“Sunlight cascaded through the blue.
I twisted and my hair swirled out around
me in tentacles of burgundy.
I saw a tail as green as a band of
emeralds and realized it was mine.”
– Kathleen Valentine, The Old Mermaid’s Tale
Art by Peyton Gray
Oh, fellow poets. Won’t you come with me to the sea? De Jackson here, aka WhimsyGizmo, and today I want to talk of tails, and scales…and salty women who woo sailors into sleep.
First, a quick Wiki wave:
In folklore, a mermaid is an aquatic creature with the head and upper body of a female human and the tail of a fish. Mermaids appear in the folklore of many cultures worldwide, including the Near East, Europe, Asia, and Africa.
In Scottish mythology, selkies (also spelled silkies, sylkies, selchies) or selkie folk (Scots: selkie fowk) meaning “seal folk” are mythological beings capable of therianthropy, changing from seal to human form by shedding their skin.
In Greek mythology, the Sirens (Greek singular: Σειρήν, Seirḗn; Greek plural: Σειρῆνες, Seirênes) were dangerous creatures, who lured nearby sailors with their enchanting music and singing voices to shipwreck on the rocky coast of their island. Roman poets placed them on some small islands called Sirenum scopuli.
Mermaids. Sirens. Selkies. Women of the sea. Or write about a Merman, if you please. Just woo us with your mer-words, or the promise of a tempting sea shanty, or something shiny.
Here’s a little mer-spiration from some greats:
The Mermaid
A mermaid found a swimming lad,
Picked him for her own,
Pressed her body to his body,
Laughed; and plunging down
Forgot in cruel happiness
That even lovers drown.
– William Butler Yeats
…
Oberon
My gentle Puck, come hither.
Thou rememberest since
Once I sat upon a promontory,
And heard a mermaid on a dolphin’s back
Uttering such dulcet and harmonious breath
That the rude sea grew civil at her song,
And certain stars shot madly from their spheres,
To hear the sea-maid’s music?
– William Shakespeare – A Midsummer Night’s Dream
…
Antipholus
O, train me not, sweet mermaid, with thy note,
To drown me in thy sister’s flood of tears.
Sing, siren, for thyself, and I will dote;
Spread o’er the silver waves thy golden hairs,
And as a bed I’ll take them and there lie,
And in that glorious supposition think
He gains by death that hath such means to die;
Let Love, being light, be drowned if she sink!
– William Shakespeare – Comedy of Errors
…
“The Poet and the Mermaid”
Emerging from the blue waves
A cheerful and mysterious deity,
With fresh pink lips
And an enchanting ivory breast.
Her splendid raven hair
Locks on her alabaster shoulders
Her eyes have the glow of a star
And the flashing fire of love.
– Julián del Casal
The Little Mermaid, bronze statue by Edvard Eriksen, Copenhagen, Denmark
Based on the 1837 fairy tale by Hans Christian Andersen.
“I don’t understand. All my life I’ve been waiting for someone and when I find her, she’s…she’s a fish.”
– Tom Hanks, in Splash
And of course, there’s Disney’s Ariel:
{Hey! Maybe write about a Dinglehopper!}
Still not quite feeling the pull and flow and salty call of the sea?
Borrow any line from Eliot below, and start your poem there (just be sure to give him a nod.)
Sea-girls
Shall I part my hair? Do I dare to eat a peach?
I shall wear white flannel trousers, and walk along the beach.
I have heard the mermaids singing, each to each.
I do not think they sing to me.
I have seen them riding seaweed on the waves
Combing the white hair of the waves blown back
When the wind blows the water white and black.
We have lingered in chambers of the sea
By sea-girls wreathed with sea-weed of red and brown
Till human voices wake us, and we drown.
– T.S.Eliot
(That peach line gets me, every time.)
After you’ve written your mer-poem on your own blog, just link it up to Mr. Linky and then swim about awhile to visit the other amazing poems. Can’t you feel their siren song already pulling you closer?
And be sure to drop us a hello comment below, or tell us about your favorite slice of sea. I have to be at work for the next few hours after the bar opens, but Lill will be serving up something salty for me in the meantime. I’ll be in as soon as I can.
And don’t miss this week’s OLN! You’re invited to be LIVE via video for the first hour. More details to come. After Thursday’s OLN, we will have our two-week summer break. The dVerse bar will reopen on July 13th. Happy Summer!
Thanks De for the mermaid inspired post. I love that movie Splash. Mermaids to me are magical creatures. See you in the poetry trail !
My favorite scene in Splash is when she chomps into the whole lobster shell! 🙂
Exactly… “She is very hungry”
A favorite scene of mine, too! 🙂 Love it! That, and when she tries to tell him her language, and it breaks all the glass in sight.
