Hello everyone. Welcome to Poetics! Gina here ready to pour your drink of choice, be it a warm winter favourite or a cool calming beverage as you ponder over today’s prompt.
We approach the end of another year. For a lot of us it is time for reflection and writing resolutions. As we get busy with year-end festivities let us not forget the important things in life, the ordinary things. It is not the large events that inform us of the beauty of our lives, instead it is the magic of ordinary things that will do that.
I found this poem such a delight, the poet writes about the ordinary things in her daily life and gives each one such loving care.
The Patience of Ordinary Things – a poem by PAT SCHNEIDER
It is a kind of love, is it not?
How the cup holds the tea,
How the chair stands sturdy and foursquare,
How the floor receives the bottoms of shoes
Or toes. How soles of feet know
where they’re supposed to be.
I’ve been thinking about the patience
Of ordinary things, how clothes
Wait respectfully in closets
And soap dries quietly in the dish,
And towels drink the wet
From the skin of the back.
And the lovely repetition of stairs.
And what is more generous than a window?
I would also like to share an excerpt from Margaret Wise Brown’s little-known, Quiet Noisy Book. In this illustrated story a little dog named Muffin, who is awakened one night by “a very quiet noise.” You see Muffin “hears everything” and so he sets out to find the source of the quiet noise. She writes it with such lyrical prose.
Was it a little blue flower growing?
Was it a muse sighing?
Was it a cow putting on her petticoat?
Was it a fish breathing?
Was it a grasshopper sneezing?
It was a wheel turning halfway round.
It was an alarm clock springing to ring.
It was a butterfly unfolding his wings.
It was the milkman whispering to his horse.
It was a new leaf uncurling.
It was the flies opening their million-cornered eyes.
It was all the flowers blooming on that day.
It was the sound of an early bird catching a worm.
It was the sound of the dew rising up to the sun.
It was a balloon about to pop.
It was a man about to think.
It was a slow fig ripening.
It was the day.
It was a new day.
Aren’t those ordinary things made magical through a sensitive understanding of their presence in our lives? What do you hear, see or feel in your day or night?
So dear poets, think of ordinary items that have always held a fascination for you. Like a fork could be an elf’s hair comb or a leaf is a ladybird’s magic carpet. Like how a bird starts its flight with a tremble, or how a honey bee deliciously scans a flower.
Sometimes the ordinary thing can be so ordinary that we never notice it till it’s gone. And in our hustle and bustle world we forget how these ordinary things present themselves to make our lives a little easier and a lot happier.
So let’s appreciate the ordinary things today.
Today you are the creator, pick an ordinary everyday thing (or things!) and write it into something extra ordinary. May the end of year magic be your muse as you look at these ordinary things with new eyes and childlike wonder.
Turn it into something, magical, whimsical, or inspirational in the poem you will write. Describe its relationship with your world and how the magic of ordinary things has made your heart sing today.
And let Maria from The Sound of Music sing you some of her favourite ordinary things in this movie clip!
Once you have written your poem on your blog, link it up to Mr Linky below. Then have a walk through the poetry trail and read the other wonderful poets. Come back to visit as often as you can, the prompt is opened for a few days.
Most of all Have fun!
Dear Gina! I love it when you host poetics and what a magical prompt indeed. 🙂
Thank you dear Jade! Very happy to see you here. Looking forward to seeing what magic you will create!
This prompt gave me some challenges, but I started to focus on an ordinary object and it turned out to be a murderous story… it might deviate a bit from the prompt.
Ordinary Magic should fascinate us and your take was absolutely captivating. I like how you took it over to the dark side a little there, though it made me very hungry now!
Hello, Gina – what a lovely prompt, especially for this time of year.
Hello Sarah! End of year does seem to need more magic, lots that folk need to be grateful for and warm kind thoughts should get us to the new year too! So happy to have you join in!
Greetings from the equator everyone! It’s a chilly windy morning in Malaysia. Strong black coffee and Christmas tree lights twinkling as I start my day here. Looking forward to reading your “ordinary magic”!
And here it’s already close to bedtime… but we do have some Christmas lights twinkling.
May you have a peaceful sleep and not worry about the ordinary magic going on in your kitchen and pantry. Thank you for participating and your twist on the prompt was brilliant!
Hi Gina! and all! Great prompt and great setting the mood. Am headed out the door for a bit but will check in later and ponder your prompts in the meantime. Cheers!
