“April April
Sinks through the sand of names”
~ W.S. Merwin
Here we are at the beginning of April and after my last MTB prompt looking into the meaning of names, I did a little research and discovered that April most likely derives from the Latin name Aprilis from the verb aperire, “to open“, an allusion to its being the season when trees and flowers begin to open. This ties in with the modern Greek (ánixi) (opening) for spring.
Emily Wakefield’s prose poem “April” certainly taps into this sense of an initial blossoming:
“...it makes sense that we met in April. It makes sense that the leaves have filled out around their branches and the thunder wakes me up before dawn with thoughts of you and it makes sense that I can smell the rain shower through my open windows. The flowers bloom like they know a prophetic secret and the sun shines brighter to let them. It makes sense….”
In this second verse of his “April Morning” poem, Jonathon Wells hints at opening as a very beginning:
“This Sunday the rain turns cold
again and steady but the window
is slightly open and there is the vaguest
sense of bird song somewhere in the gaps
between the buildings because it's spring
the calendar says and the room where
you are reading is empty yet full
of what loves you and this is the day
that you were born.
Aside from their mutual topic, what both poems have in common is the clue to this prompt, and there is hint of it too in the first verse of Czeslaw-milosz “Ars Poetica”:
“I have always aspired to a more spacious form
that would be free from the claims of poetry or prose
and would let us understand each other without exposing
the author or reader to sublime agonies….”
For some of us those agonies are in the very form of poetry – that is The Closed Poetry Form of rhymes in a set scheme, syllabic counts, the meter of stressed and unstressed syllables etc.
So for this prompt our writing will be in the Open Poetry Form, otherwise known as Free Verse or Vers Libre. This is not to be regarded as an anarchic free-for -all but rather poetry set free from the uniform straight jacket.
So your poem can include any of poetry’s characteristics but without any consistent regularity:
- rhyme (inner, end) meter;
- repetition; alliteration; assonance
- imagery, symbolism, metaphor
The underlying challenge to Open Poetry is to give your poem a structure, which inevitably lies within its musicality and cadence, akin to the conversational. The above Free Verse poems gives us a sense of this.
And what of topic? That too is a free choice but suggestions include April; Open; Love (since the month of April was dedicated to the goddess Aphrodite.) Or even an Ars Poetica on this poetry style
Useful Links:
Open Form with poetry examples
How to write a Free Verse poem
10 of the Best Free Verse poems
dVerse – Form for All… 2012
So once you have posted your poem according to the guidelines above, do add it to Mr Linky below then go visiting and reading other contributors as that is half the fun of our dVerse gatherings.
[N.B. Mr Linky closes Saturday 3 p.m. EST]
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Good evening… enjoyed the prompt… for once it was not all dark.
must be because its getting lighter these days 😉
Good evening from the Uk poets – the bar is open, its open mic night for your poems (so I’ll be doing the rounds bit by bit) which this time around are in open free form!
Bar snacks and drinks are open to suggestions!
After a tough day, I’m very tired, so I’m linking and running again. But I’ll be back to read and comment tomorrow.
see you soon Kim
Hello, Bjorn, Laura, Kim, and All. Laura, thanks again, for a fun and challenging prompt. I looked at Sam’s post from way back when and it inspired me even further. Hope you enjoy what I did with it. If you have hot rooibos-peppermint tea with a splash of Baileys and a blueberry muffin, I’d love them, please 🙂
your order is a poem in itself Lisa – coming up now – like your poem!!- (glad you took a look at that post too)
🙂 Thanks much, and Cheers!
It’s mid-afternoon here in D.C. and I’m loving the April vibes in the prompt, Laura. Thank you for the stellar examples.
you were so inspired with your April, Dora (made me wish I’d gone down that road but chose Ars Poetic instead)
Hello everyone! Laura, I loved the poems you shared.
It’s past midnight. Will come back during the day to read.
Goodnight everyone!
Goodnight and thank you – your poem is a beautiful mix
hey all. Gillena, i loved y our poem. just a warm wonderful homey picture you painted there
are you having problems commenting on her site – I do too
loved the idea of the songs coming thru the window and the entire vibe you gave us
April got drunk, that naughty girl. Do you have any coffee?
coffee always .. but I won’t join you as am off to bed and it keeps me awak. Back tomorrow for a read
Thanks for this open free verse and topic of choice prompt, Laura!
thanks Jennifer –
Ta Laura, impeccably difficult, so I went where I went…a pint of something colourful please…
judging by your poem Ain, you already are intoxicated!
Thank you for the effort and elegance in assembling this challenge for us.
thank you especially for noticing
Thank you for hosting and this writing challenge. I decided to reflect on my day and share the wanderings of my mind.
thank you Trudessa for joining in with a lovely visual poem
Hello, Laura thanks for hosting, I enjoyed writing for the prompt!
it shows how much this poetry style suited you
Many thanks Laura, a great prompt to play with.
and what a play you made with her!
Been forever since I have been here. Life has been drowning me a little bit. But adding a free verse while I can, while we are still a bit free. After all this time and I write bout politics, sorry, not sorry. but I do luv y’all. working all weekend to wee hours so will be hard to read and comment in timely manner, but I will be back to do it. 🙂