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Lillian here, delighted to host Tuesday Poetics again.
The other day, while walking along the Charles River here in Boston, I got to looking at all the green trees and grass, feeling the sun’s rays and soft breeze. And then I thought about the same walk I took last winter….tree skeletons with a bit of snow still attached from snow squalls earlier that day. And it made me realize…..perhaps one reason why we have the sense of enjoyment is because we experience opposites.
Opposites. As simple as cold/hot; happy/sad; inside/outside. Or as complex as looking at one event or object from two different perspectives. Remember the old tale about the blind men and the elephant? Each man touches and feels a different part of the elephant: one the tusk, another a foot. Their descriptions of the same animal differ to the extreme. We can talk about opposing view points or opposite personalities. Some even say that opposites attract.
The literary device of “antithesis” places two opposite ideas together in a sentence for example, to achieve a contrasting effect. One of the greatest examples of antithesis, in my opinion, comes in the opening of Charles Dickens’ A Tale of Two Cities: It was the best of times, it was the worst of times, it was the age of wisdom, it was the age of foolishness, it was the epoch of belief, it was the epoch of incredulity, it was the season of Light, it was the season of Darkness, it was the spring of hope, it was the winter of despair, we had everything before us, we had nothing before us, we were all going direct to Heaven, we were all going direct the other way. Alexander Pope effectively used antithesis in An Essay on Criticism: To err is human, to forgive divine.
So today, I give you wide latitude in how you use the literary device of antithesis / opposites. Write one poem that includes words that have opposite meanings. OR write two short poems about one event: each written from a different perspective or voice. OR take a well known nursery rhyme or parable and rewrite it in the opposite. Be humorous OR serious (two opposites there!). Instead of There was an old woman who lived in a shoe, make it a man! Some posts will be obvious in how “opposites” are included as in two opposite words in one sentence. In some cases, you might need a short note of explanation at the end of your post, telling us how you’ve used antithesis or opposites. Perhaps you’ve written about one scene in two ways to achieve two different moods. Use your imagination here – it’s all up to you!
We should have many different takes on this prompt. It’s wide open — as long as you somehow employ antithesis or something/s that is/are opposite. I’m definitely looking forward, not backwards, to your posts!
As always, please do observe the “rules of conduct” for dVerse – and for those of you new to dVerse, here’s what we hope everyone does:
- Write a poem that somehow includes opposites as the prompt suggests, and post to your blog.
- Click on Mr. Linky below to add your name and enter the direct URL to your poem
- On your blog, please provide a link back to dVerse. This enables others to enjoy our prompts, multiples our readers and thus the responses to everyone’s poems.
- If you promote your poem on social media, use the tag #dverse poets
- And most importantly, please do read some of the other responses to the prompt and add a short comment or reaction. Everyone likes to be appreciated! The prompt is “live” for several days – as you’ll notice by the comments you’ll receive – so do stop by another day and read a few of the latecomers too!
Björn Rudberg (brudberg) said:
One of my favorite poetic tools… opposites are perfect for writing… did a small one, but it’s a device I often try to add to my poems.
lillian said:
How’d you sneak your comment in before my welcome? Glad to see you here Bjorn. LOVED your antithesis use for this prompt!
Björn Rudberg (brudberg) said:
Ha… I just went there when it opened… 🙂 No real cheating.
lillian said:
Ha! Just goes to show…..the key to the pub is always under the mat and lights left on….even when the tender is out for a bit! 🙂
lillian said:
Happy Tuesday everyone! Step right up for some libations! Hoping to see lots of diverse writings to this prompt today. So many ways to go with it…..strictly using the literary device of antithesis (opposites within one sentence) — or writing about one event from two different viewpoints. I’ve posted my more serious write for the prompt. I also went a bit satirical and will post that one in a bit.
Gin and tonics anyone? Or a nice iced tea?
Björn Rudberg (brudberg) said:
Can I have tonic with gin just to be a bit opposite…
Frank Hubeny said:
Thanks for hosting, Lillian. I made mine about the opposites of joy and sorrow with sorrow temporarily winning, but joy following after.
lillian said:
So glad to see you here, Frank. I enjoyed your write! 🙂
Victoria C. Slotto said:
Smiles. The Haibun I’ve been nurturing for yesterday’s prompt fits this one two. A twofer?
lillian said:
Twofers are always fun! 🙂 Good to see you, Victoria.
