Marvin Bell, 1937
1. About the Dead Man and Your Hands
Mornings, he keeps out the world awhile, the dead man.
The dead man, without looking, believes what you said of the garden.
He knows the color of a rose is the color of a rose is the color.
He sees the early sky lit by a burn toward which we sidle.
He will take care of you, the dead man will do that.
He will wait for your hair to grow back.
He thinks the things you touched are lucky to be yours.
The dead man knows where to be and where not to be, how he survives.
He is aware, at all times, of your place, your dog, your rug, your roof, your chairs and tables.
Here is his own table, from the basement of the “as is” shop.
The dead man is of this old table, he is of his front and back doors, he is of the tea on the burner
and the burner, too, he is.
It cannot stop the dead man, that others have caught on.
The dead man at his worst still looks his best.
2. More About the Dead Man and Your Hands
Nights, he lets in the world, the dead man does it, always.
By any late night, he has lost the need to believe.
The dead man plays a nighttime piano, he blows a nighttime horn, he sings more after midnight.
Dead man’s music is nighttime, call it earthly, call it planetary.
The dead man feels the high registers heard by animal ears.
He feels the rumbly pedal note struck by redwoods enlarging and tectonic plates lurching.
What is it about his hands and your hands, is it the absence of certainty?
He has stirred distinctions into a broth, a soup, a stew, a gravy.
You cannot find yes and no, true or false, in a dead man’s soup.
So what if they have caught on, the dead man is out front and stays up later.
Hence, when the dead man maketh eyes, he’s gotcha.
He’ll care for you, now that he’s gotcha, and he hath giveth his hand.
He can’t talk about the children if you are going to cry.
In Ardor: The Book of the Dead Man, Volume Two, Bell continues in an similar mode, darkly rendering what a Publishers Weekly contributor described as “the thin line that separates the real from the unreal, the illuminated from the dim, the living from the dead.” You can read more about Marvin Bell and his work here. The series is a fascinating read.
For this poetics, we are are going to write from the perspective of the dead man (or woman). Here is one quote to get us going:
Live as if you were already dead. – Zen admonition
If you’re here for the first time, this is how it works…
• Post your poem to your blog
• Add a link to your poem via the ‘Mr Linky’ below
• Read and comment on other people’s work to let them know it’s being read
• Share via your favorite social media platforms
• Above all, have fun!!
I look forward to reading your words ~ Grace
Grace said:
Welcome to Poetics everyone ~ I am looking forward to reading some lively poems, smiles ~
I will be around to read and return visits once I get home from work ~
brian miller said:
Great prompt grace…I had fun with it…and really enjoyed seeking out some of marvin bell’s work online to get me going as well…his dead man poems are really cool…and creative….
Grace said:
His Dead Man series are fascinating to read ~ Feel free to write another one, if you like ~ Thanks Brian ~
brian miller said:
oh I might…I also want to get my hands on a book of it so I can study it a bit more…it felt freeing to write one…
Grace said:
Yes, it can be freeing to write ~ By the way, I edited my own post slightly at the end because I never wanted it to be sad ~ I was surprised why most was saying it was a sad ending, ha ~
brian miller said:
will pop back over…
claudia said:
i like your re-modeled close grace…
Grace said:
Thank you ~
Mary said:
What an enjoyable prompt this was to write to, Grace. I had read some dead man poetry before, but not in a long time; so it was fun to revisit the concept again for your prompt today. Seems like a perfect prompt for the time of Halloween, All Saints Day, and Day of the Dead commemorations. Looking forward to reading everyone’s poetry.
Grace said:
My first time to write one too Mary ~ His work is a marvel to read ~
Glenn Buttkus said:
Leave it to you to find a poetic link to both the Day of the Dead, & Marvin Bell. He is not a poet I was familiar with, so thanks for turning me on to him. Looking forward to seeing what Deadman will get up to out on the dVerse trail. Check back in later.
Grace said:
For some, the Day of the Dead is actually a happy festival ~
Good to see you Glenn ~ Will read your poem in a bit ~
brian miller said:
nice hit on the dead man comic book man….though I am a bit more familiar with the DC comics one and his team-ups with Batman….ha
Gabriella said:
Grace, thanks to your prompt I now know about dead man poetry. I enjoyed this prompt a lot and have liked all the poems I have read so far.
Grace said:
I am glad you like the challenge and perspective of the dead man Gabriella ~
Not all are sad though, some are thought provoking ~ I have learned that I need to be more daring and bold in my choices ~
claudia said:
what a cool prompt grace… and i had fun with mine… smiles
happy tuesday!!
Grace said:
Yours was very daring Claudia ~
Happy Tuesday too ~
Sumana Roy said:
very timely and perfect prompt Grace…see you all tomorrow 🙂
brian miller said:
yours was cool…it touched on something that glenn’s did as well…that in losing the body…perspective is gained just a bit…
Grace said:
See you tomorrow Sumana ~ 🙂
claudia said:
sleep well sumana… bedtime over here for me as well…
Justin Lamb said:
This is both a cool prompt to work with and a new poet for me to read. Thanks, Grace.
Grace said:
Looking forward to your share Justin ~ You can mimic his style of writing, but drawing from your own experiences ~
Abhra said:
Hi Grace, I have been thinking about your prompt since I came to know about it – I asked you something, but noticed later that I sent the mail to Victoria instead – anyway, a great prompt, I probably would have preferred a first person narrative here – on the same theme, but I enjoyed the whole process.
Grace said:
I think a third person writing has its advantages – One it gives more freedom to express your thoughts than what you would normally say or do ~ I find the framing to be creative & drives me out of my comfort zone ~
Will check yours in a bit ~
claudia said:
funny that you mention this abhra – i wrote both for the prompt – a first person narrative first and a third person write second… usually i’m comfortable with first person writing but this time the third person poem was much easier to write… def. more freedom…
Björn Rudberg (brudberg) said:
This prompt made me think a lot.. the purpose of a dead man.. the reason.. and the how he would walk around unseen.. anyway I loved it.. and now I will head out and see how other would attack this..
