Welcome to OpenLinkNight folks! This is your opportunity to link 1 poem of your choice as this is no prompt-day. Link up any poems you missed from our prompts or share a new one from your poetry writings.
I am happy to share with you today an award winning poem from the National Poetry Competition.
Dom Bury
Six boys, a calf’s tongue each, one task —
to gulp each slick muscle down in turn,
to swallow each vein whole and not give
back a word, a sign, our mothers’ names.
The scab stripped off, the ritual learned —
five boys step out across an empty field.
Five boys step out across an empty field
to find a fire already made, the task
to dock then brand a single lamb. We learnt
fast how to hold, then cut, then turn
each tail away, to print in them our names —
our ownership. We dock, we brand, give
iron to the skin until at last their legs give.
Four boys step out across an empty field,
each small child waiting for a name,
our own name to be called, the next task
ours to own, ours to slice into, to turn
each blade, to shear off skin until we learnt
the weight of it. One by one we learnt
the force our bodies hold, the subtle give
our own hands have, how not to turn
our gaze. Three boys stand in a frozen field —
each child stripped and hosed, the next task
not to read the wind but learn the names
we have for snow, each name
we have given to the world. To then unlearn
ourselves, the self, this is — the hardest task.
To have nothing left. No thing but heat to give.
Two boys step out across an empty field.
Still waiting for the call, waiting for our turn,
waiting to become, to dig, to turn
at last our hands into the soil then name
the weakest as an offering — the field
opened to a grave, my last chore not to learn
the ground but taste it closed. I don’t give
back a word, surprise I am the task —
that what the land gives it must then learn
to turn back into soil. One child, a name its task
to steal. Five boys turn from an empty field.
Did you noticed that the poem was written in one of most challenging poetry forms, sestina? I truly admire the poet who utilized effectively the form’s rhymes and repetitions to write a compelling dark allegory of six boys in a field.
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See you at the poetry trail. ~Grace~
Thank you for hosting Grace. I will be in and out reading and commenting
Hello Toni~ See you in the poetry trail ~
Happy OLN everyone~ I hope everyone is having a good afternoon or night ~
Good evening, Grace and dVerse poets everywhere! Thank you for hosting and sharing the poem, Grace, which I found a bit gruesome but also interesting in content, tricky in form.
Hi Kim! I agree, a very tricky and difficult form. See you!
Oh, that is one powerful verse — loved the structure and form of it.
Thanks for sharing, Grace. 🙂
HA, thanks for joining us 🙂
Thanks for hosting. That poem made me squirm – is this what it is to be a man? Yikes. Effective poem, though. Look forward to reading everyone’s poem.
The rituals of manhood can be strange. Thanks for your appreciation of the poem.
Always amazing to see someone successfully tackle the sestina. Not something I plan to try in the near future.
Not me either. Kudos to anyone who can. Thanks for joining us!
Hello all! Sorry for dropping out briefly, I was out of town for my best friend’s birthday last week. Very old friends. It was a great time.
Sharing a 5 year old poem today about discovery. I’ll be around to read. If I don’t make it the first day no worries it takes me a couple sometimes.
That poem, Grace was something. Thanks! Hugs all around!
Good to see you Bekkie!
And here I’ve dropped out again after a false start. I just have to try harder and pick one write a week. I’ve been so distracted. I’ll see you soon, big hug!
Evening, Poets! Thanks, Grace, for hosting OLN! I’ll see you all on the trail later!
Evening Frank and see you on the poetry trail!
well well thanks for hosting Grace ~ and isn’t this interesting – I just recently, for my first time ever, wrote a sestina – LOL – not nearly as “squirmy icky my skin is crawling” as the one you showcased, in fact – mine isn’t half bad for my one and only attempt – but I wasn’t planning on showcasing it today …. although I could …. but, no … it wasn’t my first pick. But talk about coincidence. Now I’m trying to decide … I need a drink! (funny, I said the same thing after attempting the sestina)
Attempting a sestina in itself is a worthy goal Pat ~ Here’s your drink and hope you will share with us your sestina some time. Cheers!
LOL – I took a look at it, and since it’s lonely for the wings, thought, why not? it’s linked – cheers Grace 🙂 [really had to twist my arm, eh?]
A wonderful and sensual sestina Pat!!!
thanks, a “fun” (read: mind bending) exercise, but all in all, not my preferred style of writing 😉
I always enjoy reading your poems Grace. Thanks for the opportunity to share a poem and connect with other poets. I will be back later to read the poems shared and leave comments. Happy almost weekend.
Thanks for joining us Ali! Have a good weekend too!
I dabble in poetry now and then, and I wanted to give this a try.
Hello Anita!!! Welcome to dVerse and glad you can join us. We are all about poetry and we post 3x a week. You can check our Schedule at the top.
Late to the bar but looking forward to intoxicating verse. Thanks for the prompt Grace (and the disturbing Dom Bury poem).
Thanks for joining us Peter~
oomph!! Grace, I accidentally posted a link back to dVerse on Mister Linky. I will post my real Link under “Lona Gynt correct” Thanks for hosting the OLN. These are always a lot of fun, and I loved the Sestina. 🙂
okies… I have my poem linked to Lona Gynt correct, sorry about the mix up, I think I need some sleep. I will be around to read this weekend. Cheers Grace, and thank you again. 🙂
No worries, thanks for joining us Lona ~ Have a good weekend.
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This is a lovely poem. I love poetry that tells a story.
An interesting story it is.