Greetings, my poet friends. This is Victoria, joining you from Reno, Nevada, for a little trip into a sensory experience. No, not the LSD kind of trip, but a poetic one in which we will use our senses to mix things up a bit.
There is a neurological condition called synesthesia in which the patient confuses sensation. For example, he may taste a fragrance, or hear a flower. Have you ever touched a rainbow or seen a toccata?
Recently our fellow pub-crawler, Jane Hewey, who we met on Monday when, coincidentally, Laurie Kolp interviewed her for Pretzels and Bullfights, posted the following poem to Open Link Night:
I Let You In
My palm is open.
Sea perfume
lifts my nose
the outer rose petal
whispers my name.
I listen for notes
to hang it on.
Tide collapses
a limp bracelet
onto shore. Faceless,
inarticulate stones
listen from the same,
and I wonder when
I first heard your lips
define my skin.
As soon as I read it, I knew where I wanted to go with this week’s Meeting the Bar. Now let’s go back, read it again, and pay attention to what Jane so skillfully does with the senses. Can you hear the rose and hear the lover’s lips define the skin of the poet?
The Poetry Foundation defines synesthesia as “a blending or intermingling of different senses in description.”
In the world of art, painters make a conscious choice of color to represent feeling or sensation. One might choose red to express rage or a loud noise. Or gray to depict depression. Practitioners of Therapeutic Touch instruct their clients to choose a color that represents the outcome they hope to achieve such as healing or calm.
How about words? Do you associate colors or, perhaps, sound with certain words? What color is birth? Growth? Dying? What chord or key would you chose to depict joy? Grief?
As poets, we can choose to use synesthesia to create a world of fantasy. I recently came across the phrase “tasting a rainbow”—I don’t remember where—and somehow it conjured up a garden of faeries and dreams of Ireland.
Here’s another example of synesthesia in a classic poem, found in the opening stanza of Keat’s famous poem, Ode to a Nightingale:
Ode to a Nightingale
BY JOHN KEATS
My heart aches, and a drowsy numbness pains
My sense, as though of hemlock I had drunk,
Or emptied some dull opiate to the drains
One minute past, and Lethe-wards had sunk:
‘Tis not through envy of thy happy lot,
But being too happy in thine happiness,—
That thou, light-winged Dryad of the trees
In some melodious plot
Of beechen green, and shadows numberless,
Singest of summer in full-throated ease.
Public Domain–Find the complete poem here.
For today’s prompt, I invite you to play around with mixing up those senses. It’s not necessary to write a complete poem in synesthesia, just include an incident in which you invite your readers to taste, or see, or hear, or touch, or smell something that defies the sense you are using.
If you are able to participate, here’s the drill:
• Write your poem and post it on your blog or website.
• Copy the direct URL to your poem and access Mr. Linky at the bottom of this post.
• Paste the URL and your name in those spaces Mr. Linky offers you.
• Come on over to the Pub and visit with your fellow poets. Sip, taste their poetry and comment on your impressions.
• Especially try to visit those who have taken the time to read and comment upon your work.
• Enjoy your journey through the senses—that marvelous gift through which we are able to enjoy this world of ours.
If I may, on a personal note, I’d like to ask your help in promoting my novel, “Winter is Past,” which was published last year by Lucky Bat Books. If you would be willing to write a review, please e-mail me a note and I will send you a coupon for access on Kindle, Smashwords or Nook. The only thing I ask for in return is that you take a few moments to write that review—an honest one—on Amazon.com or Goodreads.com. This effort is in preparation for the publication of my next novel, “The Sin of His Father.” Both novels are contemporary fiction. Check out my website for more information, including an e-mail address. Thank you so much.
One more note–I will be away all of Thursday, but I’ll be back in to comment Friday morning, perhaps Thursday late, but it’s Pacific time here. But I look forward to read each one of your poems. Thank you.
this is a wonderful prompt victoria….just LOVED, LOVED, LOVED it…smiles
And your poem shows it!
this was a cool exercise…i think i have done it before but did not know it as a technique or method beyond just experimenting…had a bit of fun with it…had it done and then went back and added a bit to it….
Agree…it is fun!
