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are they really that much different than me?, let me see them, poetry people, you can tell a lot about a person by the shoes they wear
I grew up reading stories. Escaping into stories. Reliving stories in the woods out back. I fell in love with certain characters and would always be on the look out for further stories about them. I would make up stories about the same characters.
We knew how the characters would act in certain situations because we began to understand the characters when the author took the time to develop them.
Today, I want to talk about developing characters in our poetry. On the surface this can seem the impossible task considering novelist take whole books and series to really develop a character—and in poetry we only have a few lines.
There are several ways to develop a character that we can take advantage of to make our poetry and story telling come alive:
Physical Details about the character: This is most obvious and most used way to introduce a character. As poets, we can thrive on our imagery, allowing someone to see the person by creatively showing how they look, adding wrinkles to imply age, give them wild hair to give the edge of craziness or use the symbolism of a hawk nose.
Physical environment surrounding the character: The setting in which we place our character can tell us a lot about them as a person. It can also speak to their motives and lifestyle. The aspects of the environment that we choose to accentuate, such as shadows or light, will add to our feel of the character.
The other characters surrounding the character: The other characters we use and how our characters interact with each other will tell us a lot about the person.
The things that the character does: The actions of the character may imply their motivations, their habits, the personality that they have. Their actions may be familiar to a reader or challenge the way that they would normally handle a situation.
The things that the character says or thinks: Dialog lets us hear a character. Perhaps you use a dialect for them to tell us about where they are from. How they talk to others, the strength of their voice or the weakness of it will tell us about a character. The feelings we give a character are important indicators of the kind of person they are.
While that is a lot to think about in terms of developing a character, especially considering the limited time we have to do it in poetry, it is important to think about how we can make them come alive for our reader. It then becomes a choice in what do we use, and what do we leave out.
If you have thoughts on this, leave them in the comments—and we can discuss this further.
What I would like you to do today is to write a poem and focus on developing at least one character within your verse. The verse can be a just about that person, or they can be just and ‘actor’ in a greater situation. Do make sure that you working on making that one character come alive for the reader.
If you are new here, let me tell you how this works:
- Write a poem to the prompt and post it to your webpage/blog
- Click the Mr. Linky button below and enter your name and the direct url to your poem.
- There you will find others that are writing to the same prompt. Visit them. Tell them what you liked about their poem or what you appreciated about the character they developed.
- Enjoy — we are all learning together and you can learn much just in interacting with one another.
brian miller said:
Pubs open….
i will be around as soon as school lets out….
Björn Rudberg (brudberg) said:
Here I will go my rounds before going to bed.
claudia said:
ha yes…smiles… character matters… love to capture people i meet along the way…
brian miller said:
people are some of my favorite subjects.
next time i am up… i will probably be shifting over to focus on place in our story telling…another favorite….setting the scene
Björn Rudberg (brudberg) said:
I can tell that you do that.. and I’m learning constantly..
Björn Rudberg (brudberg) said:
I love describing people.. one thing I do when I write short stories. Usually you can capture a person through their action or a significant detail… and then develop the complexety through contradictions.. yes this is a perfect prompt Brian..
brian miller said:
def the contradictions of a person add a level of complexity to them….
glad you had fun…your response was def a fun one to read…
though i would love some sushi right now…
Björn Rudberg (brudberg) said:
ha.. yes the sushi was excellent..
claudia said:
i love sushi… and yours was def. a fun piece björn
Adriana Citlali Ramírez said:
Oxymorons and contradictions are pure magic!
Gay Reiser Cannon said:
In the spirit of the Olympic season, and because figure skating is never too far away – thought I’d try to capture the spirit of a little girl who no matter what had a smile and a kind word for everyone, everyday when she came to the rink to train…now many years ago.
brian miller said:
smiles…sounds like a winning personality to me….
dont you love those people….
Gay Reiser Cannon said:
I do. They make me try harder to be patient and kind – always a necessary ingredient in any sports environment.
claudia said:
i admire people who under loads of pressure stay friendly and have a smile for those around them… i have to work on my patience… oy…
Glenn Buttkus said:
The great thing about this prompt is the immense latitude it provides; whereby an inanimate object, or an animal, mountain, or reptile can be the character you are describing and/or using; we can use blank verse, prose poems, or formal structure; really no limits–which is one of the most positive things about dVerse, we all continue to expand & enrich our poetic prowess just be stepping up to each challenge, and then getting out there on the trail, to learn from, & be amazed by the poets that cluster here; win/win.
Björn Rudberg (brudberg) said:
I agree.. this is basic story telling… so difficult but yet very basic.
claudia said:
smiles… win/win indeed…. and it’s great how the prompts stretch our poetic muscles and repertoire as well
brian miller said:
it is basic story telling…i am trying to break down the elements after our first run at stories last time i was in here…and as i tell my math kids…if you can master the basics…or break it down to the simple elements…we can put it back together….
Ella said:
I am working on a deadline, but I love all that you shared and have an idea!
