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Hello, dVerse Poets! It’s Merril welcoming you to Prosery Monday. Prosery is a dVerse word for prose incorporating a given line of poetry. This can be either flash fiction, nonfiction, or creative nonfiction, but it must be prose! Not prose poetry, and not a poem. And it must be no longer than 144 words, not including the title. (It does not have to be exactly 144 words, but it can’t exceed 144 words.)
In the past year, we’ve been bombarded by misinformation, by hate, by fear, by weather and climatic changes, and of course, by a virus. So, this line from Adrienne Rich’s poem, “Planetarium,” seems appropriate.
Here is the line:
“I am bombarded yet I stand.”
From Adrienne Rich, “Planetarium”
Adrienne Rich (1929-2012) was a prize-winning poet and essayist. Her work often expressed her views of current social and political conditions.
“Rich’s work has explored issues of identity, sexuality, and politics; her formally ambitious poetics have reflected her continued search for social justice, her role in the anti-war movement, and her radical feminism. Using the cadences of everyday speech, enjambment, and irregular line and stanza lengths, Rich’s open forms have sought to include ostensibly “non-poetic” language into poetry” (Poetry Foundation, https://www.poetryfoundation.org/poets/adrienne-rich)
You do not need to know anything about Rich or her poetry to participate in Prosery. You do not need to read the entire poem. However, I’ve included the link so that you can. There were other lines in this remarkable poem that I was tempted to use, and that I could imagine myself using, but I wanted to pick one that would work for everyone—and not take too many of your 144 words!
You must use that entire line. You may change punctuation and capitalize words, but you are not allowed to insert words between parts of the sentence.
Here’s how to take part in the Prosery Prompt:
– Write a piece of flash fiction or other prose of up to or exactly 144 words, including the given line.
– Post your Prosery piece on your blog and make certain to link back to this post.
– Place the link to your actual post (not your blog or web site) in the Mister Linky site.
– Don’t forget to check the little box to accept use/privacy policy
– Please visit other blogs and comment on their posts!
Hello Everyone! Welcome. It’s a beautiful November day here in southern New Jersey, and the temperature has warmed up. We have homemade breads, oatmeal cookies, and a variety of hot and cold beverages to enjoy while you read, write, and ponder. We went back to standard time on Sunday, so I will probably be catching up on posts during the week.
Hi Merril, glad you’re getting some sunny November weather! I’ll take cookies and a herbal tea please. I won’t be around too long tonight as the kids are still up! But I’ll be back to read in the morning.
I’m so glad you stopped by. I really liked your piece. Herbal tea and cookies coming up!
Thank you, Merril: and thanks for introducing me to another great poet!
You’re welcome! I don’t know too much of her work, but I really like this poem.
No way I cannot play with that one!
YAYY!
😉
Oh… here we have an evening of freezing temperatures… it has rained and snowed (a little) during the day… I think I would like something warm…
I have coffee, tea, or some red lentil soup, if you want something more substantial. Rain and snow together or freezing rain is the worst. I don’t expect we’ll see that for a while, but we had cold weather and frost last week, and it was probably cold enough to snow west of Philadelphia.
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I think I need an oatmeal cookie and a bucket of coffee. Having read a couple of submissions I realise I completely misread the prompt line. Oh well, it’s too late to change it now! And it’s kind of funny…
One bucket of coffee and a basket of cookies! I see your post in my notifications, but when I click on the link in the linky, I only see a tiny bit of it.
I think I’ve fixed it now. I have no idea what I did. WordPress is a mystery to me sometimes. I think there are too many bells and whistles now – if I weren’t so embedded I’d move! Oh well. Living and learning.
WordPress likes to make things complicated. I’ll go look at it again.
hi merril,
that kick started an idea i ave been playing with for a couple of weeks. i live in an well off area with some people having unpleasent traits. like pretention. so this will be the first exposing such traits.
will come back to read in the morning.
I’m pleased the prompt kicked off some ideas for you!
Cheers
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Good line. 🙂 I’ll have an oatmeal cookie and chamomile tea while I ponder it.
Thank you. Your tea and cookie are coming right up!
Great poet, great line. Or maybe I’m just saying that because it was an easy one for me to work with this week. Thank you for the prompt.
You’re very welcome!
I will blame my rant on day two of a mild migraine….or maybe that allowed the rant….oh well, I think my evening may entail something more medicinal than tea and cookies. Although I will defend my hot toddy as being ‘medicine. Happy writing to all.
One hot toddy coming up. I hope your migraine is going away. We all need to rant sometimes!😀
After posting my bit of light sarcasm, I am stunned at the quality of flash fiction I’m finding from everyone else! At best, I can hope mine will be a change of pace for the readers.
Yours was good in a whole different way!
Like the prompt Merril! It caused me to examine reality. Thank you for hosting my friend… 🙂
You’re very welcome, Rob. I’m so pleased you liked the prompt.
Thank you for this prompt, Merril. It’s a wonderful quote!
I’m so pleased you think so!
As always, an evocative line to work with. Thanks! (K)
I’m so pleased you think so. I had a difficult time finding a line I wanted to use.
I think it must be very difficult. It needs to be open-ended enough to serve many approaches.
Yes, and everyone has their own style. . .
Thank you Merrril, seemed to be right where I was feeling.
I’m not sure if that’s good or not, but you’re welcome!
Well, it was good to get that out of my system 🙂
😀
Ah, as usual….I arrive well after closing time! …Well, I’ll be on time next time! Thanks for the wonderful quote and very interesting read. I could not quite get the right idea and did not want to make any sacrifices, but just now it came tumbling out after hearing a podcast…
The prompt is open all week, and I’m still catching up on reading from yesterday–so you’re not late! I’m glad you liked the prompt.