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Trains are weight of steel, trains are might of Iron-ore trains. It could be trains of thought.
As most boys I had a model railway and since I have always loved them. Last week we went by train up north. It’s an overnight trip and we went in style in a sleeping car. It has not always been like that of course, The summer I was out of military service I went for a month on Interrail, which meant a ticket to go anywhere in Europe. I still remember the sense of freedom and anticipation going down to the train-station in a European town, and deciding where to go next. I remember trying to find a place to sleep in a town with many other young people in the same situation. I remember making friends with strangers for 24 hours or less, never to meet again.
Trains can also be waiting for delayed commuter-trains, it can be the drunkard trying to strike up a conversation. It could be what you see outside your window.
Trains are meetings and partings Like Rick leaving Paris alone in Casablanca.
Or like this poem by Thomas Hardy:
Departure Platform
by Thomas Hardy
We kissed at the barrier ; and passing through
She left me, and moment by moment got
Smaller and smaller, until to my view
She was but a spot ;
A wee white spot of muslin fluff
That down the diminishing platform bore
Through hustling crowds of gentle and rough
To the carriage door.
Under the lamplight’s fitful glowers,
Behind dark groups from far and near,
Whose interests were apart from ours,
She would disappear,
Then show again, till I ceased to see
That flexible form, that nebulous white ;
And she who was more than my life to me
Had vanished quite.
We have penned new plans since that fair fond day,
And in season she will appear again—
Perhaps in the same soft white array—
But never as then !
—‘And why, young man, must eternally fly
A joy you’ll repeat, if you love her well ?’
—O friend, nought happens twice thus ; why,
I cannot tell !
Trains can be smoky steam engines, It can be the speed in a futuristic train painting, but trains consume less energy than planes or cars and could save the earth from climate change. Trains is so much so I hope you can find inspiration to write a train poem.
So write your new poem on trains and railways. Put it on your blog and link up below using blenza. Remember to visit other poets, and say hi. Tell what you feel when reading poetry, it’s the best way to improve your own writing. Remember to link back to us, and promote your poetry on Twitter or Facebook.
Hi Bjorn! It is good to have you back. And travelling in style on a sleep car….what fun. Interesting prompt and one that can take us many directions (pun intended). Train of thought….hadn’t thought of that.
Yes I thought it might prove an interesting one… 🙂
I’m off to errands and will be back later. Hope you all are having a wonderful Tuesday!
This is my first time participating so I hope I’m doing it correctly! Do you all just like a link back to your blog in my entry?
Just linking back is great… 🙂 and then going around having fun with poetry… Welcome to dVerse… 🙂
Welcome!
Hello and good evening… so great to have you here. Forgot my time writing a second quadrille… I have some backlog in writing 30 poems this month… so I was writing a second Quadrille….
And a wonderful one at that.
Hi Bjorn and everyone at the Poets Pub this evening Tuesday evening! I usually chip in with my twopenny-worth the next morning, due to time difference and my sleeping patterns. Because I am in the middle of revising my children’s novel and putting together a poetry pamphlet, as well as gearing up for my husband’s 60th birthday, my daughter’s wedding and marking GCSE exams, I will be slowing down with the WordPress posts for a while and posting in the evening rather than in the morning. I am at my best in the early morning and will be using that time to work – play will have to wait until later! That’s why I will be posting a link to a poem I wrote and posted last October for this evening’s Poetics. I hope you don’t mind. 🙂 I look forward to reading some train poems too!
I look forward to read your post Kim… 🙂
Enjoy all your projects, Kim.
Thank you, Victoria.
Hey everyone,
What a fantastic prompt this is Bjorn 🙂 I shall return shortly with something bright and new.
Lots of love,
Sanaa
Trains are so many things… so i’m glad it inspires you Sanaa
Love this, Björn, and everyone’s responses so far. Thank you!
Me too… it’s fascinating what can come up… 🙂
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I ride the train everyday to work and back, so I see a lot people, all kinds of people ~ Thanks for the lovely prompt Bjorn ~ I am hitting the poetry trail now ~
I have enjoyed so many of your poems from your commute… I do enjoy it.
Welcome back, Bjorn. Had fun with this one. Hopped a train to Northern Nevada and came up with a bit of fiction and haiku.
Good that is was fiction… 🙂
I like trains too, Bjorn. :o)
Better late than never I guess…I’m very late today, had some company for dinner. I wrote about my memories of riding the subway trains in Boston and the surrounding areas…fun times in that city!
What a great prompt. I copied the link, and ideas came flooding in. But I have a pageful of Napowrimo prompts to cover, so maybe I’ll find an older poem. I LOVE trains before it’s too late.
Maybe you can merge it with a Napowrimo prompt 🙂
Yes, I will use this prompt as my NaPoWriMo post today…my train is running late, will read later. Thanks for hosting, Bjorn!
Enjoyed yours Lynn ~ Good luck on NaPoWriMo ~
I have been away awhile, and I’m off-topic in my poem but just wanted to jump on the train guys. I hope that is alright. Looking forward to reading some great words. 🙂
Hi Stephanie, Thanks for joining us ~
I updated your link to the date April 6 post, Untitled Self~ I hope this is the right link that you wanted to share ~ Its important to link the specific blog post, not the blog name so we are directed straight to your writing ~
Yes! Sorry Grace and thank you for helping me. 🙂
It seems like I missed the deadline but I did try my hand at this prompt. Here’s a link if anyone wants to check it out.
http://www.poemsbyarcadiamaria.blogspot.com/2016/04/blog-post_7.html