We say Idear where I am originally from. Yes, I need to stretch-I am writing other stuff, but my poetry is suffering?! Thank you~
claudia said:
oh i hope you’ll find the time to write something… idear…sounds spanish..?
brian miller said:
hahaha so what part of the south are you in ella…i had a few ideers in my day….smiles…
is the deadline for your art?
ellaedge said:
No, it is New England…lol! I am in North Carolina near VA border. Lol Yes, maybe a beer to help those ideers ;D
Yes, it is and it is kicking my butt! I am running away from my muse tomorrow and find a way to get out of my head. I will be an escape artist-lol You have fun with your ideers-do they bounce around or circle you?
Victoria C. Slotto said:
This is a great post, Brian–full of good ideas. I will be out for the afternoon, but am nursing and idea and hope to join in with a poem and reading tomorrow! Thanks for hosting.
brian miller said:
well hopefully it grows up into a big old idea….cant wait to see…
off to do bus duty…..
Björn Rudberg (brudberg) said:
I look forward to your entry Victoria.. this is an article for my arhives… so much fun
Victoria C. Slotto said:
That should say, nursing AN idea. I am no longer nursing! God help the patients if I were.
claudia said:
smiles.. i think you would be still an amazing nurse… but nursing a poetry idea sounds good as well…smiles
Me a writer? said:
Had a suitable one at hand
claudia said:
on my way over…
claudia said:
cracked me up…smiles
Björn Rudberg (brudberg) said:
Ha,. enjoyed it a lot John
shanyns said:
Developing a character, being a character, telling the story with character…I’m packing and thinking and pondering. And trying to see where my muse leads me west, north, past, present or future…or east. Never gone there…or south. HMMMMM
Pirates, cowboys, rebels, Indians, pioneers, favorite literary characters…
claudia said:
smiles…so many possibilities….maybe throw a coin…smiles
Björn Rudberg (brudberg) said:
Yes develop a character in limited space is a lot of fun…
shanyns said:
I might have to! 🙂
brian miller said:
smiles…look forward to seeing what you bring shanyn….
brian miller said:
LEGO!!!!!! ha. cool piece shanyn
claudia said:
i’m getting sleepy….smiles… will head to bed and catch up with the overnites in the morning… see you…and have fun writing
brian miller said:
sleep well…about to drive home from work myself…
see you tomorrow c…
Björn Rudberg (brudberg) said:
Sleepy time here as well.. Will check back tomorrow morning
Linda Kruschke said:
Love this prompt! I’ve been pondering writing a poem about our new kitten, the one mentioned in my last dVerse inspired poem, and this prompt was just the thing to make it happen. Thanks for tending bar today, Brian. Peace, Linda
Linda Kruschke said:
Had to add another to an older poem that fit the prompt. 😉 Hope that’s okay. Linda
brian miller said:
cool…will be over in a few…just got home…smiles.
ramblingsfromamum said:
An interesting exercise – thanks for suggesting and tending Brian 🙂
brian miller said:
look forward to seeing yours smiles.
freyathewriter said:
What a great idea! Honestly, I’d not really thought about it, but we need to consider the same issues when writing a poem about a character, as when we are developing a short story or other prose. A great challenge, Brian, thank you!
brian miller said:
most def…i was a short story writer before i was a poet…so i brought a lot of that over with me…
hanna said:
Brian, maybe it is time for you to start writing a play?
This was hard work and I am all tuckered out now.
If only I knew how to turn it into a poem.
Ideas welcome.
brian miller said:
oo i have never written a play…that would def be a challenge…
kkkkaty1 said:
Writing a play would be challenging, Brian, but had you the time, you could. Having posted several stories of characters on my blog and at the dverse pub poetry site, even tho they
are prose, (prose poems?). I have more in draft stage, except this one
and I hope it fits the prompt. Back tonight to read what others have..
brian miller said:
cool….def have read a few characters in your work…heading over now….
brian miller said:
be back shortly…we have PTA at the school tonight….
Abhra Pal said:
All of that in a poem – surely a great challenge. What I feel is that even if we form a character in poetry – it’s not sufficient a canvas to portray all the sides – getting some ideas, will definitely look forward to join in.
brian miller said:
ah that is def part of it…the same in a painting…you have to choose which detail you will show…the list above is the basics of character development for a short story or novel…i dont know that you can accomplish all of it in a poem, but pick and choose your aspects…
Abhra Pal said:
Yes, I wrote in a free flow actually. There an alternative idea too in my mind – but that would be more prose than poetry.
brian miller said:
cool…you should give the prose a try as well…
i would def enjoy reading it…
Abhra Pal said:
Sure, Brian – will try tomorrow. Thanks.
Grace said:
Interesting prompt Brian ~ Don’t think I can write tonight but will definitely consider the inputs ~ Been a long day for me ~ Thanks for tending the bar ~
brian miller said:
sorry its been a long day grace…hope you get that chance….smiles.