Grace said:
The challenge made me reflect on my life too ~ Good to see you Bjorn and I am out in the trail now ~
anmol(alias HA) said:
That is a great prompt, I really enjoyed Bell’s words. There is an emotionless approach to them which is supported by strong metaphorical references.
I don’t know for sure if my words today correspond with the prompt and thus, I am not posting the link to the widget: a dead man in life
-HA
brian miller said:
link it….it def works anmol…..
anmol(alias HA) said:
Glad to know that. I have added the link now. 🙂
claudia said:
hey – great to see you anmol!!!
Björn Rudberg (brudberg) said:
Indeed.. so glad to have your here again.. it’s been a while…
claudia said:
ok – bedtime here for me – will be back in the morning….
brian miller said:
sleep well…(so many deadman puns I could have used just now)….
Grace said:
Sweet dreams ~ I am back on the trail now ~
Anthony Desmond said:
Thank you for this prompt and for opening my eyes to Marvin Bell! I checked out some more of his work and really enjoyed it. 🙂
Grace said:
Your response is terrific Anthony ~ Thanks for joining in 🙂
Sherry Blue Sky said:
Dead Man poetry is very intriguing, Grace and the example given is phenomenal. I will give this a whirl. I am already more dead than alive as it is, so it should come easy. LOL.
brian miller said:
ha. come on wild woman…I know there is life in those bones….smiles…
Grace said:
I think you have a lot of say dear Sherry ~ Looking forward to it ~
kelly said:
This is a fascinating prompt… I hope I got it right, I wrote mine from the perspective of a friend I knew who committed suicide… looking forward to reading everyone else’s take!
Grace said:
Your poem fits perfectly Kelly ~ Thanks for joining in ~
Myrna said:
Thanks for this prompt Grace. In Puerto Rico too, the Day of the Dead and All Saints Day is celebrated with much respect. My muse seems to be a little dead these days. Hope she comes back soon. Still, I wrote a little something for you.
Grace said:
Your muse is not dead dear ~ Thanks for joining in Myrna ~
Grace said:
I will call it a night here and come back tomorrow to check on overnight poems ~
Thanks for your terrific responses ~
brian miller said:
nice job tonight grace…sleep well….
mishunderstood said:
Thank you for introducing me to Marvin Bell …can’t wait to read more. This prompt brought out my darker side, but the perspective…wow…I think it is something we should all give more thought to in our lives…while we’re still here.
claudia said:
most def…
Susan said:
I’m not sure I completely understood the Dead Man poems, but when this poem arose in me–influenced somewhat by Gertrude Stein–I could not say No. it’s a double sonnet, though I think the first would have been enough.
As usual, I will read most of the poems here over the next few days!
claudia said:
smiles.. i’m glad you didn’t say No to the poem… smiles
katiemiafrederick said:
Fiction is always a challenge for me to write.. and not one met often.. particularly from the period of age 13 to 54.. as i dabbled a little bit before high school… and that was about it.. but i enjoyed this.. and while dance walking tonight in area stores i attempted somewhat successfully to put myself in dark moods by in particular listening to Pink Floyd’s classic album animals.. as it is about as cynical about human life as it gets..but still with valid concepts…never the less….
So i guess i composed most of what i write.. on the walk with Pink Floyd’s music and other music along the way…
Thanks for the interesting prompt.. overall this was really fun to write..:)per Blood Eagle… and such as that…;)
Grace said:
I love music but not when I am writing though, ha ~ Thanks for joining in ~
grapeling said:
interesting prompt, Grace ~
Grace said:
Thank you M ~ I will be around to make my rounds this morning ~
rosross said:
Life, death and the whole damn thing….:)
Grace said:
Those are themes we can write on forever ~ Thanks for linking up ~
Prajakta said:
This is my first time here and what a prompt! Looking forward to growing, learning and having some good fun 🙂
Grace said:
Welcome to D’verse Prajakta ~ We are all about having fun while learning, smiles ~
brian miller said:
just coming back on and playing catch up…the filter at school today would not let me get on wordpress…but i am free now…and on my way around…smiles.
Snakypoet (Rosemary Nissen-Wade) said:
Thank you, Grace. A prompt to capture the imagination!
Grace said:
Good to see you Rosemary ~
Ruth said:
Joining in rather late… I love Bell’s Dead Man poetry and have a draft or two lying around somewhere, that I keep meaning to polish and post. Today’s offering is not in that vein, but it’s what came…
Grace said:
Bring it on ~ Good to see you Ruth ~
Bodhirose said:
I forgot to thank you, Grace, for a very intriguing prompt. I’m not sure why I felt so compelled by this topic…but I was.
Grace said:
And I am happy to read all the responses ~ Thanks for joining in Gayle ~
brian miller said:
grace, my second one will go up for MTB tomorrow…
had a bit more fun with it this eve…thanks for the inspiration..
Grace said:
Looking forward to it Brian ~
The Course of Our Seasons said:
Late as usual – Thanks for this wonderful prompt, Grace. I had read this series of poems many years ago and it was great to be reminded. Such rich language – they are a joy to read.
Grace said:
And yours was lovely to read as well ~ Thanks for joining in Kathleen ~
Scenara said:
Alas I have missed the boat. Perhaps if I toss this link hard enough it will still land on board: http://scenara.com/2014/11/love-and-the-god-of-winter/
claudia said:
smiles.. just popped over and read… maybe visit some of the others and they will visit back..
brian miller said:
or if you read others I am sure they will visit…