I’m not sure if I did it right or not. Regardless, it was a challenging and fun prompt. Thanks, Victoria.
your poem really moved me deeply laurie
Glad you enjoyed it, Laurie
I really loved the prompt… and also realized I’ve done this before without knowing what it was. 🙂 Now let’s read
hehe..since i started writing poetry i find that i’m always doing things without actually knowing what i’m doing…ha…smiles
Ha 🙂
so can you repeat this in norwegian…? ha…smiles
Must just be part of a poet’s mind.
This is a very interesting and fun prompt, Victoria. Thank you for a new term and a tool not only for writing but reading poems as well. 🙂 Happy afternoon to you.
happy afternoon imelda…hope to see you back soon withapoem…smiles…and i agree…it’s a wonderful tool…and victoria is awesome
Ah, gee.
Thank you, Imelda
I believe I do this sort of writing often, but I never knew what it was. I started this yesterday and I am not sure if it fits correctly, but it does have sight and sound in it. Thanks for the prompt, Victoria.
Pamela
smiles…i felt much the same…smiles…
You’re welcome, Pamela.
A very interesting article, thank you Victoria ~
This was challenging for me as I had to break apart my logical flow of thoughts ~ I love the creative process ~
Wishing you all Happy Thursday ~ I will visit you when I come home from work ~
Grace
But you managed to do it in every line of your poem… Great one…:-)
Thank you ~ It took me the whole day, ha ~
but well worth the work…smiles.
Logic and poetry sometimes defy one another, don’t they?
They do indeed Victoria ~ And sometimes it’s a challenge to slip into a mindset, so the words will come unhindered by rules and logic ~ Really enjoyed the exercise, thank you ~
Welcome everyone. I’m here for a bit before my afternoon “date.” Looking forward to reading some now…all later. I hope you all enjoyed thinking out of the box.
oo what are you doing on your date? smiles
just got the kiddos off and ready to catch up a bit myself…
Caught in the act…I’m golfing 9 with my BFF. It’s a standing date. And why don’t I improve?
ha. its worth it being with the BFF…smoking hot out here so hope its a bit cooler for you…if not keep hyfrated…
I have a default issue of following instructions. Though I will try my hands to be forgiven for my eyes tying rope nuts on straight lines
rope nuts on straight lines eh? smiles…hiya kodjo
Just keep mixing it up!
Hi Victoria! I’m putting this in but it probably does not qualify for the senses and mixture of those. But it’s my latest and it does seem to cover many senses.
You’re writing…as I see it, that’s what counts. Will read it in a minute.
Que pasa, Vic? Thanks for the prompt idea – I gave it my best shot and still came up short – (that’s what she said – I’m already missing The Office). This is about beautiful Balboa Island in Newport Beach.
ah but your rubbed a bit of her melody in your skin…and that made it worth it surely….smiles…good to see you mosk…
My (very) old stomping grounds!
Interesting prompt Victoria. I think I do this without thinking. Now let’s see if I can do it on purpose.
isnt it funny that when you sit down to do it—even though you do it all the time—it seems so much harder…lol…
Yeah, I feel conspicuous.
It’s fun. And funny.
Lovely prompt, Victoria! First, I urge all to check out and review Victoria’s book Winter is Past. It is well worth the effort of reading and review. (I’ve done it! And much enjoyed.)
Second, I’ve been very taken up on my end, Victoria, and not posting so much, but will try to do a poem of this kind – probably tomorrow though. Thanks. k.
Thanks for the promo, Karin. And I’ll look forward to reading when you get to it.
Thanks – my poem was inspired by the prompt but I’m not sure that it shows synesthesia. I do like that idea/technique very much though. k.
wonderful prompt, Victoria! short one for me this time – will be back to make my round soon… happy thursday all!
nice fireflies…smiles.
heh, thank you 🙂
Short is good! Tight writing demands a lot of skill!
Will read a couple more then it’s off to golf 9 holes (poorly). See you later or a la manana!
swing well…
Hi Victoria… Hope you golf well! I enjoyed your prompt a lot. I tried my hardest and hope I accomplished it somewhat. I appreciated your explanation and hope to make use of synesthesia in future poems as well!
hope that weather holds out for you mary and doesnt do too much other than water your plants…
Mary, golfing well isn’t in my repertoire. But I have fun and get exercise.
heading to the sprayground with my fam…be back later…
Have been out round the gardens for an hour’s snail-stomping. Got about 150 of the sluggers. Crunchy walk.