Welcome! hope the mood will prevail into your day and evening and create some magical thoughts for you. Looking forward to reading your poem later. Be safe as you wander out!
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Thanks for hosting, Gina! Becoming aware of what is around us does seem like a magical transformation. And none of what is around us needs to be there. Then comes gratitude.
That is something to think about and be grateful for Frank, thank you for highlighting it. “That none of what is around us needs to be there”. I started the prompt thinking about just that, the gratitude for every small thing that comes into our lives and not taking the ordinary for granted.
Just a quick one, Gina. A post and run. It’s my birthday so I’m busy, but I’ll be back tomorrow to read and comment 🙂
Happy birthday Jane! How wonderful that you have a year end birthday, you are part of the magic now. Birthday means you get cake and a wish! Enjoy your day and thank you for joining in before you get deep into the celebrations. A most lovely and memorable day to you!
Thanks Gina 🙂 Just coming round now—10.30am. It was a lovely evening and the mammoth stint in the kitchen was worth it.
lovely! home cooked meals are lovely when shared. glad to know your celebration was a good one!
It was, thank you 🙂
Happy birthday Jane! Hope it was lovely.
Thank you! It was cheery, yes. Good food and drink, good music and good conversation followed by a funny film 🙂
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Thank you for hosting Gina and welcome to the dVerse team!!! I am busy at the moment but will be writing something for OLN this Thursday. I like to believe that happiness comes from simple joys and ordinary things. It is just our perspective that they are “ordinary” but really compared to some of the challenges by other folks, these things are special.
thank you for the warm welcome Grace and your guidance and help getting me here! may your busy days be as smooth as they can possibly be. you are so so right what we see as an inconvenience could be someone else’s blessing. that was a sobering thought from you. Have a good rest of week and see you on the poetry trail!!
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loving all the poems so far! amazing and original fills me so much awe! will be back again in a few hours, it’s my day off and I am popping into the city to have a coffee with some special people and get a book or two! see you all back soon, keep those poems coming. magic is all around you!!
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Thanks for the great prompt, Gina. We’ve been travelling all day, so I reached into my archives and pull out a poem for tonight. Glad to be here. Now, if the wifi cooperates…
hope your travels have been smooth and fulfilling. spotchy internet can put a damper on a lot of things so I am very grateful you took the time and effort to dig into your archives for the prompt. heading over to read soon. thank your participating V.J! Safe travels!
Thanks Gina.
Gina wanted us to search for magic in something simple. I found some in a toy boat that belongs to my grandson…
lovely Rob! A boy and his sailboat, magic and adventure, when the ordinary takes flight, I am excited to go read that! Thank you for participating!
Lovely prompt, Gina. Thank you. It made me think of a musical that my daughter was in–which brought a whole stream of memories– though the poem is not about that. 🙂
wonderful memories you have shared Merril! Glad the prompt brought them to mind, funny how one thing can lead to another and in a way all connected through a common thread. thank you for participating your poem pulled all the magical bits of nature beautifully together. Very nice!!
Thank you, Gina!
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Hello Poets – Joining in this morning. Thank you for hosting Gina and for this wonderful prompt.
Greetings Linda. happy to see your join in here and loved your poem of decay and the leaves. you bring your own special magic to the prompt today.
Thank you Gina. I saw the prompt yesterday but needed to sit with it awhile.
On first read it seemed simple enough but there is so much beauty in our world when we really stop and think about it. I am so very glad you chose your particular subject, something I really identified with. And your poem could be read in many different ways, not just physical decay.
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Hello Dearest Gina! Thank you for hosting and posting one of my all time favorite songs! This was a good reminder to appreciate the ordinary – items, moments, people – my mind is still noticing and finding magic….
thank you lovely Irma! so glad you managed to join in, i always look forward to your poems. that song I heard first in an English class and made me want to know more about the language and how to form sentences like that, it has been my go to when sad song. we must be kindred souls, I still believe and look for magic too! and you are right, we need to keep on looking for it, though it’s there we must be open to receiving the beauty of our world. thank you for your kind words.
Kindred souls – yes! ❤️
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Oh.. I just missed posting. OH well, the prompt created a nice poem. I”ll still visit and comment on the others. Thanks for the challenge.
sorry you have missed the link Margaret, did you write a poem, ping back here so we can visit it.
Enjoy reading the other poets, thank you for dropping by.