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cascade poetry, falling, initiation, Judith Beveridge, NaPoRiMo, pastorale, poems, poetry, poetry about cascades, poetry community, poetry prompt, rite of passage, shape poetry, taking the plunge
It’s Amaya here tonight and, well, we just have to jump right into it. Let me first off tell you about my experience with “cascade.”
As an unofficial initiation back in college, groups of students would head north of town to a narrow gorge known as Cascade Canyon, to complete the ‘C’ of the “ABC” rite of passage, after jumping off Adrenalin Falls and Baker’s Bridge into the rivers below. This gorge was cut by Cascade Creek, a high mountain snowmelt-fed stream –frozen solid for over nine months a year– and only saw the sunlight for a little over an hour on an average summer day.
The thrillseekers had to hike down a steep ravine bringing nothing that couldn’t get wet, and enter the canyon’s gauntlet where there would be no turning back even if one got too scared or too cold. The canyon featured a series of small waterfalls, natural slides, snaking pools through which one swam quickly before full-body numbness from the frigid water, rockclimbing, and the final plunge into the last pool where the canyon opened up and the newly initiated could warm up slightly by hiking fifteen minutes back to the car, sans towel or dry clothes of course.
Here’s a video I came across in case anyone wants to virtually run it:
Our prompt tonight asks you to incorporate the word “cascade”, or reflect on its metaphysical significance of a multi-level fall, or write a shape poem showing us a picture of a cascade. And, even though we’re not technically “Meeting the Bar” tonight with a set form, a bonus challenge is to write a cascade form poem with however many stanzas you choose. If you choose to “run Cascade”, the form looks like this:
A
B
C
D
E
A
F
G
B
H
I
C
You may recycle either full lines or modify the form to use only a word or phrase from the original lines. You can choose a rhyme scheme or have unrhymed lines, but the motive should be to go for a tiered, cascading effect.
I’ll leave you with this poem, ‘Woman and Child’ by Judith Beveridge and her cleansing yet slightly sad “cascades of laughter.”
They listen to the myna birds dicker in the grass.
The child’s blue shoes are caked with
garden dirt. When he runs, she sees the antics
of a pair of wrens. She works the garden,
a pot of rusting gardenias has given off its ales
and infused the danker germinations of her
grief. She watches her son chase pigeons,
kick at the leaves piled high. Now, a magpie
adds to his cascades of laughter as he runs with
the hose, pours a fine spray, happy to be giving
to the grass this silver courtship. She sighs,
watches the drops settle in. Today, who
can explain the sadness she feels. Surely this
day is to be treasured: the sun out, the breeze
like a cat’s tongue licking a moon of milk;
her son expending himself in small, public
bursts, happy among clover where bees hover,
and unfold centrefolds of nectar. Today,
who can explain the heaviness in her head, as if
all her worries were tomes toward a larger work,
one she knows she will never finish, but to which
she must keep adding, thought by thought.
She sweeps the petals, smells their russet imprint.
Soon dusk will come with an envoy of smoke
and her son outlast her patience by a rose.
Already he is tiring, puling at the flowers.
It won’t be long before they’ll go in, listen
to the jug purr comfort. He’ll sleep and she’ll
lie back, or get up to unhook the cry of her cat
from the wire door. Now, a few cicadas are idling,
giving each other the gun and a cockatoo calls,
a haughty felon. She sighs, knowing she won’t
escape her mood today, the turned earth
or its rank persuasions; her child’s petulance
flaring like an orchid, or a cockatoo’s unruly crest.
Today, she knows she will need to consider
her unhappiness, of what she is a prisoner – if not
the loss of hope’s particulars. Her son soaks
the path, rinses the sky of its featureless blue.
He is giving that water, now, to everything.
(Source: poetryfoundation.org)
Veterans of dVerse and the unofficially uninitiated alike, I look forward to seeing your take on the cascade, in whichever variation you wish to flow with it. Instructions are as follows:
•Write a poem and post to your blog.
•Enter a link directly to your poem and your name by clicking Mr Linky below.
•A banner will ask you to “Check to accept use/privacy policy”.
•There you will find links to other participating poets.
•Read and comment on their work, and be sure to check back in the following 48 hours for more entries.
•Please link back to dVerse from your site/blog and encourage your readers to engage.
•Comment and participate in our discussion below, if you like.
(Image source: rgregorysummers.com)
Well, I’ve had a helluva time with WordPress today, besides all the usual headache anytime I try any resembling a shape poem. I hope it’s working better for everyone else, as I’m itching to read!
