Hello. This is Toni aka kanzen sakura (www.kanzensakura.wordpress.com) bringing to you the prompt for this session of Haibun Monday. In 1980, the Japanese began a type of healing/meditation/relaxation process called shinrin-yoku (森林浴) or literally, forest bathing. This has become a recognized health benefit in Japan and other countries. Basically you immerse yourself in the forest breathing in the benefits of such volatile substances as a-Pinene and Limonene. It is simple. One simply visits the forest and strolls leisurely breathing in the benefits of the volatile oils. It also is relaxing. Of course, one does not take cell phones, tablets, or books or other things that can distract one. For safety sake, I will take my cell phone but…it is cut completely off.
Another way is to simply immerse oneself in nature. When was the last time you did that – took a long walk in a forest or a field or a park or along the shores of a lake or beach? Planted bulbs or seeds, took a sail on the water (beach or lake), sat under a tree and napped? And thought of nothing but the nature around you.
Today, I would like you all to write a haibun (one – three tight paragraphs) ending with a haiku (seasonal and cutting words used to denote the season and to distinguish between the two parts of a haiku). I would like you all to write about the last time you totally immersed yourself in nature. As this is supposed to be relaxing to you and also to us, please refrain from rants about the political state of where you live, climate change, trash being tossed about, regret at the loss of a forest or the pollution of a stream, etc.
I would like you all to write about how you relaxed, what you did, how you enjoyed the experience. Whether it is skating on frozen river, a hike on the banks of a river, lying in a hammock under the trees, walking in the rain or snow. camping in the desert…whatever you did to get in touch with nature. I frequently will leave my home to go into the woods that surround our house to walk among the trees in all kinds of weather, climb a tree to sit and listen to the sounds of the woods, and/or to sit and play the violin. I think the birds love the violin because it seems the noise volume increases. Or maybe they don’t like the sounds coming from my violin!
Write about what you observe of the nature around you, the sounds, the smells…For my haibun I will be sharing getting my vegetable/herb ready last year and the food that came from that garden. You want to write about a leisurely stroll along the shores of a lake or sitting and reading in a park.

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If you haven’t participated in a dVerse prompt before you can find links to haiku writing at: https://dversepoets.com/2015/11/16/japanese-poetry-forms-twins/ Keep the post to no more than three tight paragraphs and follow it with a haiku that accentuates the prose portion. Let your prose flow poetically – like a stroll in a forest!
Please when posting, be sure you have a place for people to comment on your haibun after they have read it. Reading and commenting are both important parts of our dVerse Poets Pub community. If you do not want to receive comments, then simply do not post your haibun. We are a friendly group and refrain from unkind comments. We enjoy taking and giving!
What to do after you have written:
- Post your haibun to your blog
- Add a link to your poem via the ‘Mr Linky’ below
- Add the link for the dVerse posting so others can find their way here
- Read and comment on other people’s work to let them know it’s being read
- Share via your favorite social media platforms
And relax. Breathe. Share.

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Hello Everyone! Welcome to Haibun Monday. First of all, I would like to thank you all for your kindness since Christmas regarding my mother. I would also like to thank you all for your incredible responses to my prompts. I remarked to someone they were worthy of Basho and my friend agreed. Thank You All!!!
So nice to have you back Toni…
Thank you. so nice to be back.
Such an amazing prompt, wow ~ Thank you for hosting dear Toni ~ Hoping for the best for your mom and your family~
Thank you Grace. it has been a whirlwind of anxiety and trouble since October but at last, it all seems to be setting down. I needed this prompt for myself. I am going to get around to reading now. Just read your Haibun. Wow. That haiku knocked my socks off…
Attention All Blogger Users – for some reason I am unable to post comments on Blogger Accounts. I will read of course. I will continue to work on making comments on Blogger Posts.
Ah.. that’s where you need your blogger account… In some cases you can use twitter I think…
I had been using Gmail/Google but that got hacked. Bah. Why can’t we all just have a setting that allows anyone to comment from any platform….would be nice.
