In our previous MTB sessions, we talked about repetition and sounds in the art of poetry. In support of our Villanelle poetry form, I am going to feature the use of rhyme specially end rhyme and slant rhyme as our poetic devices. I will not be discussing all the types of rhyme in this post as this was previously discussed here and here.
What is Rhyme?
The repetition of syllables, typically at the end of a verse line. Rhymed words conventionally share all sounds following the word’s last stressed syllable. Thus “tenacity” and “mendacity” rhyme, but not “jaundice” and “John does,” or “tomboy” and “calm bay.” A rhyme scheme is usually the pattern of end rhymes in a stanza, with each rhyme encoded by a letter of the alphabet, from a onward (ABBA BCCB, for example). Rhymes are classified by the degree of similarity between sounds within words, and by their placement within the lines or stanzas.
A perfect rhyme is a case in which two words rhyme in such a way that their final stressed vowel, and all subsequent sounds, are identical. For instance, sight and light, right and might, and rose and dose.
The most common type is the end rhyme, where the rhyming is found at the final syllables of a line. Here is an example, from Seamus Heaney’s “Digging” :
Under my window, a clean rasping sound
When the spade sinks into gravelly ground
There is another category of rhyme, which goes by a variety of names. Near-rhyme, slant-rhyme, half-rhyme and para-rhyme, imperfect, partial, near, oblique, etc.
They are generally used to give an inharmonious feeling in a rhyme scheme. They helps help a poet create an unusual range of words to give a variety of rhyming effects, particularly when they are used with other poetic devices and rhyming schemes. They help poets avoid using the typical sing-song chiming effects of full rhymes, and give them creative freedom.
The Traditional Narrow Definition of Slant Rhyme
Originally, slant rhyme referred only to:
Words that ended with the same consonants.
This definition would only include words like “hat” and “cut” or like “eden” and “dawn.”
The Broader Definition of Slant Rhyme
Over time the definition of slant rhyme has broadened. The newer, broader definition doesn’t focus solely on the last consonant of the word; it instead focuses on the entire last syllable of the word. It also allows for either similar consonant sounds (consonance) or similar vowel sounds (assonance) in that last syllable. The broader definition can be described in the following way:
- Slant rhyme involving assonance: Words that share assonance in their final syllables are slant rhymes, regardless of their consonant sounds. All of the following pairs of words are slant rhymes because their final syllable (or only syllable) share the same vowel sounds:
- “Hat” and “bad”
- “Crate” and “braid”
- “Created” and rabid”
- Slant rhyme involving consonance: Words that have consonance in the final consonants of their last syllables are slant rhymes, regardless of their vowel sounds. Note that if a word has consonants at both the beginning and end of a syllable, it’s only the consonance of the consonants at the end of the syllable that make the word a slant rhyme.
- “Cut” and “mat” are slant rhymes because they have consonance in the last consonants of their final (and only) syllable.
- “Poncho” and “crunchy” are slant rhymes because they have consonance in their final syllable (“cho” and “chy”). The fact that their ending vowel sounds (“o” and “y”) are different doesn’t matter.
- However, the words “unfit” and “unfair” are not slant rhymes, despite the fact that they both have an “f” in their final syllable. That’s because the “f” is not the final consonant to appear within that last syllable.
Slant Rhyme vs. Consonance and Assonance
While the broad definition of slant rhymes depends on assonance or consonance, it’s important to note that slant rhyme is not the same as assonance or consonance. The reason for that different is simple:
- Slant rhyming is the use of consonance or assonance at the ends of words.
- But assonance or consonance can exist anywhere in a word.
Slant Rhyme in Dickinson’s “Not any higher stands the Grave”
Emily Dickinson is well-known for her prolific use of slant rhyme. Here, the slant rhyme in the second stanza is preceded by the first stanza’s perfect rhyme: “men” and “ten.” This conditions the reader to anticipate a similar rhyme scheme in the second stanza, but instead Dickinson produces a slant rhyme: “queen” and “afternoon.”
Not any higher stands the Grave
For Heroes than for Men —
Not any nearer for the Child
Than numb Three Score and Ten —
This latest Leisure equal lulls
The Beggar and his Queen
Propitiate this Democrat
A Summer’s Afternoon —
Slant Rhyme in Larkin’s “Toads”
Save for the almost perfect rhyme of “work” and “pitchfork,” all of the other lines in Philip Larkin’s poem “Toads” are parts of slant rhymes made up of words that share either a final unstressed syllable, or share the final consonant sounds of a stressed syllable without sharing vowel sounds. The following excerpt shows the first four stanzas of the poem.
Why should I let the toad work
Squat on my life?
Can’t I use my wit as a pitchfork
and drive the brute off?
Six days of the week it soils
With its sickening poison-
Just for paying a few bills!
That’s out of proportion.
Lots of folk live on their wits:
Lecturers, lispers,
Losels, loblolly-men, louts-
They don’t end as paupers;
Lots of folk live up lanes
With fires in a bucket,
Eat windfalls and tinned sardines-
They seem to like it.
Why Use Slant Rhyme?
Much like the perfect rhymes that are more common in poetry, slant rhymes give a sense of unity and cohesion to poetry by repeating sounds according to a pattern or rhyme scheme. Unlike perfect rhymes, however, slant rhymes may not always be obvious to the ear, so some poets use slant rhymes to give their poetry a more subtle musical quality. Still other poets may choose to use slant rhyme because it gives them a wider range of word choices than traditional rhyming does—enabling them to express themselves more freely (and therefore more precisely) than they might be able to if they needed to use words that rhymed perfectly. Slant rhymes can also have a way of surprising readers by omitting traditional rhymes where they might be expected to occur, satisfying the reader’s ear in a way that they may not have expected.
