I wonder how many of you poets, frequenters of dVerse, share a love for art or even engage in one art form or another: painting, photography, sculpture, dancing, music…well over 90% I would guess. I dabble in a few of the above and, if time were not so much of an issue, would want to do more.
Recently, I read a poem posted by RMP (who manages to remain quite anonymous) that inspired this post.
Where Colors Are Lacking
If I could paint you,
I’d paint you
in heart
broad
brilliant
splashes
imbued with compassion that understands truths
infused with love that looks beyond perceptions
ingrained with generosity that awakens others eyes
If I could paint you,
I’d paint you
in stain glass
tiny
scattered
specs
forged with lost hearts squirreled away
fashioned with broken souls gathered close
framed with shattered minds secured together
If I could paint you,
I’d paint you
in _________
stark
intense
strokes
saturated with inspiring and enduring support
steeped with enduring and empowering strength
suffused with empowering and uplifting hope
If I could paint you,
I’d paint you
a flickering light
drawn to the shadows
staving off the darkness
illuminating lost truths & shattered hopes
When I read it, I thought of the fun I’ve had writing poems that incorporated techniques of art—what powerful tropes we can unearth in brush strokes, modeling clay, lining up the perfect shot.
For today’s prompt, I invite you to pen a poem that uses something related to an art technique as a metaphor to deliver your message. And I double-dog dare-you to include a photo of your own work in whatever medium you play with.
Here’s another example of a short poem I wrote years ago that demonstrates what I mean.
Anger
An artist hurls red rage
onto canvas in
heavy layers of pain.
Stand close to study
the texture and
you will bleed.
Copyright: RMP 2014, Used with permission.
For the newbies among you, here’s how to link up:
• Write your poem and post it on your personal blog or website;
• Copy the direct URL of your post and paste it into the Mr. Linky, along with your name. He’s waiting for you at the bottom of this post;
• Come back to the Pub and spend a little time reading other poems and commenting on them;
• Broadcast your participation on your Social Media sites;
• Have fun!
Thanks for joining. This is Victoria, serving up virtual Absinthe aux cafés de Paris. Bienvenue! And special thanks to RMP.
P.S.–I will be away much of the day and evening, but count on me–I look forward to visiting everyone, eventually.
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Hi Victoria…. great prompt – some are blessed with art – and that it crosses dimensions and boundaries in many. Maybe it’s a point of view.
I think we all enjoy art .. one way or another.. but I think my art is word 🙂 As metaphor I think it could work though.
Does a physicist see the world differently ? 🙂
Thanks, Bill–so glad you could join us today.
Ah Victoria, you artistic groupie you, this one stopped me for a moment, just had a tick of a problem transferring Art into metaphor, but the cobwebs fly off as winds of inspiration flooded the room as I studied some of my own photographic images; really hung up on iconography & imagery; spend hours daily sharing the images of other, from others, on Facebook; a never ending wondrous journey; thanks for pushing me into my head & id & imagination even further today.
I thought film could be a great art to pull metaphors from… 🙂
Love what you did with this prompt, Glenn.
Well Victoria.. as you likely know i use my poetry in metaphor to express my love for dance.. song.. and philosophy of life in general…
And yes..photography more than obviously too.. smiles…
And yes.. i do have time to do and act upon much more than one…
And yes.. sometimes that does result in both tons of funs..
and well..
tons of poetic expression in words.. SWELL…
And todays effort in expressing my love for dance.. music.. and photography in tow to express the same.. i do not expect anyone to read all 4444 words and it is divided into perhaps more palatable ‘bite size’ portions..
and even this comment if this may be enough..:)
I will go and check.. hope you are well today.
THANKS.. Bjorn a dreary day for sure IN North Florida cooling rain and clouds.. but there’s still a light growing in my heart and dance for sure..:)
And yes.. be by in a few to check on your poetry as well..;)
Fun is what it is about, isn’t it. Great photos in yours, too.
I loved this prompt.. I’m on a short business trip and wrote my poem on the airplane here… 🙂 I will make my rounds before crashing into bed…
Safe travels, Bjorn.
Congratulations on your new book, Victoria! I love your poem “Anger.”
Thanks so much, peach blossom. (love that name)
What a good prompt, Victoria….some very talented people will have to narrow it down to one art form or craft ..smiles…for me it’s between writing and painting,
and some photography, so now to finish what I started……..
I’m into those art forms too–photography recently.
I followed the link back to Edward Rinaldi’s blog, & love his poem & artwork, SAT THE ARACHNIDS, but there is no way to leave a comment; so sad. Love his lines
/never knew/it was a poem/just a window/thrown open/or a door/walked through/.
I had the same experience. Left a comment below. I thought it was ’cause I don’t blog on Google.
I love this prompt topic. I just posted something very interesting but colorful in a metaphorical sense. 🙂
I look forward to seeing what you did with it.
This is cool. I’m looking forward to reading about what other creative things folks here do besides write poetry.
Hope you enjoy–it is fun to learn more about each other’s interests.
Hi, everyone. So sorry I’ve been missing in action all day, and have to leave again soon. I’ve been squeezing in appointments before I return home on Sunday (nothing fun). Maybe someday I’ll get a smart phone…or maybe not. It’s good to be totally off-line now and again. Today, not so much. I’m going to post my own poem (that I wrote while waiting) then fit in as many reads as I can before heading out again. Tomorrow…no appointments.
Edward, not sure how to comment on your poem, but both the image and the poem were impressive, both filled with amazing detail of line and thought.
Have to get ready to go out this evening. Will be back in the morning to catch up.
hey victoria… sorry i’m way late… in the middle of painting the bathroom and everything…but managed to write up a little something… smiles
I want to see photos of the end result!
A very cool prompt, Victoria. I penned this just before toppling into bed, am exhausted, so will make my rounds tomorrow. I’ll be in and out all day, so it may take till evening, but I will make the rounds!
Hope you had a good rest, Sherry.
lovely prompt victoria, thank you..
So glad you joined us, arathi.
My first contribution – thank you for the prompt, which caught my eye immediately. I love art and don’t do it enough.
great to see you here at dVerse Sherri!!
And yet again this week I find myself here at dVerse with a pre-write that is perfect for the prompt. Now I get to spend the rest of the day popping in and out enjoying everyone’s posts. Not a bad way to start the weekend indeed. Have a good one folks!
And as luck (good or ill – you decide), would have it, I am reminded of a friend’s photo which has inspired my muse to write something original fro the prompt. I apologize for the double entry.
Loved them both.. 🙂 Have an excellent weekend.
They were both wonderful, Raivenne. Thanks for sharing.
Think I’m caught up for now. I’ll be back later in the day.
Some I particularly loved reading…..like Edward Rinaldi…”mad, macabre, and mindful of joy’s place at the table”….but could not comment on! Brilliantly done nonetheless.
painting is a fine metaphor for people – do we paint them as we wish, or as we see ?