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Once again we are proud to have a guestblogger. I will let her present herself by jumping directly into the subject, I can assure you, she is the master of this subject.
De Jackson is a poet, a parent, and a Pro Crastinator of the greatest order. Her poetic life is often hyphen
-ate(d) by the realities of raising two young teenagers, as well as freelance copywriting and editing projects about such important things as public transportation, ministry, and the inevitable mayhem of overwatering your lawn. De writes daily at www.whimsygizmo.wordpress.com.
Today at The Bar, I want us to get enamored with enjambment.
Pronounced: (en-JAM-ment)
Officially, (according to poetryarchive.org):
“Enjambment is the continuation of a sentence or clause over a line-break. If a poet allows all the sentences of a poem to end in the same place as regular line-
breaks, a kind of deadening can happen in the ear, and in the brain too, as all the thoughts can end up being the same length.”
Simply put, enjambment occurs when a phrase carries over a line-break without a major pause. In French, the word means “straddling.” Imagine a word or phrase straddling across the lines or spacing of the poem. Perfect, right? When you read an enjambed line, it encourages you to keep reading without stopping for a breather, as it were.
Particularly with traditional poems, each line was usually its own thought, and rhymes were often predictable and rhythmic (end-stopped).
Check out these examples from Wiki, for poets who bucked that traditional trend:
The start of The Waste Land by T.S. Eliot, with only lines 4 and 7 end-stopped:
April is the cruellest month, breeding
Lilacs out of the dead land, mixing
Memory and desire, stirring
Dull roots with spring rain.
Winter kept us warm, covering
Earth in forgetful snow, feeding
A little life with dried tubers.
These lines from Shakespeare’s The Winter’s Tale are heavily enjambed:
I am not prone to weeping, as our sex
Commonly are; the want of which vain dew
Perchance shall dry your pities; but I have
That honourable grief lodged here which burns
Worse than tears drown.
Meaning flows as the lines progress, and the reader’s eye is forced to go on to the next sentence. It can also make the reader feel uncomfortable or the poem feel like “flow-of-thought” with a sensation of urgency or disorder. In contrast, the following lines from Romeo and Juliet are completely end-stopped:
A glooming peace this morning with it brings.
The sun for sorrow will not show his head.
Go hence, to have more talk of these sad things.
Some shall be pardon’d, and some punishèd.
Endymion by John Keats, lines 2-4:
Its loveliness increases; it will never
Pass into nothingness; but still will keep
A bower quiet for us…
(Oh! This one is a favorite, for me):
Enjambment may be used in light verse, such as to form a word that rhymes with “orange”, as in this example by Willard Espy, in his poem The Unrhymable Word:
Orange:
The four eng-
ineers
Wore orange
brassieres.
Enjambment is a way to give your lines variable lengths, create audible interest within a poem, and to emphasize certain words, phrases, or even rhyme schemes. A master at enjambment, one of my favorite poets, was E.E. Cummings. Check this one out:
Come Jamb with Us.
Today at The Bar, I invite you to do some jambin’ of your own. If you normally give each line in your poems an endstop (especially with rhyme), today simply allowing your lines to spill where they may (it’s okay, they won’t wander too far!)
If you rarely give lines an endstop, go one step further, and play. You might break a word in half, just for the fun of it. Sprinkle some hyphens in. Bundle up some brackets and see what they want to embrace.
Not feelin’ it yet? Put on your favorite tunes (or your favorite jammies), and see if any of these prompting possibilities help you get started:
1. Why not play with words like
hum -bled, tum -bled, rum -bled.
(See how they bleed, when you give them a hyphen, and a little space of their own?)
2. Or experiment with one or more of these:
thou-sand
fin-ally
re-member
be-friend (“be” is actually a lot of fun. What other words that start with “be” can you think of, and torture into meaning something else? be-hold…be-stow…be-fore.)
map-led
sin-new
for-get
It’s also a great way to “un” an un word.
“un
-broken thoughts.” – this line now belies its singled-out un.
3. Or give your words a double meaning:
I recently wrote: “trampled, samp
-led by moon.”
See how she’s now “led by moon,” but also “sampled by moon”?
Ooo, and since I just typed it up there:
sing-led
(Is this something that is singled out, or something led by song? Or maybe both?)
4. You could use parentheses or brackets to emphasize certain words, or letters,
and give us a secret mini poem within your poem.
