Hello all, here is Björn with another Meet the Bar challenge. Today I want to spend a few words on how to use alliteration, and specifically on the musical qualities, you get when you use it well.
First a few definitions:
Alliteration is simply the repetition of the same sound at the beginning of one ore several words in a line of poetry. It is a technique that is quite simple and also a technique that should be used sparingly (unless you do it for fun). Alliteration can be used to punctuate the rhythm of a poem, by letting the beat of the text be the alliterated letters. This was very much in use in old Nordic Poetry. If you want to know more look at this old prompt by Tony Maude.
Consonance is the repetition of the same consonant and assonance is the repetition of the same vowel. Indeed consonance and assonance can be seen as subsets of alliteration with the only difference that the repeated sounds in this case no longer have to be placed at the beginning of a word. It can actually be placed anywhere in the words.
What I find most interesting is how different letters have different music or even onomatopoetic qualities. I often try to imagine the music behind every letter.
For instance, the letter B can sound like a bouncing bear, and through its sound, you can almost feel the ground shaking from the weight of the heavy animal. On the other hand, the letter p sounds sharper, like a punch to the head maybe. The softness of an M makes me think of my Mother and the W is water and wind whereas an O is round and soft.
A specialty in the case is sibilance creating the hissing sound most often through the letter s. (makes me think of both snakes and sleeping).
Today I would like you to try using different types of assonance and consonance in any poem of your choice. Try to listen to how it sounds, and see how you can enhance the connection between the letter you use and the meaning of the poem. Maybe you can add the beat of the poem with accentuated alliteration.
I often use a thesaurus to find a synonym with the right assonance or consonance sound.
You shouldn’t overdo it today, a few cases within the poem is enough… (unless you are after a humorous effect), just try to let the text of the poem be synchronized to its sound.
When you have written your poem, just link it up below and visit others to see how other ways to be a succesful wordsmith.
Hello, and a happy Thursday, here I am sitting without an idea on where to start on my own prompt… I will check out what you come up with and add something before heading to bed.
There is plenty of beer, some wine, cider of course. I have some great jamon serrano for those who are hungry.
Hello Bjorn and all dVerse folks. LOVE this prompt, Bjorn … and had fun with it. It strikes me that alliteration is something used in children’s poetry, songs and games….so I went with that.
I would LOVE a cold glass of chardonnay please….will take it out on the deck in this sunny San Diego weather…and come back a bit later to read 😉
I have some nice Chablis here, hope it works
Thank you for hosting, Björn. It’s good to know that I’m not the only one who comes up with a prompt and then has no idea what to write for it! 🙂
Ha.. I managed to get something done.
oh this is a tough one but poetry is all about listening to the rhythm of an emotion is it not. I wrote one and now tweaked it a little for you prompt Bjorn and hope it meets the requirements. I would so enjoy a full bodied Malbec right now. Cheers to all the poets!
I think many of these techniques we use subconsciously… to do it on command is a lot harder.
Thanks for hosting, Bjorn. I may have gone overboard with the alliteration, but I was aiming at humor.
It’s easy to go a little bit too far… but it’s funny too
Hello Bjorn and All. Just getting back from an appointment so missed the cider. The last couple of poems for here had a lot of alliteration and weren’t humorous. I’ll try to tone it down and follow your suggestions to choose consonants to fit the content.
That is what’s work for me… 🙂 sometimes it comes subconsciously
I love this prompt Bjorn. Somehow I have always liked the poetry that sounds musical and alliteration certainly makes it so. I’m gonna try out in sometime. I’m headed to reading some now..let’s see who’s alliterated and who’s playing with consonance and assonance 🙂
I look forward to read how you used the tools
Love the lilting and rhythmic world you pulled us into, Bjorn! I am crossing my fingers that I did not overdo it! HAHA.
It’s fun to overdo it…. and for some types of poetry it’s really great.
true, Bjorn!
Good morning all! Apologies for my lateness, Bjorn, but David and I went out last night to celebrate our anniversary.
I hope you had a great night
We did, thank you Bjorn. A lovely meal at our favourite restaurant. 😊
Well, if in doubt I go for rooks. Endlessly fascinating, endlessly inspiring. Thanks for the prompt, Bjorn.
Didn’t Sylvia Plath include a lot of rooks too? … rooks rocks
Oh, wonderful. I love technical prompts. I started playing with alliteration when listening to a podcast of The Canterbury Tales in Old English (ok, nerds). When you realize that he’s “rhyming” with this technique you realize that we don’t still read TCT because they just happen to still be around, it’s that they happen to still be around because they’re fecking brilliant.
ok, bit of a tangent, there. Off to the notebook!
Yes there is a lot in common with rhyming and alliteration… and also combined with meter. Some techniques always works
And aI just had to make a challenge. Naughty Boy … You see, the consonant G is s’mthing …. Sexy, lissom. G-string, on those violins. And, the guitar … For those informed. And, nevertheless, basic? As from the heart? Ai had a second of joy making it.
Been working on music and echo poetry lately so here’s a short thing I wrote after watching Gentleman Jack on HBO.
Thank you for this prompt, Björn!
Hi,
Roth directed me to your site after reading a poem I had written. He said it would fit the prompt. So here I am 🙂 and below is the link to the poem.
https://lifeateacher.wordpress.com/2020/02/01/how-much-is-too-much/
Great!