Lisa A. Williams Poetry said:
This reminds of a play called “character Matters” my youngest daughter was in when she was in third grade, it brought tears to my eyes when all the children held hands and sang the title song, how important it is to be a good person, more valuable than anything. Lovely prompt!
brian miller said:
smiles…i think my son might have performed in the same play…i knew it was familiar when i wrote the title and now that you say that…smiles.
claudia said:
whew.. links have doubled since i left yesterday… off to read in a bit…just need a coffee first… good morning
Bastet said:
Reblogged this on Bastet and Sekhmet's Library and commented:
An intereresting post…how to devleope characters…and a poem prompt…cool!
barbtaub said:
So interesting! I’m a novelist and don’t have the nerve for poetry, but these tips are absolutely dead on. Thanks for gathering so many of them together, and I hope you’ll forgive some novelist tip-poaching.
brian miller said:
smiles. thank you. i was a short story writer before i was a poet…so there is hope. and hey, pub is open so take what you like. smiles.
Bastet said:
I think Barb, whether novelist or poet, these are good bits of advice…something to look on from time to time. I’m sure the author of the post would be happy that a novelist enjoyed the piece.
brian miller said:
oh but he is. smiles.
Bastet said:
🙂 glad to see you smile!
Susan said:
Hey Brian and all ….
I used this occasion to cut two chapters of my novel into one. I had intended to reduce it further into narrative poetry, but didn’t. I believe I posted prose. Please forgive me and enjoy my character. Can you tell she is an old woman, much older than me?
brian miller said:
was cool to glimpse into your WIP…i like your character….
Gay Reiser Cannon said:
I didn’t picture here any particular age – but thought 30ish … course I don’t know how old you are. Perhaps 30 is old to you. It was always “old” to my mother. While I don’t remember it, she used to say she cried the whole day when she turned 30. Ha! That’s just the beginning.
Susan said:
I’m 62. I was thinking Alice to be a mighty spry 75. So guessing 30 is about right!
welshstream said:
Bar looking a tad empty at this time! Oh well .. will enjoy cruising through all you poetry in these wee small hours!
brian miller said:
um yeah i was asleep behind the bar….ha….i am awake now and watching that guy walk by in the coat with his paper….
Björn Rudberg (brudberg) said:
At your place also.. He’s here as well..
brian miller said:
he obviously gets around….ha
charlesmashburn said:
I’m busier’n a one-legged man in a butt-kickin contest this mornin, and I was just gonna take a quick glance at my emails. An hour and a half later…. Dang it, Brian!
brian miller said:
hahaha gotcha….smiles….
glad to wreck your morning charles….smiles…
brian miller said:
lucychili,
i appreciate you stopping over at my place…as soon as i get home from work i will stop over…for some reason the filter here at work will not let me get beyond the front page to leave a comment back…great minimalist characterization…love the smoothness of it as well…
brian miller said:
i got in….smiles.
brian miller said:
so it’s Friday….
anyone got anything going on this evening fun?
i am one of 8 chaperones for 50 elementary kids on a reading sleep over/all nighter….if you think much reading is getting done you are sadly mistaken…hahaha….but we will try….smiles….
Björn Rudberg (brudberg) said:
I will not complain … we just 4 — 14 year old girls coming to visit.. assume I will do plenty of reading 🙂 They will not have anything to do with me… they are due to for a concert tomorrow..
brian miller said:
hahahaha yes there is an age where they pull away like that a bit…
what concert are they going to?
Björn Rudberg (brudberg) said:
They are going to Avicii (spelling?)
brian miller said:
hmmm will have to google that one…ha
Grace said:
Yikes on those sleep – overs ~ Have fun anyway ~ Happy Friday ~
brian miller said:
ha. i might be a little out of it for poetics tomorrow…
claudia said:
haha…have fun… dunno why it’s called sleep over as no one sleeps anyway…smiles
Adriana Citlali Ramírez said:
I once took a class on character development for movie scripts. It amazed me how much thought goes into each character when a good script is attempted to be written. Great prompt! I just wrote my contribution –hopefully not too late!
brian miller said:
cool. not too late at all…i found an internet signal here where we are chaperoning so i will be in and out through the night…
Adriana Citlali Ramírez said:
Internet signal (even a faint one) is better than none in these “modern” times… smiles…
brian miller said:
true…i am with 55 3rd to 5th grade students right now…
it has not gotten scary yet but if i can escape via internet
for a bit periodically i might make it through the night…
Adriana Citlali Ramírez said:
I wish you the best of luck (or success)…
brian miller said:
ha. may need to wish for my sanity…smiles.
good eve…
Adriana Citlali Ramírez said:
I wish for that too… good night (almost morning here)!
Akila said:
bad….some cable problem here and could neither post nor link. got it right now but the linky expired! ll do the rounds a bit later. and perhaps, ll anyway put the post on the blog for posterity! smiles….
brian miller said:
smiles….glad you popped in anyway….enjoyed your piece akila
purplepeninportland said:
Enjoyed this prompt. Mr. Linky does not work for me. My poem is up at:
http://purplepeninportland.wordpress.com/2014/03/01/remorse-late-night/
The Course of Our Seasons said:
here I am knocking on the door of the pub – late as usual – smiles – but did want you to know I loved this prompt , Brian – a little spring fever is at work in my offering http://wp.me/p1LuVw-Xr K