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Hello friends, Björn calling from the far North, Today we will revisit a prompt we did back in 2014 when Tony hosted.
Tony tells us all about the story on how it came about and the history, and you can read his prompt for more information.
A few points to remember:
- In the style we are doing we are still telling a story. It is clearly narrative and not gibberish.
- The characters and their actions may seem absurd or playful, but what they do make sense in a nonsense way.
- It is fine to use invented words, but it should be clear from the concept if they are creatures, things, or even verbs.
Let us include one of the most famous examples:
Jabberwocky
BY LEWIS CARROLL

’Twas brillig, and the slithy toves
Did gyre and gimble in the wabe:
All mimsy were the borogoves,
And the mome raths outgrabe.
“Beware the Jabberwock, my son!
The jaws that bite, the claws that catch!
Beware the Jubjub bird, and shun
The frumious Bandersnatch!”
He took his vorpal sword in hand;
Long time the manxome foe he sought—
So rested he by the Tumtum tree
And stood awhile in thought.
And, as in uffish thought he stood,
The Jabberwock, with eyes of flame,
Came whiffling through the tulgey wood,
And burbled as it came!
One, two! One, two! And through and through
The vorpal blade went snicker-snack!
He left it dead, and with its head
He went galumphing back.
“And hast thou slain the Jabberwock?
Come to my arms, my beamish boy!
O frabjous day! Callooh! Callay!”
He chortled in his joy.
’Twas brillig, and the slithy toves
Did gyre and gimble in the wabe:
All mimsy were the borogoves,
And the mome raths outgrabe.
Apart from the guidelines above, follow your own heart and amuse us all, you can use any poetic device you want to use, rhyme, repetition, alliteration. I would be super glad to see if anyone comes up with a nonsense Villanelle for instance.
If you want to enhance the comical aspect, it would be great it you can add a fun illustration for your poem-
Apart from that, just link up at Mr-Linky, leave a comment below and take part in discussions. Then read and comment to your heart’s delight.
Hello, I will soon make rounds, just have to get my own post up… I hope you are having fun so far. If you need anything to drink we have all the usual stuff but I have made some shortbread if you’d like to have.
Would love to try your shortbread, Bjorn. Thank you for the fun prompt. Some silliness was a nice change. 🙂
I needed some myself…
Thank you, Bjorn: I would like some tea, shortbread and a slice of nonsense, please!
nonsense coming up …
Hello Bjorn and All. I love this prompt. Just finishing my poem up. One cup of sweet nonsense and a shortcake please.
We are not short on cakes and nonsense…
I don’t think I should share this one again as my entry for this prompt, but I did write a sequel to the original Jabberwocky!
You can link up it if you want….
My entry was posted before, but it seems suitable again. It is made up of Dutch sayings, translated literally into English.
Is it lost in translation 🙂
Inspiring prompt thanks Bjorn … have had a break, now to catch up on old comments. Sorry I had to indulge myself …
There is nothing wrong to indulge yourself
ah summer has finally arrived so loads to do in the warm sunshine!
Love your piece Kate but count figure out how to comment
thanks, everyone else has been able to comment, no idea what your problem is … thanks for letting me know!
Sorry, could not resist Bjorn. This nonsense never ceases! Please pass the “fumbletee”.
Ha… loved you poem
Shortbread and a warm brandy for me … Happy 2022!!
Coming up
Hello all! Thanks for hosting Bjorn! We must be on the same wavelength this week. I just wrote a jabberwocky type piece this week, in tribute to James Dean. Put some final finishing touchups on it today for your prompt here. 🙂
Great… maybe we just needed some lighthearted fun at times so dark as these
hAPPY tHURSDAY
MUCH LOVE…
Happy Friday… time is moving along.
A double-bubble burpa cola for me, Björn. Fun times this evening.
Oh yes… even the Bard had some nonsense with those witches, well noted.
The cauldron still bubbles for you 🙂
😊
Howdy all dVerse pubbers! You won’t catch me gireing and gimbling in no wabe. Lol! Great prompt thanks Bjorn!
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Thanks for hosting, Bjorn! Yes, I was quite proud of myself for successfully maneuvering with the villanelle form! Any prescribed form is always a challenge for me.
I am SOOOO late to the pub here, although I scheduled my post. We’re in San Diego and it is three hours earlier than Boston so it’s 7:30 PM there and only 4:30 here. The time difference plays havoc with my sleep pattern and being able to post and read immediately versus being out and about in this lovely San Diego sun. So — I shall catch up with all my reading on the quadrille and this prompt (the two I did this week) over the weekend.
Enjoy San Diego Lillian! Amazing place. The zoo is fantastic.
Ha.. my time is sometimes weird as well… I have to go to bed after an hour since the pub opens.
I do love a chance to try a nonsense poem, thank you Bjorn.
Nonsense is a lot of fun… 🙂
I am amazed at how easily compatriots colleagues and other assortments of amis and amigas and amigos here are able to write such fine poetry with such ease! THAT was a challenge and a half, and I am afraid the half is where I got, not from lack of effort….Bar’s closed…story of my life! Am enjoying the reading part….thanks Bjorn..
We are still open… so if you change your mind, there is still open positions in Mr Linky,,,
Challenging and inspiring prompt, Björn! Wrote a villanelle. Looking forward to reading because I am sure it is going to be a fun ride!
Oh… I didn’t write a Villanelle myself, but I did write in iambic pentameter.
Syllable counting makes me go dizzy!
Hi Bjorn,
Thanks for hosting. This prompt’s been an unique experience, thanks!
Thank you as well… it’s fun to write, and it’s fun to read.
Thanks Bjorn. This was great fun. I’d never heard of a villanelle so I thank you also for that new knowledge.
The good thing is that it’s a lof of fun to read and write.
I truly am late. But this is my connect. So sorry but I did want to give it a go. https://benitakape.wordpress.com/2022/01/18/harry-harris-never-serious/