Thanks for hosting Grace! Be back later to write and post… 🙂
Looking forward to it Rob. I have to catch up on a few reading myself.
Well Grace, did a little slant and even an enjamb… at least I tried? 🙂
Hello everyone! Hope you find the post helpful. For those wanting help in Slant Rhyme, I recommend this: http://www.b-rhymes.com/
Looking forward to reading your villanelle.
Thanks for hosting, Grace! I find villanelle’s very difficult to write.
Some poets find it challenging I agree. For me I start with the last 2 lines, and just put them in the lines (where they are supposed to be) and just imagine the rest..ha..ha. Hope the article was helpful in any case.
Hi Grace and All. Just read through your post and really appreciate learning about slant rhymes Will be back later to try one out.
Slant rhymes give the poem an unexpected twist and sound. Looking forward to it.
Good evening Grace, good evening poets! I’m back home and am ready to read and comment this evening after a wonderful visit with my daughter and grandson. My sister (not the estranged one) came up from the Isle of Wight for the day and, even though it was grey and raining, we had sunshine! With any luck, my daughter and her husband will be moving by the end of the year and we will also start to put out feelers for a new home closer to them. It will be a wrench to leave my beloved North Norfolk but we always said we had one more move in us. My poem is about a current struggle with the local council to save the breeding grounds of a protected bird species. It was featured on the TV this evening and I think we could be winning.
Good to see you KIm. Moving is a bit tiresome but good for you to have that sunshine during your break. Looking forward to reading the poems in a bit. I have a long reading list.
This is a great recap and reference guide – thank you for pulling it together 💙
Yes, Grace, thank you for pulling this info together!
I posted a villanelle from a few days ago and decided to write a new one too, so I’ve put up two this evening.
Slant rhymes sound like a hard act to pull off.
Thanks for sharing your villanelle Jane. I know that you put a lot of effort in writing to the form. Slant rhymes can be tricky.
I find I can’t distinguish between ‘slant’ rhyme ‘half’ rhyme and not rhyme at all.
Slant rhymes go by different names like half rhyme or near rhymes. The focus of slant rhyme is on the ending or final syllable like: cut and mat soils and bills = consonants are easier to formulate. Writing slant rhymes with ending vowels sounds are bit more tricky.
I understand the technical point, but when I listen, to ‘afternoon’ and ‘queen’ for example, I hear the vowel sound, not the final consonant, which seems so quiet in relation to the oo and ee sounds. As you say, it’s tricky. To be used, I think where a true rhyme isn’t required, and it comes over as a plus, like alliteration.
Thank you for this interesting piece dear Grace. I love your second villanelle and wasn’t able to leave a comment on your blog despite several attempts xxx
Thanks for reading and your comment. I enjoyed your villanelle.
Thank you for hosting and for all this information, Grace. I’m behind on reading–I’ll see if I get another villanelle in or not. 🙂
I’m behind in my reading and catching up too Merril. See you in the poetry trail.
Thanks for all the information Grace!
You are welcome.
I wrote my first Villanelle last week for the NaPoWriMo challenge. I have shared it here on Mr,. Link. Hope you like it. 🙂💕
Congrats on your first villanelle.
Well Grace, did a little slant and even an enjamb… at least I tried? 🙂
That is the spirit Rob – trying and stretching out new things.
I don’t have much experience with villanelles, thanks for this challenge!
Its fun to try out new poetry forms. Thanks for joining in Victoria.
Grace:
I love this article. Very stimulating to think about.
If I have time, for fun I may write a villanelle about rhyme itself.
But first, I want to think about and possibly graph more on this issue.
In the past I Diagramed here about the components of language, especially as I was focusing on what is called “poetry” as opposed to “prose”. But the line between poetry and prose is very very fuzzy. Nonetheless, in both, “prosody” is important.
I started your article a little puzzled, so let me start there.
You said, ” Rhymed words conventionally share all sounds following the word’s last stressed syllable.” First, I guess you mean “end rhyme words”, because “rhyme” as you discuss, has a very broad catchment.
But even “end rhymed words” seem to be various defined.
I wonder if the wiki on “rhyme” is wrong when it starts out saying, “A rhyme is a repetition of similar sounds (usually, the exact same sound) in the final stressed syllables (and any following syllables) of two or more words.”
and instead your definition is closer, though I would change it to say:
“end rhymed words in English share all the phonemes in the final syllable”. I’m not sure why the idea of stressed syllable is needed.
For example “furniture” has 3 syllables with the 1st stress, thus the second would be the rhyme source, so that the “ni” sound would need to be the rhyme in a similar word. Which seems odd. Any thoughts?
Even more fascinating for me is how various languages value different sorts of prosody than English.
You are correct, my focus is only end rhymes and slant rhymes (with ending syllables). Rhymes with internal rhymes for example are good for other types of poetry forms, but not for villanelle.
Another thought: We should not be deceived by orthography which can hide much of prosody: K and G are similar, with G being a voiced K. Likewise there are close sound (not symbol) closeness for T & D., P & B, F & V, J & Ch, M & N, S & Z . We should consider having our poems read to us while we close our eyes for to hear the rhyme, rhythm, meter , assonance, consonance and more. I think many musicians to this naturally, spellings don’t trick them. Smile
I agree, reading them out loud or having the poem read to us, would be ideal to check and hear the sounds.