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are they really that much different than me?, let me see them, poetry people, you can tell a lot about a person by the shoes they wear

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I grew up reading stories. Escaping into stories. Reliving stories in the woods out back. I fell in love with certain characters and would always be on the look out for further stories about them. I would make up stories about the same characters.
We knew how the characters would act in certain situations because we began to understand the characters when the author took the time to develop them.
Today, I want to talk about developing characters in our poetry. On the surface this can seem the impossible task considering novelist take whole books and series to really develop a character—and in poetry we only have a few lines.
There are several ways to develop a character that we can take advantage of to make our poetry and story telling come alive:
Physical Details about the character: This is most obvious and most used way to introduce a character. As poets, we can thrive on our imagery, allowing someone to see the person by creatively showing how they look, adding wrinkles to imply age, give them wild hair to give the edge of craziness or use the symbolism of a hawk nose.
Physical environment surrounding the character: The setting in which we place our character can tell us a lot about them as a person. It can also speak to their motives and lifestyle. The aspects of the environment that we choose to accentuate, such as shadows or light, will add to our feel of the character.
The other characters surrounding the character: The other characters we use and how our characters interact with each other will tell us a lot about the person.
The things that the character does: The actions of the character may imply their motivations, their habits, the personality that they have. Their actions may be familiar to a reader or challenge the way that they would normally handle a situation.
The things that the character says or thinks: Dialog lets us hear a character. Perhaps you use a dialect for them to tell us about where they are from. How they talk to others, the strength of their voice or the weakness of it will tell us about a character. The feelings we give a character are important indicators of the kind of person they are.
While that is a lot to think about in terms of developing a character, especially considering the limited time we have to do it in poetry, it is important to think about how we can make them come alive for our reader. It then becomes a choice in what do we use, and what do we leave out.
If you have thoughts on this, leave them in the comments—and we can discuss this further.
What I would like you to do today is to write a poem and focus on developing at least one character within your verse. The verse can be a just about that person, or they can be just and ‘actor’ in a greater situation. Do make sure that you working on making that one character come alive for the reader.
If you are new here, let me tell you how this works:
- Write a poem to the prompt and post it to your webpage/blog
- Click the Mr. Linky button below and enter your name and the direct url to your poem.
- There you will find others that are writing to the same prompt. Visit them. Tell them what you liked about their poem or what you appreciated about the character they developed.
- Enjoy — we are all learning together and you can learn much just in interacting with one another.
Pubs open….
i will be around as soon as school lets out….
Here I will go my rounds before going to bed.
ha yes…smiles… character matters… love to capture people i meet along the way…
people are some of my favorite subjects.
next time i am up… i will probably be shifting over to focus on place in our story telling…another favorite….setting the scene
I can tell that you do that.. and I’m learning constantly..
I love describing people.. one thing I do when I write short stories. Usually you can capture a person through their action or a significant detail… and then develop the complexety through contradictions.. yes this is a perfect prompt Brian..
def the contradictions of a person add a level of complexity to them….
glad you had fun…your response was def a fun one to read…
though i would love some sushi right now…
ha.. yes the sushi was excellent..
i love sushi… and yours was def. a fun piece björn
Oxymorons and contradictions are pure magic!
In the spirit of the Olympic season, and because figure skating is never too far away – thought I’d try to capture the spirit of a little girl who no matter what had a smile and a kind word for everyone, everyday when she came to the rink to train…now many years ago.
smiles…sounds like a winning personality to me….
dont you love those people….
I do. They make me try harder to be patient and kind – always a necessary ingredient in any sports environment.
i admire people who under loads of pressure stay friendly and have a smile for those around them… i have to work on my patience… oy…
The great thing about this prompt is the immense latitude it provides; whereby an inanimate object, or an animal, mountain, or reptile can be the character you are describing and/or using; we can use blank verse, prose poems, or formal structure; really no limits–which is one of the most positive things about dVerse, we all continue to expand & enrich our poetic prowess just be stepping up to each challenge, and then getting out there on the trail, to learn from, & be amazed by the poets that cluster here; win/win.
I agree.. this is basic story telling… so difficult but yet very basic.
smiles… win/win indeed…. and it’s great how the prompts stretch our poetic muscles and repertoire as well
it is basic story telling…i am trying to break down the elements after our first run at stories last time i was in here…and as i tell my math kids…if you can master the basics…or break it down to the simple elements…we can put it back together….