(b)rake up the chaff,
collect the scattered (s)hells
(See how I hid a little b.s. in there?) 😉
Knowing you amazing creative souls, there are a million ways to have fun with this. So get jambin’, link up here, and let’s start the discussion at The Bar.
(And Björn, thanks for inviting me to help bartend this poetry happy hour!)
Further Reading Jambs:
In our discussions for this prompt, Björn mentioned to me a book by Stephen Fry, The Ode Less Traveled, which further brings up the subject of enjambment. I’m excited to read it.
You can also read more about enjambment here:
Hey all, De will come a little later.. I hope you en-
joy the challenge, when I asked her about guest prompting this is exactly what
I wanted to see… I look forward to what you can come up with.
Thanks so much for tending bar, Björn! I’m happy to see so many jumping in already, and I can’t wait to get around to read them all.
Oh De, you have jacked up our enthusiasm with this fun prompt. I chose to go all serious with it, but I dig the light-hearted side of things as well. A lot of us find ourselves jambing habitually with internal lines, but hey, it was cool to go all out with it.
Hey, Glenn, welcome back. You were missed!!
Hi, Glenn! I’m glad you went serious. I like to use enjambment that way, too. I’ll be over in just a minute. 😉
Hi Glenn! you were SO missed! Glad to see you.
This was really fun! I really enjoyed the word play! Thanks, De, for the cool prompt.
I hope more come here to play.. this was so much fun I’m thinking of doing a second one.
Yes, please. I’m buying ALL rounds today. 🙂
Great prompt. I’m looking forward to jambin down!!
Oh yes.. this is a lot of fun 🙂
Thank you! Glad you’re playing!
Mary, I loved what you did. I fear I didn’t play with it (at all) as much as I should have. I think I often write enjambment but don’t do the fun wordplay and placement like I’m seeing. Will have to work on that but will leave my bland poem as is for now.
Gayle ~
I think that we do it as much as we feel like… 🙂
Thank you…I feel like I want to do more! 🙂
Ah.. but the prompt is open 48 hours so why not?
I just might!
Your poem is one we all need to take heed of, Gayle!
Maybe so, Mary, but it wasn’t fun. I’m going to practice at making that happen! 🙂
YES! Poetry should be fun! Come back for another round! In the meantime, I can’t wait to get over and read your offering. ALL poetry is a gift.
I so agree! And thank you for the prompt today, De.
You’re welcome! I loved your first piece, and hope you’ll play around some more. There are no wrong poems!
Whoo-
who
let’s all channel our in-
ner De
– lighted
😉
-liriously happy you came over to play, Candy. 🙂
-land 😉
-apple. 🙂 Of my poetic eye.
kiss 😉
de-licious. 😉
I love this prompt. I learned what enjambment was during the last Blogging U class I took through WordPress. It’s a great device. Hi everyone. It is an unseasonably warm day in November, very colorful and Autumn-y.
Here it’s not yet felt like November either…
Hi, Pleasant Street. 🙂 Sound like a great class! Here in Southern Nevada, we have finally achieved Fall. It’s gorgeous out, and it’s out version of “spring fever,” really. 🙂 Happy poeming!
My anti-enjambment limerick rant:
I’m begging you, please be a lamb
And avoid the technique called enjamb-
Ment. With syllable hyphen-
Ization, you siphon
Off beauty from verse. It’s a scam.
YES. I KNEW you would rock this, Mad. And I hoped you’d do it with just exactly that much panache. 🙂 Yay! You’ve made my day!
Yay! I KNEW you would rock this, Mad. And with panache! Yay! You’ve made my day!
Ha.. yes that’s a great point… limerick enjambment is a perfect thing.
Thanks to both of you!
Jeepers, De. You’ve outdone yourself with this prompt.
Thank ya, ma’am. I’m prayin’ you’ve linked something up. So much of what I’ve learned on this subject was simply from reading YOU. 🙂
Blown away by you, as always.
Thank you for this interesting form. I may or may not participate in this as so very busy. Hopefully I can. A lot of spaces, words broken up, lowercase and uppercase letters are frequently hard for me to read – extremely dyslexic. So I will do the best I can to read and comment and hopefully my brain will translate correctly. Maybe I can do block style paragraphs. I will see what I can do if I have time. Lovely day here! Hope you all are well.
