
Dissonance in poetry is a tool we rarely use in our writing, but deliberately used it may add an unsettling emotion that may be crucial to describing unpleasant topics. I read a pretty cool article that contains many references that will help you more than I can do.
Poets usually strive to make a poem easy and pleasant to read, and often those tools are based on vocal harmonies, through the meter, rhyme, assonance, or consonance.
Creating dissonance is harder than we may think as we naturally want to sound pleasant, but today we will try to do the opposite. If it helps try to describe something unpleasant, to write off your anger, sorrow or angst.
A few ways to do this.
- Break up assonance by using all different vowels you could.
- Break up the meter, and make your poem stumble on two left feet.
- Use harsh consonants, putting some firework in your verse.
If you like you can use dissonance only in a part of your poem. I think it would make it even more effective. Think about dissonance a bit like the sound of chalk on a blackboard on the first day of summer.
Dissonance is also used in music to create emotions and reactions, and if you thought this is something that has only has come lately in modern music or hard rock, l recommend listening to this piece of baroque music:
When you have written your piece publish it on your blog linking back to dVerse. Then link it up to Mr. Linky below. Leave a comment or take part in the discussion.
Hello all… welcome to the bar… today it has been very rainy and cold here… so I decided to serve some warm drinks… both with and without alcohol.
I only serve some simple dishes… papas arrugadas with home made mojo
and pickled octopus
Its raining here too but only now and then to break the summer heat. I must try those interesting dishes….wow…
It’s a dish served on the Canary Islands… and it’s perfect bar food.
sounds delicious but I’ve just eaten so will stick to alcohol – a London lemonade cocktail please, given this historic day here – that’s gin and lemonade and a dash of cucumber
That sounds good…. I have some homemade lemonade with elder-bloom flavor, that tastes very good with gin.
perfect-
Bjorn, this is an interesting tool, which I should use more often. I tried but I need more jarring sounds. Thanks for stretching our poetic minds with this tool – dissonance.
I think I might have used it sometimes without knowing it… but just like in music you need some dissonance with your harmonies to make it strong
this was harder than it sounds – thanks for stretching my limits
It is both hard and easy… but we are so trained in making sound harmonies so it goes against many things that we have been taught
Sadly, this one came pretty easily …. Corona with a lime please.
Coming up
Well I went all the way. Helps that it is factual, but also helps have been here at dverse a little while, as going all the way is now done with more direction. Thanks Bjorn, really quite an interesting prompt, to put it mildly..the real deal..
And with a topic from reality the technique is so much more useful…
Pickled octopus…hmm..not sure..well this technique is one to learn…and to find in other poems..
I think it is one that is very useful… a sharp knife in the toolbox
I love baroque music.
After listening to the composition that you posted, I am inspired to write.
Great- I hoped it would an inspiration
Thank you for sharing. Great write. I read the article and WoW, there’s much to learn from this. I appreciate you… 💕🕊️💕
Great that you find the article interesting. Always something new to learn from writing poetry.
Hi Bjorn
Hi poets
been a busy day. tonight’s’ prompt was difficult for me to get my head around.
thanks for the challenge.
will get reading in the morning night all
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Yes, it takes one out from the comfort zone. Hope you enjoyed the challenge and see you in the poetry trail. Have a good night.
Cheers
Hi all, lovely prompt Bjorn – thank you. We had wintry gale here a few days ago and all the dissonant racket filled my daily tanka. Hope you like it – and looking forward to fun read this wintry morning.
I don’t miss that wintry gale. Saying hello from my summer evening in Canada. Thanks for joining in.
Summer is coming slowly here in Sweden
Thanks for hosting Bjorn! Very interesting prompt… 🫤 …I had no idea what I was doing, or where the hell I thought I was going with this — but this is where I ended up. Hope it’s close to what you were looking for!? 🙄✌🏼❤️
Well if this challenge spurs your writing, then we are all good. Thanks for joining in.
thanks for the challenge Bjorn, I couldn’t resist this one!
a latte with a slice of carrot cake please?
A latte with a slice of carrot cake coming up. Thanks for joining in.
Great challenge, happen to have one handy. I love both assonance and dissonance, the jarring and silky, fluid and sharp. I love to read them out loud, and enjoy the sizzle and pop, the fricatives and sibilants.
Booyah
I’ll have a Poet’s Punch, please. Just in case you’ve never had one –
Tall glass over ice
double shot of dark spiced rum
half shot of elderflower liqueur
top with ginger beer
Thanks for keeping it rocking.
This looks really good – I must try that Poet’s Punch. We must hear your poetry reading one time, or join us for OpenLinkNight (Live). The next one will be June 9 at 3pm EST, with Bjorn hosting. Thanks for your support.
That sounds great…. never had elder flower liquor, we use quite a lof to make cordial here in Sweden… that’s great with Gin I think.
Life seems to be one big dissonance these days…thanks for hosting Bjorn. (K)
A lot of dissonances to jar the harmonies…
Thank you Bjorn and Grace for hosting. Enjoyed writing to this prompt. 🙂
It is an interesting prompt I think
What a great prompt for my mood Bjorn, dissonance sums up my past months, I’ll have a glass of dissonant single malt please 🙂
A little slow service at the bar… But here is a single malt dissonant and undiluted
Bjorn thank you for the prompt. I found it to be a wonderfully entangling exercise. The Mr. Linky expired before I could post to it.
Here is my contribution:
Missed the link, but here’s the poem: