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Hello, this is Frank Hubeny. The topic for the haibun today is “pleasantly surprised”. We have done a similar theme of the unexpected five years ago with ManicDoaily’s “Unexpected Poetics”: https://dversepoets.com/2012/09/22/unexpected-poetics/
What is a haibun? A haibun is a combination of a prose section and a haiku. Put them together and you have a haibun.
When I first wrote a haibun a year ago I was puzzled that people called this “poetry”. It looked to me like prose with a haiku at the end. However, I was pleasantly surprised by the form. It broke me out of my expectations of what I could be writing. Since then I’ve used it as a start into writing flash fiction.
For this prompt let’s limit the prose part to roughly 200 words. This word-limit will hopefully increase the chance that readers will read more carefully what we have written.
For those new to participating at dVerse there is a Mister Linky. It will be active for one week. Click on it. This opens a page where you can enter your name and the link to your blog post. When you do that your post will join a list containing other posts. Check your link to make sure it works as you expected. If not, let me know in the comment section below and I will try to fix it.
For those who aren’t familiar with what to do with that list of perhaps 20 other links, I recommend being open to being pleasantly surprised by what you’ll see. Click on the links and add comments as you feel appropriate. Refresh the page over the coming week to see what is new and repeat being pleasantly surprised.
Frank Hubeny said:
Welcome! The pub is open!
Björn Rudberg (brudberg) said:
Hello Frank… I liked the prompt a lot and it actually made me think about being pleasantly surprised on a Monday in December… it actually made me more positive so this was great.
Frank Hubeny said:
I’m glad! Being positive is a good achievement for any day although it may be difficult on some of them.
Vivian Zems said:
Hi Frank! Kindly make me a cocktail while I get mine ready. I’m looking forward to being pleasantly surprised by my fellow poets . Great prompt!
Frank Hubeny said:
They are usually a pleasant surprise. Cocktail coming up. I enjoyed your haibun about that gift and how you used it.
Vivian Zems said:
Thanks , Frank! As I did yours😊
kanzensakura said:
Fun prompt and interesting subject for a haibun. I will be along later to read and comment! Thank you for hosting!
Frank Hubeny said:
Thanks for posting, Toni! I think the first haibun I wrote was for one of your prompts here last year.
revivedwriter said:
I have no idea what to write but hope to be pleasantly surprised by whatever comes up. 🙂
Frank Hubeny said:
🙂 A couple hours before this went live I didn’t know what I was going to write for this. I was pleasantly surprised something happened at all.
kim881 said:
Hello Frank! Hello intrepid poets! I just got back from a very long, intense school governors meeting. I had to drive back in the dark and snow, and now I’m exhausted. Great prompt, Frank. I will post in the morning as I’m off to bed. Night everyone. I’ll be back to read early tomorrow. Looking forward to it. 😊
Frank Hubeny said:
It sounds stressful. I prefer mornings for writing. See you tomorrow!
Frank J. Tassone said:
Evening, Poets! Thanks for this pleasantly surprising prompt, Frank. How about a glass of burgundy as I peruse other pleasant surprises?
Frank Hubeny said:
Coming right up! I’ll be reading your haibun shortly.
jazzytower said:
Hi Frank,
Thanks for hosting. I like the prompt, a positive one with all the goings on in my neck of the woods. Thanks.
Frank Hubeny said:
A positive perspective is healthy. I hope things are not too stressful where you are.
jazzytower said:
Thank you Frank. I just need to stop watching the news for a little bit..
Frank Hubeny said:
We solved that problem by canceling our cable subscription. But there still is the internet.
jazzytower said:
Yes, it’s hard to escape.
jazzytower said:
Aagh!!I forgot to say Good Evening everyone☺
Frank Hubeny said:
Good evening, Pat!
X said:
Alright, I am in.
And I kept it acceptable for all audiences.
Ha.
Frank Hubeny said:
I am glad you linked a haibun with us.
X said:
as welcoming as ever.
Charley said:
Hi, Frank — and fellow dVersians. I’m a tad under the weather, so I doubt something will end up set down “on paper” as I persist in saying. However, I will glance through the gallery. Who knows? Inspiration may strike… if for no other purpose than setting a tree ablaze.
Frank Hubeny said:
I hope you feel better, Charley. I hear you had some snow.
Charley said:
In Orlando?!? Only for the tourists! It feels cold enough, though.
lillian said:
Ah….I’m right there with you Charley….I was “gifted” by my grand daughter a few days after I helped out by staying home with her when she was ill. So – here’s to you and I both feeling better very soon!
Charley said:
L’chaim!
Jane Swanson said:
Nice surprise prompt
Frank Hubeny said:
Thank you, Jane!
rothpoetry said:
A great prompt Frank. I really enjoyed writing this one.
Dwight
Frank Hubeny said:
Thank you for linking one, Dwight!
lillian said:
Thanks for hosting, Frank. I’ve been, as they say, under the weather with congestion/cough that I’m quite certain was “gifted” to me from my grandchild — I helped out by staying with her when she was home from school ill last week. Glad to help out there — but just wish she’d not been so generous with her germs 😦
Your prompt stumped me — and then I thought back to something that still irritates me and makes me surprised these days at my lack of response.
Will be reading this morning…looking forward to some surprises! 🙂
And then this afternoon, will be hosting Poetics. Hope to see you there too.
Frank Hubeny said:
I hope you’re feeling better, Lillian. Oddly, I didn’t know what I was going to write for this prompt until a couple hours before the start. I should have written the poem first and then the prompt. Sometimes the surprises come as a response to irritation. I have something for your Poetics prompt although I am still editing it.
Singledust said:
i love this uplifting prompt, thank you Frank for that lovely inspiration to write something pleasant.
Frank Hubeny said:
I am glad you liked this, Gina! Uplifting topics are good not only for the writer but the reader.
angieinspired said:
Thanks for the haibun prompt Frank. Pomegranates are just what the doctor ordered.
Frank Hubeny said:
Pomegranates can be pleasantly surprising.
whippetwisdom said:
Thank you for this lovely prompt Frank! I have linked a haibun about a surprise and will swing by to read after walking the whippets :o)
Frank Hubeny said:
Thank you for linking a haibun, Xenia! I can see how that sign was a pleasant surprise.
memadtwo said:
Thanks for the inspiration Frank! (K)
Frank Hubeny said:
Thanks for linking with us! Nice haibun about the unexpected.
memadtwo said:
Thanks Frank. If I had more time, I’d be here more often!
Trådløs said:
Hello Frank, nice to meet you. I may give this a try later this week.
Frank Hubeny said:
I hope you do! Haibun are a good mixture of prose and very short poetry.
merrildsmith said:
A lovely prompt, Frank. I’ve added mine, and I’ll come back to read more later.
Hope all the people who weren’t feeling well are feeling better now!
Frank Hubeny said:
Thanks, Merril! I hope they are as well.