I am working on a deadline, but I love all that you shared and have an idea!
We say Idear where I am originally from. Yes, I need to stretch-I am writing other stuff, but my poetry is suffering?! Thank you~
oh i hope you’ll find the time to write something… idear…sounds spanish..?
hahaha so what part of the south are you in ella…i had a few ideers in my day….smiles…
is the deadline for your art?
No, it is New England…lol! I am in North Carolina near VA border. Lol Yes, maybe a beer to help those ideers ;D
Yes, it is and it is kicking my butt! I am running away from my muse tomorrow and find a way to get out of my head. I will be an escape artist-lol You have fun with your ideers-do they bounce around or circle you?
This is a great post, Brian–full of good ideas. I will be out for the afternoon, but am nursing and idea and hope to join in with a poem and reading tomorrow! Thanks for hosting.
well hopefully it grows up into a big old idea….cant wait to see…
off to do bus duty…..
I look forward to your entry Victoria.. this is an article for my arhives… so much fun
That should say, nursing AN idea. I am no longer nursing! God help the patients if I were.
smiles.. i think you would be still an amazing nurse… but nursing a poetry idea sounds good as well…smiles
Had a suitable one at hand
on my way over…
cracked me up…smiles
Ha,. enjoyed it a lot John
Developing a character, being a character, telling the story with character…I’m packing and thinking and pondering. And trying to see where my muse leads me west, north, past, present or future…or east. Never gone there…or south. HMMMMM
Pirates, cowboys, rebels, Indians, pioneers, favorite literary characters…
smiles…so many possibilities….maybe throw a coin…smiles
Yes develop a character in limited space is a lot of fun…
I might have to! 🙂
smiles…look forward to seeing what you bring shanyn….
LEGO!!!!!! ha. cool piece shanyn
i’m getting sleepy….smiles… will head to bed and catch up with the overnites in the morning… see you…and have fun writing
sleep well…about to drive home from work myself…
see you tomorrow c…
Sleepy time here as well.. Will check back tomorrow morning
Love this prompt! I’ve been pondering writing a poem about our new kitten, the one mentioned in my last dVerse inspired poem, and this prompt was just the thing to make it happen. Thanks for tending bar today, Brian. Peace, Linda
Had to add another to an older poem that fit the prompt. 😉 Hope that’s okay. Linda
cool…will be over in a few…just got home…smiles.
An interesting exercise – thanks for suggesting and tending Brian 🙂
look forward to seeing yours smiles.
What a great idea! Honestly, I’d not really thought about it, but we need to consider the same issues when writing a poem about a character, as when we are developing a short story or other prose. A great challenge, Brian, thank you!
most def…i was a short story writer before i was a poet…so i brought a lot of that over with me…
Brian, maybe it is time for you to start writing a play?
This was hard work and I am all tuckered out now.
If only I knew how to turn it into a poem.
Ideas welcome.
oo i have never written a play…that would def be a challenge…
Writing a play would be challenging, Brian, but had you the time, you could. Having posted several stories of characters on my blog and at the dverse pub poetry site, even tho they
are prose, (prose poems?). I have more in draft stage, except this one
and I hope it fits the prompt. Back tonight to read what others have..
cool….def have read a few characters in your work…heading over now….
be back shortly…we have PTA at the school tonight….
All of that in a poem – surely a great challenge. What I feel is that even if we form a character in poetry – it’s not sufficient a canvas to portray all the sides – getting some ideas, will definitely look forward to join in.
ah that is def part of it…the same in a painting…you have to choose which detail you will show…the list above is the basics of character development for a short story or novel…i dont know that you can accomplish all of it in a poem, but pick and choose your aspects…
Yes, I wrote in a free flow actually. There an alternative idea too in my mind – but that would be more prose than poetry.
cool…you should give the prose a try as well…
i would def enjoy reading it…
Sure, Brian – will try tomorrow. Thanks.
Interesting prompt Brian ~ Don’t think I can write tonight but will definitely consider the inputs ~ Been a long day for me ~ Thanks for tending the bar ~
sorry its been a long day grace…hope you get that chance….smiles.
