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Dorothy Lawrenson, Karina Borowicz, Les Murray, nine, nonet, Seamus Heaney, September, W.S. Merwin
Hello Everyone– here we are in the 9th month of the year and almost at the equinox, as we resolutely turn our backs on summer (or winter for those in the Southern Hemisphere). Personally, I am somewhat melancholy at this time of year although I do enjoy the wistfulness that this cusp month evokes, so I’ve harvested some eponymous poems, beginning with Karina Borowicz’s ‘September Tomatoes’
“The whiskey stink of rot has settled
in the garden, and a burst of fruit flies rises
when I touch the dying tomato plants.
Still, the claws of tiny yellow blossoms
flail in the air as I pull the vines up by the roots
and toss them in the compost.
It feels cruel. Something in me isn’t ready
to let go of summer so easily…To destroy
what I’ve carefully cultivated all these months.
Those pale flowers might still have time to fruit.
My great-grandmother sang with the girls of her village
as they pulled the flax. Songs so old
and so tied to the season that the very sound
seemed to turn the weather.”
From her Scottish landscape, Dorothy Lawrenson images simplicity with subtlety in ‘September’
“This far north, the harvest happens late.
Rooks go clattering over the sycamores
whose shadows yawn after them, down to the river.
Uncut wheat staggers under its own weight.
Summer is leaving too, exchanging its gold
for brass and copper. It is not so strange
to feel nostalgia for the present; already
this September evening is as old
as a photograph of itself. The light, the shadows
on the field, are sepia, as if this were
some other evening in September, some other
harvest that went ungathered years ago.”
And from Australia, Les Murray conjures Spring in September
“…Pre-industrial haze. The white sky-rim
forecasts a hot summer. Burning days
are indeed rehearsed, with flies and dinnertime fan
but die out over west mountains
erased with azure, into Spring-cool nights…
…Bees and pollen drift
through greening orchards. And next day it pours rain:
smokes of cloud on every bushland slope,
that opposite wintry haze. The month goes out facing
backwards.”
Back home, W.S. Merwin writes “To the Light of September”
“… and for now it seems as though
you are still summer
still the high familiar
endless summer
yet with a glint
of bronze in the chill mornings
and the late yellow petals
of the mullein fluttering
on the stalks that lean
over their broken
shadows across the cracked ground…
Finally Seamus Heaney locates us in Autumn for his: ‘Postscript’
“…In September or October, when the wind
And the light are working off each other
So that the ocean on one side is wild
With foam and glitter, and inland among stones
The surface of a slate-grey lake is lit
By the earthed lightning of a flock of swans,
Their feathers roughed and ruffling, white on white,
Their fully grown headstrong-looking heads
Tucked or cresting or busy underwater…”
And after all that, my Poetics Challenge focuses on the number 9 though September translates as the 7 month!!
Prompt 1: Write NINE-LINE VERSE(S), taking ONE of the following lines so that each consecutive word becomes the start of the next line of your poem. Keep the word order and repeat the pattern for more verses.
- Those/ pale /flowers /might /still /have/ time/ to /fruit (cite Borowicz)
- Summer/ is /leaving/ too/ exchanging/ its/ gold/ for brass (cite Lawrenson)
- West/ mountains/ erased/ with/ azure/ into/ Spring/cool/ nights (cite Murray)
For example:
Those xx
pale xx
flowers xx
might xxx
etc etc
OR
Prompt 2. For those who like a syllabic challenge, I invite you to write a NONET – a nine line poem that begins with 9 syllables, descending line by line to 1 syllable.
Select ONE of these 9 syllable lines as your opener (or more if you wish to write several nonets)
- It seems as though you are still summer (cite Merwin)
- Broken shadows across the cracked ground (cite Merwin)
- The earthed lightning of a flock of swans (cite Heaney)
- One side is wild with foam and glitter (cite Heaney)
Note: In your post do please cite the authors/poem(s) you have used as prompt
Useful Links:
How to write a Nonet poem
Once you have published your poem, add it to the Linky widget and leave a comment below. Then go visiting, reading and sharing your thoughts with other contributors which is half the fun of our dVerse gatherings.
[And a reminder that this THURSDAY 3p.m. E.S.T OPEN LINK NIGHT is LIVE]
Laura Bloomsbury said:
Hello and welcome to the bar – hope this challenge sets the bar just where you want it!
Björn Rudberg (brudberg) said:
Hello.. a very timely prompt, I feel the autumn in the air… and daylight is waning day by day. I liked the word acrostic prompt.
Laura Bloomsbury said:
have restarted my computer and many apologies for the misread – the text kept disappearing on your blog page and others I visited. Hoping that is now resolved but evidently a bug of some sort in my computer
I shall return to read your poem with all words and understanding intact!
Björn Rudberg (brudberg) said:
🙂
Grace said:
I love the poems you shared Laura. Feeling the September autumn mood, which complements our autumn season. For myself, I went for the nonet form. Thanks for hosting.
Laura Bloomsbury said:
so many poems to and about September – it evidently stirs the poets!!
lillian said:
Thank you for hosting, Laura. I enjoyed the poems you posted here. I am HAPPY to say we arrived in our beloved Provincetown on Cape Cod at about 2 PM today. So amazing to sit on this deck and see the ocean right in front of us. We will be here 8 glorious days this year…..still hunkered down, not going anywhere. But not going anywhere from our rental on the ocean is not too bad! 🙂
Will come back tomorrow morning to read the posts. Happy Tuesday to all!