Björn Rudberg (brudberg) said:
twofers are perfect
Grace said:
Thank you for the lovely prompt Lillian ~ I can use this technique over and over again ~ I will be hitting the trail once I get home ~
lillian said:
I hope we have many post to the prompt. With the wide latitude, we should get many very different poems. I’m already enjoying the early reads. (also catching up on my haibun reading!)
Jane Dougherty said:
I’ve posted a poem but I’m not going to be able to comment on many of the others, so apologies, but I couldn’t resist this one.
lillian said:
It’s okay, Jane. Glad to see you here today! 🙂 Shall mosey over to read…and I’m sure enjoy.
Jane Dougherty said:
I’m trying to do too much and the migraines are grinding me down. I’ll try to read a few more though.
lillian said:
Have had migraines in the past……grinding you down is an apt description. Take care of yourself, Jane.
Jane Dougherty said:
I’m trying. Thank you 🙂
kim881 said:
Thank you for hosting and for a prompt that allows the imagination to run free, Lill! Hi everyone! I’m afraid I’ll have to post now and come back tomorrow, again.
lillian said:
Nice to see you, Kim. A little running free is a good thing! 🙂 Will mosey over to read your post now. See you tomorrow again. 🙂
kim881 said:
I’m back. I slept right through last night so I’m running a little late 🙂
sarahsouthwest said:
Great prompt, Lillian. And now for something very long and very cold!
lillian said:
Ah….a special libation perhaps? Limoncella with sparkling water and mulled mint over ice?
sarahsouthwest said:
Sounds goooood!
Frank J. Tassone said:
Afternoon, Poets! Thanks, lillian, for this inticing prompt! I start my summer vacation today, so bring on the Burgundy! 🙂
lillian said:
Burgandy it is! 🙂 Happy to celebrate your vacation with you! 🙂
And perhaps you are travelling to Burgandy as well? Wouldn’t that be a neat thing to do? Sippin’ burgandy in Burgundy!
Frank J. Tassone said:
Close! We’ll depart for Portugal soon, where we’ll tour the country from Lisboa to the Algarve, then north throuh Coimbra to Chaves. There, we’ll visit my sister-in-law–then tour Madrid and Toledo in Spain with her. Should be a vibrant vacation! 🙂
lillian said:
Safe travels, my friend! And enjoy!
Frank J. Tassone said:
Thanks, lillian! We will! 😆
lillian said:
Taking a respite until tomorrow early AM folks. Leavin’ the light on and the key under the mat. Draw beers available; wine behind the counter; ice in the freezer and a full bar of choices on the wall. ENJOY! And hoping tomorrow AM to see lots more opposites appear! 🙂 Happy evening.
Lillian
rothpoetry said:
Sorry about the typo in the first attempt to post. Please delete the first one!
lillian said:
Will take care of it — just back to the bar with hot coffee in hand 🙂
rothpoetry said:
This is a fun one!
lillian said:
Always glad to provide some fun! 🙂
Lona Gynt said:
Is it allowed to resurrect an old poem that fits the prompt? Wonderful prompt btw!
lillian said:
Absolutely! Happy to see you here 🙂
Lona Gynt said:
Yay! Whew…! cuz I jus did. 😉
lillian said:
Pub is open! I’m enjoying my hot coffee this morning and shall get back (or forward) to reading again. Happy Wednesday everyone!
Charmed Chaos said:
Love the prompt Lillian- thank you for Hosting!
lillian said:
So glad you enjoyed it! 🙂 Lots of very diverse posts happening from it — very fun to read!
Charmed Chaos said:
Yes, I have been reading them as well!
jazzytower said:
I like you prompt Lillian I was actually fiddling around with a small poem, a cherita, and it seem to fit.
Pat
lillian said:
Wonderful! I’ve been out and about for a bit — will catch up on reading now. Looking forward to seeing yours. 🙂