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Angel Favazza, April is the cruellest month, dVerse Meeting the Bar, invented poetry form, poetry form, Sanaa Rizvi, Writing Emotion
Hello dVerse Poets!
Welcome to the MTB Session! This is Sanaa, introducing a new form for us all to try out and have fun with.
Picture courtesy: Aerial photography of the sea hitting sand at daytime by Lachlan Dempsey, Unsplash
Before we begin, I’d like you all to mark your calendars, for dVerse Open Link LIVE next Thursday from 3 to 4 PM EST . . . ALSO on Saturday, April 22nd, from 10 to 11 AM, EST. Come read a poem or just listen. Hope to see you at one or both! ❤️
Line messaging is a poetry form created by Angel Favazza where the poet seeks to utilize the last line of each stanza to bring forth and represent an idea, a thought and notion.
There is no fixed meter, syllable count or rhyme scheme here except that the last line of each stanza (when read separately from the poem) should deliver an independent message or be a poem all on its own. Here is an example:
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I, a mere woman; yet of mind and heart,
walk alone past the cemetery gates.
Reaching out to touch the crude, dim metal
a glorious thought takes me—
I stand still for my heart can walk no more
and the vital force within my breast
grieves with the knowledge of a youth now faded.
Submit; succumb to this sublime graveyard,
beyond the sorrow of generations gone.
Independent flowers mock the very
ground from which they rise;
Inspiration grows within me.
Copyright © 2009 Angel Favazza
Source: Shadow Poetry
For today’s MTB challenge, I invite you all to try out this new poetic form. Be philosophical, somber or serious, show us your playful side or even better, be romantic! The choice is yours.
To join us for Thursday’s Meeting the Bar, here’s how to join:
- Write a Line messaging poem on your blog.
- Enter a link directly to your poem and your name by clicking Mr. Linky below and remember to check the little box to accept the use/privacy policy.
- There you will find links to other poets, and more will join during the next 48 hours so check back to read other entries.
- Read and comment on other poet’s work, we all go here to have our poems read.
- Please link back to dVerse from your site/blog.
- Comment and participate in our discussion below, if you like.
Have fun. I look forward to seeing what you come up with! ~Sanaa~
Welcome to Meeting the Bar, everyone!
On the menu, we have cream cheese and crab sushi rolls with tempura and miso soup, peanut butter cups with amontillado sherry if you are in the mood for something sweet.
Or if you prefer, we also have butter croissants with coffee/tea of your choice. Let me know if you’d like anything else. See you on the poetry trail! 💖💖
I prefer just a little cup of ice-tea tonight.
Lemon ice-tea coming right up! 💖💖 Good to see you, Bjorn 😀
Hello, Good evening everyone… it feels strange with such a short week, Monday was a holiday, and already tomorrow we have Friday.
It does feel odd, yes! Time is passing quickly! Heading over to read you 💖💖
Good evening all and thank you to Sanaa for this lovely prompt and the drinks and snacks on offer. I’m on strong antibiotics so no alcohol for me, but a chamomile tea would be very welcome. The cream cheese and crab sushi rolls with tempura and miso soup look delicious! I’m looking forward to some fantastic writing tonight.
Chamomile tea for the lovely lady 😀 so glad you liked the prompt, Kim! 💖💖
Much appreciated, dear Sanaa!
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Hi Sanaa and all. Thanks for hosting. An interesting prompt. Nothing for me, it’s bedtime. Will catch up with reading during the day.
Sleep well, Punam! See you tomorrow 💖💖
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A great prompt, Sanaa. Thank you for hosting this evening.
So glad you liked the prompt, Dwight 😀 heading over to read you. Happy Thursday! 💖💖
Thank you.
You are most welcome 🙂
What an interesting prompt Sanaa! Let’s see if I can figure it out ☺️💕
Thank you, Christine 😀 I look forward to seeing what you come up with! 💖💖
Thank you for hosting Sanaa! Love the prompt. Took me to a field of wildflowers, for some wild love. 🙂✌🏼❤️
So glad you liked the prompt, Rob 😀 heading over to read you. Happy Thursday 💖💖
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Hi, Sanaa, thanks for hosting. I enjoyed writing for your prompt, it was fun!
I am so glad you enjoyed it, Jay! Heading over to read you 🙂 Have a lovely weekend 💖💖
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Wonderful prompt, Sanaa. I love it! Don’t know if I can come up with a poem in time to meet the bar, but thank you for hosting. ❤️
I am so glad you liked the prompt, Avigail! Have a wonderful weekend ahead 💖💖
You too, Sanaa 😍
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Thank you for this Sanaa, it was great to have a try at this, I really liked form.
I am so glad you liked the form, Paul 🥰 just came from reading your poem. It was lovely 💖💖
I now want to try some more of this – many thanks Sanaa.
You are most welcome, Paul! 💖💖
This is a good form Sanaa. Thanks for the introduction! (K)
You’re most welcome! I am so glad you liked the form, K! 🥰
Thanks for hosting, Sanaa. This was a fun prompt to write to. 🙂
You’re welcome, I am so glad you enjoyed the prompt 💖💖
Hi poet friends. Hope your Monday is going fine.
Much💖love