Would have preferred Victoria’s nine holes 🙂
Ha! I’d be a more successful snail-stomper.
Since this poem is my output for today and does something with Christmas common senses, I am trying it out here. I have been reading and being moved all over the place, so I don’t know …
so been out lining
or out lying
haha…smiles..
I’m off to enjoy whatever you came up with.
I gave it a shot, but I think it went wide. Might have missed the target completely. 🙂
ha. i think you did alright…lang as the target cant limp further away you are fine…
Sounds like my golf round, Charles.
You had to bring up golf? Here I was, being quite successful at shoving the game into the dark corners of my grey matter, and you yank it back out into the daylight! Jeesh! I see bogey mans
Bogies make me happy. I only got one par yesterday.
A fine post, Victoria, and I will post my review on Amazon and Goodreads for you sometime over the weekend or early next week. Good luck with all …
Thank you, Jamie. You’ve been a lot of support.
I love Carmen’s image; that really grabs me.
i knew you would rock this one…smiles…it is right up your alley
Looking forward. Will read a few and then be back in the morning .G ‘night all.
good morning…back and catching up..
g’morning…just sent you an email…smiles.
ha…aren’t these the best emails that carry a poem in their womb..smiles
yes they are, but this one is def not the womb…haha…
alright…bed time…
off to work..didn’t manage to hit everyone (bit overworked and having a hard time to concentrate on things which slows me down a bit…ha..) but will be back in the evening to read more..
…i have just posted my first vow Victoria… as previously expressed, this prompt is brilliant… i really really enjoyed working on this one… and like others, i thought i have been employing this technique in my previous poems but didn’t actually know the exact way to call it not until you’ve featured it up here… thanks a lot…. smiles… ha, coming a li’l late here ( as always)… ok, off my way to do the turtle rounds… aww… smiles…
Can’t wait to read it, Kelvin.
I’ve had a go… imagining it as I think it could be.
Glad it tickled the imagination, David.
Great piece. Although, as a person with synaesthesia I just want to clarify that it isn’t a confusion on the senses at all. In fact we are all born synaesthetes, then as the brain develops usually around age 7 the neural connections between the senses begin to separate. In some people however, this doesn’t happen so all the senses remain connected. Far from being confusing I find that it is an amazing enhancement of my experience of life.
This is useful link for those interested in learning more about Synaesthesia:
http://www.bu.edu/synesthesia/faq/#q4
You might also like to pop along to my blog to see how I use my ability to hear colours and see sounds http://wp.me/p1T8nQ-fg
Have a great day! 🙂
Ishaiya
Thank you, Ishaiya. I would love to learn more about it. What you say about all of us being born synaesthetes -rings true for me. I will def. head over and check these links.
I know that I use this all the time in my writing – but when I had to think about it – yikes. I have no idea if what I posted responds to your wonderful prompt, Victoria. But thank you for the prompt and the wonderful poetry that it has encouraged. Have a great day! K
i think you did just fine…smiles…good to see you as well k….
There has been wonderful poetry as a response. It’s been a joy to read.
Synesthesia always makes me think of the short story Yellow Wallpaper– a color I usually associate with sunny happiness gone bad. 🙂 Thanks for the prompt!
That is, for me, one of the most disturbing short stories out there. But hers was a result of mental illness…helped along by the isolation they imposed on her. Yikes.
Good morning, everyone. The poems I’ve read so far have been amazing. Looking forward to reading more now. Thanks for the good response.
I am thrilled to be a part of this prompt, Victoria. Thank you. I’ve just begun to read the collections on sir linky. It is really amazing what you’ve inspired with this prompt.
Isn’t it an amazing collection of poems, Jane. And we thank you for your poem which inspired them all!
whassup poets….just rolling in from enjoying a band at the coffeeshop…got a few to catch up on…happy start to the weekend all…
Going to do my catching up now–coverage on tornadoes in background. Prayers and good wishes to all in their path. Hard times.