Today we are delving into the world of wordsmithing and pulling out a word we don’t often use – Syszgy [pronounced sɪz.ə.dʒi] It is derived from Late Latin syzygia, from Greek syzygia “yoke of animals, pair, union of two, conjunction”.
In astrology it refers to: a straight-line configuration of two celestial bodies with the sun, whilst in classical prosody it is the metrical unit of two feet. [see The Free Dictionary]
Basically, it is the paradoxical unity that underpins duality, which brings us amongst other things to Compound words – when two (or more) words are joined, creating a different word with another distinct meaning.
As for example: Workshop – and Billy Collins’s poem that is critiquing a poem:
“…Immediately the poem has my attention,
like the Ancient Mariner grabbing me by the sleeve.
And I like the first couple of stanzas,
the way they establish this mode of self-pointing
that runs through the whole poem
and tells us that words are food thrown down
on the ground for other words to eat…[worth reading more]
And here is half tongue-in-cheek “Phobia” by Elinor Hooker
“Foe-bia is a compound word, you say, serious now,
for lasting, unreasonable fear. It’s the half turn of tears
that come too soon—cry me a river, I cried a river over you.
It’s pronounced phobia, I say—fear
that grows inside fear—fear of that long slow
light in the back field, of the girl lost there,
in the night, away for a dark year. Yes,
I say, it’s all that, and fear the rain will rend
the sky, drown stars, and fill my empty arms
for eternity…”
And so for today’s MTB prompt you should choose ONE of these threesomes:
- Sun; moon, earth
- Godhead Trinity/God/Father, Jesus/Son, Holy Spirit
- Yin, yang, oneness
OR Choose ONE of these compound words with the derivatives:
- Body, guard, bodyguard
- Dragon, fly, dragonfly
- Free, lance, freelance
- High, light, highlight
- Rain, bow, rainbow
We are writing without any set rule for rhyme or meter:
- A poem with THREE separate and distinct stanzas
- Each stanza numbered or subtitled with the reference word
- Include the reference word within the stanza if not subtitled
Hint: Think of your poem as a trilogy or a hinged triptych.
You could try and unify the three way split further in your poem’s title or by the use of word/phrase repeats or motifs across the stanzas – see for example John Tagliabue’s Three Poems
Once you have published your poem, add it to the Mr Linky below (by linking up, you are effectively agreeing to follow the guidelines.) Then go visiting other contributors as that is half the enjoyment of our dVerse gatherings.
A fun prompt… I bent the rules only a little by using three of the prompts in my triptych… Now I need a stiff drink since it’s Thursday
bending is not breaking 😉
Hello Poets – the bar is open for a 3 ingredient cocktail of words – name your choice and let the Muse begin
maybe a cock, tail, cocktail 🙂
oh yes :() makes you wonder how the compound word came into being from such beginnings!
Apparently according to Google:
According to the online Etymology Dictionary, the origin of the cocktail is down to a mispronunciation of the French word for eggcup coquetier (pronounced in English as cocktay).
thanks for entomology – I had assumed it referenced a cockerel’s colour mix of tail feathers
word checker misunderstood my mispelling – etymology
Hello Laura and All — I enjoy the prospects of meeting the challenge of your prompt. Will link up in a bit. A pint of Magners if you please 🙂
Thirsty work then ahead Lisa!
I love a good challenge! This is a great challenge,,
Appreciate your enthusiasm Helen
I will have “A Kiss of Death” vodka,cherry liquor,peach schnapps, splash of sour mix!
That’s a triple three way split coming up
Laura, you are a hard task master, you really make my poetic muscles work!
My poem turned somber but I hope I have met the challenge.
bet it was a good workout though – will pop by later
It sure was! Your challenges extract the best out of me… that’s what I believe.
Great prompt. I’ll be back to read tomorrow.
and I’m back today to read 😉
An interesting prompt and some great word threesomes. I had two in mind but, the cosmos are speaking tonight
always listen to the cosmos!
Hi, Laura! Thanks for hosting. I LOVED this post. So many new words added to my vocab, a clever prompt and what I loved the most were the three poems you shared–pure gold!
I’ll be musing over your creative prompt as I walk/run today, thanks for this beautiful start of the day. Have a great one yourself😊🌻
thank you – what an encouraging comment to the start of my day – though I’ve not been running or walking as we have 2 foot of snow and some…
I hope the snow clears soon (^_^)
Good Evening, Poets! Thanks, Laura, for this inticing and challenging post! I’ll take my usual burgundy, please! 😉
I hope you helped yourself Frank as the barrista went to bed
Thanks for an interesting prompt, Laura. This seems to be fun. 🙂
hope you find some for your poem
Hi Laura. I started this last night, but I didn’t get a chance to finish and post it. Thank you for the fun prompt. I’ll be back to read later after I get some work done.
good you found time though to join in with your cosmic cornucopia of sights and sounds
Thank you for the inspiring prompt!
Boy do I need a whiskey tonight! A fun but real challenge to work on, thank you Laura.
judging from your poem, you need to take extra care at the bar!
Ha, perhaps you’re right Laura 🙂