Please note in the first examples given that the original definition of enjambment was simply when a sentence ran over more than one line of poetry, to create flow. No need to get radical, unless you want to play around and have some fun. 😉 And no need to understand everything that others write. If you can walk away with one fun phrase or “tiny poem” within, you win. 🙂
Thank you. I do like to understand or be able to get the gist so I can make good comments on the poems people write. Looking at some of those poems with staggered lines, etc. is someone looking at kanji who doesn’t know the language. I look at those things and my mind “forgets” English. I am having trouble getting my husband to bed and will probably be up late so I shall give it a try at least. If I come up with something semi-adhering, I’ll link it up.
I have dyscalculia (basically, numbers dyslexia), so I can relate, on some level. Columns of numbers, many times the rules of numbers, etc, just don’t make sense to my brain. 😉
Numbers I am fine with. So you can understand sometimes how painful it is to read some of these and why I never got into e.e.cummings and such. Hopefully what I did will fit the more “formal” type of enjambment.
Hello De!!!! I am excited to jump into the enjambment exercise ~ Thanks for sharing with us your examples as it makes things very clear ~ This is one tool I would like to explore and use in the future ~
Happy Thursday everyone ~ I am hitting the poetry trail now ~
Hi, Grace. My pleasure! Happy to see you here. Cheers!
Hey everyone,
Hope you’re having a wonderful week so far 🙂 sharing my poem “Desire” hope you all like it.
De I hope I used enjambment correctly.. this one’s for you 🙂
Lots of love,
Sanaa
Sanaa, I’d like to think there is no “correctly” when it comes to enjambment. The idea is to play around with words, and have fun. 🙂 Heading over to read you now. So glad you played!
My pleasure 🙂
Excellent prompt De
Jackson. Hope I have
got it right!
Kind regards
Anna. xxx
Hi Anna ~ De-lighted to see you 🙂
There are no rights and wrongs in poetry. Only fun. 🙂
Hi! Just added my link…thanks Whimsygizmo for the invitation! 🙂
Thanks for joining in ~
So glad you’re here, ghost! 🙂
cool, De. wish I had something to add… ~
Hi M ~ Try it for fun ~ You are good at line/word breaks, smiles ~
You’re too good a poet not to give it a try on some level, M. I ALWAYS enjoy your work.
Love, love, LOVED it, M.
You guys all truly ROCK, and have inspired me to offer a second piece, as well. Please keep coming back for another round! I am beyond enamored of your creativity.
Love this technique, De! It is enjoyable to write poetry just for the fun of it!
Good morning.. I will just sneak silently and read a few poem before riding to work
Good morning. And I am just heading to bed, and will be back tomorrow for another round. 😉 And the poetry world spins on…
The incitement to play and have
fun is not wasted on me, who
enjambs d’habitude and writes
poetry for fun. What spoils it
for me is all those capital
letters At the beginning
Of each line, which makes
Me think I’ve Missed
a Full stop.
Well you just wrote to it Viv ~ Thanks for joining the fun ~
LOVE it, Viv! 🙂 Cheers!
thank you for such a clear and interesting explanation – I was enticed into giving this a go –
Yay! Hi, Laura! Heading over now!
Interesting challenge. I enjoyed trying my hand at it. https://elliottamc.wordpress.com/2015/11/06/sandstone-memories-2/
Hi AC! Welcome to D’verse ~ I have included your link in our Mr. Linky (at the end of the post) ~ If you click on it, there are links there by the other poets ~
Thanks, Grace. I was looking for it earlier, but, couldn’t find it. It is sometimes hard to find those when doing it from the phone. 🙂
Welcome! Cheers! Heading over now…
Thank you, for the challenge, de, you’ve had me riddling out words inside other words and breaking words up inside my head all day! It’s tiring AND fun! 😉
Yay! Thank YOU, Hannah!
This was a popular one 😉 still have 15 to read
Oh gee. You and I both know who’s going to kill this prompt, if she tries it! Me, I don’t like breaking up words, but lines, yes. The one about the engineers cracked me up.
She did offer something. 🙂 See if you can guess which one she is.
Correct direct link for Hank (kaykalua):
http://imagery77.blogspot.com/2015/11/quirks-are-smart.html
Sorry. I meant Kaykuala.
What a wonderful jam (bin) !
You clever poet, you. 😉