I too have problems with commenting on blogger. I cannot pass the ‘I’m not a robot’ tests. Of course, to anyone who reads my blog it is clear that I am a robot.
Well yes, of course you are. As am I. Actually I am dyslexic and those things they put up for you to prove you are not a robot…I always get them wrong. It is nice to know I am not the only one that has problems commenting on Blogger.
Add me to that club of elites hated by blogger! Sometimes I can, often I can’t. I think it’s because I used to use blogger and jumped ship after a short period of time.
Could be. I tried it for my first blog and stopped. Too hard for this old brain to try to figure out.
Thank you for another beautiful prompt Toni. Eivor has written a haibun today and we send you all our best wishes and lots of love xxx
You are so welcome. I went out on the trail and came across Eivor’s haibun and then came back here to find your comment. I knew it was his immediately. ❤
:o) xxx
This is a great prompt and really stirs up a number of ideas. I’m out shortly for the night but will pick up to comment on others work tomorrow. Enjoy your night in the bar!
Thank you! It will be good to be back in circulation again. I’m glad this prompt has given you ideas.
I enjoyed this a great deal… actually when I grew up the forest was a dark and frightening place… vast woods can seem quite intimidating actually.
I can imagine. Near my great-grandfathers farm was a deep deep forest. I was lost in it once as a child. Scary. But then, I made some friends! But it was a warm deep Southern Forest and not the forest of wolves and such….
No wolves when I grew up… but i remember one winter when we found tracks from a passing lynx…
Oh my…a lynx…scary. but then, they aren’t that big but I imagine fierce when hungry.
Lynxes can grow to 60 pounds… but they are very shy.
I just have to imagine my old cat, Sam Beckett who was 30 pounds doubled in size….most of the big cats are shy. And with good reason.
Once I met someone from Iowa ( where they have only six trees), flat land and wide open plains. She hated the woods, felt so claustrophobic to her. Hm, it might not have been Iowa…
I wrote about an intimidating forest experience…sorry not entirely relaxing but definitely felt surrounded and immersed in the woods 🙂 Great prompt, Toni!
…and I’m from Iowa 😉 but grew up in Colorado with mountains and trees.
Well, you took the prompt to a different level. Nothing wrong with that! Immersed is immersed.
Thank you, Toni…you are a gracious host.
Blessings to you Lynn.
Since it is still chilly where I am today, I have a huge urn of real hot cocoa, an urn of Mexican Hot Chocolate, and the last of the spiced cider. Help yourselves. Be careful – the Mexican Hot Chocolate is filled with Kaluah and….a tad of bourbon.
Ha.. it’s only Monday yet, so I’m fine with that hot chocolate.
Go for it…it is good!!! and lethal. lots of cinnamon in it too.
Um. I’m in a desert. Any lemonade? :0)
Sure! Lots of lemonade, limeade, and cherry limeade.
Thank you for the prompt, Toni. I’ve included one about a walk that I took yesterday. and what went through my mind during that walk.
Thank you Frank. I’m on the haibun trail now, even as we speak, doing my own kind of walking.
Hi everyone!!! How I wish I was in the forest right now!! I’m sitting at the BOSTON Vehicle Reg place, waiting to renew my driver’s license. I am #I 341 and they’re on #C254. Ugh!!!! Somebody pour me some sangria🍷. Will imbibe lovely calm words when I get home 😳
Bless your heart Lillian. Seems a long way to go. We too have a system of numbers in front of letters but the letters are associated with certain lines, A, B, C, D, etc. I don’t have any sangria but I do have some nice old single malt I’d be happy with share with you.
Ah…..that malt was just what I needed. And now I’ve completed my pitcher of words…..some wonderful calming posts to begin my day. And yes, I am now the proud owner of a new driver’s license.
A great prompt and explanation indeed, and lovely photos!
Thank you! After the time I have had, I needed to reclaim my calm. I think we all do.
I love the photo on your blog for your prompt. Unfortunately. there is no way provided for us to make comments to let you know we read and appreciated your haibun. Unless there is a way I am not seeing.
Wonderful blog title Baigneur!
Indeed it takes a Forest for the words.