This reminds of a play called “character Matters” my youngest daughter was in when she was in third grade, it brought tears to my eyes when all the children held hands and sang the title song, how important it is to be a good person, more valuable than anything. Lovely prompt!
smiles…i think my son might have performed in the same play…i knew it was familiar when i wrote the title and now that you say that…smiles.
whew.. links have doubled since i left yesterday… off to read in a bit…just need a coffee first… good morning
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An intereresting post…how to devleope characters…and a poem prompt…cool!
So interesting! I’m a novelist and don’t have the nerve for poetry, but these tips are absolutely dead on. Thanks for gathering so many of them together, and I hope you’ll forgive some novelist tip-poaching.
smiles. thank you. i was a short story writer before i was a poet…so there is hope. and hey, pub is open so take what you like. smiles.
I think Barb, whether novelist or poet, these are good bits of advice…something to look on from time to time. I’m sure the author of the post would be happy that a novelist enjoyed the piece.
oh but he is. smiles.
🙂 glad to see you smile!
Hey Brian and all ….
I used this occasion to cut two chapters of my novel into one. I had intended to reduce it further into narrative poetry, but didn’t. I believe I posted prose. Please forgive me and enjoy my character. Can you tell she is an old woman, much older than me?
was cool to glimpse into your WIP…i like your character….
I didn’t picture here any particular age – but thought 30ish … course I don’t know how old you are. Perhaps 30 is old to you. It was always “old” to my mother. While I don’t remember it, she used to say she cried the whole day when she turned 30. Ha! That’s just the beginning.
I’m 62. I was thinking Alice to be a mighty spry 75. So guessing 30 is about right!
Bar looking a tad empty at this time! Oh well .. will enjoy cruising through all you poetry in these wee small hours!
um yeah i was asleep behind the bar….ha….i am awake now and watching that guy walk by in the coat with his paper….
At your place also.. He’s here as well..
he obviously gets around….ha
I’m busier’n a one-legged man in a butt-kickin contest this mornin, and I was just gonna take a quick glance at my emails. An hour and a half later…. Dang it, Brian!
hahaha gotcha….smiles….
glad to wreck your morning charles….smiles…
lucychili,
i appreciate you stopping over at my place…as soon as i get home from work i will stop over…for some reason the filter here at work will not let me get beyond the front page to leave a comment back…great minimalist characterization…love the smoothness of it as well…
i got in….smiles.
so it’s Friday….
anyone got anything going on this evening fun?
i am one of 8 chaperones for 50 elementary kids on a reading sleep over/all nighter….if you think much reading is getting done you are sadly mistaken…hahaha….but we will try….smiles….
I will not complain … we just 4 — 14 year old girls coming to visit.. assume I will do plenty of reading 🙂 They will not have anything to do with me… they are due to for a concert tomorrow..
hahahaha yes there is an age where they pull away like that a bit…
what concert are they going to?
They are going to Avicii (spelling?)
hmmm will have to google that one…ha
Yikes on those sleep – overs ~ Have fun anyway ~ Happy Friday ~
ha. i might be a little out of it for poetics tomorrow…
haha…have fun… dunno why it’s called sleep over as no one sleeps anyway…smiles
I once took a class on character development for movie scripts. It amazed me how much thought goes into each character when a good script is attempted to be written. Great prompt! I just wrote my contribution –hopefully not too late!
cool. not too late at all…i found an internet signal here where we are chaperoning so i will be in and out through the night…
Internet signal (even a faint one) is better than none in these “modern” times… smiles…
true…i am with 55 3rd to 5th grade students right now…
it has not gotten scary yet but if i can escape via internet
for a bit periodically i might make it through the night…
I wish you the best of luck (or success)…
ha. may need to wish for my sanity…smiles.
good eve…
I wish for that too… good night (almost morning here)!
bad….some cable problem here and could neither post nor link. got it right now but the linky expired! ll do the rounds a bit later. and perhaps, ll anyway put the post on the blog for posterity! smiles….
smiles….glad you popped in anyway….enjoyed your piece akila
Enjoyed this prompt. Mr. Linky does not work for me. My poem is up at:
http://purplepeninportland.wordpress.com/2014/03/01/remorse-late-night/
here I am knocking on the door of the pub – late as usual – smiles – but did want you to know I loved this prompt , Brian – a little spring fever is at work in my offering http://wp.me/p1LuVw-Xr K