Laura Bloomsbury said:
Oh what a place to be – enjoy the view! Glad you will join us here as well
kim881 said:
Good evening Laura and dVerse poets everywhere. I love this challenge, Laura, enjoyed writing my poem, and look forward to reading some excellent writing.
Laura Bloomsbury said:
Plan to be over and reading soon – if my computer does not start dropping letters off the screen as it did earlier
kim881 said:
All of my computer equipment has gremlins from time to time. I wonder if it’s really me…
Laura Bloomsbury said:
mine evidently hates words!
msjadeli said:
Hello Laura and All. I very much enjoyed your poem selection and the options for how to write to the prompt. The doors are open and the sun is shining out there, “it seems as if it is still summer.” 🙂 If you are pouring, I’ll have a pint of Ace Perry hard cider.
Laura Bloomsbury said:
Coming up – just the drink for sunny September day. Our weather perked up at last for a last gasp of summer
msjadeli said:
Thank you. Great! Cheers!
msjadeli said:
Grace, my comment disappeared on your blog. I said, your poem is alive, just like summer.
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Dora said:
I know that Seamus Heaney and the rest are meant to inspire, but as a first-timer on dVerse, I’m having a hard time writing with these masters looking over my shoulder while I use their words. Maybe I better have a pint of bitter first 😂
Laura Bloomsbury said:
Bitter courage coming up – we must let the Greats inspire!
Dora said:
Okay then! Let Merwin be not dismayed …. !
revivedwriter said:
What beautiful poems you’ve shared! I’ll try to write a nonet soon.
Laura Bloomsbury said:
look forward to to it and glad you like the selection
peterfrankiswrites said:
Great prompt Laura. Like others, so enjoyed the poems in this prompt – Murray and WS Merwin in particular. Looking forward to a seasonal read once the sun gets up.
Laura Bloomsbury said:
lots of lovely sun up in your Nonet 🙂 You would know Murray but new to me & Merwin’s a new fave poet
peterfrankiswrites said:
Thanks Laura. Murray’s a giant (but sooo difficult and emphatic). I’m liking Merwin too.
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Na'ama Yehuda said:
ohhhhhhhh, me love countdowns! 🙂
Left mine in the linky thingy, where it is still summer … 😉
Na’ama
Laura Bloomsbury said:
thank you – got it – it’s gorgeous
Na'ama Yehuda said:
Thank you, Laura! And thank you for a great prompt hosting!
Laura Bloomsbury said:
I’ve loved reading the poems so far – the nines have brought a lot of creativity to the fore. Its after 9 here and I am closing down for the night (and giving my buggy computer a rest too) – back tomorrow – after 9 of course
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Björn Rudberg (brudberg) said:
It’s bedtime here… but I had to write a nonet as well… good night everyone
Laura Bloomsbury said:
especially glad you did!
robtkistner said:
Interesting exercise, I enjoyed it Laura… thank you! 🙂
Laura Bloomsbury said:
my pleasure Rob
Truedessa said:
Hello, interesting prompt! I decided to go with prompt 2. Thanks for hosting. I’ll see you all out there on the poetic trail.
Laura Bloomsbury said:
your Nonet had me dancing!
Jane Swanson said:
My poem is lost in etherland. Please delete first two attempts at posting while I figure this out
Laura Bloomsbury said:
found your moonmoth
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Mother Wintermoon said:
Great and creatively challenging prompt, Laura. Thanks for hosting. 🙏
Laura Bloomsbury said:
and thanks for joining in
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Linda Lee Lyberg said:
Lovely poems you shared Laura. I wrote a Nonet. Good morning all- I want to apologize for not reading much lately. The radiation treatments exhaust me, and I try to read but get sleepy. Only 8 more treatments to go!
Laura Bloomsbury said:
you need no excuse – always glad to read what you can muster right now
Laura Bloomsbury said:
Thank you one and all for making this such a creatively diverse response to the 2 prompt options –
later (3p.m. est) its a get together live on Open Link Night. Alas I have little time as am leaving soon for a 2 week break. Enjoy!
Björn Rudberg (brudberg) said:
Tomorrow we are live at
robtkistner said:
Hi Laura & gang! I started playing around with my original nonet, and ended up editing and creating a 2nd version — with a bit of rhyme. I posted a link if you’re curious — or if you’re not… 😉
robtkistner said:
OK, you got me hooked on this Laura. I did a 3rd, this time Prompt #1, the nine line borrowing the line from Lawrenson. Alright, that’s enough, I’m done! 😉
Ali Grimshaw said:
I am late to the party again. This was a good distraction for me today. Thank you for the prompt.
Be well fellow poets.
Xan said:
Got here under the wire! I love this structure, although I created my own 9-word anagram, so I’m “ish” on the prompt.
sarahsouthwest said:
I’m a bit overwhelmed what with one thing and another, so I’ve revisited an old poem that feels very relevant at the moment. Sorry I don’t have anything new.
othermary said:
A bit late to the party, but what a great writing prompt. Thank you Laura. I’ve written something, but will have to come back later to read everyone’s offerings.
Zack and Zelda said:
I hadn’t done a nonet in awhile, so I’m a bit rusty, but this was fun: https://breathingshallowpoetry.wordpress.com/2020/09/20/dverse-nonet/