About a week ago, on a windy day, the sky seemed to change every few minutes. Rain to clearing to grey clouds to sunshine. It struck me not just how changeable the weather is, but how impermanent everything is. Buildings topple, land erodes into the sea, and even stars eventually die. Of course, this is not an original or profound idea. Many poets have written about impermanence:
Bashō:
“Summer grasses—
all that remains
of warrior’s dream”
Robert Frost, Nothing Gold Can Stay
W.B. Yeats, The Wild Swans at Coole
But then there’s this poem by Jane Hirshfield, Perishable, It said, which I really like.
I thought then that there are all types of impermanence–and that this can be a good thing. You know, the change of seasons, elections to get rid of a would-be emperor. . .
So, today for Poetics, I’d like you to think about impermanence, things that are transient, or things that have passed their time. If you want to stick to the seasons, nature, or the weather, that’s fine, but I’d like to challenge you to try to come up with something different or unusual.
Your poem can be in any style or form.
If you’re new to dVerse, here’s how to join in:
*Write a poem (in any style) in response to the challenge. It must be about transience or impermanence.
*Enter a link directly to your poem and your name by clicking Mister Linky below–and remember to check the little box to accept the use/privacy policy.
*Check back later to read and comment on the poems of others–we all come here to have our poems read.
Have fun! Joy is ephemeral, too.
*Please link back to dVerse from your site/blog.
Hi, Everyone! The pub is open. Welcome! It’s a rainy, dreary day here, though still warm for February. I’m eager to read your words on transitory things.
Here it’s still too warm for being cold… but grey we have in common.
I wrote about my first kiss ever… very brief, very dry… still, I remember it with every pore in my body… maybe it’s some impermanence leaves something permanent.
Ooo! I’ll read it as soon as I get mine up. 🙂
Thanks for hosting, Merril! I hope I got the impermanence theme right in what I linked.
Hi Frank–no right or wrong. I’ll be by in a bit. Thank you.
Hello Merril and All. Wonderful prompt. I have a couple of ideas in mind. We’ll see what happens. It’s bright grey skies and dry cold today. If you have any warm drinks to offer today, please pour me one if you would.
Hi Jade. I’m eager to see what you write about. I have dark roast coffee, a variety of teas, and cocoa.
How about a nice hot cup of tea then 🙂
Coming right up! 🙂
Hi everyone! Thank you, Merril, for a topic I could get my teeth into! I’m posting and running, hope to read and comment in the morning, but I have to take my car in to have an indicator fixed before I go to Bounce and Rhyme, then pick it up in order to get to school after lunch. I might have to come back on Thursday. I’m looking forward to seeing what everyone makes of this great prompt.
Thanks for posting. Good luck with your car!
Thank you, Merril. It just suddenly went yesterday. I was lucky the VW place could fit me in.
It must have been the day–the starter on my husband’s car, well, didn’t start. 😉
After reading Kim’s poem I think that William Carlos Williams poem “this is just to say” is another example of impermanence
Oh, you are right! And it’s funny, because I almost wrote a response to it yesterday!
Hello Merril. and thanks for hosting! This is a great prompt, will be working on something. Most likely will post in the AM though. I’ve had a busy day so far…
Hi Linda. No rush. I look forward to reading what you come up with.
Good one Merril, this topic initially inspired me to write poetry in 2005 so have written quite a few … maybe I will post an earlier and a current one. Thanks for the in sync prompt 🙂
Oh how cool that I came up with “your” topic! Thank you for letting me know. 🙂
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Hi Merril! I wrote a poem earlier today and then I read your prompt…I think it fits!
Great! I love when that happens. 🙂
My first link was a mistake, please delete it.
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One of my very favorite subjects 💙
Yay! I’m so pleased.
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it is beautiful to see that seasons surround us, reminding us of this fleeting, impermanent existent. thank you for this reflective prompt!
I’m so pleased you liked it!
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Thanks for this prompt, got my mind swirling. 😉
Yay! 🙂
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This poem veered off in a direction I was not expecting AT ALL. It’s always a bit fun when that happens.
https://postcardpoems.home.blog/2020/02/26/the-new-avebury/
Yes, it is! 🙂
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Such a timely prompt for me. My response is in prose … a story that cried to be told.
I just got home from a lunch date. I’ll be by to check it out soon. I think Poetics responses are supposed to be poetry though.
Hi All- Joining in this morning. Will be back to read as I have another dental appointment this morning- wish me luck!
Good luck!
Thank you Merril. Home now. Will catch up on my reading in the AM. Dealing with some pain.
Oh, I’m sorry. I hope you feel better soon!
❤️🙏🏻
Just got here again, a day late. Link’s still open but I like this prompt, so I may not get something up before it closes. But I wanted to check in!
Hi, thanks for checking in. I know it’s hard to keep up with everything and everyone. I hope you get a chance to participate here, but I understand if you can’t. 🙂
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Great prompt Merril. I don’t know if I will get anything written in time but I will definitely enjoy reading the work of others. Thank you for this.
Thank you, Ali!
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Hi Merril, thank you for this lovely prompt! I’ve linked a haibun and will swing by later to read xxx
Hi–Wonderful. I will be by in a little while to read.
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I managed to do a rewrite and share the link this morning. I must say I love this theme.
Thank you very much. I’m so pleased you like the theme. I will be by later to read yours.
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Hi Merril,
I just linked. A two for one kinda. Thanks for hosting:)
Pat
I just saw it. Thanks! Great job!
Hi Merril,
I just linked. A two for one kinda. Thanks for hosting:)
Pat
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