The day after Valentine’s Day can be a crash. Like watching a kid come off a sugar high. Zoom, whirl, flash and then the hangover.
There are corny Valentines (I dare you to Google vintage Indian Valentines!) and some that nowdays would just be so wrong. Yet they all have one thing in common. They are celebrating love.
I was going to have you write to your beloved – person, place or thing – using the sappy greeting card poetic language we all cringe while reading.
Then my own beloved came up with another idea I quite like more.
Short and maybe-not-so-sweet love poetry. Without using common love language.
Husband yesterday was a treat.
We danced on our own two feet.
Thanks for saving my toes.
That’s how being with you goes.
Rhyme is not required, but is sort of a traditional fun part of the Valentine poetry tradition.
If you want an extra challenge make them American Sentences or Haiku.
It doesn’t have to be to a person, it can be to the dog, the cat, the car. Anything that has a place in your life that you feel love or affection for.
Winter has stayed, stayed so long.
The magic is lost, no music. No song.
Spring a not-so secret tease,
Leaves me begging, Come please!
Have some fun, be inspired, and share photos or sketches of your subjects if you want. Let’s come of the Valentine’s Day sugar high gently with some fun. I think all our weather smacked, winter weary souls need some lightness and fun!
If you are new, here is how it works:
- Post a poem on your website/blog, written to the prompt
- Click the Mr. Linky button below and enter your name & direct url
- Read others that have joined the party – let them know what you thought of their contribution
- If you promote yourself on social media, use @dversepoets so we can find you and retweet/like etc.
- Have fun!
Love poem avoiding the usual sugary language and metaphors is one of my favoritite.. look forward to all the great poetry here tonight.. hey have a nice saturday every one.
You, too… and thanks.
It is going to be fun. Thanks for being a part of it!
smiles… i like your husband’s idea…. it’s good to celebrate love – and trying to find new words is part of love’s creativity as well… happy saturday everyone…looking forward to read all your love poems… smiles
Happy saturday Claudia.. a great evening I hope
happy saturday to you as well björn – we were invited for dinner with friends but last minute plan change and i’m here… smiles
ah, sorry you missed out on dinner…but it is our benefit…smiles.
He does have some good ideas, and is a good (but shy) poet in his own right. Glad you are here, sorry your dinner plans didn’t work out though. We arrived just a bit ago for our weekend trip. Now to catch up on reading!
oh dear, maybe mine is still too sweet…and too short?
Sweet and short is bliss
i loved it hanna
i think you did just fine hanna
i better wash the dishes tonight too….smiles.
You did a great job, thanks for joining in on the fun!
Fun. Many of the ones I read are clever. I just miss my family.
hugs susan…
awww…i am sorry susan…
hugs as well
Hugs you Susan. Glad you are here but am sorry you are missing your family.
Great idea …. and today being my wedding anniversary as well! Poem posted, wine being enjoyed! Cheers all.
oh cool…. happy anniversary and cheers! smiles
happy anniversary!
Happy Anniversary! Enjoy the poetry and the wine – sounds like a great combination.
swinging in….LATE!
sorry…we went to see the LEGO movie as a treat for the boys….
hey shanyn,
i am a firm believer in not needing a special day to spread love
ha.
will be around here shortly.
nice…was the movie good?
it was fun…the boys enjoyed it…it gave me a few good chuckles for sure…
Neat that you had a chance to see the movie. So true….one can spread the love any day of the year!
Same here for me Brian ~
Hey Brian! Is the song, “Everything is Awesome” being sung loud in your house? It still is at ours a week later! 😀
Glad you had a good time, and I agree, we can celebrate love anytime and in anyway we find fits best.
LOL! Fun idea. I just dashed of this very silly ditty:
Shoveling snow–
Not my favorite chore.
Hubby did it for me.
That’s what marriage is for.
smiles…little acts of love like shoveling snow or taking the rubbish out are surely good for the marriage climate
I love it, smiles ~
I thought you would enjoy this one, thanks for joining in! 😀
I love this idea it combines the best love n’ silly! Clever of you and yours to share this with us~
bring it ella…
i look forward to reading one by you.
smiles.
I’m looking forward to yours. I’ll see if I can coax one out of my hubby to share, he is quite clever with these. We have mastered love and silly I think!
Acts of love mired in mystery, without demand of instant reciprocity; Ah, yes, thanks for listening to your hubby, this prompt was much more fun & challenging, considering the many faces of love.
whassup g!
happy saturday to you…
🙂 I’ll let him know you approve Glenn. He was right, it is fun and quite a bit more challenging. It’s funny how much of our language use love words and phrases. Expressing without using them becomes a neat exercise.
Hey Brian, & Shanyn; my day always gets complex when I can’t fully co-ordinate several sites simultaneously to get prepared for a dVerse link-up; the worst offender for me is the very busy servers over at DivShare, where I create the new Mp3’s recorded on Garage Band, so that I can transfer the recitations to my blog, and finish the work. But hey, a perfect world would be a bore, right?
true…so you work on a Mac…with garageband….right?
had a MAc when i worked for the church and it was great for recording…
i use audacity on a PC to record right now…its fairly simple
American Sentence and sugar free!
ha – enjoyed – and good to see you john
Very nice! Thanks so much for joining in.