Does anyone know the best way to format poems in the WordPress editor? For instance, how do I make a space a space? If I try to hit the space bar to indent lines, the editor ignores it so I have to resort to using visible space-savers, tainting the image and effect. Thanks for any technical know-how, and glad you’re here.
I always write my spaces in the html mode, and there is a code for space that works great. The code that represent space is
” “
Which I cannot write as comment of course… 😉
Google nbsp and html… 🙂
That was my next question. Read my mind. Thanks again!
Oh thank you! If I get time later I’ll go back in and edit out the visually overwhelming slashes. But definitely good to know for next time.
Actually, the slashes visually work as cascading waterfall; I liked it; who knew?
Thank you for this tip. Spacing can be tricky.
Hi Amaya and All. Amaya, I just learned from Sabio that if you hold the shift and control keys down while you hit enter it will only single space. Hoping that helps you.
Oh good hack, thanks Ms Jade:)
You are welcome!
Hello… I tried to write about cascades and rivers in the cascade form.
It sounds so exciting to walk in a river… I have only tried that in Zion National Park, but there it was very hot… and the water was warm
Zion is incredible. Along with all the other canyoneering opportunities in Utah’s Canyonlands. But Cascade was a whole other type of canyon, and definitely not warm water! I heard from my bro who still lives in the area that the adventure has become much more dangerous due to an engineering project diverting another creek into Cascade making for permanently higher water volume, not just during a week or two of runoff. There have been deaths. But of course kids are still going to run it.
Hi Amaya! Thank you for hosting! I would never have done that initiation, but it does look beautiful. 🙂
I used the word cascade, but I want to come back and try a cascade poem, too.
Well, maybe the fifty foot jump off the bridge would have been more your cup of tea? It was a beautiful canyon and in the winter, ice would pour over the walls for a favorite ice climbing spot as well. I hope you do come back for round two. Thanks, Merril!
Hahaha. No, never. I’m the sit down and admire the view type. 🙂
Good evening all and thank you, Amaya, for hosting and giving us an amazing prompt. I haven’t been to many waterfalls or cascades but hope to visit some smaller ones in England. Here in Norfolk we don’t have anything like them as our landscape is totally flat but we do have the sea. I won’t be around long this evening as I’m suffering with asthma at the moment – I lost my voice and could hardly breathe over the weekend – and am not sleeping well, so I’m aiming for an early night. I’ll be back in the morning to read and comment.
I hope you feel better tomorrow, Kim. I’m kind of in the same boat. Ruptured my ear drum from a coughing spell last night at 2am. It’s been ringing all day. Good thing this is an online pub or I wouldn’t be able to hear a thing! Take care.
Thank you, Amaya. I hope the ringing stops soon. You need to look after yourself when you have little ones to take care of too. 🙂
That is a gorgeous painting! The real time adventure is spectacular as well…
The artist paints some beautiful oils. I’m glad you took the trip, Dwight!
It was most interesting!
Hi Amaya, thank you hosting this lovely prompt. In Alberta, we actually have Cascade Mountain and Cascade Falls – so this made me recall my summer adventures climbing a mountain during that time.
Yes and, as usual, you make me want to take the next flight outta here to Calgary:)
Grace, I tried to leave you a comment about your poem, but WP seems to be having more technical difficulties all of the time. I loved your photo and the way you described being on the mountain.
Thank you Amaya for hosting today. Really like this prompt. I have shared a secret cascade.
Glad you made it, Rob!
Like Rob, I tried to stick to your “form”for the 4 tercets, then struck out free ,for the finish, capping with a haiku. Thanks for hosting; I enjoyed this challenge.
Great, Glenn! Yeah, I took liberties with it as well. I usually like to break the rules a bit. Especially with the repetitive forms.
I am not a quick responder when it comes to writing but I will definitely read what others share. Thanks for this interesting prompt.
I love this blog! It’s a wonderfully interesting and welcoming site. Speaking of WP issues, several of those I follow are all of sudden “unfollowed”! Another brick in the wall!?
An interesting prompt, Amaya! Beautiful painting and gorgeous Colorado scenery…I’ve been to Durango but not familiar with Cascade Canyon…thanks for virtual tour 🙂
My Image-Verse.com website will be down for a couple hours. I do self-hosting, so I am doing some restoration and reinstall.
Hello Amaya- Joining in today!