Hello dVerse folks! De will be a bit late to the pub so I am hosting until she arrives early this evening. Since I just hosted yesterday, I definitely have all the drinks ready to serve…..and given that we’re all about mermaids today, I have some tiny little teal and aqua blue umbrellas I’m happy to decorate your drinks with. I’ve also pulled the pub’s aquarium closer to the bar as it has one of those cute mermaid statues in it!
So….come on in! Pub is open and let’s explore the world of mermaids!
Thanks again, Lill, for having drinkies and umbrellas at the ready. I’m diving in for just a few minutes before heading back off to write some tv scripts for a crazy client…but I’m hoping to make a few rounds before then. Happy to see you all here at the sand bar today! 🙂
grr….having a bit of trouble with my computer….apologies if I welcome you twice. Let’s see if this posts!
Okay……………so I’m able to post now. Looking forward to some mermaid posts today!
It’s hot and humid in Boston so I’m having a gin and tonic. Happy to rustle up one for others too. Or iced tea perhaps?
Hi, Everyone! I love this post. Thanks for subbing, Lillian. Oooo–surprise me with a cool drink and one of those umbrellas. 😀
Cool drink coming right up…..how about a daiguiri with a teal umbrella?
Sounds great. I haven’t had a daiquiri in–decades? 😀
Happy to see you here, Merril. Happy swimming! 🙂
😀
Hello De and All. Very enjoyable poetic examples involving the merfolk, the Oberon one by Shakespeare especially. It’s a sunny 68F here and the breeze is blowing through the windows and doors. I’ll take a tall glass of Magners please, with a shot of Frambois (called a candy apple by the barmaid who told me about them a few years back.) On to the poetry writing…
What a fun name for a unique drink! Coming right up….and with an umbrella!
Have you ever tasted a butterfinger candy bar? One of my favorite martinis, for dessert, is a butterfinger martini….Van Gogh dutch chocolate vodka and frangelico…..so delicious! My husband also makes a mean pomegranete martini with no syrup in it so pure pom juice…delicious! Will be taking a sip of your Candy Apple, but only from the mixing cup!
Oh my goodness butterfinger martini sounds so good. Pom martini does also! Hope you enjoy the Candy Apple. Cheers!
This all sounds soooo delicious! (And like a major hangover waiting to happen!) I think I’ll stick to something simple, but maybe with a splash of Blue Curacao.
p.s. Lillian, one of those umbrellas in it will be perfect 🙂
I will have to stay off the drinks tonight… my mouth is full of brine after having to look for mermaids.
Hah! Smiling I am….of course I could do a marguerita on the rocks with salt on the rim…might suit you better! 🙂
Somethin’ salty it is, then, B. 🙂
great prompt de (K)
I so agree! 🙂
Much thanks to both of you. Since my muse IS a mermaid, this one came kind of easy. 😉
love the dash of fantasy …
now to leave the sea
in order to write to thee …
Love the rhyme here!
Love the rhyme here! 😉
Looooooove, kate.
Lillian here. Signing off for now for dinner and time with hubby. De shall be joining you this evening to take over hosting and reading for her prompt. I must say, I enjoyed merming with you all this evening!
In case you come round before De gets to the pub, as always I’ve left the key under the mat by the door. Come on in and make yourself at home. Libations behind the bar or feel free to mix something up by yourself. Mermaid theme is in effect so there are fish nets, shells and coral decorating the pub walls tonight! ENJOY!
See you all in the morning.
PS: I’ll come back tomorrow morning to continue reading the Shining Moments Haibun also.
Thanks again, Lill. I’m around for a bit, before getting back to work. Appreciate you!
C’mon in and get some sand in your pants, y’all. Or your fins.
Hello De and Lillian and all,
What a delightful prompt to sail along with on the waves of lore. Fab!
Do you have a bit of grog? 😉 A splash of rum would do the job. ..
🙂
Na’ama
You’ve got it, Na’ama! Cheers!
🙂
Thank you for the prompt, it stirred a Siren’s Song. See you out on the sea of poems.
Welcome, Truedessa! Happy to ‘sea’ you here! 😉
Well, I didn’t make it into the bar last night, but here I am. It’s pretty early, but it looks like it’s going to be a lovely day. I think coffee is in order, and I don’t know if the bar does breakfast?
I do love this prompt. I’ve written quite a few selkie poems in the past, but this time I’ve gone with mermaids. Sort of.
Laying out a nice brunch buffet right now, Sarah. 🙂 And on my way over to read.
Beware the mermaids. I did love Peter Pan, the mermaids were at least discerning in that story. Thank you De.
My pleasure! So glad you’re here!
I’m caught back up, gang, and makin’ brunch for everybody. Mimosas and bloody Marys with salted rim. Happy poeming today!
Nice. I’ve written mine, though I’m not used to having such a distinctive character
Glad to see you here, Larry! Heading over to read now.
I learn a lot today about historical folklore. Thanks