Hello team, Björn is here with greetings for a happy Valentine for everyone who celebrates it. I was so happy to host Prosery today which gives me the possibility to use the poem Valentine by Carol Ann Duffy.
Carol Ann Duffy is a Scottish Poet who was the Poet Laureate of the United Kingdom from 2009-2019 when she was succeeded by Simon Armitage. She was the first woman, the first Scot and the first openly LGBTQ poet being a Poet Laureate. She has been featured many times at various prompts at dVerse, including one that was all inspired by one of her famous collections “The world’s wife”. I find her poetry accessible and easy to read.
I also think that her style of writing fit very well to incorporate into prose.
The line I have selected from Valentine is:
It is a moon wrapped in brown paper
If you haven’t read it before, it could be good not to read her poem so you can figure out yourself what it is all about.
For those who are new, Prosery is all about writing prose, inspired by poetry. Often the lines between poetry and prose are shadowy, but in general, I would say that the most important part that makes it prose is the lack of line-breaks for poetic effect. Personally, I often try to include a narrative, but that is not mandatory. It could be fiction, or it could be a true account. I think it would be interesting if anyone would do an essay.
The rules are simple:
Write a piece of prose that incorporates the given set of words and they have to come in exactly the order given, but you may break it up with punctuation.
The maximum number of words is 144 (which is a gross) including the given line. Many try to hit that mark exactly, but it’s not mandatory.
When you have written your prose, post it to your blog and link up at Mr. Linky below.
Remember to link back to dVerse, read other entries, and leave comments.
If you like to leave a comment below or order anything from the bar, please do so
Hello, my friends… tonight we serve champagne in delicate flutes, we have chocolate in heart-shaped boxes and in the corner sits an old man playing soft jazz on the ancient piano…
How wonderful the bar is tonight. Thanks for highlighting the wonderful work of Carol Duffy. I am reading her poems and she is amazing.
Hello Bjorn and All. It snowed all night and it has been snowing all day. A flute of champagne with a mug of hot cocoa on the side sounds perfect. I wanted to write a fitting story for the holiday but the muse chose otherwise.
Sometimes we have to let the muse lead us… champagne and cocoa coming up.
Yes, the muse will have its way. Thank you and Cheers!
Sounds like it will be a lovely evening at the pub tonight! Thank you for hosting, Bjorn, and for the line you chose for prosery. I never know what my pen will write…and went the sci-fi way with this one.
San Diego is 76 degrees and sunny today. So enjoying this 2 month winter get-away.
Will begin reading now and continue tomorrow AM.
Here it has been a few degrees above freezing with a slow drizzle and hardly any daylight… it sounds better in San Diego.
thanks Bjorn for hosting, and for choosing a line that made my evening straight away: While not quite succeeding in hearing it read with a Glaswegian tongue, I definitely feel it should be read such. Lovely. Thank you. 🙂
Oh yes, it should be read thus… it really was a line that worked very well to write prose on…
Ah…I feel more at home in prose…maybe…not sure..perhaps…not…thanks Bjorn….tough, but nice…
I hoped that this would be an easier one than some of the ones we had before.
Haha! Good point! I think very doable, but to really make it work just right…needs that extra touch….and I have read 4 tonight that have just blown me away in that respect….a lesson to me in good writing…
Loved the prompt, Bjorn 😀 Carol Ann Duffy is a favorite of mine. Her writing is always so full of depth and sensitivity. I will have those chocolates in the heart shaped boxes.
Happy Valentine’s Day everyone! 💝
There is all the chocolate you may want… do you prefer it dark or with milk?
Dark please 🙂
Thank you for hosting, Björn. I did not write a Valentine story, but we will be celebrating with a Valentine virtual wine tasting tonight (the wine and cheese real, the event virtual). So, I think for now, I better just have some coffee. 😊
It was an interesting line.
Coffee coming up… and that is probably better with the chocolate anyway.
☕️
hi Bjorn
hi all
had to go and read Carol’s poem before starting the line you chose Bjorn intigued me.
time for more reading in the morning it’ been a long day
have a good night all
rog
interesting prompt Bjorn … Duffys smelly onion is a fascinating analogy for strong love! I’ve added another twist in kisses from above, thanks
I’m sure I know that old man at the old piano! A whisky for me please. Only a whisky.
I’ll be back on the poetry trail tomorrow for sure.
Greetings Bjorn and lovely writers! Giddy today, feeling the love. Champagne please .. bubbly feeds giddy beautifully!
Wonderful prompt Bjorn! Thank you for hosting. Happy Valentine’s Day everyone! ✌🏼❤️
I posted 2 links today. The first is a Valentine, the 2nd, a poem of love I wrote Sunday… ✌🏼❤️
A love poem for my cat I suppose. But a lovely prompt. Many thanks Bjorn.
Hello and a happy Valentine’s Day to all! Joining in on this with a mini rant disguised as prose 😅 a champagne sounds lovely, Bjorn…
I love this prompt! There are so many ways to go with it! Thanks Bjorn!
Hello Bjorn and thank you for what looks like a very popular prompt. Pro-mance is not dead. Alas I am a minute past midnight so i had better content myself with some Cinder(ella) toffee and some decaffinated coffee, before I totter off to my vacant pensive couch, like William W. Sleep well all!
And I wasn’t going to “do” Valentine’s Day. What an irresistible line!
Thank you for serving the prosery prompt.
Solid prompt. My poem is very un-valentine’s-esque, but was a natural mate with the line from Duffy. Thanks for the post!
Thank you for this prompt Bjorn, a delightful invitation.
Wow. This is an amazing poem. Thanks so much for sharing it. Love her words.
First time doing one of the prosery challenges
Hello Bjorn- Thanks for hosting! Late to the party again, but I will be back to read more tomorrow. Playing catch up between appointments.
Thank you for the introduction to Carol Ann Duffy. Last night as I tried to write to your prompt, I thought of an onion and suddenly knew I had hit upon the Carol Ann Duffy’s image without having read her poem. So, having completed my prosery, I looked up her poem. It is beautiful. One of those stunning moments. To be truthful, it makes me want to delete my prosery as I like her poem so much better. But thank you for the introduction. I look forward to reading more of her stuff.
I don’t know that mine is much of a “Valentine” piece…but I definitely loved the prompt line!https://poetryifnothingelse.com/2022/02/16/moon-wrapped-in-brown-paper/