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Welcome to another Poetics Tuesday, dVerse pub regulars and newcomers! Before we stir your muse, a reminder for you all…
REMINDER! Two chances to join OLN LIVE this month!
Thursday, July 20th from 3 to 4 PM EST
AND Saturday, July 22nd from 10 to 11 AM EST.
You may still link one poem as usual for OLN (Open Link Night) even if you do not attend a live session.
A vacation is what you take when you can no longer take what you’ve been taking.” – Earl Wilson
Last week we were back at the pub after a break. Who doesn’t love a vacation? Anything that can break the monotony of a humdrum life is always welcome.
How that vacation is spent, varies from person to person. Are you a micromanager or go-with-the-flow type, are you an inveterate sightseeing kind or one who prefers to laze around, a nature lover or a city lights worshipper, a beach bum or a mountain trekker or maybe someone who likes to spend time with the family running after butterflies in the overgrown backyard!
There was a time when only celebrities jetted off to exotic locales for vacations. These days people have bucket lists for travels. Some will go to any length to get an Instagram worthy shot. Others seek places still untouched by tourism. The idea of a vacation, for many now, is to do what nobody has done before.
As a child I would always look forward to summer vacation. It meant an overnight train journey to my maternal grandmother’s home, where all my mom’s siblings and cousins would gather with their kids. TV had just come to India and most middle-class households couldn’t afford a set. So we would spend our days bicycling in the narrow lanes of the sleepy town or go to the nearby fields to bathe under a tubewell. Afternoons were spent playing games indoors and waiting for the kulfi wallah! (Indian ice cream). At night, after dinner my uncle would prepare a huge vat of milk mixed with soda and rooh afza, which we all slurped greedily. And then we would all go to the terrace, sleeping on string cots, under mosquito net, watching constellations!
Food, fun and fights for almost a fortnight, then we would all board trains or buses back to our homes, browner than before but brimming with memories, looking forward to making more the next year.
As a mother, at the beginning of each new session in school, I still check the list of holidays in the almanac! The visit to grandparents continues.
For today’s Poetics, I would like you to write about a vacation. Share your vacation experience with us. Whether you decide to write about the most memorable one or the one that turned out to be a nightmare, is up to you. It could be about a family vacation or a solo trip…anything!
For inspiration, I am sharing excerpts from some poems.
To the Sea by Philip Larkin
“To step over the low wall that divides
Road from concrete walk above the shore
Brings sharply back something known long before—
The miniature gaiety of seasides.”
Vacation by Rita Dove
“I love the hour before takeoff,
that stretch of no time, no home
but the gray vinyl seats linked like
unfolding paper dolls.”
Family Vacation by Judith Slater
“I left you at the campsite with greasy pans
and told our children not to follow me.
The dying light had made me desperate.
I broke into a hobbled run, across tracks”
After you have written your poem on your blog, please link it back to this post. Don’t forget Mr.Linky will be open for your links only till 2.00 pm Thursday. Do come back later to read and enjoy what others have shared.
Remember we have OLN Live this Thursday and Saturday with Sanaa.
kim881 said:
Good evening poets! Thank you for hosting with a holiday prompt, Punam, which set me off humming ‘Holiday’ by Madonna!
paeansunplugged said:
Good evening, Kim. I am glad it set you off humming. 🙂
paeansunplugged said:
Hello everyone! I am very eager to read your vacation memories. We have drinks of your choice, fish and chips, club sandwiches, sweet potato fries and battered onion rings. For those who have a sweet tooth, we have kulfi with falooda (cold noodles/vermicelli) and mango tarts. Have fun.
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rothpoetry said:
Hi Punam, thank you for hosting. Vacation memories are many. This should be an interesting evening of reading!
paeansunplugged said:
Hi Roth! My pleasure. I am sure you have many wonderful memories to share. It is for sure going to be very interesting.
rothpoetry said:
:>)
paeansunplugged said:
I am sorry, Dwight. I was half asleep when I responded.
rothpoetry said:
No problem. Don’t worry about it. I do the same from time to time.
rog said:
hi Punam
hi all
what great prompt. mango tarts sound good.
ticked one of my bucket list last year with a trip to see the Edinburgh fringe festival.
will be back to read soonish
rog
paeansunplugged said:
Hi Rog! I am sure you must have had a lot of fun at the festival.
No rush, take your time.
rog said:
♥️
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Richmond Road said:
I quick thought – a work in progress, very likely to progress no further
A working title? ‘A Holiday in Every Book’.
Getting away from it all
Little moments of recall
Little lives to re-live
And take the time to forgive
One’s own mistakes.
On these
Little breaks from reality
Where, you see
You can tell
That it all works out well
A smile on your face
In this other place
That lasts forever, in its way
Tomorrow just another day. Another endeavour
Who knows where? Who can say?
Should I care?
Is it clever?
To never
Leave this place
This sweet embrace
Within the pages
A story for the ages
And never mind what I have missed
Girls I might have kissed
For there is always another lover
Behind the mist. Inside the cover.
paeansunplugged said:
The best kind of vacation, for sure! There is always so much inside the cover. Thanks so much for sharing.
Reena Saxena said:
You reminded me of my summer vacations in school 😊
paeansunplugged said:
Summer vacations in school were so much fun! 😊
Reena Saxena said:
I realise the value of laborious efforts put in by mothers and aunts now. I’ll find it tough to manage 20 people in the house today, but they did. And we took it all for granted.
paeansunplugged said:
I totally agree with you, Reena. My mami was ever smiling when we visited. All the women chipped in with cooking, making beds etc but having 20 odd people over for a week or more is certainly daunting.
When we had relatives at our place, I don’t remember my mom ever complaining. Yes, we did take it all for granted.
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Frewin55 said:
Thanks for this Vacation prompt, it let me get out a lot os thoughts that have been swirling around – hope to see you on Thursday…
paeansunplugged said:
I am glad we will get a glimpse into your thoughts. Will be around soon.
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pvcann said:
This prompt stirred the moments some years ago when we decided to slow down and not fly, holidays or slow-cations are my thing now 🙂 Thank you Punam.
paeansunplugged said:
Slow-cations are the best, Paul. I really enjoyed your poem. You are welcome. 🙂
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Dawn said:
Love this prompt.
I live for vacay!!!!! Whenever, wherever I travel I try to find the most interesting, culturally-relevant experiences I can have and immerse myself fully in them. For this prompt shared my last vacay which was in 3 African countries: https://createdbydeesign.com/2023/05/05/back-to-africa-dawn-minott/
paeansunplugged said:
Wonderful! 🙂 I am delighted that you like the prompt. Will catch up in a while.
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