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Welcome to Haibun Monday!
I am Jilly, your unorthodox host and bar-tender for this edition of Haibun. I am here to rattle the cages of structure and suggest some non-traditional writing in the realm of the Haibun form. While this won’t qualify as Avant Garde Poetry, I am asking you to put on the attitude of the artist who defies the status quo, as artists and poets have done for centuries. Before we can push the boundaries of the Haibun form, let’s take a quick look at what conventional Haibun consists of, because, if we are going to bend the rules, we need to know the rules.
Haibun combines prose poetry and Haiku. Usually the prose portion is one or two concise paragraphs and is followed by a traditional Haiku that serves as a post-script to the prose. Haiku, in the strictest sense, includes a traditional Kigo word, normally in the second line, that gives the reader a road sign regarding the current season.
This is where I want to encourage innovation, my fellow poets. Seasons are a nebulous thing and the traditional Kigo words are based on the seasons in one part of the world, so unless you live and write in Japan, your seasons are, well, your seasons.
Here in Central Florida, we never see snow and only drop into freezing temperatures a few times each year. Our seasons include the dry season, which leads into fire season, followed closely by the rainy season (summer), which fades and gives way to tourist season. Yes, we call it that here. Tourist season is earmarked by crowded roadways and confused drivers who are lost and often pointing excitedly at sights and attractions or things with mouse ears. Hurricane season officially runs from June through November. As a school teacher, we also give a nod to Testing Season, a time when student anxiety and teacher exhaustion run high. Oh, and one other very important season here is Gator Mating Season (late spring) when you might hear the bellowing love call of an ancient dinosaur-type creature in the middle of the night. Most everyone is familiar with the ‘Holiday Season’ regardless of the holiday(s) being celebrated. You know what your unique seasons are where you live; celebrate that spirit of uniqueness!
Skeptical? Here are just a few poets who have defied conventions; T.S. Eliot, Langston Hughes, Allen Ginsburg, and Nikki Giovanni. You’re in good company.
“Avant-garde poetry unequivocally declares its opposition to styles of writing, and thinking…” Anis Shivani
Be Avant Garde; be unconventional; bend and break the rules! You are artists and it is what artists do! Let us blaze a non-normative path with our Haibuns!
New to dVerse? Here’s the way to join us!
- Write a poem as the prompt suggests, and post it to your blog.
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And most importantly, please do read some of the other responses to the prompt and add a short comment or reaction. Everyone likes to be appreciated! The prompt is “live” all week – as you’ll notice by the comments you’ll receive – so please stop by another day and read a few of the latecomers too!
Welcome, my poetic friends! Hope you all have a great week ahead 🙂
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Hello, we had the perfect kigo of Sweden… midsummer… may it be added to the list. I think there are international kigo, and I definitely is all in favor of finding your own season…
Hey, Jilly! Love the prompt. I gave up doing these awhile back — too poet-in-a-box for my tastes. Not everyone lives in the shadow of only one mountain. I’ll be posted in a second.
So glad you are joining in!
Hi Jilly and good evening dVerse Poets! I love this prompt but I’m not sure if I’ve got it right. I have to post and go this evening as I’m still marking exams. But I’ll be back in the morning to read and comment.
I was going to write to this prompt today but will no do so. A haibun stands on its own. It is hard enuff getting people to respect the form. Fauxbun is what thus should be called instead if haibun. Just when I think the screwing around with Japanese forms cannot get worse I see your prompt today.
I apologize if you are offended and refer you back to Oscar Wilde 🙂 Have a great week!
Hi Jilly and all dVerse folks! Just back from running some errands to collect fun stuff for our upcoming 4th of July weekend.
Well — I had fun with this one — unconventional…double words (seems – seams)…no capitalization…and injecting a tourist season to the end. My title is a shout out to a guy named Mr. Bun 🙂 …and sadly it also became an elegy to the Kapoho area of the Big Island.
PS: Toni – you are absolutely the queen of haibun and I assure you….we shall all go back to writing traditional haibun next time. In fact, I am responsible for a haibun prompt in July and was hoping to run my ideas by you before posting them. 🙂
I actually think that keeping true to the form and moving to your local kigo makes total sense… many of the Japanese Kigo I have no connection to… I know a lot of my local one and could suggest a few. Maypole, Christmas tree… but there are also many Japanese I can use….
The most avant-garde I have done is replacing the haiku with an American sentence…
Ginsberg meets Basho.
Thanks, Bjorn! I came across a list of Kigo words for Florida last year and suddenly the form made so much more sense to me; personalized it.
I also sneaked in an Amerian Sentence into mine.
Hey Jilly, and all. haibuns are not my fav, which sometimes makes them a more authentic write. Well I’m feeling rather cynical today. And remarkably the weather here has been fantastic, bright and dry with a cool wind blowing. -Eric
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Thanks for the haibun challenge, Jilly. I never understood what those kigo words were in a haiku. I don’t know if I was doing it right or not. So, I changed the haiku to a couplet hoping I didn’t distort the haibun too much.
It works for me, but I’m a rebel. I liked that you did a couplet – it is so very Frank 🙂
Enjoyed the prompt and the creative responses. Clever bunch here.
So glad! You are a wonderful addition to that cleverness.
Ah, thanks Jilly.
Thanks for hosting Jilly ~ I am hitting the poetry trail now ~ Happy Monday to all ~
My pleasure, Grace! Have a great week!
Evening, Poets! Great prompt, Jilly! I offer up the avant gard of a senryu-based haibun! See everyone on the trail! 🙂
Nice to see you here, Frank!
Thanks, Jilly! Happy to be here! 😀
Usually I am behind in writing and reading….being on Pacific Time and slow go respond, but I will to this prompt tonight. Thank you, Jilly.
Ooh! controversial. The traditional kigos are very rural, and definitely from a certain latitude. It fits my world quite well, usually.
Wow! What an wonderful spirit in your words! I can’t think of a better way to be a poet. Loved how you talked about the season, especially the gator mating season, and testing season. Teachers everywhere definitely have an all around year season based on them, it’s either summer vacation or midterms, or school staring season. Great to be back here!
So nice to see you here!
Thank you, it is a hell of a lot nice to be here!
I celebrate poetry that thinks outside the box but found it easy enough to do it with a traditional haibun. Isn’t freedom glorious?! Linking up now and thanks for the prompt, Jilly.
So glad to see you here!
Thanks, Jilly. Nice to be here too. Too hot working out in the garden today, which seems to be absorbing a lot of my time.
Here, too. Mid 90’s and humidity. Yikes!
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Late again…thanks for the prompt! (K)
Glad you joined in!