Hi Toni, and everyone else!!! What a WONDERFUL prompt! I am a bit crippled right now and can’t walk around much….but I can sit in my garden and watch what is happening before my eyes. And it heals. So, I might be off the prompt a bit, but hopefully not much. Thank you, Toni, for your encouragement and also for introducing me to the delightful Haibun form. It has become my favorite form! Hugs!!!
Hi Jane. I am sorry to hear about your being under the weather. you actually are right on the prompt. I am so glad you enjoy this form. I truly love it myself. It is such a graceful form, elegant and yet earthy. You continue to take care of yourself and your animals.
What a lovely prompt. You’ve inspired me to go and absorb some nature on my day off this week. You’ve reminded me how much peace it can bring, so thank you for that. I hope this week’s haibun crop is healing and nurturing for everyone who needs it.
Thank you. I am glad it inspired you. If you end up not being able to absorb nature, then read some of the haibun for forest bathing by proxy. 🙂
Love forest bathing, even if it’s at the beach or just in my memory. I have many places to go, at least in my mind. Thanks for a lovely prompt.
Thank you Victoria. I saw on the news about the high winds in your area and then your remark about golfing….I hope you had a rope tied to an anchor tied around your ankle to keep you from blowing away.
Almost had to sit down on the green a couple of times. But what a great excuse for my pathetic golf game.
Ha!
Thanks for the prompt, Toni. I’m really getting to love this form. It’s so restful!
I am delighted to hear this. It is one of the oldest of prosimetric forms, one of the first examples of prose poetry. Of course, it can be quite wild, depending upon the person and the prompt. I did one prompt about ghost stories back in the day. So it was kind of scary.
I can really see this form lending itself to a scary story. Maybe an idea for the next haibun prompt?
I am leaving the pub for a bit – time for me to begin dinner for my hubs and to go visit my mom at the nursing facility. Y’all help yourself to the Mexican Chocolate and the hot cocoa. I will be back later to finish my walk, haibun bathing!
I’ve just got back from choir and am ready for the forest! Unfortunately, something is wrong with WordPress on my laptop and the layout is weird, so I had trouble reading the commetns so far. I’ll post and try to link up and then try again.
Oh, I can’t even see Mr Linky…
Oh Toni this was the perfect thing today. I’ve been in the dumps the last two days, a big project I’m working on is coming apart at the seams. You got me remembering my last hike (the poem Pilot is about it). And when writing, I started to see correlations between the hike and the project. My heart was guiding my hike, and I’m not letting that happen on the project! in the depth fo winter despair, is when the joyful buds of spring are forming.
You said it perfectly. I shall remember that last line, forever I hope.
That’s better! I can see you all now!
How wonderful to have you back behind the bar Toni. Thank you for the offer of Mexican chocolate – yummy! – and I love the prompt.
Thank you kim. It is good to be back. Right now I am going between the kitchen and my computer but shall soon reach the point where I am totally in the kitchen. I love it when you say you are just getting back from choir….I can picture the lot of you singing for all you are worth….
Ola. Como estas? Greetings from Sunny Catalunya. Having good times but my schedule is very full so a quick write from me and some comments and a catch up later on all being well. Not sure I’ll make all the prompts this week but will try and read as much as I can. Hasta luego 😉
Oh my…no sprichen der Espanol….nor German either. I’m good at Latin and Japanese though. Glad you are having a good time. Catch what you can!
mistakenly submitted two links..the second link is the Haibun…couldn’t got time so couldn’t write a new one apt to the theme..next time I’ll…enjoy reading and comment on it
a bit late because it’s Tuesday here, but looking forward to reading what others have written
I always enjoy reading the haibun posted on this site. it is one of the many reasons I enjoy giving prompts for this. Thank you for re-posting your previously submitted haibun.
I think I made a mistake – it was a haibun that I’ve just written that was meant to be up on the site
https://kiwis-soar.com/2017/03/07/road-to-jerusalem
Thanks for the prompt, Toni! A first-timer on haibun here. Hope I’ve got it “right”!
Happy to give out the prompt. for a first-timer you did great! Thank you for posting here.