerous, ferreting examples of truth without candor, compassion yet prevails.
This could be your entry Glenn 😉
Oh you’re a tricky drummer, Paul, and this prompt was so hard to get my hard around but so much fun! I just hope I’ve approached it from the right (obtuse) angle. I’ve been so busy today I might have to post, quickly read and comment on a few, and then retire for the night. But I will return in the morning.
Over to read soon. Busy day here too included falling off a chair ( Well actually breaking a chair under me)!!!
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Poem to write excite but not but scared but maybe but excited but not.
Welcome aboard Vivian.
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Oh no. This was really hard. I’m not very good at loosening up on grammar. I was too well trained.
Hi All! Silly Jilly here tonight (I’ve locked that Other Jilly in the closet to cool her heels.) I do love the chance to break the rules and be but badly. My post is brewing and will set to chewing on y’all’s fine words, eschewing… or something like that. 🙂
Thanks for hosting, Paul!
Pleasure is all mine. Can’t wait to see what you silly up for us.
Posted – by the way, I love the title on poetics! My own daughter called my mom ‘Grammer,’ so it works for me 🙂 Toddying up to the bar!
This was so tough.
It is I agree tough but mostly because it takes us, as writers, completely outside our comfort zone into a place where we begin to judge what we do perhaps, because of the rules we are breaking.
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Had to write a second one, mostly for fun.
woo hoo…over in a mo.
Paul, I sertinly edmire th’weigh youcomundun. Have another on me! And poor me wutyurhaving.
Lining em up Charlie. Toddy’s without the hot 😉
Shirley Templing it, are we? Sobeit.
So much fun out there tonight..a real lift of the spirits. Much appreciated. Very early start tomorrow so I’ll be nipping off to nod shortly but will be peeking a boo here and there. G’night Grandma.
Maybe it’s truly a lift of spirits… I felt best when I pretended to be drunk when writing
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Thanks for the fun – we need to do this more often
Thanks Maureen
I love ee cummings, and this is one of his most charming.
Great prompt but time? we’ll see…(K)
Fingers toed 😉
Paul, I must tell you again how very much I adore this prompt. But I am a Las Vegan, and just can’t seem to write yet. At all. Love to you all, and just wanted to say I can’t wait to come back and read these, at a later date. ❤
Hi De. Completely understand. Much love to you and yours. The muse will return I am sure. This prompt was made for your poetic gifts.
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Morning all. I have a full day of drumming in a Primary school so will be back later to catch up on reading. The prompt will remain open until tomorrow. Keep em coming.
😛
Soooo late to the bar. As in your title here, Paul, I was being Grandma yesterday, helping out with kids. So — late posting. I did have fun with this prompt!
Nice to see you here Lillian. Over to read soon.
Question: I posted a new poem today. Someone brought to my attention that your prompt deals with breaking grammar rules. Does my new poem fit your criteria?
If so, can I post it on the link. I’ll leave such decisions.
Go ahead and post Charliezero.
Are you sure? I want to respect the rules of dVerse.
Yeah. Post up.
I already did. 🙂
I’ll get round to it later. Thanks for posting.
🙂
This was quite the challenge but I liked it a lot and it took me out of my comfort zone and it made me lose all sense of logic and writing credibility and somehow it brought out some silliness on an otherwise very strange day and then it made me write this run on sentence because that’s what it’s all about….you put your left foot in…oh never mind.
Seriously….great prompt, Paul!
Thanks Mish. Over to read shortly.
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A bit dark, I’m afraid. And with help from the Dada poetry generator.
Don’t be afraid of dark 😉 Look forward to reading.
Actually…in this case I think we should perhaps show a little more alarm.
Perhaps. I personally think the gun laws in the USA are not going to change sufficiently to alter things.
I’m sure that Congress will do nothing, the only thing they seem to be good at at the moment…
But that doesn’t mean something could not be done, and I’m not going to pretend there is not a problem and act like it’s OK. I don’t think it’s OK.
I think there are obvious solutions with regard to tyhe type of gun you can own as a start point and I would be pushing for that if I lived there. From the outside looking in it seems as if the NRA have too much power.
It’s so strange that the NRA has managed to get such a political strangle on Congress. I don’t understand it.
The only reason to own an automatic weapon is to kill lots of people. Who wants that? And yet people do…
Strange indeed.
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Glad I could still squeeze in this Thursday morning…I saw your prompt late yesterday and had to try it…started out not planning to touch any of the blimps hanging over us but something about no rules, new rules, made it happen.