Haven’t posted in a while but thought I might gives it a whirl today, since I failed to write my wife a Valentine poem I will write the opposite.
http://blueridgemountainboy.blogspot.com/2014/02/the-wake-up-call.html
smiles… now tell me more about that talking dog…
hey that means you just have all the more opportunity today…smiles.
Thanks for joining us, and for sharing. 🙂
Love this idea from your husband. I can’t wait to read other people’s Valentine’s.
looking forward to reading yours as well linda
I am going to finish with the commenting here and go read some poetry. At the in-laws for the weekend. They are all visiting, or working on broken trucks.
broken trucks?
hopefully not too much…
A bit, a belt and pully for the alternator on a semi. But the guys have it going well, I think! 🙂
ha. good they know what they are doing
belts are not the easiest things…
yep they are not fun, but the guys know how to do it, and semis have more room to work than pickups. 🙂
I am enjoying reading the shares so far! Lots of interesting writes once again!
i agree… lots of smiles from my side here
I’m so pleased everyone is having such fun with this!
they are pouring in fast an furious today…
be back in a bit…being called to dinner…
Enjoy your dinner, Brian!!
Have a good dinner, it’s not quite time here, so I’ll have some appetizers in the shape of poetry!
ah it was…
shanyn, it was Takos Tuesday, on Saturday.
haha
Takos! ha ha ha very good!
its a silent ‘s’ you know…
Smiles
Short & not sugary sweet it is ~ Thanks Shanyn ~ Happy Saturday everyone ~
Glad to see you popped in. 🙂 Happy Saturday!
I love the picture of your horses, beautiful! Thank you for a wonderful prompt 🙂
Thanks for joining in, and I’m glad you liked the photo.
Nice prompt and some fine poems up already!
Thank you, and yes there are some really amazing pieces being shared this weekend!
Thanks for hosting, Shanyn. After more than a foot of snow between Thursday and Friday, still getting snow showers here in MA today. A good reason to hibernate inside and write! Actually saw Brian’s link earlier and was inspired to come and share. Wrote a little free verse today, but I’m sure I could’ve turned out some syrupy rhyming too if needed. ‘Tis certainly the holiday for that!! Catch you inside!
You are welcome. Thanks for coming by. 🙂 We just got in from some snow fun too!
I got mired in the “love” synonyms, & there is no way I could be happy with a couple of short stanzas, or even just one; oddly, when the juices flow, when the bra comes off the Muse, & the panties hit the deck, I just can barely control the influx of images, concepts, words, phrases–hell, writing is life’s passion; or one big important one.
haha…i was going to say something in the comments just to poke at you…lol….
One of these days you will get onto Facebook, and then you’ll see some prime poking, brother; seriously,FB needs you.
ha. i am 3 years FB free…there is a pretty strong reason i left it…maybe i will share that with you one day….
you could do a poetic alter ego Brian – 😀 but i respect your reasons for leaving FB in the ‘net dust! Wise choice.
You have a wild muse my friend. 🙂
Absolutely love the idea and the poem you have shared.
Thank you so much! Great that you came by.
Ah love, the eternal theme.
…and always in need for new words and creativity…smiles
and always room to find more ways to express it!
Nice to be a bit light-hearted – and I didn’t have to look far to find a subject. 🙂
Oops! Reading others, I realise we were supposed to depart from greeting-card language. Instead, I attempted to gently lampoon it. Oh well, the piece is posted now.
..and it’s a fun take… i think you did well rosemary..and what a cute cat as well…
Thanks, Claudia. 🙂
I liked your take on it, and lampooning can be very good. Nicely done.
Thanks for the prompt guys! Happy opening!
Glad you liked it. Thanks for coming by.
I’m about to post a poem up for this week’s post-Valentine prompt. I can’t wait to read everyone’s posts 🙂
cool look forward to it…
and reading would be great…maybe you will start a new trend…
ha
Brian, I am half-way down the list, for the first time maybe–and the poems are relatively shorter than usual, ha. How in the world do you and Claudia do it? I am in training, I think I need a manual.
ha. if you are halfway you are pretty much through anyone that is actually commenting back so i would quit while you are ahead. smiles.
actually after abhra, the only ones i heard from were
cressida, benjamin, pat and you
actually its funny,
how and why we do it is a question we often
wrestle with.
Thanks for the tip 😉
As for why you all do this.. I don’t know but I’m glad you guys are around as I’m sure others are, smiles. But be honest Brian, is this like gambling? Will I be addicted?
Happy Family Day.
Linked it. Sorry if it’s too long! I hope it fits =)
time to read other’s poems now 🙂
It fits fine! It’s always a balance between the prompt and where your muse takes you. Glad to have you here and having some fun with us.
Thank you, it’s always a pleasure to be participating here with everyone 🙂
Had to write on this too. Wrote about Monday morning, not Friday night. Sort of a sonnet…
http://sejdb.livejournal.com/337549.html
I liked this. Lots. Well done.
WHoah…busy place here and even late…hmmm…debating on linking. Will see, but checking in on a few for sure!
C’mon you can do it! Do it! Do it! (please?) LOL
Finally, I got to join the party again. 🙂
Yay glad to have you here!
Loved this prompt, but didn’t realize that I was posting it too late….Linky had already expired. Oops 😦 Thanks for the challenge anyways!
I hope you share your piece for Open Link Night. The linky may expire but the fun never ends! 🙂